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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
hi sanam
love ur concept
pls when u start pls add me to ur pm list
ohh n love ur name lol
Love Sanam.M
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome Pl add me on Pm List

hi monika thanxz, and i'll add you to my pm list for sure

Originally posted by: nehasfan

nice concept...
plz add me 2 d pm list n cont soon...

Thanxz, will add you

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: vruls

hi sanam
love ur concept
pls when u start pls add me to ur pm list
ohh n love ur name lol

Love Sanam.M

Thank-you i love my name too lol, also glad to have you reading my ff, thanxz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys this is the character sketch i hope you like, i have spent alot time to write this ff and i hope you people comment on it because your comments mean alot

Character sketch


GUPTA PARIVAAR

Riddhima Gupta(1st Oldest):24 years old She has grown up to much for her age, lost her parents at a very young age, then she had to take on the responsibility of her younger sisters.Even though life has given her many reasons to die, she has always come through strong, only for her sisters, she never wants or can see them hurt. It hurts her to see a single teardrop leave from their delicate eyes.She always wants to do the best for her sisters, and can do anything for them, ANYTHING!!(Key point in this story)


Riddhi Gupta (2nd Oldest):22 years old She was named by riddhima, she was only 2 when she named her and that was the best she could do. Riddhi is totally different from her eldest sister even though anyone who would see them or hear their names would think they are twins but they are not. She is not aware of any problems that riddhima has faced for her.She loves her her sisters very much even though she feels sometimes she is not related to them at all. She currently in England studying medicine. One person who thinks life is to be lived to the fullest, sometimes in journey through life she hurts people who are most close to her. She will do anything for her own happiness and she hates to share anything with anyone,(sometimes)even her own sisters.

Kripa Gupta( 3rd Oldest):21 years old The baby of the family, she is mostly like riddhima in every manner be it the dressing style or making a very important decision. She loves her sisters very much, also loves to sings more then study. She and Riddhima (who realized kripas real happiness was in becoming a singer) helped her create a name in the singing Industry. She is Know as "TANYA SHARMA" because she was afraid to use her real name, real name or no, she has won the hearts of millions and continues to do so.

KHANNA FAMILY

Angad Khanna(1st oldest):26 years old ROCKSTAR, lives in the heart of every girl. He loves his younger brother very much can do anything for him.He changes girlfriends like he changes his clothes.He loves singing its his passion for life, his parents never wanted him to become a singer but he went against their wishes, and came out successful because he believed in himself and that is what he taught armaan to always do what he believes in not what others want him to do. Always treats life like its going to end tomorrow


Armaan Khanna(2nd oldest):25 years old one word Biggest flirt, he learned to be like that from his older brother. He is currently Abroad studying.Parents passed away when he was young. He gets what ever he wants, girls die to spend one second with him but he doesn't even give them one look, because now he is waiting for a someone special in his life. He never stops one second to think about the consequences of his actions.Though a flirt has never hurt anyone feelings.

Love: #**Sanam**##😳




Edited by PheliNazar - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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~Part 1~

