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simi

@searchoffriends

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#511

soo as i said keep readng ahead , soo here is reply over next part

PART 62 ,

hmm starting hi itane mast the ,

riddhima and atul too much ,kitne badde chatter box hai ,

purre train baate karte rahhe and then car mein bhi bak bak karte rahhe , ye log baate kar kar ke bore nahi hoote kyaa hmm

hehe lekin loved that haa ,

and then that room confusion , armaan and riddhima got in the same room , gosh i knew riddhima aise koi na koi gadbad to karne hii waale the ,

per ek baat , jaise atul and riddhima puure chatter box the , armaan bhi hai har time apne mobile phone per lagga rehta hai , i knew business call per tha, per still its too irritating hai naa ,

hehe well leave that armaan and riddhima ka reaction again on seeing each other in there room hehe , that was great, argument hi argument ,,

and then the way armaan called the manager in , i mean literally riddhima ka muuhh band karra haath se usse chup karaane ke liyye hehe great

loved that bechaara manager bhi soch rahha hooga ki ye doo bandar zoo se kaise bhaag kar aa gayye , i mean they were looking like that at that time ,

hehe armaan said pointing towardfs riddhima that she is the problem

and then registry card confusion , hey heyt you didn't cleared it kya tha usme aisaa , i mean i knew kya tha , i can guess that much ki what it would have been per still aapko apne readers ko clear to karna chahiiye naa , hmm i would have soo known that it was riddhima named as mrs mallik hai na tabhi bechaare armaan ke hosh udd gayye lol's

finally atul came to there rescue warna i m sure armaan and riddhima ab tak ek doosre kar sar phod chuke hoote hehe

loved there non stop cat dog fight , and atul also seen that card per hum pyaare readers ko nahi bataaya hmm , koi nahi chalo chodo , well as per ahead

lovely morning and great start hmm , armaan sleeping on that couch and riddhima keeping pillow for him how cute ,

hyee loved it ,

ab atul ko aur kitne hints dege yaar , usse ab tak samajh jaana chahiyye naa and kuch karnaa bhi to chahiyee , i eman the end mein bhi he was just standing there and looking over as she was doing the cleaning and all for there room and helping armaan with his clothes , per all that was too sweet you knew i soo loved all of it

well yahaa tak ki story was the best , abhi maine aage padda nahi yaar , sorry , last part padd ke i will be back soon and uskee baare mein bhi jaldi hii likhhne waale huu ok till then keep reading my comment inhe padke thoda to satisfaction milla hooga that i m back , mere comment waale feeling aa gaaye naa hehe , kyonki you knew what mujhe ye comment likhkar bahut achaa lagga i mean sachee lagga ki i m back to my old self ,

ok bye for now , will be back soon with the comments for next part , and haa that really does not mean that you excused from writting ahead , i need the next update after that also soon,

ok sweety bye for now

take care , and thanks a lot for your regular pm's

lots of love

simi

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#512

that was a great part.

Superb.

I just loved the river scene.

Ar's eyelock wow!!!!

ab plz story ko jaldi se progress karo na.

I want to see them fighting with their own feelings.Plz let them know na that they r in love atleast to themselves.

confession 100th part mein hoga kya????????????

Seriously man u r simply awesome.

I love ur ff a lot!!!!

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#513

hey aimee
soooo sorry for being very late
i was really busy with college work coz after a month of holidays n frequent bandhs we had clg last week n before that
so got extremely busy
awesome parts yaar
especially the way u r taking forward their story ...
armaan is suppppppeeeerrrrr jealous of that mysterious caller hahahahhahah
bina dekhe hi itna gussa jab usse milega toh use kaccha chaba jayega hahahahaha
n poor ridz she is left to face his wrath hahaha
but the highlight was the boys chat
omg jo ye bade nahi samajh paye bacche samajh gaye ;)
wow!!!
now im sure AA will do something... they better make amraan realize or else .... hahaha
but it was rocking part dear
update soon

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krazyboutkaran

@krazyboutkaran

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#514

amazing part.....plz brinng AR 2gether soon......

urvi

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cute_richa_

@cute_richa_

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#515

loved this part...........❤️

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dazzling_armaan

@dazzling_armaan

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#516

AWSUM PART.

