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Posted: 15 years ago
yeah aimmeee.... need the chemistry between AR... waiting for it, some AR moments... come on yaar update soon..
really nice plot and going ahead successfully...
whenz the next update?????????????
PM me also
Sush
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey aimee...
sri here...though my exams are finished busy with some errands..anyways back to u r two parts..
awesome as usual..
love all the AR-RI part..it was so romantic atlast they both are feeling for eachother..wow!! and then the minis marriage and how armaan always back of rids..oh so sweet...really u managed to handle all well nicely....
and aarti liking rids,,,,
waiting for next part and do PM me..
as for my part will try to update by this weekend thanks ..
goodwishes...
have a great day..
sri:-)
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: simi2

reserve ,

see i m gonna be first one to comment this time will edit shortly
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hehe aaj to main apna khud kaa hi record break karee waale huu , itana jaldi reply karnaa mere habbit nahi hai kya karuu , per ajj man kar rahha tha , I know. In fact, even i was kind of surprised this time... ๐Ÿ˜†...
hyeeeeeeeeee i was just dying to read this part, per yee kya armaan not for once noticed that riddhima was lokkking soo preety today in that lehangaa and all hmm
chal koi nahi mujhe waise bhi koi problem nahi kyonki ye part allready bahut bahut achaa tha Thanks yaar. In my FF, I dont think Riddhima's looks matter much for Armaan. If it was so, then he would have never liked her...
my goodness the start was like the the the best , i mean armaan left in daze , khoyya khoyya chaand type , Khula asmaan, aankhon mein saari raat jayegi, tumko bhi kaise neend aayegi... Wow yaar kya song yaad dila diya ๐Ÿ˜.
loved that , hyeeeee riddhima ran away from there she also don't understand what's happenning hmm
kya yaar , kis janam mein they r actually gonna realize that they r in love , hyeeeeee waiting for that yaar As i said, these love birds are fools... Love-struck fools...๐Ÿ˜†
gosh that scene was the best , and then even the car scene was like great , loved that , silently ek doosree ko dekh rahhe the hmm
๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† kalereeroo kee baat karre ab , lol's loved that , atlab dono itane intelligent the that they have actually bought that earlier only , per riddhima usse wahee chod ker bhaag gayye , hehe , armaan ko mil hii gayye voo , loved that ,
gosh this armaan is to much mill gayye the jaan bhujh kar itana naatak kiyya usnee , Wo to waise bhi nautanki ke bahane dhundhta rahta hai ๐Ÿ˜ƒ hehe , again yahaa bhi aggar main riddhima ki jagaah hootee to ek baar to uskaa muh tod hii dete , waise is baar too riddhima bhi karnee hi waale the aise hii , per before that armaan bach gayya kyonki baraat aa gaaye ๐Ÿ˜†Absolutely ๐Ÿ˜ƒ.
well loved that scene with kirti and shubhankar , armaan abhi bhi riddhima per hii ultee seedhe comment kar rahha tha , bechaaree riddhima kahaa phas gayye hai *sigh*, ab jaha phasi hai, wahi rehna padega use.