ENGLAND 10:00 am

Riddhi, get up, the person shook her but no response, the person got worried, riddhi riddhi. "huh", she jolted awake scaring the person and nearly making the person fall."riddhi are you okay?" sat down to comfort her. " riddhi hun what happened",Nupur you always disturb my dreams you know i was just about to meet my prince" i turned to see her she looked angry, like a child who favorite toy had been taken away from him, " riddhi sorry yaar but we have to go to university"
Nu: come on riddhi, hurry and get dressed we have alot to do.Today is the la...(phone rings)
Nu:(picks up) hello? hi riddhima di how are you?.. yea don't worry we have not forgotten we will reach the airport at the right time promise. Yea i can't wait to see you too....yea riddhi (turns her head to see her crying) I can't let riddhi talk to di like this,di riddhi is in the washroom.yea okay bye.Riddhi sweetie what happened? I sat down near her and then i realised it was the last day of university."riddhi don't worry you will always have me"
R: Nups i'm not crying because its the last day?
Nu:(confused) By God, then why are you crying?
R:Nups you are getting married!...then you won't be able to talk to me or do anything with me!
Nu:(laughs) Riddhi i'm getting married not going to a prison!
R: but still
Nu: stilll what?, don't worry i will make sure mayank takes me to your house once a week
R:(smiles) promise?
Nu: promise (hugs) now come on (doorbell rings) now who is that?
R: i know who it is?
Nu: (opens the door) armaan you at this time?(he walks in and looks aorund)
R:(quickly covers herself with sheets) Ammy don't you have shame to walk in a girls room without looking?
Ar:(laughs) girl? i don't see any girl do you nupur?
R: ammy(angry runs into the washroom)
Nu: armaan why do you always pull her leg
Ar: because sweetheart, i can't pull your leg, so then............(riddhi comes out wearing a skirt. and a tank top armaan wishltes) wow Candy you look nice
R: my name is riddhi not candy!
A: i know but you so sweet just like candy!
Nu: okay guys will you chill today is the last day and you guys are fighting
R: i'm sorry ammy(hugs)
Ar: me too candy(kisses her on the cheek) Shall we? (hold out his hand)
R: we shall(holds his hand)
arman and riddhi are about to leave, when they hear a noise
Nu: guys what about me?
R: opps sorry nups(holds her with hand and they leave)
INDIA
A girl enters a opens a door at first glance the room looks a faiytale, the walls are colored light purple with a huge swing bed floating in the air and the walls are covered with posters, the girl queitly walks towards the bed, lifts the cover and slowly brings her face forwards to another girls ears
Girl: Tanya Sharma
Ta: dii let me sleep please..(pushes away the girl)
Girl: Kripa get up you have a recording at 3.00 come on get up
Kr: riddhima dii sone dooo na
Ri: kripa jaan it was you who wanted to be a rock star not me, so come one get up! (pulls her out of the bed)
Kr:(looks up is shocked) dii not fair, it's only 12:30 we have a lot of time!
Ri:(smiles) my sweet little sister we have to go to mandir and then i have to go to sanjeevani
Kr: mandir ? how boring!
Ri:kripa you too, riddhi says that to, noway get up we are going
Kr: but diiiiiiiiiiii
Ri: bas i want to see you dowstairs in 10 minutes no excuses (leaves the room)
Kripa goes and takes a shower, wears a white churidaar, with silver bangles and kajal thats it, goes downstairs:
Kr: dii i'm ready lets go
Riddhima comes out of the room wearing a blue churidaar with kajal not jewellery.
Ri: lets go, Ramu kaka take out the car

Ramu Kaka: jee bitiya

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Mandir
Kripa and Riddhima walk up the stairs and ring the bell, Riddhima goes and prays while kripa goes to get the pooja ki thali,
Ri:(closes her eyes) please bhagwanji, aaj joh main apse maangne jaa rahi hoon, please aap woh muhje dedena kyunki woh hi meri behn ki zindagi mein khushi la sakti hai. aap please usse Zaib khanna se milwa dein. Woh us shaks ko apna dil de bethi hai aur main uska pehla pyaar adhura hota hua nahi dek sakti hoon. please aur muhje kuch nahi chahiye, aur haan please riddhi aur nupur ko sahi salamat se yahan poncha dena. bas thank-you bhagwanji (opens her eyes and leaves to see where kripa is when she turns a flower suddenly falls inthe thali and mandir bells start to ring) yeh kya horaha hai, kripa kahan hai (sees kripa no where)while kripa is going down the stairs and she passes someone and her dupatta gets stuck, she turns to see a man in his twenty queit handsome, she walks towards him..
Kr: sorry (trys to pull out her dupatta) i'm really sorry

