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Fathima Fernandez

@sweetgalFats

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#61

Hey dear! very nice update! but yaara, hope nothng vl happen to Mayank! those goons r behind him na! waitng for next update! thanx for the pm!

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#62

Looks like mayank has gotten in the middle of something really dangerous!! I'm excited to see what happens....!

hehe....mr. aggarwal turned out a family friend..!! LOL...great!!

And Sam's already liking gunjan a bit....!

And that gangster's going to send his goons after mayank..!! Something is def brewing..!! I hope nothing too bad happens...!

My fav scene was nupur's in kolkata..!! I love that song!! And it so fit with mayur...in this story..!

"Near, far...wherever you are...".....perfect!

She seemed like she has a special liking for him already..! Does se have a crush on him from before...?? Mayank didn't look like he liked her romantically yet...

Anyway...I'm really looking forward to the Mayur scenes in the next update..!

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#63

Its a very interesting story...
enjoyed reading it..
cheers
Divya

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#64

Its great yaar. No words...thanx 4 d pm dear.

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#65

im felling there is something worse come to happen

in mayu life how the goolu bhai said his evil grin may be he harm maynk

and with sam he is such a flirt

well the part is very nice

and the song is also nice

im agitated to know what happen next

is the gunda harm mayu or anything more worse

soon update

thx for the pm

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Preethi

@preethis

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#66

wow i liked this part.. waiting for the next part.... waitin for mayank nupur scenees...

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#67

Mujhe yakeen nahi aata Tania ke tu aisa kar sakti hai!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Yeh fic tune kitne pyaar se RN pe likha tha aur ab issi fic ko tu Mayur pe likh rahi hai!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Kyun mere RN pe kya kaante laage huye thhe??

You have hurt me very badly!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#68

Tani
i m waiting 4 ur update.
and now happy 2 c it.
its so different than the other ff.
i enjoy a lot.
cant wait 4 mayurs face 2 face conversation.
thanx 4 ur PM
faria