Nafrat Ki Ek Kahani(KASH/AKFF)NOTE+SUMMARY on Pg27 - Page 11

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Posted: 16 years ago
hurry because i want to comment before i go offline😛😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
so are you updating because you went offline are u r u? ru ?
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sorryyyyyyyyy if you think i'm annoying not try to be annoying actually just can't wait to read the ff😭😭😭
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PART 5

hey guys i'm back with part 5, actually you know i want to finish the ff, before school starts because i know i won't be able to come to the forums while school is going on, because this is my last year of high school and i want to work hard, so for me to finish this ff before school starts i need all my friends to comment, and then i will update faster, so hope you guys will comment more.................😛

Continued......

KaKa: nahi beta woh wapis agayi hai
M: kya kab?
KaKa: beta woh muhje milne ayi thi, usse kuch nahi pata, beta dehko shashank bete ne jab mahi meri godh me rakhi thi, tab woh bahut choti thi, woh muhje apna baap smahje ke baarahi hui hai, aur kripa shashank beta ko, jab ki tum dono ko pata mahi aur kripa judwaa behne hain, Beta mahi ko agar sachai pata chal gayi toh woh toot jaygi, mein chahta hoon mahi aur kripa kahbi na mile!
Ri: kyaa? mahi meri behn hai?....par papa ne toh kaha tha ke kripa aur mahi apki betiyaan hain
KaKa: nahi beta ussne jhoot kaha tha kyunki woh nahi chahta the mahi muhje chor ke chali jaye, iss liye
Ri: meri behn, (crying)
M: baba aap yeh kya keh rahe hain?
Kaka: beta Iss baat ke peeche bahut bara raaz hai, beta tumhe nahi pata mahi ko meri godh mein kyun dala gaye tha, bas tum......ma...hi.....ko...kripa....aur....apne...parivaar se ....durr ..rakh......n...a........(Heart beat stops)
Ri: baba(shakes him) bhaiya yeh kya hogaya
M: ridz meri smahj mein kuch nahi araha hai
Ri: yeh baba kaunse raaz ke bare mein keh rahe the
M: ridz calm down (phone rings) hey arman...nahi dude kuch theek nahi hai, do me a favour keep kripa and riddhi at your house tonight, i'll pick them up in the morning, nahi dude sab kuch galat hogaya, haan ridz she is holding up but she is totally broken down, down't worry i'll if i need any thing i'll call you don't worry okay then see you!(closes the phone)
Ri: bhaiya aab kya karien hum?
M: kuch nahi bas hum kuch nahi karien joh bhi raaz hain woh usse hum baba ke saat hi dafan kardeinge aur mahi ko hum sachai baata deinge usse ghar leinn ayeinge,
Ri: par bhaiya baba ne toh
M: ridz mahi humari behn hain hum usse ase hi nahi chor sakte
Ri: bhaiya hum kripa ko kya kahein, woh humse nafrat karegi agar usse pata chal gaya ke hum ne usse uski behn se door rahka, mein us ka samna kaise karungi
M: ridz dehko hume soch smajh ke kadam uthana hoga, is kadam se do zindagiyan barbad ho sakti hain!
Ri: bhaiya mere mein himmat nahi hain, mein yeh sab kuch nahi karsakti
M: par ridz
Ri: nahi bhaiya mein mahi se baat karungi
M: par mahi ko hak hai ke woh bhi humara pyaar paye
Ri: hai par uss hak se usse kaunsi khushi milegi, zada usse dukh hoga ke woh jhoot ki zindagi jeeti ayi hai,
M: ridz tum theek nahi kar rahi
Ri: bhaiya aap muhje smahjne ki koshish karien, bas aap kisi ko kuch nahi kaheinge bas kaka ke sharad mein aur aap karienge, aur hum kripa, aur riddhi ko kuch nahi kaheinge, mein mahi ko dhund ne ki koshish karungi
M: par
Ri: bhaiya please
M: theek hain jaise tum chahti ho, okay chalo mein pandit ji se baat karta hun, aaj hi aaj sharad kar dete hain
Ri: jee bhaiya
Mayank walks away to call the pandit, while ridz goes to talk to the doctor, later mayank and ridz do the sharad and leave for home, they arrive home and go inside,
Ri: accha bhaiya mein riddhi aur kripa ko leine ja rahi hoon
M: is ki koi zarurat nahi hai aaj ke liye woh dono nupur ke ghar raheingi
Ri:(shocked) nahi, main une lene ja rahi hoon, bhaiya muhje kripa aur riddhi ke begar neend nahi ayehi
M: par ridz hume une ramu kaka ke bare mein kya kaheinge
Ri: kuch bhi par, mein une lene ja rahi hoon
M: accha theek hai , calm down i'll go and get them
Ri: no i will go, i want to say sorry to nupur
M: accha theek you go but becareful

