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Piya Roy

@Piya_2009

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#1011

Hey paris

Nice update....It was not boring at all.....

I like d way u show d stresses of daily life...

SMS part was very sweet....

It's good that lunch break was extended....N was so happy.....

Precap sounds interesting....Waiting for d 2nd part....

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#1012

hey paris,,u did bring out the day in life with romance not too apparent but the love intact..wpuld love to read more on these lines.. good work 👏

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#1013

Hey Paris, love is such a beautiful and deep emotion, its much more than mere romance, i am so glad that you have attempted to explore that and steer your ship in that direction, i am all with you captain!

wowwwwwwwww i loveddddddd the way nupur felt so happy when Mayank said darling awwwwww so sweet. I lovedddd the update it wasn't boring at all, i so hope that there isnt any trouble for MN pertaining to these new entries.

wowwwwwwww i loveeeeedddddd it, keep it up!

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prerna_agrawal

@prerna_agrawal

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#1014

loved it paris!! it was really awesome!!!.......do continue soon!!!!

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parisbynight

@parisbynight

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#1015

Originally posted by: Senny
Hey Paris, love is such a beautiful and deep emotion, its much more than mere romance, i am so glad that you have attempted to explore that and steer your ship in that direction, i am all with you captain!

wowwwwwwwww i loveddddddd the way nupur felt so happy when Mayank said darling awwwwww so sweet. I lovedddd the update it wasn't boring at all, i so hope that there isnt any trouble for MN pertaining to these new entries.

wowwwwwwww i loveeeeedddddd it, keep it up!

you are absolutely right!love is not all about romance ..it something much deeper..
and yes nupur almost never get to hear words such as "darling" from mayu's mouth so when she does ,she is on the 7th heaven..!😃
dnt worry abt the new entries,the are very sweet persons....

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APPY

@IshqDewaani

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#1016

I liked ur part dear....its nice that to see the new day In Mayur;ds life whre there isnt much romance bt there is love still as u said....

Waiting for the pub & ,masti.......Update soon

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#1017

Hi paris,
loved ur update so much.
its awesome as usual.
liked mayur a lottttt.
so nups change her getup 4 mayank.
ok thats not bad.
And now they decided to go to pub.
ok lets c what happen??????
great update.
keep updating.

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sruthi

@mayur.forever

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#1018

boring to bilkul bhi nahi tha yaar........it was awesome.....even though they dont go around romancing,they luv each other......i can get d point😃 really great idea!!!!! d 2 new characters-sameer n roshni were equally gud!!!! hmmm mayank is taking nupur to d pub😛 that wud be fun.....great work paris!!!

loved it );

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Asm

@Angel-A

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#1019

awesome hai paris.. loved it...:D:D
loving ur ff...
mayuu is funny...
cant wait for da next part...

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#1020

aww............tht ws such a lovely update paris.............truly vry sweeet.........plzzz continue sooon........n wht..dodo ko bhi finally apna gf mila????????😲😆😉..........i wud love to c whos tht 'lucky gal'.....😳😳😳
n ofcourse lookin 4wd for some gr88888 mayur moments......😉