ff-thoda thoda pyaar(mayur) updated part 23- Pg140 - Page 80

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav

loved it

Originally posted by: Bushra Javeria

great update

Originally posted by: yoshita.mayufan

it was a gr8 part dear..!

Originally posted by: mayur.forever

sorry note:
am really very sorry for my late comment!!!!!!! my exams have started n it will continue this whole month😭
so plsss bear with my late comments.......so here goes my comments......
mayank and mayank's mm's convo was d best part.......usko phir se pata lo aur use ghar le aao....mayu's mom is really a darling...muahhhh😆hmm so finally mayank is going to get back his love.....guru ho jaa shuru...............😆
loved it on d whole dear....
PS-plsss bear with my late comments.........

Originally posted by: vaish04

RESERVED yaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy pehli baaaaaaaaaarrrrrr

Phew finally edited

btw yay maine pehli baar 1st reserve kiya
sab kuch msg ki wajah se...yayaaaaayyyy
hmm so maine finally afu ko bhi sumary bhej diya
gr8 im sorry i saw ur reply late
lub ya
itna extra kash
cho chweet😳
she'l coment soon

hmm so abhi seedhi baat no bakwaas😆
i loved all that aqal shaqal....aao bhao swabhao....
loved it ! (sorry 4 vullgar emoticon but jus loved it lol)
np even i liked the vulgar emorticon lol
bas ek prob hai
mujhe koi kishi karta hai toh mujhe acha nai lagta
jhapi is ok😆
kishi is yuck🤢😆

n then upgraded version mujhe bhi bilkul achi nahi lagti
uuse hatao patao aur naya leao lol
i kno im trying n so is poor mayu
time lagega ji😛
watelse...hm ya i am happy for benji n uday
finally becharon ka bhi kuch hogaya lol
mm mayu convo was a hit hit !
i kno
inspired by love mera hit hit
rhyme karne ke liye kuch bhi😆
love it to bits
i mean each n everything
from mayu sayin haaw ladki se shadi
to mm sayin nupur was best by god
tu bilkul character mein ghuss gayi re madzz
thanks par mujhe ye baat aaj tak samjh nai aayi ki main ghusi kaise😆
mujhe bahoooooooooot maza aaya...lol
finally maine read kar hi liya .....kal raat ko main 2:30 ko soying 1st time since few yrs lol..
chal buri aadate achi hai😆😛
woh bhu tum dono ki wajah se...
subah meri class this ..but was cancelled by sir yayyyyyyyyyy😆
lol
chal bas itna hi
kyun chota part tha so bas itna hi😆
yaar main type kar kar ke thak gayi phir bhi part chota laga
ummmm me shad
aapki agya lete hue aapki agya kari
JWB..vaishu

thanku vaishu
lub ya😳

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey great update loved it thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Navi_44

srry yaar to commenting late but i have been sooo busy with school!!

but seriously love this part!!!!!!!!

awsome ..

Originally posted by: ch0c0lates

Nice part!

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

G 8 darling,
Y did Mayu refused to go with Noopur when she requested him? I don't know of which typical type of boy Mayu belongs to. Noops is missing him but she is really happy for Gunjan. The way she helped that elder people was really nice.
CJ's last lines made me think too yaar and i am happy to know that she was trying to explain the main problem b/w her n Mayu. Mayu's mom is really super cool, i like s much the way of her talking. She knew very well about Mayur but now she said it clearly n gave a green signal to Mayank.
update soon.

Nupur was sitting beside a lake...............her legs clasped n her head resting on her knees.......it was getting dark .......sun was bout to set..................second day in morena n she was finally able to sell her mothers jewellery, so dear to her mother n even dearer to her........she had gone to the jeweller in the after noon......n after depositing the money she had been sitting here...........

Her eyes were swollen coz of all the tears she had shed........she felt she could never forgive herself for this, but this is the only option she had, the only thing she could do to keep gunjan happy.......

"ye lo"

It cant be nupur ur imagining........keep ur self calm

"ye lo"

This time nupur turned around only to c mayank sitting diagonally to her........