KHANNA HOUSE

Nupur and kripa with angad are in the living room, while riddhi is in the garden trying to call ridz, she is not getting any connection, arman comes behind and taps on her shoulder, Ar: kya kar rahi ho?

R: nothing bas socha ke dii sey baat kar loon, i mean i just wanted make sure everything is okay

Ar: you really love her alot don't you?
R: arman she is my sister ofcourse i love her, even though sometimes we fight, we still have the same blood runnig through our veins
Ar:(laughs) riddhi sometimes you really surprise me, and your dii she is one tough cookie!
R:(smiles) trust she is not if it came time me kripa aur bhaiya was in trouble, she would do anthing for us, she really loves us alot, you don't i have seen her cry over a scratch on me or kripa, dii thinks she has to be both mother and father for me and kripa but she has forgotten how to live, in her aim of making mine and kripas life better
Ar:(smiles) wow you sister seems like a very sweet person, and also it seems as if you and kripa are her life
R: yea we are
Ar: accha riddhi forget ridz, i wanted to know if you are okay?
R: yea ofcourse i'm okay why
Ar: no i mean about what happened in england
R:(smiles) arman seriously forget everthing i can't not force you to love me, but atleast i have a great friend like you, and i wouldn't want to loose my bestfriend over a one - sided love
Ar: listen, i really mean it that im sorry
R: arman if you keep on saying sorry then i will be really angry at you!
Ar: accha accha i'm sorry(bites his tongue)
R: Armann
Ar: okay chill candy! (smiles)
while in the living room, the three musketeers are talking
Kr: nupur di are you sure dii is okay?
Nu: would i hide something something like that from you
Kr: but then why did she ask us to stay over
Nu: i don't know arman just told me mayank asked you and riddhi to stay over
Kr: nahi i want to go home (tears form in her eyes)
Angad sees the tears form in her eyes, and feels something inside him, but ingnores the feeling
Nu: aree kripa jaan don't worry everything is okay!
Kr: nahi i want to go home
An: aree bhenjii tume sunai nahi deta kya, nupur is saying everything is okay so chill okay
Kr: bhenjii kise kaha
An:(looks around) ofcourse tumhe
Kr: tum na,
An: haan mein na kya
Kr: you idiot stupid, iratating monkey
An: tumne muhje monkey kaha
Kr: nahiiiiiiii, meine to angad khanna ko monkey kaha
An:(stands up ) you little witchh
Kr: money (hold out her tongue)
Nupur laughs seeing the scene infront of her, which eventually brings kripa and angad back to their senses and they realizes what they were doing, while angad was happy atleast he made her forget her worries, when riddhi and arman walk in,
Nu: arre you should have been here 2 mins earlier
R:(confuesd) why?
Nu: kyunke you missed a powerful packed performance by angad and kripa (laughs)
Kr: nupuur dii
Nu: okay i'm sorry
An: accha guys i have work tom,so i'm off to sleep, how about kripa and riddhi can have the guest and then we'll see you in the morning, arman i want to see you in my room, after
Ar: jee bhai
Everyone starts to leave towards their respective rooms when the doorbell rings, arman goes to open, he opens to see riddhima whos eyes are red from crying soo much, arman is surprised to see her at this time:
Ar: riddhima you here at this time?
Kripa runs to riddhima and hugs her
Kr: dii thank god you came
Ri: kripa it's okay now i'm here so don't worry (hugs her) come on riddhi we are going home
R: yea dii let me just grab my purse
Ri: nupur i'm really sorry to bother you today was suppose to be a great day but...(remeber doing the sharad) again i'm really sorry, I'll see you later okay
Nu: come on dii don't talk like that, is everything okay?
Ri: yea ofcourse don't worry it just i can't sleep without kripa and riddhi, it worries me, so i wanted to take them home, hope you don't mind
Ar: don't worry riddhima we don't mind!
Ri:(smiles) thanxz(sees riddhi coming) okays then we'll take a leave
An: bye
Nu: bye
Ri&Kr&R: bye(they leave)
Ar:(in his mind) i wonder what happened, i hope everything is okay!(leaves towards angad room)