hmmm mujhe patta nahi kyon aisee lagta hai that minnie is definately gonna play an important role in armaan and riddhima relation in future i mean jab voo armaan ki tareef kar rahhe the , and unintentionally she said that armaan is only fr someone special hyeeeeeee๐Ÿ˜ณ someone really special , riddhima getting nervous and uncomfortable over that , soo cute Hmm, dekhtein hain, kaun kya karta hai ๐Ÿ˜›. and that minnie kii saare friends armaan ki tareef kar rahhe the , wo dimple , wo smile , wo aankhee , wo body , wo ...... , sach sach battana ye aapke personal tareef the naa, i mean ye tumhaara persenal view hai naa armaan kee liyye Arey nahi yaar, i dont have any room left for such feelings for anyone๐Ÿ˜ณ. I heard all these comments from few of my ex-office colleagues, so just thought of using them ๐Ÿ˜ƒ.
hmm minne wore that kaleerrien and ab ye jisper bhi girrengee , that girl goona be lucky , noo actually kehte hai ki jisper ye kaleerein girte hai us ladkee ke bahut jaldii shaadi hoo jaate hai , as in kehttee hai ki next mumber usse kaa hoota hai , well i personally dn't believe this , kyonki mere didi kii shaadi mein kaleerein mujhper girre the , per aisa kuch nahi hua kyonki is baat koo 5 years hoo chuke hai ,and still noo chance here ๐Ÿ˜† , Aww, poor you. Chal koi baat nahi, i pray ki tumhe bhi jaldi hi koi mil jaye aur phir tumhe dusro pe kaleerien giraane ka mauka mile ๐Ÿ˜ƒ. chal joo bhi hoo lets see riddhima kaa kya chance aata hai yahaa. Hmm, waise to tell you the truth, i have reserved this scene for later use ๐Ÿ˜‰.
well hyee harsh and minnie also were nice , chal shaadi hue too atleast she got a chance to blush warnaa minnie ka character was like ki usse sharmaana and all too aata hii nahi tha Wo to hai. Warna kabhi 'Phulan devi sharmaayee' aisa suna hai ๐Ÿ˜†
god i hate that ladies , typical high class soo called polished womens ๐Ÿ˜ก i serously hate them a lot , they r like too much , kisse ko dekhkar khush too hoo hi nahi sakteee voo sab , Sach yaar, i have hard such remarks from some of such high-society buterflies in one of my office get-together. Ye remarks to kuch bhi nahi hai, i have heard much more... They are really nasty and disgusting.
waise ek baat sahhe kahhe unhonne riddhima should think of removing her that irritating specks , I agree you said armaan will doo somethink over that , per kya and kab , yaar you allways say mee have patiens have patiens , you knew what i don't have that at all , ye wait mujse jyada hoota nahi hai , allready tumhaare is ff ke case mein meine kuch jyada hii wait kiyya hai , ab aur nahi , ab bilkul aur nahi , please jaldi jaldi aage kaa part likhdoo I am testing your patience i guess ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜†
waitinggggggggggg , for the next update
please try and update with it soon , nahi nahi supersoon see maine is baar kitne jaldi reply kiyya hai , mujhe bhi ab aise hi jaldi see next part chahiyee i will pdate soon. Promise.
please update soon
waiting for that , till then take care and thanks for the pm
lots of love
simi