Person: it's okay i don't mind ke ek khoobsurat larki ka dupatta meri watch mein faas gaya hai (winks)
Kr: how dare you !(she slaps the person) you cheap person we are in a mandir atleast respect that, i can't believe people with low thinking like you come to a mandir too.You know what people like you should not be allowed to enter here.(she pulls out her dupatta and leaves with pooja ki thali but what she doesn't notice is one of the flower from the thaali fall at the persons feet)
Person: how dare she she slapped Zaib Khanna, The rockstar, she will pay for that, i will make sure she does watch out you little witch angad khanna is coming! (leaves in process stepping on the flower that fell out of kripas pooja ki thaali ** SYMBOL**)
Finally riddhima spots kripa coming towards her and smiles,
Kr: here di (hands riddhima the thali)
Ri: panditji yeh lein
Panditji does the pooja for them while they stand with their hands folded.
Panditji:(has a weird feeling) betiyo yeh lo prashad
Ri: acha panditji hum chalte hai
Kr: shuriya panditji
Pandit: ek minute beta meri sunogi
Ri:(concerned) ji kahiye
Pandit: Riddhima beta Zindagi ek chahat ka silsila hai,Koi kisi se mil jata hai to koi kisi se bichad jata hai,Jise hum mangten hai apni dua mein,Wo kisi ko bina mange mil jata hai.Beta hum bas yeh kehna chahte hain ke kahbi bhi kisi ki khushi dehk ke jalna mat, Kaun jane zindagi ke kis morh pe apne hi begane hogayeinge par tum kahbi unka saath mat chorna, beshak tumhara dil bi toot jaye par apne rishton ko mat tootne dena yeh bahut keemti hai ek baar bichard gaye toh kahbi laut ke nahi ayegeinge. bas tum meri yeh baat humesha
yaad rakhna acha beti mein ab chalta hoon (Walks away)
Ri:(standing their numb) yeh panditji kya keh rahe the?
Kr: (shocked) dii forget him, i told you not to believe in this stuff but, forget it dii lets go you have a important meeting chalo...
Ri:(clears her mind but can't forget what he said) haan lets go i'll drop you at the studio and then i'll go for the meeting okay.
Kr: okay di
Ri: kripa you bring the car, i'll be back (runs to the pooja ghar)
Kr: please god dii ko himmat dena unka sab kuch mein aur riddhi hain agar hum chle gaye toh woh tut jayeingi (leaves to get the car)
Pooja Ghar
Riddhima Kneels down infornt of the murti and folds her hands
Ri: mein apni behno ko hamesha khush rakhoongi, uske liye muhje apni khushi koh ansoun mein badalna parhe toh mein karoogi, Mein kahbi apni behno se mooh nahi morhungi, chahe
muhje kitni bhi agnipereeksha deni parein mein sab karoongi, in rishton kon kahbi bi toot ne nahi doongi bhi, bas maa apko ko muhje ek waada dena hoga apne meri zindagi ko jaisa hain waisa hi rehne dengi.(Wipes her tears and leaves but what she didn't notice was panditji was listening to her talk)
Pandit: beta mein tumhe ek bhare toofan ki ane ki khabar de raha tha, ab sab kuch badal ne wala hai, bas tumhe apne aap pe barhosa rakhna hoga. Is toofan mein tumhara rishtey natey sab bikar jayeinge, chahe tum chaho ya na.Kehne ko to tum bahut hi naseeb wali hogi tumhe sindoor milega par yehi naseeb ka sindoor tumhare liye badkismati ban jayega. Joh tumhe zindagi ke har rastey pe mile ga, beta mein janta hoon ke tume himmat hai, tum is toofan ko rok sakti, isse rok lo beta beta rok lo...(walks away)
Riddhima walks downstairs towards the car with panditji words still ringing in her mind, she sits in the car not listening to a word kripa is saying
Kr: dii are you listening?(shakes riddhima)
Ri: huh? what happened?
Kr: nothing dii, please forget what the pandit said(tears drop from her eyes to see her elder sis like this)
Ri:(hurt to see kripa cry) okay i promise i will try to forget what the pandit said okay, now come on please stop crying
Kr: i will but you promise me first!
Ri: fine i promise happy(smiles and wipes kripa's tears)
Kr:yes
Ri: Ramu Kaka kripa ko pehle ap studio mein utar dein phir hum sanjeevani jayeinge okay
Ramu Kaka: jee
Kr: dii i'll leave now i'll see you at home (leaves but suddenly turns) and dii always smile because you look beautiful (blows a kiss)