PLZZZZZZZ UPDATE SOON AND DO PM ME.

WILL BE WAITING FOR THE PM.

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Nanthini

@Nanthini9

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#517

Hey!

Great FF! I read the whole thing in a day! it is wonderful - cud u add me to ur pm list?

Nanthini

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kashish

@kashishk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#518

Hey Aimee,
The part was amazing, I loved it.
Here is a long comment only for u, as u know how much i love this FF.

That was so cute when ridhima was arranging the guys room when Atul came there and saw her. Lol, miss Ridhima has to take Armaan's clothes, as Armaan asked her thinking that it's Atul. Wow, she did took his clothes out, have to tell it was a perfect scene, it seemed like she is Armaan's wife. I am waiting for the when they'll get married in ur FF.

So Mr Armaan Mallik was impressed by seeing the neatness of his room, but the only thing he is unaware of is that, all that is done by Ridhima. it's high time for Armaan to get used to it as she is soon going to come in ur house as ur wife and I know once u'll u love her u'll always keep her happy and will shower her with loads of love :) .

That was so amazing to know Armaan liked Ridhima's clothes combinatinn choice even tough, he didn't knew she did it. Hehe, the teasing session by Atul was awesome.

Lol, Armaan is so much jealous, i am sure it appeared 'boyfriend' and that call must have been of Vaibhav but he'd thought it's someone else. Nothing can be happen of him. Agreed that Ridhina is innocent and she doesn't know about love but Armaan does still he isn't realizing his feelings. I hope, he'll realize soon.

And, oh my god! His anger is just too much, i mean instead of doing everthing calmly he is being hyper, i mean he could ask or anything else but shouldn't jump on conclusion.

By the way, the little moment that Armaan Ridhima had was mind-blowing. And the relation which Ridhima and Atul share is just adorable.

Hehe, lol, Vaibhav and Yash's discussion was so funny yet so cute, i think they are way more intelligent from some of the elders. But truly i loved there conversation, it was just adorable. :)

Now that Atul anjali have heard both kids conve, i hope some sense will come in them and they'll start bringing Armaan Ridhima close.

I hope AR will realize super-soon that they love each other.

As usually, I loved the part is was amazing. U penned it down excellently, keep it the great work :)
Continue as soon as u can and thanks for the PM.

Luv u<333
Kashish

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simi

@searchoffriends

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#519

heyaa hi aimee ,

how r u sweety finally finally i ended up reading with the last part as well , hmm the part 63 was the best you knew i soo loved that ki ab mujhse aur control nahii hoo rahha hai , i really want to read it ahead ,

ok ok , lets start from the start of part 63

ahaa atul also learned to use indirect and double meaning talks , hmm , teasing and confusing arman hehe loved that start where armaan came and said him thanks for hepling with his clothes , and my god he kept on observing that armaan kept on glancing at riddhima ever soo often hehe loved that

aree yaar ab ye riddhima ko kaun call kar rahha hai hmm , and ye kya hoo rahha hai , armaan kyon itana gussa hai haa , aimee you also learned how to keep suspences in the story haa , armaan itana gussa kyon hua and what does he meant by saying that kisse "khaas" ka call miss kar sakte hai

well again dinner time per atul and riddhimas the chatter box started again , hey bhagwaan kitne baate karte hai vo hmm , per tell me one think armaan was sad and worried about somethink per kya ? , hey mujhe lagta hai mujhe kayaamat tak intezaar karna padengaa apne questions ke answer ke liyye

yaar the best part was the river scene , hyee shooo sweet , armaan watching her play in water hehe

and then again saved her from falling , hyeeee phir nazroon se nazareen mille , and ek dujje mein khoo gayye