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nidha1983

Hi Aimee! Hi Nidha
How R U!
I wish u r gud.... Yep I am fine, how are you?

woah dear
its really a nice one hats of to uand i think its best one thanks sweetie so he knows that she trust himand offer lift to her Yep he did ๐Ÿ˜ƒohh she forget packet and he is not telling herbut he can't stop irritating herHow can he do that... aadat se majbur jo hai ๐Ÿ˜ƒ... but at last barat saved everyone from their fight how sick some people r saying she is doing all this for promotion Hmm, there are very good amount of such people in society... Trust me . but enjoyingplz continue it soonand thanks for the pm


"Soft gentle stare,
Warm tender touch,
Karan took Shilpa hand,
And they danced.
Arms around Shilpa,
Light dragging moves,
Cheek warm against Shilpa,
Breathing deep from the soul.
Long have Shilpa searched,
Finally Shilpa have found,
When Karan took Shilpa's hand,
And KASH danced at Lonavala."
"Love not one, Love not two Love the one who loves u true,
Love not three, Love not four Love the one who loves u more,
Love not five, Love not six Love the one who really sticks,
Love not seven, Love not eight Love the one who really waits.."

FORM ARMAAN
"Love......
What can we say about it
Well .....
A love is something
you will never forget
Something that you can share
your deepest secret
Tell your most inner thought
Or get a hug
When you're quite distraught
Yes, a very good lover
Is a very good listener
Right from the start
I knew you would be
just there 4 me
straight 4m ur Heart!!
And i think i Love You Very Much
For Being The Person You Are!!" TO RIDHIMA
Wow, i loved both these poems. Thanks you sooooo much dear.

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Nidha

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

hey aimee
beautiful
totally rocking.
loved it so much.

Thanks for the reply dear.

Originally posted by: lookwhoshere

hey..nice parts..they have slowly begun noticing each other..gud for them!๐Ÿ˜Š

keep writing!
luv,
anu.

Thanks for liking it. Yep, they are finally leading towards the right path.

Originally posted by: srihari_phoenix

amazing part....
nicely written...
loved the way armaan teased ridhima...lol
plzz continue sooon..
waiting 4 the nxt part...
\thnxxx...

Thanks for the reply dear. I am glad you liked it.
P.S. - I loved your comment about Sachin. I am also a cricket fan, and of course, Sachin is the best โญ๏ธ.

Originally posted by: sanjana25

it was really good
loved it
contd soon
waitin to see what happens next

Thanks for the reply Sanjana...

Originally posted by: sushi1987

yeah aimmeee.... need the chemistry between AR... waiting for it, some AR moments... come on yaar update soon..

really nice plot and going ahead successfully...
whenz the next update?????????????
PM me also
Sush

Thanks for liking the story Sush. I will PM, you but for that you have to add me to your buddy list. Keep reading and commenting in future as well...
Edited by Wild.Aimee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago


ur welcome for Poem and plz kabhi scrap check kar liya karo madam
๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi There... Err, yeh aur kab tak only 'reserved' rahne wala hai?

Originally posted by: yogithasingh

As usual it was........awesome di..............
Loved it....
Thanx for pm....
Hope u r f9 now...
Take care...
Love u
yogitha

Yes i am better now. Thanks for the reply Yogitha ๐Ÿ˜Š.

Originally posted by: sadique137

hey Aimee

nice update ๐Ÿ˜Š
i totally agree with sona
Ridhima is a duffer in such things
but Armaan bi
God help these people and us
update soon. once again thanx 4 the pm

Hmm, me too. I also agree with you. Lets see who is gonna kick hi a** and knowck some sense in him ๐Ÿ˜†.

Originally posted by: ashluvdmg

res*wil b bck soon di

Phir se... Hey bhagwaan. Ashu ki bachchi, humesha late lateef hi rahogi tum kya? ๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by: shweet29

very nice part...like always but aimee 58 parts up n still armaan n ridzi not a couple lolx... well, if you look closely they already are. After all, they are always for each other all the time. But nobody actually knows it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ. in other FF's abhi tak wo to dada dadi bhi ban chukay hotay hehehehehhe kidding:P:P:P but an excellent plot...... Thanks dear. but this time i want a quick update :P:P:P i want it all the time hehehhe:P:P plzzzz pm me next time Sure i will, but have you added me to your buddy list?
loooaadddzzz of love
SHWEET29:)

Edited by Wild.Aimee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sasya

great part๐Ÿ‘.i happy that atlast ridhima felt some thing and armaan is totally falling for her,it was soo cute.he irritates her soo much.i just love the way they fight.
the way those ladies spoke about ridhima was very bad.can't wait to read more continue soon........

Thanks for te comments dear. I am happy to see that you liked it too...

Originally posted by: dipu

hey!!!

that was really cute part yaar,,

i loved AR nok zok.,...

ohh ya liked dazed armaan,.....lovely...

ohh such stupid gossiping women,,.,,,

well waiting for next part update soon,,,

Hey thanks Dipu. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: daring66

i read the whole thing even

stayed up all... night..........for mere apne

Great going amme

and WOOOW don,t have word to praise A

Amazin.......

love it awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute but i think

you should start making them fall in LOVE NOW \

please

LOVE HEAVEN

Hey thanks for the appreciation dear. I hope you keep reading it in future as well.