Ri:(catches the kiss) i will sweetheart now go bye (waves bye) chalien Ramu Kaka

England
6:00 Pm
riddhi walks out wearing an elegant strapless black dress, that showed her curves it was like the dress and riddhi were made for each other,
R: so?(looking at nupur)
Nu: By God riddhi i think today when you confess to him he will surely fall in love with you even if he wasn't
R: nups be serious please, today is a very important day for me!
Nu: what i'm serious armaan won't be able to look at any girl from today, no lie bestfriends Honour
R: i hope what you said happens
Nu: i will now wear this shawl(put a black shawl over riddhi shoulder)
R: thanxz, hey nups why aren't you going to the ball
Nu: Riddhi have you heard raja and rani stories right then how can rani being me go with out my raja being mayank who is india(smiles)
R: are you sure you won't be lonely?
Nu: i won't be now get out before i decide to become "kabab mein haddi"(pushes her out)
R:(turns around with counfused face) nups do you think he will love me too!
Nu: i Think any person who does not love you is a idiot, now go bye (waves)
R: bye (sits in the car)
Meanwhile In India
Riddhima gets out the car,
Ri: Ramu KaKa aap theek toh hain (Sees him coughing),Aap please ghar jake rest karein, chalein jayiye, okay main chalti hoon, bye
Ramu KaKa: jee betiya, sada khush raho (leaves)
Riddhima enters sanjeevani, when a weird feeling creeps inside her, like as if something is going to change forever, she was walking lost in her thoughs, she opens her office door and bumps into someone.
Ri: i'm sorry (looks up) mayank Bhaiya aap?
M:haan ridz, did you forget their is a important boards meeting today
Ri:(remebers) oh my i completely forgot
M:(sees her tensed face) Ridz are you okay? (makes her sit and drink water)
Ri: yea bhaiya don't worry, will you do me a favor?
M: yea sure,
Ri:bhaiya can you pick up kripa from the studio, i have to go somewhere after the meeting
M: okay theek, lets go for the meeting

In the Meeting they dicuss about another doctor coming from England, and how the doctor will take over the surgery ward with Dr.Riddhima.After the meeting mayank leaves to pick up kripa.

So, here it is guys, the first part please comment and tell me how it was, please leave your comments, they mean alot.😛

Luv, Sanam

Edited by PheliNazar - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey, guys i made a tittle song for my ff:

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X6rd5SUCxWY[/YOUTUBE]

my very first try at making a video, plzz tell if it is good or not😛😛

Edited by PheliNazar - 16 years ago
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~Part 2~
England

Riddhi arrives at the ball, she steps out of the car to see arman wearing a black armani suit that looked so charming on his well built body.She walks up to him he held out his hand and she held.
Ar: wow candy you look beautiful
R: thank-you and you looking handsome yourself too
Ar: thank-you, now lets get dancing (enter the ball)
The ball looked like a fairytale,now riddhi just wished her love story would have a fairy ending too.
Ar: shall we? (holds out his hand)
R: we shall (both go to the dance flower)
Meanwhile in India (tanya = kripa & zaib = Angad)
Tanya was in the recording studio with Zaib, they were recording there first album together, kripa was very excited because she got to meet zaib khanna, while zaib was just acting like whatever can we get it done and i can leave,
Directer: 1,2 and go
Choru Singers: Follow your heart(2)
Tan: (singing) Ishq Mein Khushi Mile Ishq Mein Ghum Mile Chalthe Rehna Is Rastey
Follow Your Heart........
Ishq Mein Khushi Mile Ishq Mein Ghum Mile Chalthe Rehna Is Rastey
Ishq Mein Khushi Mile Ishq Mein Ghum Mile Chalthe Rehna Is Rastey
Hastey Hastey, Hastey Hastey, Hastey Hastey, Hastey Hastey
Follow Your Heart........
Zaib:(stands queitly)

Tan: zaib sing (nudges him) zaib
Director:(annoyed) CUT! zaib whats the problem
zaib: sir actually i don't like the lyrics to repeat, you know "hastey hastey" or "even follow your heart"
Tan:(angry) hey mister whats your problem, we are paid to sing not write songs
Zaib: no one is talking to you Ms.Sharma, i only sing quality songs
Tan:(laughs) well if you want quality songs why don't you write your own songs..huh! how about that, then you can sing the songs you write, (turns to the director) sir can we hurry i have time for immature people
Zaib:(angry) excuse me! did you just call me immature? no one calls Z...
Tan:(makes faces)
Zaib: are you making of me? you....sir i can't work with her
Tan: you can't work with no, i won't work with you, i quit!....(turns the other way so she doesn't face zaib)
Directer: yeh kya horaha hai, mein toh bas ek gaana chahta tha, yeh toh muhje poori film dihka rahe hain.
Tan: huh?
Zaib: what?
Directer: i mean you both have to do this song, no matter what you both signed a contract and you can't back out?
Tan: okay sir i'll be professional if this clown stops being annoying
Zaib:(shocked) clown? you called me a clown
Directer: aree nahi baba usne muhje clown kaha, now can we please start recording
Zaib: okay sir
Tan: fine
Directer:(smiles) good now lets start from zaibs part, 3..2..1. and go
Zaib:(singing)Ishq Mein Khushi Mile Ishq Mein Ghum Mile Chalthe Rehna Is Rastey
Ishq Mein Khushi Mile Ishq Mein Ghu..mmm..mmm

