ff-thoda thoda pyaar(mayur) updated part 23- Pg140 - Page 11

Originally posted by: parisbynight

hey as i told you i loved ur update
my best scene was when nupur tries to cut her finger but its mayank instead who get hurt!
keep it on!

Originally posted by: utfracks

heyyyy cuteee part.....do update sooon

Originally posted by: Nishithini

hey!

really sweet part. loved it. plz continue soon.

Originally posted by: preethis

waiting for more update... very good part enjoyed reading it.. thinking of the old memories...

Originally posted by: sweetgalFats

Hey yar! Ths wz soo sweeet! kya kool update hai yar! thanx for the pm!

Originally posted by: -Neelam-

Awesome part Madhvi!! Loved it!! Continue soon plz!!

Originally posted by: AFSHA18

Cool update dear

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

very nice part..... loved it....

Originally posted by: mayank-nupurfan

oh dear sooooooo sweet update yaar........... waiting 4 d next part plzz continue soon........ thanks 4 d pm dear........n dont 4get 2 pm me next time........

Originally posted by: Arjun_mayank

awesome update dear... thanks for the PM... continue soon..

Originally posted by: Sunny-Malik

wow nice part.. continue plzz

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowow tht was cool i love it

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

hey madhvi jaan, awesome part! loved it!

Originally posted by: robinblue91

really reaaly sweet part..!!
Continue soon...!!
lub ur nupur...!! she iz sweet as usual..!!

Originally posted by: naina.s

loved it

keep writing

Originally posted by: Navi_44

ok i couldn't help but reading it before i leave..

but yaar madhvi love it!!!!!!

cute update!

Originally posted by: anthara_mjht

Wow.... Yaar madhavi... awesome... loved it....

Originally posted by: utfracks

heyyy commenting for both ur parts 2 and 3 together...
welll they were just awesome....fabulous....very well described.....just loooooooooved it!! please do update sooon and do pm me!

Originally posted by: gr8_mms

nice medvi do post next part soon

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

gr8 part. loved it : )

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

awesome yaar...i am really sorry , culdnt comment on time...but fab job !

keep pming me :)

love yaa

Originally posted by: hgrhr

awesome part!!

The flashbacks in between are nice to read! LOL...she met mayu's mom this way..!! "bakra ban gaya.." LOL..that dialogue was funny!!

and she was trying to cut her finger with the knife but finget mayu ki kat gayi..!! LOL

continue soon...thanks for the PM!

Originally posted by: Piya_2009

gr8 update!!!

loved it...specially kitchen part....

bechara mayank...hath kat gaya...

flashback part was also nice.

update soon...aur isbaar thodi jaldi update karna...

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

wow awesome part....i loved it...........nupz is sooo naughty.......please update soon....pm me😳

Originally posted by: parisbynight

hey as i told you i loved ur update
my best scene was when nupur tries to cut her finger but its mayank instead who get hurt!
keep it on!

Originally posted by: myownarea

Madhvi ..awesome part, i found it even before i saw ur pm,,and made a mental note to be angry with you for not pming me.. Then i saw that u had indeed pm'd..so marofying the thought *guilty* ..

Awesome update tha...
Mayur hugs to u 🤗

Originally posted by: taniyamiths

awwesum update madhvi.just loved it.

nups is trying to get mayu's attention n trying to cut her finger herself but it didn't. it was sooooooo cute.😆

mayu staring at nupur.

n the flashback aunty-nups-mayu scene was also tooooo gooood yaar.

everything was written ver well.

just loved it.

update sooon.

Originally posted by: ch0c0lates

Lovely.....and MM so cute :)

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

cute part
luv mayu's mom!
n mayur were awesome!
continue soon

Originally posted by: little_dragon

hey madhvi.. wonderful... about to feel some romance and there goes the door bell... khabab mei haddi...

but really enjoyed ... carry on.. update soon n pm me..

