The Lost and Unforgotten AR-RM FF-part 1 page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Like all Love Storys few have tragic endings..and many end happily and peacefully..However in my story..Happiness is what i put at stack..Sometime we loose the ones we love the most..BUT still gain so much..Its all fair in Love and War as many tragic lovers say...But i just have one thing to Say..let the story begin....

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In a large City of dreams(Mumbai) lives a small family..with little to less dreams..Here lives two loving parents and two adorable masti chor chilren..

Riddhima Garewal-Sweet..simple..Caring mother..strict at times..Mother of one boy

Rahul Garewal- Hot...sweet..caring..so easy going..father of one daughter

Garv-son of Riddhima..strict like his mother..flirt like his father..16 years old

Ritika-daughter of Rahul..Bubbly like her mother..sweet like her dad..14 years old.

Mumbai-6:30

It was 6:30 and we zoom into the Garewal mansion..There were two kids running around the house thowing pillows and books and whatever came into thier hands at each other..

G-oye Riti..chill..comeone it was just a joke! dont take it to your heart now!
R-joke! tumne mujhe moti bola tha!
G-me itna innocent sa bacha aur tumhe moti..Bilkul nahi! he said showing her the sides of his face when Ritika threw a pillow at his face hard..
G-oh..your so screwed now!!
R-really?!? atleast catch me stupid!!
G-me stupid! your a jungli billi!
R-Khankajoore!!
G-befakoof!
R-ahhh! thats it..she said jumping over the sofa and throwing magazines and pillows and her stuffed toys at him..


Like this they went on..They threw whatever came into her hand and his until they hit something..
CRASH!!

Riddhima came running outside with a file in her hand and the phone on her ear..
R-I will call you back in a minute..bye..
R-what the hell happened here!!She said looking down..there were two picture frames crashes on the floor..with glass all over..She looked to see if no one was hurt..But she only found a living room half ruined..it looked like 50 drunk men had crashed her house and partyed all night long..
R-what the hell happened here!!
G+R=she did it..he did it! they both said pointing at each other..
By then rahul had ran out looking at the mess and riddhima,..He looked at the file in her hand and her phone and saw that is wasent the right time to get her mad..so he tryed to calm her down..
Ra-riddhima..dekho,...calm down..there only kids..
Ri-KIDS! are you kidding me..kids dont do this to a house! Now tell me who the hell did this(she said looking at them) SPEAK UP! now,..or you can sit outside all night and until you tell me..
Rahul looked at riddhima and his eyes widened at her comment..
Ra-okay..a lil to serious..calm down,...he looked down and saw that two picture frames were broken..he picked them up and observed them carefully as a tear trickled down his cheeck..

Ra-sit down riddhima..we will fix these frames..dont worry..
G-mom..why do you always get so hyped up whenever anything happens to these frames? And who is this man with you? It makes me angry too see another man taking a picture with you and not dad..
R-yeah..mom..Garv is saying the right thing for once..(she said eyeing him evily) who is that dude.and dad who is that wierd curly hair girl?
Ra-shutup! watch what you say...control your dam mouth before you speak...
Ri-rahul..she said holding his hand controling his anger..its time we tell them..there old enough..
G+R=tell us what?
Riddhima took a deep breath and looked at Rahul straight in the eyes..questioning wether she should or not..looking for the same strength she had found many years ago..She looked deeply for an answer as he blinked yes....tightening the hold on her hand..

Ri-Garv..the man is your father..and Rikita the lady is your mom..
G+R=WHERE ARE THEY! they said almost crying and falling to the ground..they felt thier knees go weak..and the whole world spin around them..they both had arousing pains in thier heads and at the moment they knew for some reason they had lost everything they had ever gained..like it wall all stripped from them..

Ra-in the mental asylum and dead...


Okay guys..this is my new story line..i really hope you like it..all criticism is welcome and any suggestions..i am sorry that this is so sad..but i really hope you like it!! Please leave your comments as they always incorage me..and i would like to thank and 3 very special person for this story..

Siddhi,Viviksha and Misha!-Thanks for always being there...I love you..😳😳
Luv Anu
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hmmm soundzz interesting...
So Rahul has a daughter nd Ridhima has a son...
do cont. soon///
nd thnxx for letting me noe about it..
do cont. to pm me dear..
Luv SAZ!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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plz continue the ff but it looks very depressing.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sound intresting!!!
Do continue soon!!
Please PM me...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very very very good story. i already know its gonna be a hit. like always you leave the readers wanting more and i know you will continue that as well in this story. the storyline line is very innovative. and i love you tooo...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey Anu,
really like it babe....
update quickly k.....
oh and call me if ur free. lol
still luv ya
misha =]
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG what a start! such an interesting story, u have my attention! armaan and muskaan dead and in a mental asylum!?
really looking forward to the story, continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow this is different but it seems sad ...lukin forward to it though cont soon hun x
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Posted: 16 years ago
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please continue! you left at a cliffhanger , and I badly want to know what happens next!!!! and if you don't mind could you add me to your PM list?
thanks,
Saby
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Great start...itz really interesting!
plz continue soon and also add me in your pm list!
waiting for the next part!

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