||FF-Dil ka rishta (Mjht) part 12-pg 61 8/03|| - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
Good start.
Sorry dear , i wasn't here for two days.
Good relationship b/w Sam n Noops n Mayu n Gunjan.
continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
@mahak- NO probs !!

Thanks for commenting !!

Next part coming up in half an hour !!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53








Ohh guys !!Thanks for the amazing feedback !! Thanks for so many comments !! Thanks !!
Here is the next part !! Hope you all like it!! And eagerly waiting for your comments on it!

Two cool dudes

Part two

"Ok nupur your attention here,Wake up or your gone today!!!6 baj rahe he!!",samrat screams his head off and then tries to pull the pillow off nupur

Nupur grabs back the pillow and says "Aur do min..Wait what did you say it's 6??"

She spings up from the bed and she was a sight to see her hair disheveled,clothes loose..

Samrat could barely help a chuckle!!

As she was rushing to the bathroom,If she had turned she could have seen a big grin formed on the face of samrat..

Samrat says to himself muttering,"Killer dude,lagta he nupur ne shukla sir ki baat nahi suni,Aaj to office 9:30 baje he!!

Nupur comes out of the bathroom all ready to go, "Ok!!i'm going",She grins and turns back,"Sorry I took your turn at bathroom,but what will I do jo aaya first wo pehle gaya"

Samrat grins and mutters,"aur phas gaya bhi"

Nupur sees the grin and asks what is so funny about me??

Samrat then gently pushes nupur towards the door and barely able to suppress a chuckle says,"Nothing nupur!!Now you go"

The moment he herad nupur going in the lift with the thak thak noise of her heels He burst into wild uncontrollable laughter

*To nupur*

She is continuously trying to get a taxi but is unsuccessful.Suddenly she sees a familiar face and decides that now she shouldn't bother getting a taxi she screams "benji".
Immediately a maroon stylish car stops and before neji could say anything she gets into the car and tells him to drive towards office.

*****On the way*****

Benji asks nupur with a grin,Nupur,If you go this early to office I think the maid will get relief ki atleast koi to meri jadhoo karne mein madat ke liye aa raha he bhale hi who itna bolti ho..Hath to bata lengi

Nupur answers with a sullen face, "Mr.Benji malhotra!,I think you need to eat memory tablets!! Aaj office he remember??"

Benji grins n says , "haan he par 9:30 baje"

Nupur turns to benji with a note of disbelief & shrieks "what??"

Benji replies grinning "haan samrat ne Tujhe bataya nahin kya??"

Nupur bites her tongue and thinks "Samrat ke bacche!! office aa aur agar maine tumhe mazaa na chakhaya to mera naam bhi nupur bhushan nahi,By god!!

Benji shakes nupur up and says, "wah hamare to bhagya hi khul gaye!! Itni bolni wali ladki aaj chup hai!jai ho jai ho!!"

Nupur looks at him sternly and tells him to drive wherever he was going!!
*****
"ok gunjan,I'm going;Take care of yourself",mayank says with a smile and opening their hotel door!!

"okie-dokie,Bye mayank",Gunjanwavesbye
*****
To samrat

"Chalo abhi 8:30 baj ne wale hein.lets get ready dude"

He chooses a suit with the name "fashion" written all over it [not really ok] 😆
He's looking super duper hot with only 1 word escaping his lips.actually 2 "killer dude".
With this and a last brush of his hair he reaches for the door knob and goes out.

*******
To mayank

"Hmmm I think this is the address,Abhira flats flat A E 020",mayank says as he turns towards the building.
He stares upon a stylish building mixture of crystal white with a slight hint of pink.

Mayank's pov

Hey what a stylish building.I think I have come to the wrong building.Gunjan wont choose this.but to be sure lets ask somebody…

"Any problem dude"
A voice penetrates [sorry I just wanted to use this word.I learnt it from my evs exam today😆 ]Into mayanks thoughts..

Mayank turns and sees a sweet handsome face.He liked him at first sight[only brotherly type ka love mind you]

Mayank turns and asks him:"yes please..Is this abhira flats??"

"Yes dude,this is it !!!Why??"

"Hi ,I'm mayank",Mayank extends his hand, "I'm new to Goa came to stay here."

"Oh,welcome to goa dude!!hope you find it a nice place,Btw what's your flat number"

"A E 020",Mayank says considering the slip in his hand

"wow dude that's just beside my flat,Another jolly neighbour,*winks*,That's good,ok it's Building A 5th floor,20th flat"

"Thanks dude" mayank thanks him,"Whats your name??"

My name is Samrat.......But you can call me....

Dil to pagal he dil deewana he,Tring tring

"excuse me",Samrat says taking out his mobile and giving a sigh seeing that it was shukla!!

"sure dude",Mayank notices his sigh and decides not to press on.

Samrat attends the call, "Hello,Oh sir,coming sir,I'm on my way sir,just two more minutes,Yes sir! !obviously sir!! Ok sir!!",

He turns and faces mayank "Ok dude I got to go.Important call.boss is calling"

Mayank grins and says, "No problem dude.hey why don't you come to my flat tomorrow for dinner?It's Sunday so no work also"

Samrat answers back, " hey not a bad idea dude !! sounds cool !!I'm game.see ya later"

And he leaves leaving mayank muttering "nice guy"
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
hey dear nice part.. i always like sayank conversation... waiting for the next part.. please update and PM me..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
hey lipsi !! fabulous and an amazing update sweetheart !!! Love how you are making all the characters interact one by one !! SaNu's convo rocked !! Hahahaha !! They are sooooooo hilerious !! And Sammy !! He is soooooo naughty ! Poor Nups !!! Sammy is sooooo dead !! Nups won't leave him now !! lol !! Btw thank u for introducing Benjy in this chapter !! Any Sajan FF is incomplete without him !!! 😳
I loved Sayank's first meeting, very simply but very cute !! I loved how Mayank liked Sammy n the first instance !! And now they are gonna be neighbours !!! Yay !! It was shooo shweet of Mayank to invite sammy to dinner ! But is that gonna be sajan's first meeting ?? Ummm I think they will meet before that right ??? 😉
You are doing an amazing job lipsi !! Seriously loving ur FF a lot !! Can't wait for the next chapter !! Update soon !! Love ya !!! *hugs*
love,
Naveen
Edited by xaviara - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
Hey anjalika-Thanks!! Glad you liked it!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
@preethi-Thanks!! so glad youlikedit!!
i'll try to update soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: xaviara

hey lipsi !! awesum part !! got a meeting now ! will edit soon !!



Aww naveen di !! thanks will keep refreshing this page in wait for ur comments!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
vryyyyyy nice update dear...lovd Sayank part.....😃...nywz continue soon plzz....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aww!! Nikki !! thanks dear !! So glad you like it !! Okies I'll deffo try to continue soon!!

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