Mayur FF-Nupur ka Swaymvar -updated part 9-page 23 - Page 15

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"Ab aur kitna chalna parega," Nupur asked Mayank.

"Tum toh aise bol rahi ho jaise ki mujhe koi shaunk hai yahan wahan bhatak ne ka," Mayank replied.

"Tum kabhie seedhe seedhe jawab nahin deh sakhte!" Nupur shouted.

"Jab tum sawal hi ulta poonchti ho, toh jawab bhi ulta hi milega. Mujhe kaise pata ke humme kitna chalna parega?" Mayank told her.

"Waise tummhe bohat jaldi haina pohanchne ki." Mayu smirked at her.

"Kyun nahin hogi. Tumhari tara mera koi irada nahin hain yahan pe ghar bhasana ka janveron ke saath," Nupur snapped.

"Waise khayal acha hain. Kam se kam tumhara darra hua chahra roz milne ko dikhega," Mayank said with a dreamy look.

"Mayank tum- rehne doh. Tumse baat karna toh waqt barbad karna hain," Nupur said.

"Phir bhi tumhe mujhse baat kare bina reh nahin sakhti. Hain na?" Mayank replied.

"Haan. Mera matlab nahin." Nupur stammered.

"Koi baat nahin. Chup toh tum rahe nahin sakhti aur agar tum pure din mera sir nahin khaogi toh mujhe bhi ajeeb lagega," He said while smiling.

"Accha? Waise tum bhi itne bure nahin ho jitna main tumhe pehle samajhti thi. Aur tum dil ke bohat ache ho. Lekin kabhie kabhie mujhe tumhe dekh kar itna gussa aata hain ki mera dil karta hain ke tumhare gal pe ek zor se taphar maro jisse tumhara pura ghamand nikal jaye!" Nupur said.

"Toh maro. Tumhe roka kisne hain?" Mayank said facing his cheek to her.

She hits him lightly.

"Main mazak kar rahi thi," she said with a smile.

"Kyun ab man nahin kar raha?" Mayank asked.

"Nahin."

They walk on for a while. Mayank and Nupur both in their own thoughts.

Kitna badal gayi hai woh. Pehle jab woh aankhein mujhe dekhti thi toh unmein itna gussa aur nafrat thi. Par ab... kuch badal gaya hain, Mayank? Ab unmein nafrat nahin dosti hain...aur...shayad usse bhi kuch zyada?

Pyar? Yeh tum kya soch rahi ho Nupur? Aisa kuch bhi nahin hain. Tum dono mahal pohancho ge aur uske baad tum dono ke raaste hamesha ke liye alag. Par...

Nupur looked towards Mayank.

"Main tumhe kabhie nahin bhoolongi Mayank," Nupur said all of a sudden, she didn't know why she did though.

Mayank looked at her surprisingly, then smiled, "Main bhi nahin Nupur."

"Mujhe pata hain ke mahal pohanchne ke baad shayad humare raastein alag hojayenge lekin tumne mere liye jo bhi kiya main yaad rakhongi aur...humari dosti ko bhi," she continued.

Mayank didn't know what to say. He had a sudden urge to hug her.

Nupur looked at him waiting for a reply, but before she could say something he hugged her. She smiled and hugged him back.

As if a reply to their thoughts and conversation the mahal finally started to come in view slowly.

"Mayank tum ne dekha wahan pe! Main koi sapna toh nahin dekhrahi" Nupur shouted.

"Nahin Nupur, yeh jungle bhi ab khatam honewala hain aur kuch hi der main hum mahal pohanch jayenge," Mayank replied. Why wasn't he happy. Of course it was a relief that they would finally reach the palace but what is it that is nagging him in the back of his head?

The trees started to thin now and a path seemed to clear up. Mayank stared at Nupur who was basically jumping with joy and couldn't help but smile. If she is happy, so am I.

As the palace appeared right up front of them, Nupur started running and Mayank followed her inside. Nupur who was too excited did not realize someone was coming and bumped right into the person.

"Gunjan!" Nupur said and hugged her tightly.

"Nupur, tum. Kahan chali gayi thi tum??,"Gunjan asked.