ANGAD ROOM
angad is pacing around in the room nerviously, like he is about to do something very bad, arman enters the room and laughs seeing his older brother in this condition, he puts his hand on his shoulder,
Ar: bhai whats up?
An: arman yaar, you know how much i miss you whenever you leave
Ar: yea bhai even i miss you!
An:(smiles) really, i think you made my plan easier now
Ar:(confused) bhai what plan?
An: woh arman since you miss me and i miss you, i have decided you will stay here forever, and i don't mean until nupurs wedding
Ar:(shocked) what bhai noway....please don't make me stay here
An: it's my final decision, and i have decided that since you have finished your course, i have gotten you a job at india's top hospital, SANJEEVANI, you will be joining from tommorrow!
Ar: what no nonononononononoonononooononoonoon, i will not go to any sanjeevani or whatever i''m going back to england, after the wedding
An: no your not
Ar: bhaiiiiiii please
An: arman it's my final decision no point in arguing, better get some sleep since you have a new day ahead, gooodnight (pushes arman out of the room)
Ar: bhaaiiiiiii this is not fair( yells and leaves for his room)

NEXT DAY
we see a figure sneaking into a room, with a buket in hand, he sneaked up behind the bed and smile very naughtily, he brought up the bucket, and poured it on the poor poor person sleeping, the person woke up in an instant, yelling and screaming:
Ar: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh,
An:(laughs) arman it's just water chill
Ar:(angry) not funny bro seriously not funny
An: well from my POV it is (laughs)
Ar: it's okay laugh laugh because after this you will be crying !
An:(confused) crying? but why
Ar: ahmm, you may come in
An: come in who is it?(turns to see nupur walking in with a bucket of water) noway (hides behind arman) nupur my sweet sis how can you betray me like this (pretends to cry) " Bhai bhai na raha, behn behn na rahi, haiii main kyun jee raha hoonnnnnn"
Ar: haan bhai exactly, nupur please will you do the hounours or shall i?
Nu: ammy i will do the hounour
An: yeh hounour hunour kya laga rakha hai, tum dono apne bhai ka dil todne ja rahe ho, isme koi hounour ki baat nahi hai
Nu: it's okay...(starts to walk towards angad)
An: nupur please, my seedhi saadhi boli si sis don't do it!
Nu: mein itni bhi boli nahi hoon bhai so don't worry
Ar: good job nups
Nupur slowly walked towards the guys angad was infront now and arman was behind, she threw the water not knowing that angad had ducked and the water again was thrown on our poor shweet ammy
Ar: nupur yeh tumne kya kiya
Nu: oh my god arman i'm soo sorry
An:(Laughs) ab tumhare plan ka kya hua? oh wait muhje pata hai FLOP hogaya!
Nu:(brings a towel) i'm really soory how was i suppose to know bhai wil duck, but you have to admit he is smart(highs fives angad)
Ar: nupur, shutup...aaaaa..chooooooo(sneezes)
An: kya hua? paani danda tha kya,(laughs)
Ar: bhai you are soooooo mean?
An: accha chal abb get ready today is your first day at sanjeevani, i expect to see downstairs in 20 mins
Ar: but bhai
An: nahi arman no arguing!(leaves)
Arman looks at nupur, with a sad face hoping it will melt her but nupur being nupur knew all of armans tricks
Nu: arman mere chote bhai tere koi bhi tricks muhjpe nahi chalne wale so try bhi na kar okay
Ar: par nupur mein england wapis jaana chahta hoon
Nu: arman tere paas do raste hain sanjeevani ja, yan phir bhai ki baat na maan, aur tu yeh jaanta hai ke bhai ne kahbi tujhse kuch bhi nahi maanga balke uno ne tujh har woh cheez di jiski tune khwaish ki, ab faisla tere haath main hai(leaves)
Ar: yaar yeh nupur bhi humesha emotional kar jati hai, ab toh................(gets up and goes in the washroom)
While downstairs
Angad is walking here and there waiting for arman, when he sees him come down he smiles:
An: i'm soo proud of you!
Ar: bhai agar yeh apki khawish hai toh phir yeh mera farz hai ke mein ise pura karun
An: that's like my bro now come on hug me (both hug, nupur comes with dahi)
Nu: open your mouth
Ar: nups, you know i hate all this traditions
Nu: arman jab koi bhi bara kaam karne ke liye nikalte hai toh dhai shaakar gana chahiye, shagun hota hai
Ar: shagun?
Nu: shagun meaning it will help you be sucessful in whatever you do
Ar: fine (opens his mouth) aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa(eats it) happy!
Nu: very! (takes from kajal from her eyes and put in on arman) nazar na lage kisi tume
Ar: nupur.......please
Nu: accha i'm sorry
Ar: okay guys i' leaving see you tonight(leaves)

