ff/(MN)ONE DAY SHOTS/'Just Another Day' pg145-NEW!

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ShwePoo

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Posted: 16 years ago

#91

very nice....one shot....of their first kiss.....
loved it.....
😊 😊 😊

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prerna_agrawal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#92

just read all the parts.....u write very nicely.....loved all the parts.....in this part even it was so nice of mayank to ask her!!....really very nice!!

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#93

Wonderfully written!! You captured their characters so welll...!!

The way they banter about SRK in her dreams....and then at Mayu's house...I loved the way mayank told his mom...!

And also that he asked her before kissing her...that's such a mayank thing to do!!

Awesome part!!

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403848

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Posted: 16 years ago

#94

How romantic! 😍 And I love Mayu's Mom . . . she's such an understanding woman!!

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Preethi

@preethis

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Posted: 16 years ago

#95

haila first kiss... omg omg.. wonderful i liked it dear.. update and send me pm dear...

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nishi

@Nishithini

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#96

awwwwwww!!! first kiss.........wow!!!!!

it was really romantic. it was so sweet of mayank to ask nupur before kissing. he is a real gentleman.

it was really awesome. loved it.

thanx for the pm.

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

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Posted: 16 years ago

#97

haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaye.............it ws sooooooooooooooooooo soooooooooooooo sooooooooooooo romaaaaaaaaaaantic.................so simple yet sooooooo beautiful n romantic.........ws literally speechless aftr readin d update..........thnxxxxxxxxxxx a tonnnnnnnnnn dear for this update....lovd each n evry bit of...majan phone convo...mom/mayur scenes....n most importantly magical mayur moments......

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taniya

@Taniya09

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Posted: 16 years ago

#98

CHOOOOOOOOO CHWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET!!!!
DO PM ME THE NEXT PART!!
TK CRE.
TANIYA

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parisbynight

@parisbynight

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Posted: 16 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: hgrhr
..and then at Mayu's house...I loved the way mayank told his mom...!

thanks!to be honest this was the very first scene i had in mind when i started this ff,but i had to wait till this 3rd part to actually write it!

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parisbynight

@parisbynight

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Posted: 16 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: Nishithini
awwwwwww!!! first kiss.........wow!!!!!
it was really romantic. it was so sweet of mayank to ask nupur before kissing. he is a real gentleman.

thanks!

if only all the guys out there were like mayank,true gentleman...!