"arre ye lo nupur"

Mayank handed over a box to nupur, nupur took it wondering over how trust worthy her eyes are.......is he really there??......she kept thinking

She took the box and opened it.......it contained all the jewellary she had sold.....

"mayank ye kaha se ......"

"nupur tumhari maa ki hai"

"janti hu....tumne inhe chudaya kaise"

"samrat ne......"

"mayank........."

"Jaanta hu ki tum apni halat aaj tak bahut ache se cover karti aayi ho........kissi ko pata nai chalne diya that u hv been bankcrupt ever since........but tum mom ke gehene bechogi, ye maine nai socha tha...............y nupur......i dont see any need.............tum apni hasiyat ke hisab se sagai karwa sakti thi gunjan ki......nai???"

Nupur felt her privacy invaded, she felt that mayank and samrat hv known wat they shudnt hv known ever.........irritated by this she interrupted mayank

"Mayank tumhe pata hai ki samrat......."

"Ke parents tumpe pressure daal rahe hai, aur agar tum unki umeedo pe khari nai utri toh woh gunjan ko bhi kuch na kuch suna denge...............n gunjan dukhi ho jayegi......aur shayad apne status mein difference dekhke woh samrat ke saath......"

"shhhhhhh.....tum aisa bol bhi maat mayank, aisa kuch main nai hone dungi.......kabhi nai"

"haan aur ye sab rokne ke liye tum gunjan ko sabse jyada dukhi karti, socho usse kaisa lagega ye soch kar ki uski khushiyon ke liye uski dee itne dino se pareshaan hai.......kya phir woh khush hogi??"

"toh kya kare hum mayank, gunjan ki khushiyan khatam karte hai, ye thik hai??"

"hmmm nai, ye thik nai hai, chalo aisa karte hai gunjan ki saari well deserved khushiyan usse dete hai, poori honesty ke saath, apni haisiyat ke hisab se, sachayi ke saath, simplicity ke saath, akhir inhi sab chizo ki toh gunjan brand – ambassador hai"

"ya right!! aur ye sab hoga kaise??"

"bharosa karo"

"kispe??"

"bhagwan pe nupur, sab hoga aur badhiya hoga"

Mayank smiled at her, as a reflex she smiled back.......it came automatically to her. They went back to her house.

Yesterday morning nupur had reached morena.......her morena.....the small people with big hearts.....even though she was returning years later she still felt warm......the atmosphere was cooler and a little dry as compared to mumbai........but the ppl were warm......their warmth made up for the less warmth in the atmosphere.

Kaushalya kaki and kaku.....baadi nani....nanu.......shaurya dada....gungun....arjun kushal..vaishnavi all were there to welcome them. Even badi bui nikki bui n baby bui n their families had come. Tito mama n pallavi masi n pramil masi all were there. They were not family, not even neighbourers they were just frnds........but they came as if they had come to welcome a daughter, a long lost daughter. For once nupur felt numb, numbed by their love and affection, her senses had given up, they werent responding, but her eyes wept n her lips curled up to a smile..............she felt loved and cared ................for once she was blissfully happy............she felt after all the humdrum she had come to rest peacefully.....

She went back to her home, where she could still c little nupur n gunjan playing. Her house had been well cleaned by the aunties. She allotted rooms to every1 and left one for mayank and aunty. She went to her room.......she dint unpack thinking she wud then need to take out her mothers jewellary n sell it...............she dint unpack her stuff.......instead wore some of her old dresses

The colourful one with yellow n red used in it........well in proportion........bcoz at one point of time she had designed them........they were her favourite but she had left those here when she had come back to morena after her fathers death. After getting ready she left for mandir, mata rani ka mandir it had 300 something stairs but who ever went their with a wish their wishes were fulfilled.

On the road nupur met many of her admirers competing to see nupur once or to just give her a flower or c her smile...........like earlier she dint feel happy for having so many admirers.....she was just ok with them.

After climbing so many stairs she reached mata rani, but somehow she just couldnt decide what to ask for.......gunjan's happiness......money or wat?? She left it upto mata rani to decide, all she said was- "jo sahi laage wahi karna mata rani". She sat there for a bhajan, which even surprized the panditji. But he dint say much coz he was well aware of nupur bhushan's anger.

