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sruthi

@mayur.forever

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Posted: 16 years ago

#541

let me be d first one to comment!!!!!!
great,supereb fantastic work yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved it to d core!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great job!!!!!!!!!!!😛
mayank requesting nups to take him as her fiance was just superb yaar😳mayank-benji-uday scene was just superb!!! mayu scaring d hell out of them was very funny!!!😆

superb work once again!!!!!!!!

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sruthi

@mayur.forever

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Posted: 16 years ago

#542

oops!!!!
it seems like am not d first one to comment!!!!!

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falak

@falak01

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Posted: 16 years ago

#543

omg....loveliesttttttttttttttt👏awesome blossom yaar....👏👏👏

and the dialogues are marvellous....👏👏👏

all the scenes were too perfect...😳😳that scene in which nupz was sleeping and mayank went to see her,was sooooooooooo cute...😳😳☺️

here r my fav. ones:

zaroor Hitler ka rishtedar hai yeh🤣🤣🤣benji to benji hai...🤣🤣

pehle sweet good morning, phir bitter anger warning" !🤣🤣🤣nupur nautanki ..🤣🤣

mujhe to apni phool jaisi sister par tarass araha hai,jitna romance ka shok tha ,utna hi unromantic ladka se pyaar kar beti!🤣🤣🤣uday was damn hillarious here...🤣🤣🤣

"agar mayank sharma ho saath to dictionary ko kaun lagahega haath"🤣

and then all those double meaning dialogues🤣

hillarious man....🤣🤣i lovedddddd them....🤣

and "impotent" dat too reference was JWM...🤣🤣🤣

and the way mayank explained her was soooooo sweet...🤣🤣

if u have a boyfriend like him,then i think u shud behave like dat only..as if u don't know anything...🤣

and the way mayank told her dat he is not impotent was just..🤣🤣

but the next scene when he proposed her again was magically romantic....uffff☺️☺️☺️

and dat chunnu munnu...😆😆

and the dance was awesome...☺️☺️☺️

in all one of the best one shots i have read till now coz it is having a perfect balance of romance and humour...😃😃

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Priya

@little_dragon

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Posted: 16 years ago

#544

paris wow. I could feel te tingle in te passionate scenes. Gosh u r a ace writer. Passion was filled in air. Kiss had depth n intensity. Oh dear could really feel te essence of te one day shot. Write more. Waitin for next update. And thanks for pm. Drooling over UR one day shot. Love u.

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manju

@swarnima123

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Posted: 16 years ago

#545

ur a brilliant writter dear do continue soon.take a leap if possible.mayur romance was awosome.

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Sowmya

@sowmyap03

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Posted: 16 years ago

#546

wow... so romantic... by god!!!!

Thanks for the PM....

write more dear...

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Annie

@annie07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#547

woh wat an update..............wud love to see such a scene in mjht..........minus the kiss ofcos...............222 good...........y dnt u wrire scenes for MJHT..............seriously...u r amazing.............

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403848

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Posted: 16 years ago

#548

This very up0date was heavenly!! ☺️ I tell u, even I wasn't aware of that Jab We Met thingy! 😆 See, that way am still an innnocent teenager! Nahi? 😳😉 But anyways, this was the best update of your FF so far!! Keep writing!! And please add me to your bubdy list cause I can't add u since am not an active member. 😊