Tan:(looks at him) oh god ab tumhari train kahan atak gayi
Directer & zaib: train?
Tan: his voice duhh
Directer : ohhh...(looks at zaib angrily) now what happened to you?
Zaib: sir my throat is dry!
Directer: Juice now!
Tan:(feels like she is going crazy) thats it,i cannot work like this i'm leaving bye, sir call me(leaves)
Zaib:(drinking his juice) pagal hai kya?(about tanya)(looks at the directors)
Directer:(angry) Pack up!
zaib:(lost) now what happened to you?
While in England

Arman and Riddhi are slow dancing to "Bol na Halke Halke", a song which is so electric that it brings out a person really feeling
Ar: (looking in her eyes) Riddhi you know i have never noticed but you have beautiful eyes
R:(blushes) thanxz
Ar:(surprised to see her blush) oh wow i thought you didn't know how to blush
R: arman (hits him on the chest)
Ar: what okay i'm sorry you look even prettier when you blush
R: aww so sweet (kisses him on the cheek)

Ar: thank-you (hugs her)

R:(while hugging arman she whispers) I LOVE YOU ARMAAN

Ar:(shocked) what did you say riddhi?
R:(looks into his eyes) armaan i know we have been best freinds forever and i don't know when in this 5 years i started to love you, i wanted to tell before i went to india, arman i love you and i can do anything for you, this heart has only loved you and no one else
Ar:(holds her arm and drags her outside) riddhi lets go
R: but where?
Ar: just come!
India
Riddhima is walking alone on the beach, thinking about what the pandit said, she is lost that she does'nt know what to do, or where to go, but she knows one thing , her sisters come before anything for her.
England - Garden
Arman drags her outside, and makes riddhi stand facing him
Ar: look riddhi, i don't know what, to say,
R: arman just say whats in you heart, don't lie
Ar: okay then, riddhi i have never looked at you in that type of way, you are my best friend and will always be, but riddhi i can't give you anything more than that, riddhi i know that i'm a flirt but i 'have always told myself that there is someone in the world that is made for me, and there will come a day when we will meet, but you surprised me, riddhi i'm really sorry if i have hurt your feelings in any way
India
Ri: Today i swear to this moon that noone will enter my life, there is no one made for me, i only want my sisters to be happy, their happiness is my happiness and nothing more. I will never let my feelings get in the way of riddhi or kripa happiness even if i have to kill myself. They are my world and i can't live without them.So today bhagwanji i ask you that please don't let love come in to my life, i don't want anyone in my life (falls to ground crying)
England - Garden
R:(crying) arman i'm really sorry , i love you and noone can change that, but what i can't do is force you to love me, but i know one thing i will never love any one like i have loved you. You are my first and last love and no one will enter my life except you.
Ar: riddhi i'm really sorry, i have this ideal girl in my mind and you just don't fit into that picture
R: arman come on it's the last day before i leave for india (wipes her tears) will you send me there crying?
Ar: no way (tears leave his eyes) come here candy(hugs her)
R: bestfriends forever
Ar: Forever ever ever & ever
R:(laughs) ammy..
Ar: come on i'll drop you home
They sit in the car and drive away.
That night symbolized a new beginning for both the sister. Ones life would begin and the others would end (not in the death way okay)

Arman dropped riddhi at home and promised he will call her every week when she is in india, also he said sorry for everything that happened today.Riddhi rang the bell, nupur opened the door,
Nu: kya Riddhi don't you have the key, i was sleeping!(soundin annoyed)
R: mera phela pyar adhura reh gaye nupur, mera phela pyaar (hugs nupur crying)
Nu:(shocked doesn't know how to react) riddhi what are you saying?
R: He doesn't love he is waiting for his dream girl (nupur makes her sit down and drink water)
Nu: riddhi i thought armaan
R: nupur i thought that to but he only thinks of me as his friend nothing more.
Nu: riddhi look life sometime gives you surprises we just have to accept them, nothing more
R:(wipes her tears) no i won't accept this i will make arman fall in love with me, he is only mine and thats it.
Nu: but what about the "dream girl " thing?
R:(stands up looking determined) i will become his dream girl, the girl he will fall in love with
Nu:(smiles) now thats the attitude i expect from you, good job
R: one thing riddhi gupta has not learned is that to loose what she loves, and armaan will only by mine doesn't matter what i have to do, to get him.
Nu: okay come we have an early flight to catch, and we have alot of packing to do.
They both pack their clothes and go to sleep setting the alarm at 5:00am