Originally posted by: Debadrita Saha

lovely update
update soon
thanx 4 d pm

love
debadrita............

Thanks for the reply Debarita.
Edited by Wild.Aimee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007

heyy aimee...

the update was fabulous... loved reading it tons !! :) Thanks dear...
armaan's confusion, his attraction towards riddhima and her confusion, fear at the new feelings were really really well penned :) Hmm, it took me a long time to write all this. I am not such an intimate sort of person .
armaan again trying his best to infuriate her and their bickering was cute .. and her fumblings when minnie looked at her was damn cute :)
and the description of the rituals was really good... Hmm, i have never attended a complete wedding in my life (all thanks to my responsibiliies *sigh* ), so i kind of skipped most of it ๐Ÿ˜Š.
then the ladies talking abt riddhima and being jealous of her and all was really rude of them but was penned well !!.. Thanks again ๐Ÿ˜Š
cool..the story if moving forward .. liking it :)
and thanks for the pm...
continue soooooooooon :D

Originally posted by: mansibharti



hii aimee.. read the episode and i liked it but the thing is as you said not much action they both are playing dunb and dumber... LOL, i know i said that, but they arent actually being, dumb or dumber, its just the practical aspect of real life. As the title and the intro of my FF says, the story isnt about ONLY romance, its about the relationships and how AR's families work to being them together. you need to put in more action and the last scene was bit respite yahaan abhi love ki to choddo just understanding ki shuruat hui hai I appreciate your curiousity, but hmm, i think, this time you got it wrong. If you notice, they developed that trust on each other and understanding a long time ago. Coz understanding doesnt always mean getting cozy with each other. Its 'much' more than that... Its just that in my story they are admitting it to themselves NOW... aur i'm sure wo aunties are going to do some match making isn't it ?? but yaar sach main increase the pace of the story.. But i agree my story is comparatively toooooooooo slow than others. it really needs it... and apart from this i love you...๐Ÿ˜ƒI know sweetie and i love you too. I am so happy that you share your views about it so frankly ๐Ÿ‘. and the story no matter what...๐Ÿ˜‰ just want it to be better hope you are not mad at me...๐Ÿ˜ณHey not at all ๐Ÿ˜†. i will look forward to the next episode...

take care
love

Originally posted by: sonakap1

Hi Aimee,

Brilliant Update!!! Enjoyed reading every bit of it. I am glad you enjoyed it.

The tension b/w these two was so real and I could feel it while reading it. The way you write, every scene is sooooooo beautiful. Aww, thanks a lot dear.

Abb Ridz ko to itni jaldi ehsaas hone say raha what is happening to her. Why she is so comfortable with Armaan, why she trusts him implicitly though unknowingly. Hmm, she is gettingto feel those vibes ๐Ÿ˜ณ Par Armaan kab say itna duffer ho gaya. He is no innocent babe. *sigh* Sometimes, smarter may also behave the dumbest . Now let him remember soon where he saw these eyes before and what he feels for Ridz. Wo bhi jaldi hi hoga. Dont worry ๐Ÿ˜ƒ. Though I am sure when the realisation happens he is gonna be dumbstruck. This is certainly going to be very interesting. I am so enjoying the pace of the story and the way you are building it up till it reaches the crescendo. Thanks again dear.