An & Nu: bye

Nu: so bhai aaj ka plan kya hai?

An: todays plan is i have to go for a recording and then for a reheasal

Nu:okay!
An: what about you?
Nu: actually mama called so i thought why don't i go over today?
An: good idea, but tell masi that you will be staying here till the wedding so don't even think of staying over
Nu:(smiles) don't worry i won't now go (pushes angad out of the door) paagal

Gupta House
Mayank stayed over since riddhima was not feeling well, and he didn't want kripa or riddhi to worry about anything, Riddhima had not slept the entire night as she couldn't stop thinking about what will mahi say about the truth?,Riddhima and mayank were sitting at the breakfast table when kripa and riddhi joined them, kripa as usual could sense some tension but decided not to say anything until ridz tells her something, but riddhi on the other hand was self center and thinking about her self, after looking at what was on the breakfast table, PARATHAS:
R: eekkk, dii
Ri:(looked up) kya hua riddhi?
R: dii parathas
M: toh kya hua riddhi
Kr:(laughs) dii don't you get it she is worried about her figure
R: shut- up krips and yea dii it's soo oily i can't eat that
Ri: okay i'm sorry jaan i'll make you something else (gets up but mayank pulls her down)
M: ridz you sit i'll make something you don't look well (goes to the kitchen)
Kr:(looking at ridz face, she had dark circles around her eyes, and she seemed lost in her thoughts) dii are you okay?(but ridz doesn't hear her, riddhi and kripa look at each other confused) diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Ri: hann, haan kripa kya hua?
R: dii are you okay?
Ri: yea jaan, why? ofcourse i'm fine see (smiles)
Kr: good cause you look alittle pale!
Ri: nothing to worry about, i just got less sleep prorbably thats why! accha kiddo i'm going to get dressed, do both of you have to go anywhere today?
Kr: dii i' have a recording
R: i was thinking i would stay home today, i still feel tired
Ri: okay then kripa get ready and i'll drop you on my way to sajeevani
Kr: noo dii you, i don't want to bother you i'll go with ramu kaka
Ri: woh kripa ramu kaka went back to his old home yesterday!
Kr: but why?
Ri: i don't know there was an emergency, accha i'm going to get ready (leaves)
Kr: weird?
R: what is soo weird actually i'm glad he went, he looked very creepy!
Kr: dii thats not nice
R: come on kripz he is just a servant
Kr:(gets up) servant or not we respect everyone in this house equally,& i think you should learn that rule as quickly as you can because that will be good for you (leaves )
R: oh god to much drama in this house,(hears her stomach growl) i'm hungry! (yells) bhaiya are you done cooking or you need some help?(goes to the kitchen)