India
Mayank brings Kripa home, cooks her dinner since riddhima is not at home,
M: so how did your recording go?
Kr: it went okay, i mean that Zaib Khanna is so annoying, he has to have everything he wants (walks up to mayank) you know bhaiya that guy finds mistakes in the littlest of things.
M:(laughs) kripa he is a rock star what do you expect?
Kr:(smirks) rock star hai yan Bhagwan, i bet bhagwanji be itne nakre nahi karte hogeinge (sits on the counter)
M:(laughs) kripa don't be mean, accha(remebers riddhima face at the office) kripa tell me did someone say something to riddhima, i mean she was looking really tensed at Sanjeevani?
Kr:(remmebers the mandir incident, but decides not to worry him) nahi bhaiya you know di na, she gets upset on little little things, so tell me are excited about your marrige?
M: excited? more so scared! that nupur i tell you she'll eat me alive one day!
Kr:(laughs) bhaiya nupur bhabi is not that bad! i mean i know woh aapko apni ungli pe nachati hain, par woh har girlfriend, yahn pati ka hak hota haina.(jumps off the counter and runs)
M:(looks at her shocked) kripa tu ruk (runs after, but here the doorbell) i'll get it!(opens the door and lets her come inside), Riddhima finally you know how many times i tried calling you?
Ri: i'm sorry bhaiya par beach pe..(realises what she said)
M:you went to the beach?
Ri:(realizes she is caught) haan, i actually i just wanted to be alone for a while(looks around) where is kripa?
M:(notices something different in riddhima but ignores it) haan woh upar gayi hai!, okay i'll leave now, i'll see you tom.
Ri: why don't you stay?
M: Nahi Ridz mom is prorbably waiting and and you know nupur is coming tom?

Ri: yea, okay then i'll see tom
M: hey how about i pick you up and we go together?
Ri: yea sure, just call me when you leave!
M: okay than bye take care(leaves)

Ri: bye(closes the door, and leaves to go to her room while going up she promises tommorrow will be a new begining, a begining that will change her life forever)

Next Day
The suns beamed through the window disturbing his peaceful sleep, he moved his head to the other side they followed him there to.He put the cover on his head, but what was the use his sleep was ruined anyway.
An: abbe yaar yeh problem kya surajii apki, you really like to disturb my sleep don't you, everyday at the same time you wake me up! (looks at the clock), wah suraji kya perfect timing hai apki, kahbi aap late nahi hote(phone rings, he picks it up and looks at the screen - Arman) or ek yeh hai mera bhai, joh muhje har month mein ek baar yaad karta hai, or woh bhi jaab usse kuch chahiye hota hai.(picks up the phone) Helloji
Ar: bro what wrong with you?
An: nothing armanji woh bus kya haina, ke mera ek bhai hai armaan ke naam se, bas aap usse keh dena kahbi woh hume bhi yaad karliya kare (smiles)
Ar: bhai, i'm sorry for calling after along time...it's just that..(remmebers riddhi incident)
An: i know i know Arman Khanna has alot on his mind like partying, girlfriends and etcc right
Ar: bhai come on not you too
An: Abe ullu ke pathe yeh kya not you to, ofcourse me too, armaan i have decided you are coming back to india and that's final.
Ar: but bhai my studies
An: bhahar mein asi studies joh ek bhai ko dusere bhai se dur karein, tere siwa aur kaun hai mera is duniya aur tu bhi wahan england mein betha hai.
Ar: par bhai....
An: no ifs or buts you are coming and thats it, i have already told Nupur to book your flight, and anyways aren't coming for her wedding so whats the problem? and oh yeah did she board her flight
Ar: yea she did..... but
An: yeh kya but but laga rakha hai, this is my final decision, now put the phone down and start packing.. bye(hangs up) Dehka surajii yeh hai mera kamal, now when arman comes here i will tell him that he got a job in india's top hospital - SANJEEVANI and he won't be able to refuse me after my emotional hatayacharrrrrrrr(gets up to take a shower)

So, there it is todays update hope you liked it,so pleassee comment because they are very important to me😛

Edited by PheliNazar - 16 years ago
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wowowowo angad is elder and kripa is youngest wowowo thxx for pm.
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hey sanam nice sketch waiting 2 read PART1
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Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

loved it...start soon :)

thank-you for the comment

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