you knew when armaan asked her that has she ever been to hotel regal , my god my heart stoped for a while , perrrrrr perrrrrrr i hate that phone , log phone kyon rakhtee hai apne paas , kyon kyon, i soo hate that , kya yaar itane paas aate aate aisaa kyon kiyya tumnee and aag mein aur ghee daalne ke liyye phone bhi kiskaa aaya , usse caller ka jisse dekhkkar armaan phir sadd gayya

per just a question , riddhima kya bataane waale the armaan se , vo main aapko , man aapse mein in that scene , oh hoo itane saare questions hai mere paas

hehe atul too good yaar , vo baar baar delibrately armaan ko riddhima ke saath bathnee ke liyye force kar deta hai , and riddhima as ussual kuch nahi samajhtee yaar , she is too much in her innocencee i soo love her for that

and then they came back , hyee armaan kitna achaa hai yaar , he gave his seat ot an old lady soo sweet of him , he is surely a true gentelman , but don't you think god have stopped manufacturring this type of species hehe , per waise bhi ye god ki thode naa ye to tumhaare manufacturring hai lol's

finally they r back home , and soo loved that riddhima childish act of telling everyone about her trip and all with soo much of excitement , she too is a complete child , and haa god aise bhi piece manufacture nahi kartaaa , ye bhi aimee manufacturring company ka product hai

and again armaan overheard riddhima and her friends conversation , per aisaa kya sunna ki he was left heart aching , hyeee mere armaan in soo much pain why yaar , kitne questions hai mere paas , i think ab to kayamat hoo hi jaayengee , tumhaare liyye to answer them all hehe

waise you knew aimee construction company ke best poducts kaunse hai they r that 2 devils kids , vaibhav and yash , they r true angels yaar , the best loved them soo much

and there conversation , each and every part of it was like soo soo good , too innocent , and there innocent proved to be the best for atul and anjali , hehe

"Main nahi manaunga apna birthday agar wo Aunty Bua ko le gayi..." Yash was getting tearful.

hyeeeeee shwoo sweet baby , loved him here

"Tere Papa sabko bas daante hi rahte hain kya?" Yash asked chuckling a little.

"Nahi sabko nahi, bas Chachu ko aur mujhe hi daante hain..." Vaibhav laughed. "Aur kisi pe unka zor chalta jo nahi...

hehe lol's loved atul reaction here and the boys too good , getting there own ideas to save riddhima hehe , and then finally therte conclusion ki armaan can save her , and then

"To phir uske liye tu Superman ko mujhe de-de..." Yash asked innocently.

Vaibhav looked at him for a moment thinking about something, then said, "Ok, theek hai le-le tu Chachu ko. Phir to meri taraf se Chachu tera Birthday gift." He laughed.

"Sachchhi?" Yash looked at him amazed.

"Haan, aur Angel ko main rakh lunga. Wo mera return-gift..." Vaibhav laughed again.

hehe armaan uska birthday gift , shoo cute how did you got all this idea hmm , i mean itane innocent talks about babies and all and riddima uska return gift lol's

and then he says hum keh denge ki angel ki shaadi mujhse hoo gayye hai , as yash can't marry him , vo uske bua hai hehe , soo much of confusion and that big problem for that small kids hyyeee ,

finally finally after soo much of there conference and decision making over all prespective , they came to there final conclusion , angel and superman ki shaadi , chaloo bachoo ne hi sahee kisse ne to sahhe baat kar hi dii

now i m sure atul and anjali hi kuch karnee waale hai

per one big think , voo motii and gandi aunty kaun hai jo riddhima ki shaadi ki baat kar rahhe hai , hey bhagwaan hoope nothing serious in this hmm , please

waiting to read it ahead , ab madam please jaldi aao post karroo , can't wait for long

waitingggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

till then take care and thanks for the pm

lots of love

simi

Edited by simi2 - 15 years ago

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Aimee

@Wild.Aimee

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#520

Originally posted by: luvkaranmadly
res

Ab tak 😕...

Originally posted by: sanjana25
wow
loved this epi
it was just to good
so finally yash and vibhi did what the others couldnt do
plz contd soon
and pm me if u can

Hey Thanks Sanjana...

Sure i will PM you...

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