Later
Riddhima walks down wearing a dark green churidaar, with kajal, but the kajal still didn't hide her circles or her tired eyes, and behind her walked kripa in a red skirt with a black stripless tee, wearing black earing, and black flats, both walked downstairs, while mayank and riddhi having their breakfast and talking, mayank as soon as he saw riddhima stood up and walked over to her and checked her temperature,
M: ridz you don't look well i think you should stay home
Ri: nahi bahiya i'm fine
M: par riddzi
Ri: bhaiya i said na i'm fine
M: fine as you wish par, atleast take some advil maybe it will bring down your fever,
Ri:(smiles) i will as soon as i reach sanjeevani, bhaiya today is your day off right?
M: yea, i was thinking of going home and talk to her about starting the rasams, because i have only a week off from today
Ri: theek hai, accha phir hum chalte hain, riddhi call if you need anthing okay!
R: yea dii don't worry!
Kr: chalein dii bye guys (leaves with riddhima)
while mayank also left, leaving riddhi alone in the house she just went to bed again because she in jetlag mode, riddhima dropped kripa off and went for sanjeevani.

well here is the part hope you like it, i know you guys want arman and riddhima(shilpa) scenes, and son't worry you'll get aloooooooootttt of them in the next update sooo don't worry, this was needed to move the story forward, please comment, because they mean aloooot

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Sanam,
Thanks for a quick update👏
So ramu kaka died but what was that raaz????😕
Cant wait to read more and lets see what happens when AR meets at sanjivani....
Continue soon and thanks for the pm..



Love,
Sameera😊




Edited by sameera_12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome part!!! Loved it!!! Plzzzzz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing part cant wait to know the raaz
i really enjoyed angad and kripas scenes cant wait 4 more AR scenes.
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Posted: 16 years ago
woah dear its really an awesome one mind blowingso cute so touching one plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm


"The bond of friendship is everlasting,
True friends never say good-bye,
There is pure truth between us,
That will never die.
You are my inspiration,
You knew when I was hurting,
You helped me with my troubles and pain,
For staying close by and being a friend.
And to end this off I just wanted to say,
That if you need a friend,
I'll be there till the very end.
I wanna thank you "



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Posted: 16 years ago

So Mahi and Kripa are Riddie and Ridhima's real sisters?! Phew! Good! Aww poor Ramu Kaka. Ohh a raaz.......waiting for it to be revealed.

Haha. Angad and Kripa are soooooooo cute. Monkey. LOL
Nuper is a sweet girl. Riddie still cares for Ridhima even though shes so self centered. Thats sort of cute.
Aww the way Riddhie described Ridhima was soo cute.
Armaan is funny.
The Armaan-Angad convo was so cute and funny. Angad is so bossy to Armaan. My poor Armaan. He always has to listen to his Bhai.
The water bucket scene was funny. Poor Armaan. Angad is smart and awesome.
Haha. Nuper emotional blackmailed poor Armaan.
OMG. Riddie is so damn selfish! Worried about her figure when her sister is upset. Kripa is so sweet. I love how she is always worried about Ridhima.
Aww. Ridhima cant sleep without Kripa and Riddie. What will happen when the 2 get married. Wait. Angad and Armaan are brothers, haha there is no problem then,
Mayank is a sweet brother and guy. I'd love to have a bro like him.
OO cant wait for Armaan and Ridhima to meet at the hospital and Kripa and Angad to meet for the recording.
WOW Sanam. This part was awesome and i totally loved it! It was a bit sad yet very funny as well.
In this part, it was like Armaan was the gunie pig the whole time. LOL
Update soon and dont forget to PM me.
Live, Laugh, Love,
~Jot~
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Posted: 16 years ago

hi, sanam, i know i was waiting for you to update, but you too soo long that i went offline, but still it's okay, totally loved the part, also how riddhima cannot stay without hers, sooooooooooooooooo sweet, a RAAZ can't wait for it tooo be revealed, lololll kripa calling angad a monkey😆, and arman being emotionally blackmailed by nupur toooooooooooooooooooo good, now i'm just waiting for arman and ridz scenes please have alot of them in the next update because i 'm seriously waiting for them, An awsome update please update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon, and don't forget to PM moi.😛

here, is flower bouquet for an amazing update:

luv, priya

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