Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01) - Page 98

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was amazing
loved the trial scene
plz continue soon this time plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia

Hi Manaaaaaa.....hey debs!!!

Wowwww...... finally madam aapne update to kiya.... yeah...aapki fic ka mahurat kab ka hai???😛

Awesome update.....time kam hai isliye jyada lamba comment nahi kar rahi....chal koi naa....

par sach me...padhkar mazaa aa gaya... iske baad I don't think I can write a better court scene... oye chupkar yaar...kyun chane ke jhaad par chadha rahi hai...but thankssss a ton for liking it !!!😃

You have done a wonderful job.........carry on........mai aage padhne ke liye besabr ho rahi hun.... so continue real soon......yeah...i will...

Love

Guglu

Originally posted by: vvdn

gr888888 part....very nice update ...waiting for next part egerly !

& Wish u a very Happy New Year!

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏

toooooooooooooooo goooooooooooood...................👏

loved it completely....d way u wrote this part is amazing......👏👏

really toooo goood... soo much njoyed all dos dialogues and d convos

d trial part was super cool....👏

plzzzzzzz updt soon...cant wait for next...😛😊

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

This was a dil khush kar dene wala part...😆....Okay u knw that I love Raj....and uski scenes kuch zyada hi dhyan se padhti hu...😳😳....and I did that this tym as well. gooooood !!!😆 keep it up ! 👏👍🏼 😆and thnx for liking the update !!!😃

But I enjoyed the court scene a wayy too much yaar....😆😳😳...isliye maine wo bhi badi hi bariki se padha....and wat a well job done Mana!! That was simply gr8!! Thanks again...

Waise...Ambala jane ka raasta bandh kyun kar diya tumne?? Bechara mera Raj....kab se tarap raha hai...huh!! Now stop being naughty wid him...and let him go wherever he wants to...samjhi!! Uski khwaish sir ankhon pe rakha karo...😆😆 achcha theeeeeekkkk haiiiiii !! 😛 Par main toh uski meet ko exciting banana chahti thi...aur usko HERO ke maafiq entry karwana chahti thi...😛

And now...am w8ing for the next part. Hope its not delayed much....warna mujhe phir se iss part ko padhna hoga....to remind myself...😆 (though surprisingly I didnt need to read the previous part this tym😉).... he he he 😆

Achha chalo...no more bak bak....I wasnt supposed to write this much as well...am busy yaar!! 😆😆 😲😆 ohhh !! but i am glad u dropped a line..(MANY LINES actually ! 😉)

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

A very very HAPPY NEW YEAR TO U MANA 👏 🥳🤗
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Now coming to your hard work and the last update of year 2010. 😊 😊 😊

Good one. 👏 👏 👏
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Thank you soooooo much vertika !! am glad u liked it !

Raj knows about Naina's next move that she has reopened the case again, all were surprised but Raj got that point easily that y did Naina do it. And off course his eyes didn't miss the moves of cameraman who was Gunny.

Tabhi to Chaubey ko apne sir jee ko un k hisaab se kaam karta hai na kyounki us ko acche se pata hai ki us k sir jee ko kya chahiye us se. So sab planning me Gunny bhi shaamil hai na Raj ko ab pata chal gaya. Afterall he is RAJ ! Usse apne Naina aur uske aas paas ki har khabar ki khabar hogi..haina?😉

He wanted to know about Gunny as when Chaubey told him that his super six cadets trust him. But he was shocked to know that Gunny was assinged the work to kill his love.I loved Raj when he said Naina ko agar kuch bhi ho jaata to kahin se bhi dhoondh kar maar daalta vo Gunny ko.

Itne easily jaane nahi dene waali hai na Keerti Raj ko, aakhir vo Shalu thode nahi hai.And now he has to bring her with him, good for Raj. Aur kya? humesha Shalu ku buddhu banake bhaag jaata tha...he should get someone of his equal na ! 😛

G8 Naina, once again u proved that u r true portigue of Rajveer, u took blessings form Lala and challenged Captain Salve directly. Now she is going to defend the case herself and now she has to prove that he didn't do the Crime for Passion.

Captain Salve who was pretty confident till now is finding hard. She has never expected that na? Naina is showing all the loop holes of the case properly and she started it from Pooja's statement that Raj never favored her more than any limit.😊 😊 😊

Now Major Nair is in her trape and i liked the points u shown that y only half of the statement of cadets are believed not completely or don't believe at any point of their. Brilliant Naina 👏 👏 👏and don't worry now Raj is coming to u too. 😉 😉 😉

Heyyy am soooo glad u liked the court scene....coz it waz quite difficult for me to write it !

Try to update soon this time.

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

yaar...ab mujhe tujh par doubt hone laga hai...tu sach me doc hai ya lawer...??? varna aise fab court scene kaise likhti...??? kha apne ghane kale balon ki kasamm ki tu doc hi hai...aur court scene toh tune sapne me dekh kar likha tha...ha ha ha...haaannnn main apne baalon ki kasam khaati huu ki main ek doc hoon...lekin yeh court scene maine sapne mein dekhkar nahi...balki meri ek cloooooosssseeeee frnd lawyer hai...toh main uske saath 2/3 baar court gayi thi , just for fun...aur since i am a doc, toh medico-legal cases mein testify kar ke liye humein bhi court jaana padta tha...aur kuch hindi movies dekhkar...😊

ab us 8 inch ke injection ko dikha kar mujhe darana bandh kar...!!! varna mujhe uncle ko bulana padega...niche rakh ab use...huh...bhalai ka toh zamana hi nahi raha...achha bolo toh sab ko mirchi lagti hai...nai yaar...🤪mujhe toh bilkul bhi nahi lagi...😛😆

ab daant dikha kar mujhe...'nautanki'...kahna bandh kar...aur kaam ki baat sun...haila....😲 tujhe kaise pata?