After she reached her place with mayank, the first thing she did was signed a check and gave to samrat to return his money......favours were not acceptable. Then mayank addressed the ppl.

"Hello all, main mayank sharma hu, gunjan ka dost aur parso jo uski sagai hai ussme haanth batane aaya hu, humare paas dimag jyada hai aur paise kum. Aur bas itne hi resourses ke saath humme gunjan ke liye world ki best sagai arrange karni hai. Aur ye sagai hume gunjan ki tarah sachayi achayi aur imandari se arrange karni hai, with 20% tolerance ofcourse.............so lets get going.....humme shayad raat ko jagna pade n ol that but still we will do it. within say half an hour main sab ko kaam assign karunga aur sab gunjan ke liye usse puri lagan se karenge"

Samrat nupur and mayank had a small meeting only to understand what his parents standards were......and according to what samrat said his parents standards were those which were set by their frnds.....if they managed to keep their frnds happy samrat's parents would be more than happy.

Mayank got to work with nupur- he set down stuff on a paper

Its contents-

Requirements for sagai

1) Hall/ ground

2) Tents/ chairs/lights/flowers

3) Food

4) Ring

5) Entertainment

6) Arrangement for the stay for guests

7) Guide for showing morena

Mayank went to maa with so many problems on one sheet, nupur accompanied him.

MM- mere paas aaye ho, matlab pareshani hai, shakal pe 12 bhi baje hai

M- Ma koi rasta nai hai

MM-(taking the sheet) toh mere paas kyu aaye ho, main bhagwan hu kya??

M- nai ma! Tum toh ma ho ma!

MM- to chalo 'maa 'ki baat maano

Hall chaiye .........mehenga hoga......not possible........morena ke bahar kissika gardern agar 2 din ke liye bhaaade pe.....maine ek bar arrange kiya tha mumbai mein...... i dont think it wud be costly

M&n – gr8 done

MM- lights chairs flowers tents- garden ki real beauty toh bina tent ke hi dikhegi, so tent cancell lighting......nupur tumhare jitne jaan pechaan waale hai unke ghar se diwaali waali lighting le aao......aur phool toh khaareedne padenge....iska no idea.....chairs ka.........buffet kardo chairs not required and buffet ke liye table arrange karne honge......wats say

Nupur- awesome aunty, aap the best ho.....world ki best aunty

MM- arre mayank ko kaha tha ki ma jaisi hu..............itne ache ideas ke baad demotion hogaya mera....oho ye sunne se pehle...............

Nupur- nai ma......ab thik hai??

Mayank- perfect, ab aage badhte hai.....

MM- food..........iske liye toh caterer lagega

M- par problem ye hai ma humme typical indian food chahiye, aur aaj kal caterers bhi chineese food mein especialize karte hai

MM- toh ma hai na mayu, get some caterer jisse thoda bahut idea ho, main baaki sab sikha dungi

Mayank- gr8.......food done, ring??

Nupur- papa ne aapne jamaiyo ke liye kuch chize banwai thi usme ring bhi hai....

M- par usse thoda hi-fi standard karna hoga.......unke according banana hoga

N- thik hai kal hi karwalenge....

This speech was followed by silence, nupur dint like the idea but had no other option , mayank could sense that.

MM- tum logo ke paas bada time hai, chup chap waste karne ke liye....mere paas nai hai....toh bolo entertainment.........dance song.......aur kya kuch unique sa.........jisme sab ko maza aaye.......jaise some game for samrat n gunjan compatibility with each others family only to show ki woh perfect hai.....watsay??

Nupur- aunty par samrat khud apni family ke baare mein kuch nai jaanta.......

MM- 20% tolerance ke hisab se cheating allowed hai......hai ki nai( mm winked at nupur)

Chalo next.....

Stay for guest hmmmmm ye toh hotel hi hona chahiye.....koi acha sa......well decorated n good service......

Guide toh humme se hi koi hoga.....i was thinking of transportation uska kya karna hai....guide inhe paidal leke toh nai ghumega so??

