Mayur FF-Nupur ka Swaymvar -updated part 9-page 23 - Page 17

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: preethis

heyaa dear.. nice update dear,,,,

Thank you!! 😛😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: maizis

hey plz pm me when u update!!! plzz😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

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pls continue soon dear......

will try my best! thanks for replying! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: I-love-dmg

awww wot a nyc update huni!!!

i loved the hugg!!!!

xxxx

aww thank you for loving it! 😃 😳
Edited by ranjana_c - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey everyone! Thanks so much for commenting... You guys are my true inspiration! I posted ur replies on one post so u don't have to search for them. 😃

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

nice updt
mayur r very close now
but omg the fight b/w the kingdoms is never good
hope this all settles
anyways continue soon

yea fighting between kingdoms 👎🏼... dont worry it wont become the main focus 😉
thank you for being such a sweet person and replying! 😃

Originally posted by: ArTiToTheEnd

Awesome update............really enjoyed in reading it especially the last part really seem to be excited......................

Thanks for pm me..............
Do..............Con...............Soooooooooooooon..............


Thanks dear 😳... i try not to make it boring so im happy u found it exciting 😃

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi Ranjana,
it was very nice update.
loved mayur a lot.
they r so sweet.
good job dear.
keep it up.


aww thank you Fariaa!😛 yes, i know Mayur rock! 😉

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

awwwwesome

thanx 4 d pm


Thanks! and ur welcome dear! 😃

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

nice part hun!

Loved it
cont soon
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Originally posted by: mjht_fan

awesome part as usual

i especially loved the hug
it was so sweet
oh no!!
nupus ka swaymvar
update soon
really wanna noe wats gonna happen!!!


😆wow thanks Jassica! happy ur so excited 😃😳

Originally posted by: preethis

heyaa dear.. nice update dear,,,,


Thank you!! 😛😃

Originally posted by: maizis

hey plz pm me when u update!!!

plzz😃


Sure dear! 😃

Originally posted by: achoose

pls continue soon dear......


will try my best! thanks for replying! 😊


Originally posted by: I-love-dmg

awww wot a nyc update huni!!!

i loved the hugg!!!!

xxxx


aww thank you for loving it! 😃 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Plz don't forget to read your reply if u commented on the last part. They are all on the post before this one! 😉 😊 *Edited* oops- i think u have to go just one page back!
Part 9

"Kya?!!" Nupur exclaimed, "par aise kaise ho sakhta hain? Mujhe kisine poocha tak nahin apne hi swaymvar ke liye?"

"Kuch dinno mein tumhara swaymvar hain aur yeh Maharaj ka akhri faisla hain," Dia said.

Nupur sighed, "Ab main kya karoon? Maharaj se-"

"Nahin Nupur koi fayda nahin hain," CJ interrupted, "ab kuch nahi ho sakhta. Waise ek baat batao."

"Kya?"

"Tum swaymvar kyun nahin chahti? Kahin tumhe kissi aur se pyaaarr-" CJ teased.

"Kya bol rahi ho CJ?" Nupur shot back. "Yeh pyar vyaar kya hota hain main nahin janti..."

"Acha! Toh phir swaymvar se mukar kyun rahi ho?" Dia said teasingly.

"Kyunki mujhe apni azadi chahiye acha? Aur mujhe samajh nahin aati ke koi ladki apna ghar parivar chod ke kisi anjan admi ke saath uske ghar mein rehne kaise jaa sakhti hain?" Nupur said.

"Par woh toh anjan admi nahin hain," this time it was Gunjan's turn.

"Kaun? Mujhe nahi pata tum sab kiski baatein kar rahi ho?" Nupur said.

"Sachme? Tumhe nahin pataa?" they teased.

"Nahin," Nupur pretended.

"Hum uski baat kar rahi jisse tumne pehli mulaqat main hi dushmani kar li thi," Dia said.

"Par woh dushmani kab dosti mein badalgayi tumhe pata hi nahi chala," Gunjan added.

"Aur kab ki tumhare dil mein apne liye jaaga bhi banaliye hain ussne," CJ concluded.

When Nupur didn't say anything the three girls said at the same time, "Rajkumar Mayank!! aur kaun?"

Nupur laughed, "Main issliye chup thi kyunki mujhe laga ke tum teeno pagal ho gayyi ho. MERA SHAQ SAHI NIKLA!"

All three rolled their eyes, "Kya tum humse itni bari baat chipane ki koshish kar rahi ho? Tum humme nahin bataogi?"

"Agar koi baat hain hi nahi toh main tum sab ko kya bataon? Mujhe khud hi nahin pata mere saath ho kya raha hain," Nupur said dejectedly. "Aur agar kuch aise hua toh main tum sab ko nahin bataungi kya? Tum logon ne toh mera hamesha se saath diya hain. Aur hamesha do gi." Nupur smiled.