ud padh kar na mann ko shanti mil gayi...voh padosh ki aunty nahi yaar...mann ki shanti...kya hai na...raj ab dur nahi...woh toh bahoooooooooooottt duuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrr jaane waala hai pri ! 😆 😆 mere fic mein nai....real mein...😉

kitne achhe se janta hai na raj naina ko...ke voh case reopen karegi...ab protege bhi toh usi ne chuna tha na...!!! arre haan...nazar phir bhi us ki ghunny par hi tha...hmmmmm...

chubey se bhi use sahi info mil gaya ke...gunny actual me kis kaam se aaya tha...par yeh bhi hai ke us ke fav cadets us par baht trust karte hain...!!! raj ka dail sahi tha...naina ko le kar...!!! gunny ki samat aajati agar naina ko kuch bhi ho jata toh...

wow...naina ke scene bhi na bade mast the...capt salve ko challenge...!!! kya baat hai...!!! vaise serial me main us ke sath baht bura hone ka soch rahi thi...par us ke sath kuch bhi nahi ho paya tha...!!! kam se kam yahan par naina kuch toh karegi...ya phir baht kuch karegi...!!! mere ko toh salve aur lala ka halwa bannte hue dekhna hai...tu dekhegi bhi aur khayegi bhi !

vaise pooja kabhi bhi sahi nahi bolti...hamesha ulta hi bolti hai...par is baar us ki wajah se naina ko kuch sahi chiz mil gaya...!!! ab maj nair phasega...!!! naina ne sahi chiz par dhyan diya ke cadets ke sare baton par yakeen nahi kiya gaya...bass thode hi baton par yakeen kiya gaya...!!! in fact jo imp batain thi unhe bhi ignore kiya gaya tha...!!! sahi me...tune naina ke charch ko bade hi achhe se likha hai...thnx....

ab main soch toh rahi thi ke cont soon kahungi...!!! par ab phir se soch rahi hun ke kahun ya nahi...!!! aur bhi soch soch ke socha ke bol hi deti hun...sayad tujhe RN ke sath sath hum par bhi daya aa jaye aur tu jaldi se ud kar de...achcha???sochna padega....😛

isiliye ud zara jaldi karna...tujhe tere main door par lage chain ki kasam...!!! dekh voh tujhe protection deta hai...unwanted guests se...isiliye us ki kasam di maine...priiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii !!!! 😲chuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuup!!😲 Not fair !!! usmein se WANTED guests bhi aate hai ! 😍 😆

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Mana hello di !!

Update was just terrific and court scene was simply mindblowing...👏👏 Thanks !

Raj was so happy to see that Naina has hit a master stroke by reopening his case file..Naina was so sounding so confident when she was answering the reporters..Raj was so very proud of her..😊

He wants to go back to Ambala where his cadets need him but again that damn land slide..I hope this time Raj reaches there on time.. ofcourse !! woh HERO hai...POLICE thodehi na hai, jo late pahochega ! 😛😆

But Keerti wont leave him alone in this..She too is accompanying him and Raj is not able to get away from her😆😆 he he he !! Keerti ke andar main jo ghuss gayi hoon ! 😛

Raj was so angry when Bunty told him that Gunny was suppose to kill Naina..😆😆 He is too protective of her..😛

Naina really played her part brilliantly in court..she had nothing to loose this time whereas last time Raj was not able to defend himself coz of his love for Naina and her honour.. and Captain Salve had managed to win the case..😡

Naina had all the answers ready before hand and her friends were much more confident this time...Where has Alekh gone??? hmm...pata chalega ! 😛

she defendes Rajveer so very well.She even managed to convinced every1 that there was no love between them..Raj was helpful to every1..Capt. Salve was left speechless this time.. haan yaar...LRL mein bahot bak bak bak kar rahi thi ! 😡

she never thought that a simple cadet will make it impossible to win her this time..

Pls continue soon

Bye

Pls continue soon

Bye

Originally posted by: danish1

awesome.. naina ne sab ki chutti kar di

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Rocking update.👏👏 thanks nisha😊

At first Raj is shocked😲 to hear that Naina has reopened his case. But then he realizes that naina has come up with a superb plan.👍🏼

He feels proud to see naina answering all the reporters so confidently. He is worried about Gunny 😡being there with her. But Chaubey assures him the Gunny can be trusted completely and that he is infact helping naina and her friends.

Raj wants to go back to his Cadets as soon as possible. Keerti threatens him that the only way he would be allowed out of the hospital was if she would accompany him to Ambala'.and Raj has no other option but to agree'now they only have to wait for the land slide to be cleared.🤔 hojayega clear....main spade leke wahi jaa rahi hoon...😆 infact ho toh gaya na clear 😲 Raj toh amabala ke liye nikal chuka...😲

Lala naina ka behavior aur confidence dekh kar daar jata hai. Raj would have been so proud to see naina act in such a mature way, by controlling her feelings.👏

All of naina's friends are there to help her'.they want to ensure that this time no mistakes are made so that they can prove their mentor innocent. Where has Alekh gone? pata chal jaayega ! 😊 Woh bhi HERO hai na?😉

Naina was simply brilliant in the court room. She has taken complete advantage on Capt. Salve's over confidence. She is able to prove to the court that Raj was helpful to everyone'.he did not do any special favors for naina. She cleverly points out how all the facts had been manipulated.👍🏼👏

Waiting most eagerly for the next part'please '.please continue soon yup yup yup !