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

ur strength is definitely ur dialogues ....loved reading about the first meeting between mom and nups😉

Originally posted by: abs_insane

tussi great ho yaar......👍🏼

Hey guys part 4 here the longest part ever i tried updating two for my friends woh love them but type karne ka man nahi hua. Ill update soon thanks and plz plz comment. I hope u enjoy

Also since this part boring bear with me coz i cudnot help it

Part 4- Love confusion cleared

At the door are Samrat and Gunjan. Nupur is maha upset that these guys have come.

Gunjan: Dee tumhari tabiyat thik hai na

Nupur: Haan, Gunjan mera na mango shake peene ka bahut man kar raha hai''.Banana plz.

Gunjan: Dee mujhe andar toh aane do

Samrat notices Mayank and says: Dude tum yaha'.

Mayank: Haan Nupur ki tabiyat thik nai thi toh

Samrat: Oh (smirks)

Gunjan: Mayank main mango shake bana rahi hu, piyoge na

Mayank: Chalo main bhi help karta hu

Nupur is angry at Mayank now''''..

Nupur (to herself): Mayank kitna budhu hai usse itna bhi nai samajh aaya ki mein Samrat aur Gunjan ko bhaga rahi thi yaha se'''gadha kahika

Nupur, while thinking of all this bumps into a wall.

Nupur: Ouch

Mayank runs towards her and starts rubbing her head

Mayank: Nupur lagi toh nahi

Mayank sees Nupur stare at him

They share a momentary eye lock''''''but Gunjan calls Mayank

Nupur and Samrat sit on the sofa

Samrat: BREAKING NEWS

Koi aapse pyaar karta hai (hinting towards mayank)

Nupur: BREAKING NEWS par hint bhi nahi deta

Samrat: Toh aag idhar bhi lagi hai

Hmmmmmmmm

Apni saali adhi gharwaali ke liye kuch toh karna padhega

Nupur: Nahi thnx

Samrat: Dekh mere saadu bhai aa rahe hai

Nupur blushes and sees Mayank and Gunjan come back from the kitchen

Samrat takes the mango shake: Mango shake for mango ppl, but chashmish ke haantho se bana mango shake for for special ppl

Gunjan and Nupur smile.

Mayank: (surprised) Iska kya matlab hai?

Nupur: Arre don't u kno they are together

Mayank is surprised ''..or lets say shocked

the mango shake is over the girls head to leave the guys

Nupur holds Mayank's hand to stop him

Mayank: Kya hua Nupur?

Nupur: Agar tum romantic nai ho toh iska matlab ye nahi ki saari duniya unromantic hai''

(Mayank is still confused)

Mayank unhe akele mein baat karne do

After a small pause''''.

Acha suno Mayank mujhe bahut acha laga ki tum aaj mujhe milne aaye

Tum kitne ache ho Mayank

Mayank is all smiles hearing this

Both the guys leave

At night Nupur is thinking about the days events

She thinks " Ungli meri katni thi, par cut uski gayi''''..Par Mayank ko mere dard se asar padta hai aaj ye sabit hui''''''..

Par mujhe pata hai woh mujhse pyaar karta hai

Main usse pyaar karti hu

Par ye sab usse kyu nahi pata"

She is upset and happy together ''''''''She sleeps hoping ki atleast mayu usske sapne mein toh aayega

Mayank on the other hand is unable to sleep

He is thinking bout wat samrat told him''''

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In Samrat's car(while returning from Nupur's place that night)

Mayank: Dude yeah kab hua '''.I mean tum aur Gunjan?

Samrat: Kyu koi problem hai kya?

Mayank: Nahi yaar but it's a surprise ''''.toh ye sab hua kaise

I mean tumhe pata kaise chala ki ''..

Samrat gets it. And thinks he can help Nupur out this way

Samrat: I noticed changes in myself ever since I met her

Then I cudnot tolerate her pain or sadness or insult and liked her stupidest thing

Ye saare toh visible changes the ''Par ur heart has to tell this to u

Mayank: Phir kya kiya?

Samrat: Usse propose?

Mayank: Don't tell me Gunjan se bina hint liye u proposed her

Samrat: Arre Gunjan neb hi bahut saaf saaf hints diye the

Mayank: Jaise?