Mayank- bail gadi, haanthi ....ye sab thik hai.

Nupur- tum pagal ho gaye ho itne bade bade logo ko tum bail gadi mein ghumaoge..

Mayank- unke according morena gaon hai, so to get the feel bail gadi wats say??

MM- perfect!! Our guide can say this, nupur unhone tumhe pareshan kiya hai.....hum subtlely badla lenge.,.......

Mayank and nupur and mm went to the city to look for proper caterers n tent wala n phool wala. Every where that nupur went her admirers followed, this made mayank pretty jealous n he made his jealousy pretty evident.

M- nupur humme phool waale ki toh jarurat hi nai

N- kyu??

M- tumhare chahne waale tumhe itne phool toh de hi rahe hai ki tum unse gunjan ki sagai kya shaadi bhi karwado

Nupur smiled at mayank.....she loved jealous mayank......possesive for her.......after long she is liking her admirers

MM- nupur hi...

N- hi aunty.....mayank hai....main usse records lene aai hu

MM- phir toh wapas chale jao beta....mayank ka mood terrible hai kyuki kissi adhiraj ne uske records ghuma diye n second record book issue nai hoti.....woh itne gusse mein hai ki mujhe dar lag raha hai

N- aunty main bhi nupur bhushan hu maine bhi kachi goliya nai kheli hai, aisi koi problem nai jiski solution nupur bhushan ke paas nai ho

Nupur went to mayank's room

N- adhi ko maaff kardo mayank

m- nupur tumhe pata hai, usne mere records ghuma diye......mera bas chale toh.......

n- lekin tumhari buses kaha chalti hai, ye lo record book

M- ye kiski hai??

n- meri

m- main tumhari kaise use kar sakta hu

n- main new student hu meri record new hai......mujhe kal se banani thi.....main sir ko boldungi ki ghum gayi...aur kya

m- but this is wrong

n- mayank wrong ryt mein 20% tolerance chalta hai.....chalo ab is nai naveli record book ko purana karo......kal lab mein dekhna main kya acting karti hu.....by god

arre haan ab toh adhiraj ko maaf karo

m- tumhe adhiraj ko maafi kyu dilwaani hai

n- mayank!!! Kyuki woh aadha hi sahi raaj hai

both of them giggle n laugh at this

Next day in the lab

n- (sobbing) sir (sniffs) sir meri lab book sir (snif snif) sir meri lab manual kho gayi......maine uspe apna naam bhi nai likha tha...........(continues crying)

S- nupur aate hi college mein, u kno kitni costly hai manual, hum extras nai rakhte, ab bolo hum kya kare

N- sir plz sir, main kya karungi......plz sir plz

s- acha ro maat main deta hu

n- sir main iske liye pay kardu

s- nai thik hai

after collecting the manual, nupur went to her lab partner mayank and winked at him.

m- 20% tolerance

n- ahan, for women 30% atleast with sirs

mm had finally got a caterer hu knew something bout traditional food and mayank saw hotel sonnet. He went inside it.

When he came out:

M- nupur for the past two yrs i hv been working in a company which gives 30 free room nyts at certain hotel......i hvnt used one so we get 60 free nights in sonnet.....it comes under the deal

n- but

m- for gunjan use them.....but we need to pay for 40 more

n- i dont think mayank kyuki some of them our couples ryt.......they will use one room only.....so lets get the details first.....n mere uncle ka garden can be used i hv talked to him......we will go to c it tommorrow....ok?

mayank nodded in approval.

m- aisi koi problem hi nai hai jiska solution mayank sharma aur nupur bhushan ke paas nai hai.

He smirked.

Some how today nupur really respected mayank.......her love for him never really died.....but today it had resurfaced

But unlike b4 her feeling dint get tingling sort of a feeling in her......now she felt proud that she fell for this man, who can handle her and ol her problems well.

they finished their work in morena bazar, nupur kept showing some stuff to ma n mayank kept admiring her n kept feeling jealous of her admirers, they gave the ring and asked samrat to enquire bout guest, while diya asked all relatives for lights n confirmed bout the availaibility of uncles gardern.