"Gunjan woh sab main bad mein bataongi. Pehle andar chaltein hain," Nupur started walking but Gunjan grabbed her arm.

"Nupur tum aur Raj Kumar Mayank nahin jaante hai ke yahan pe tumhare jaane ke baad kya kya hua hain. Bas pehla meri baat sunlo aur phir jo jee main aye karna," Gunjan told her.

"Aise kyun keh rahi ho Gunjan. Kya hua hamare jaane ke baad?" Mayank asked.

"Main batata hoon," said a voice.

A smile creeped up on Mayank's face as he reunited with his friends, Samrat, Uday and Benji.

"Mayank tum itne din kahan the?" Uday asked.

"Yeh sab batein bad mein karna. Pehle Mayank tum aur Raj Kumari Nupur humare saath chalo," Samrat said.

"Nahin pehle tum sab humme batatein kyun nahin ke akhir baat kya hain," Nupur asked Samrat.

"Toh sunno. Yahan pe sab ko lagta hain ke tum dono jaan bhuj kar mahal chod ke bhag gaye the," Benji finally shouted.

"KYA?" Nupur Mayank shout together.

"Haan yehi sach hain. Aur to aur tum dono ke jaane ke bad tum dono ke rajye ke beech ladai hui," Samrat added.

"Par yeh sab..kaise?" Mayank asked.

"Tum hi socho, tum dono ke jaane ke bad kya kya hua hoga. Dono taraf se log ungliyan utha rahe hain, aur itne saalon ke baad dono maharaja ke beech mein bohat jagda hua. Sab aap dono ko lekar itne pareshan hain, abhi bhi," Gunjan said.

"Tumhe pata nahin hummne kitne din tumhara intezaar kia. Woh bhi Mahal ke baar. Jab se maharaj ne tum pe shak karna shuru kiya tab hi se hum wahan se chale gaye. Aur abhi abhi hum tumse mile hain aur hum kehre hain ke tumhare raj kumari ke saath jaana thik nahin hain," Samrat explained.

"Aap dono samajh rahe hain na-"But before Gunjan could finish there was a sound interrupting her.

"Nupur!" someone had seen them and told her dad, who was now coming towards them in the distance with his wife and other bodygurads, etc..

"Sab yahan aa rahe hain. Mayank tum jao!" Nupur shouted.

"Par Nupur..kyun? Hum unhe sab sach batayenga phir woh-" Mayank tried to say.

"Nahin Mayank. Tum jao. Abhi sahi waqt nahin hain. Main apne pitashree ko janti hoon. Woh mujhse bohat pyar karte hain, aur woh abhi bohat gusse main honge. Woh kisi ki baat nahin sunnenga. Ab tum jaldi jao yahan se," Nupur said in a hurried tone.

Mayank refused to move.

"Mayank, jao. Mere liye..." Nupur pleaded.

And this time he did go, for some reason he could not bring himself to not listen to her.

It was just in time. All of a sudden Nupur found herself being pulled and hugged by many people. They were talking to her, asking her fifty questions, but the voices were like a very loud buzz. There was a sharp pain in her head and unable to hold herself any longer Nupur fainted.

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As everything began to come in focus again and as she finally felt like herself, Nupur finally opened her eyes. She got up as Gunjan, Dia and CJ's faces came into view.

"Ab kaisi ho?" Dia asked.

"Teek hoon Dia," Nupur replied.

All three of her firends looked at eachother like they were hiding something.

"Kya baat hain? Tum teeno mujhse kuch chipa rahi ho," Nupur said worriedly.

"Woh...Nupur..."

"Kya hain Gunjan batao na," Nupur asked again.

"Nupur, kuch hi dino mein tumhare swaymvar hain!" Gunjan finally blurted.

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Hey guys that's all for now. I hope you guys didn't find it boring. I will try updating again soon since I have a week of my holiday break left. O and also Benji and CJ's name is originally something else, but I thought it would be easier to understand if I just kept it.

Please read and comment/critisize...and if u have any ideas and suggestions for this ff please do share them with me, since my head does tend to go blank often for this ff.