Samrat: Mere dekhne pe sharmana muskurana and all that''..Par dude usse nai pata ki who mere liye hints the

But ye tum kyu puch rahe ho?

Mayank back from his thots

Mayank gets up from his bed''''.Thinks

"Samrat ke saare points ye toh batate hai ki main Nupur se pyaar karta hu

Par yeh confirm kaise karu

Ho sakta hai im over imaginig"

Mayank frustrated by this love thing gets up and keeps his head on the wall

He closes his eyes

He sees Nupur (smiles)

He remembers her dance, their fight so on'''

Later he remembers the previous night''''Nupur staring at him

His smile broadens'''Mayank's mother enter's

MM: Mayank

Mayank doesnot respond

MM(shakes him): Koun hai ?

Mayank: Koun ma?

MM: (In her dramatic style) Wahi jiske khalayo mein tu khoya hai

Jisne teri need chain cheen liya

Mayank: Kya? Apko aisa kyu lagta hai ki jiske khayalo mein main khoya tha woh koi ladki thi?

MM: Maine aisa kab kaha? Woh ladka bhi ho sakta hai

Mayank: Ma'''

MM: Mayu ''..Dekh beta tere chere ki smile keh rahi thi im in love toh socha puch lu?

Mayank: Ma aisa kuch nai hai'''

MM: Batade usse

Mayank: Ma ''''''.

Next day in college:

Mayank and Nupur see each other in the class''''''.But before they can exchange a hi

Princi comes in

P: Students apko pata hai ki har saal humare yaha se students go to villages for awareness camps in groups of two. This year also they ll go. I want our college to be active in social work too. Main chahta hu aap khud volunteer kare. Jo jaana chahte hai who Miss Aha ke pass jake apne village ka naam select kare'''''..And remember in groups of two.

Nupur goes and sits beside Mayank.

Nupur: Main jaungi'..Mayank tum chaloge mere saath??

Mayank: Sure'''.Arre itne ache cause ke liye kyu nahi

Aur waise bhi tumse acha partner kaha milega?

Nupur is taken aback for a few seconds, but b4 she tries to ask something Miss Aha starts her lecture.

During the class

Nupur(thinks): Ye Mayank ko kya ho gaya hai? Meri tareef ki usne''..

Mayank(thinks): Miss Nupur Bhushan aapne jitna mujhe confuse kiya uske comparision mein jo confusion aapko ho rahi hai who kum hai.

Nupur keeps wondering the entire class and Mayank intently listens to Miss Aha.

The class finishes

Mayank: Sham ko 4:30 milenge Nupur

Nupur: Kyu Mayank?

Mayank: Nupur ?? Abhi Miss Aha ne kaha na aaj sham ko nikalna hai'''..

Bus ke tickets college arrange kar raha hai''''Maine hum dono ka village bhi choose kar liya''..

Nupur: Kya? Mayank batao na kya kya kaha Miss Aha ne''.

Mayank: Hum Kotlabama ja rahe hai'.Kal Morning tak bus mein phir wala se bail gadi shayad'..

Nupur: Kya? Bail gadi?? By god kitna maza aayega

Mayank: Haan'..Phir waha 3 din ki stay hai aur wapas aate hue samrat hume pick karega

Nupur: Acha?? By god Mayank ye trip toh zabardast hogi. Btw Mayank explain kya karna hai mujhe?

Mayank: Tumhe women ko address karna hai. You hv to tell them bout gharelu nuskhe and some disease awareness. And ya some things regarding childbirth and contraception.

Nupur: Itna sab main batau'''..toh tum kya bataoge?

Mayank: Main Mardo ko farming ke bare mein bataunga''..

Nupur: Acha

Chal bbye see ya at the bus stand .

Nupur and Mayank both are happy'''..Packing up.

Nupur: Is trip mein main Mayank ko apne dil ki baat batadungi'''..Phir chahe job hi ho

Mayank: Nupur is trip ke bad humare beech kuch similar nahi rehne wala