Diya, Gunjan and CJ realized that what was obvious to them, Nupur hadn't even realized yet. All three hugged her at the same time, knowing that it might take a while but she would realize her love for Mayank sooner or later. They could clearly see it in her eyes. Maybe she was looking for the same love in his eyes too. Whatever it was, they would always support her no matter what.

*****

The rest of the day turned out to be pretty eventful for Nupur. Her dad was angry, and her absence from the palace had not been taken very well at all. But Nupur knew how glad he was to have his daughter back. He finally agreed to listen calmly to what she had to say. She started from the beginning. How she had been kidnapped and who had saved her and how many days were spent in the jungle looking for a way back home. In the end all was well and both the Maharjas (Mayanks and Nupurs dads) sorted out the little tiff they had had in their childrens' absence and promised to remain friends like they always were.

Nupur heaved a big sigh. She felt like she had been releived of a big burden, now that her dad wasn't mad at Mayank anymore, instead he was thankful. But why was there still restlessness? And why oh why was she keep seeing Mayank in every corner and place in the palace. She would be walking by only to see him leaning on some pillar or some other place with that cute smile of his. She couldn't be more frustrated with herself.

What was her stupid problem anyways? Did she want to meet him so badly that she was seeing him everywhere she went?

"Nupur tumhare toh dimak kharab hogaye hain. Pata nahi tujhe kya hogaya hain. Pura din beet gayya aur tujhe uss ke alava kuch dikhai hi nahin deta!" Nupur muttered to herself in her own room. "Par woh hain kahan?"

"Kisiko dundh rahi ho kya?" Nupur heard a voice from behind.

"Mayank! Tum?!" Nupur turned around so fast that her hair and cute pink lehenga twirled with her. And obviously once again Mayank could not help but stare. This time Nupur couldn't either. They shared a cute eyelock both wishing that the moment could go on forever. This time Nupur knew that it wasn't an imaginery Mayank, her heart could feel his presence. Finally they both broke out of their eyelock, but Nupur could not help but smile. Mayank was completely caught up by the way it lightened up her whole face and most of all it reached her eyes too. They were twinlkling like stars. Was she that happy to see him? As happy as he was? Nupur broke through the million of thoughts that were going around his head.

"Mayank? Tum kab aye?" Nupur asked.

"Shh.... dheere baat karo. Kisiko batake nahin aye hoon," Mayank winked. "Woh dekho" he pointed to her window, "Wahan se aye hoon,"

"Mujhse milne?" Nupur asked.

"Nahin. Tumhe maarne!" Mayank said sarcastically. "Tumse milne hi aye hoon. Apni dost se."

"Kyun? Tumhe mujhse kya kaam hain?" Nupur asked sharply.

"Tumhara halchal poochne aya tha... zyada upar charne ki koi zaroorat nahin hain! Aur maine abhi abhi suna ke tum kaise kisika intezar kar rahi thi," Mayank teased.

"Acha! Aur tumhe kya laga? Ki main tumhare baare mein baat kar rahi thi?" Nupur asked.

Mayank's heart sank. She wasn't talking about him?

"Toh kiska intezar kar rahi thi?" Mayank asked innocently.

'Hain koi. Tumhe usse kya?" Nupur said.

"Kaun hain? Kiski baat kar rahi ho tum Nupur?" Mayank asked angrily.

"Kyun tumhe jalan ho rahi hain, kya?" Nupur teased.

"Nupur sach sach batao! Kaun hai woh?" Mayank asked.

"TUM!" Nupur said throwing a pillow at him. Mayank snatched it and realized that she had been pulling his leg.

"Rajkumari Nupur ab tum mere haathon se nahi bachogi!" Mayank challenged.

Nupur laughed as Mayank chased her everywhere. She kept on dodging him until finally he caught her by her wrist so hard that she was pulled up very close to him. Just then they hear some footsteps...

******
That's all for now guys! See I tried to make it longer! 😆
I know it's after a long time but i'm sorry it is only because of my studies, but I am going to update more often now. 😛 I know I always say that but now sach mein I will!
Plz do reply and feel free to critisize. You guys are my true inspirations! 😃😳
Edited by ranjana_c - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
It was sooooo goood with all teasing..... 😆
I liked This update very mucchhhhh....
And please cont like this with teasing....

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!

Cont soon and PM me..... 😛 😆

And first to comment....YAAAAYYYY!!!!! 😳
Edited by boshaa - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
too good Ranjana!loved Mayur's eyelock....& the leg-pulling was so cute!
aww, i understand....examz se kaun bach sakta hai.....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was cute funny n sweet sa romantic too
thnx for pm
continue soon
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Hey dear amazing update,
loved Nupur an Mayank's last scene........it was cute one
do cont soooon
n thanks 4 pm.......

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