AR FF 'UNBREAKABLE' ~~ part 1st uptd.7/29

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SORRY guys i know i have posted it before also but i my self was facing problems opening my own ff so her i m starting it again sorry 4 in convinence guys

~~~UNBREAKABLE ~~~

Hii everyone I am new to IF but I have been reading many of the DMG ff here specially the AR ones as I am a big fan of AR I have decided to write my own FF. it mainly revolves around AR but will also include AA,RM,AN & some more characters. I am giving it a try if you people like it plz let me know that should I continue or not. Silent readers plz atleast press like tab if u like it…..

INTRODUCTION:-

Unlike DMG this story is based on the background of a very reputated engineering college in town called "INFINITY COLLEGE OF ENGINEERING" { ICE }. Now let me briefly describe all the characters:-

ARMAAN MALIK:- Cool, smart, handsome, intelligent, hot!! With his blue eyes. In

short he is the man who can give heart attack to any girl. But he is not that flirt types he believes in true love. He is also a very obedient son& a very loving brother. Respects his parents very much.

RIDDIMA GUPTA:- Very sweet, innocent, intelligent & confident girl with deep green eyes. She is the only child of her parents. She respects them a lot and obey them blindly. She is very friendly girl but she has a bst frnd called Muskaan

. ( which ever u like)

MUSKAAN:- Different from dmg she is a very sensible, polite and understanding girl. Ridzi and Muskaan are from same school

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RAHUL:- Smart, cool, friendly boy he is cousin of Armaan.

NIKKITA:- a sweet innocent girl who is also gona join the same collage she lives in a hostel.

ABHI:- A handsome boy (not more than aka ARMAAN LOLZZ) and a school mate of ridzi and muski.

All 6 of them has just passed there class 12th exam & soon going to join ICE. Lets see what god has decided 4 them how there life's are going to change after entering the college???

AJAY MALIK:- Armaan's father very rich business man loves his family a lot.

ADITI MALIK:- Armaan's mom a successful business woman loves his husband and both sons very much. She has a best friend "Mrs.Divya Raj Gupta".

RAJ GUPTA:- Riddima's daddy loves his daughter very much. He is a very rich and famous business man.

DIVYA GUPTA:- Loves her small family supports his husband in his huge business closest frnd of Aditi malik.

ARUNABH MALIK:- Younger brother of armaan or you can say his life. He is 13 years younger to him& he is only 5 years old. Armaan loves him d most.

Aditi and Divya know each other since 3 years or so but in that mean time they had developed a very strong bond b\w them Ajay and raj also get along well but unluckily or u may can say luckily Armaan and Ridzi haven't seen or met each other yet since ammy & riddz were always busy studing & when ever their parents tried to get them together but all the time one off them would be unable to turn on (destiny u see). But they have heard enough about each other. Riddima knows Arunabh and aru call her his bst frend!!!!!!!!!

ATUL & ANJALI will enter the story later so will describe there characters later.

I Know it was boring and all crap in front of all those experienced and wonderful writers but still……..

Waiting for your comments guys… tell me should I continue or not…

From now onwards A=ARMAAN, R=RIDDIMA, RA=RAHUL, MU=MUSKAAN, AB=ABHI, NI=NIKKITA, AJ= AJAY MALIK, AD= ADITI MALIK, RG= RAJ GUPTA, DG=DIVYA GUPTA, ARU=ARUNABH.

PART-1

GUPTA HOUSE

It was a bright sunny morning. The rays of sun sticking the huge white house. In that house there was a huge room decorated with lotz of soft toys mostly white nd pink. The whole room was painted with white and the walls are having number of pics. In all that was a very beautiful and pleasant room. Sudden the door opens and here enters mr.& mrs. Gupta.

Dg: ridhu beta jago jao ab subha ho gai hai beta or kya aaj k din bhi late hona hai tum ko

Ridhu wake up sweetheart its already very late bacha

Rj: are kyou subha se meri angle k peche padi ho tum divya zara pyar se jagao na.

Dg: main to thak gai iss ladki ko jagate jagate ab aap jano or aap k angle main to chali

Rj (to his angle): ridz beta wake up sweety its already late bacha come-on get up na….

R: gud morning daddy…. Nd why are u getting tensed aaj to colleage sirf admission k liye jana hai na

Rj: gud morning beta now go get ready fast we r waiting 4 u on the breakfast don't be late ok….

After some time they all had there breakfast and left 4 ridzi's collage

MALIK HOUSE

The alarm went on 4 about 30 sec and then it was switched of by ever smart and handsome aka armaan malik.He literally jumped out of the bed and talked to him self

A: aaj to tu mara beta armaan papa ne khaha bhi tha k aaj time pe jag jana

Kya zarurat thi alarm band karke phir se sone ki.

Suddenly the door opens and enters aditi malik.

Ad: so u finally waked up huh…

A: sorry mom wo main late ho gaya.

Ad: no beta you r nt late wo actually tum time pe jaag jao is liye main ne time forward kar diya tha tumhari alarm clock main

Now don't worry u have plenty of time go get ready we will be leaving for your collage in 2 hours ok…

A: ookk mom (hugging her like a kid) .

He was about to go to his wardrobe but suddenly he remembers that he is forgetting something he immediately walked towards the opposite room.

A: aru becha gud morning (placing him in his lap nd planting a kiss on his cheek).

Aru: gud morning bro!!(kissing him back)

A: so my lil'll bro u know aaj bhai collage main admission lene jar aha hai

Aru: sach bhai matlab from now onwards u r going to be big boy.

A: what?? Who told you that(with confused looks)

Aru: riddi bst frnd ne kaha k jab main collage main jau ga tab main big boy ban jauga matlab aap bhi big boy ban gaye na.

A: I thing your riddi is right!! Now got to go other wise I'll b late.

Aru: ok u go nahi to pa will scold u na!! nd all the bst bhai!!!

After some time they left 4 collage drooping aru to his school.

"shayad fir se milne ki takdir mil jaye, life ka sabse haseen wo pal mil jaya,

Chal fir se bithe class ki us bench par, shayad phir wo school k masti bhare din wasp mill jaye"

That's all 4 now guys tell me how was it waiting for your comments.

I want to tell you all that this ff is not going to be tooo long but at the same time I can't say how short its going to be.

Forgive me for mistakes…….

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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyya sweetie, firstly nice to see u writing in here
never seen this FF before, but it sounds sooo good
amazingggggg bbe
love the fact that AR haven't seen each other yet😆
it gives the story a bit of a flavour
just beautifully penned down
i hope u don't mind, but can u make the size of the writing bigger😊 if you don't mind
But just lovely
adoring it soo much
love aru sooo much😳
he sounds veryyy cute
do continue soon
PM me please
swancy
Edited by Angelic_Swancy - 16 years ago

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