Now waiting for the next update

Hugs,

Sona

Originally posted by: Robin_M

very good update aimee! :D Hi Robin
im soo glad to see both and riddhima have registered the fact that they are feeling "something"! Yep, me too ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
i really loved how armaan did not leave riddhima, he knew she was nervous and all and made sure he took her with him! so sweet of him :) I would have sacked him personally, if he dared to leave her there ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜†
hehehe i really enjoyed the armaan kirti shubankar scene with riddhima hiding behind the pillar! and then the bickering between was entertainment! lol armaan is very cleaver, bringing the package without telling riddhima and taking the credit! lol Hmm, sudhrega thode hi. Mischieovous smarty pants...๐Ÿ˜†
and now it wedding time! ohh i just love attending weddings...so much fun! Arey yaar, i wish i had a chance to attend a full wedding , but anyways *sigh*...
i hated what those rude uptight "high class" women were saying about riddhima! they dont even know her, who are they to say anything about her?!! ufff hate these women and their gossiping! Me too, I have witnessed and heard such things in real life too.
lovely part aimee, looking forward to the next part, continue soon!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

okayy hunnn i'm here finaly got time..wohooo

๐Ÿ˜† LOL, loved this one. Really funny ๐Ÿ˜†



first off all ............hi i'm sanam!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜›, i have been reading ur ff Hi Sanam ๐Ÿ˜Š
for quite a time now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!< and i'm totalllyyyyyy in luv with it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Aww, thanks a lot dear.
I still remember the part where riddhima went to the club after arman and guards made didn't let her in๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
untill arman came๐Ÿ˜†,, seeeeee i know your storyy veryy veryyy well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hmm, i can see that ๐Ÿ˜›
And part where they played the cricket match!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It just i'm sooo lazzyyy to comment, but i kno how it feels when u wrk hard on a part and not alott of ppl comment. Thats ok, we all are lazy some or the other times, with somany things...๐Ÿ˜Š Atleast you commented now.
But now when u were sad about not aloottt of ppl commenting i was time for me to step in!!!!!๐Ÿ˜†
Okay i can't comment on every part you have written , cuzz you have soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo manyy of them!!!!!!!!!!, Yep, i know ๐Ÿ˜† but i can say they are amiznnn ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘, this sotyr is very close to me, i always wait for the time you update, though i never comment, but don't worry now fullon i'm here and will comment late but will comment.......promisee So sweet of you...๐Ÿ˜Š Would love to read your views...

TO COMMENT ON EVERY PART FROM NOW ON!!!!!!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Nice one ๐Ÿ˜†
so today i read the 58th episode
wohooooooooooooooooo
u updated soooo quicklyy, i will try my best to be regular in future as well.
So cute....
** dances in glee**๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
okay now on the partttttt
awwwwwww he reconized something farmiliar in the eyes!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
ammy i think u shud get the hint now!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He has gontten one, but lets see when does he react to it.
aww so cute they stood starring at each soo cutee!!!!
riddhima u r soo luckyy!!!!!!!! I agree ๐Ÿ˜ณ
๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† " chalta phirta aag ko gola"๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† So you like it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
that is tooo good.....making riddhima angryy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
RIddhima is cute hidding behind a pillar and listening ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ Hmm, i also love this scene.
but then ammy brought the karlerian thing srry i forgot how to spell it๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Thats ok, even i dont know how to spell somany things in Hindi (using english letters ๐Ÿ˜ƒ)
awwwwwwwww riddhima looked when minnie said arman is for someone specialll
i think its u riddhima.....hint hintt๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ Hint to hai, but our Ridzy here is sooooooo dumb to understand it ๐Ÿฅฑ.
I hate when ppl gossip about ppl
realli those r one my biggest pet peeves!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก and on top they r gossiping about ridzii
that makes me angryy.she is soo sweet and cariingg Yep me too ๐Ÿ˜ก.
hwo cud some1 say thatt
these ppl and there gossiping
ammmyy watch out!!!!!!!! the ladies got an eye on u๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Hmm, he needs to hurry up to savehis 'Izzat' i guess ๐Ÿ˜†
wonderful part hunn
lovedddddddddd ittt
plzzz add me to the pm list,....will comment reguraly!!!!!!!!!!!! Sure i will sweetie, but you need to add me to your buddy list for that... Do it right away ๐Ÿ˜Š.
promise as above u saw my punishment๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon goonaaa be wating for itt noww
-sanam-

๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by: ridzie4u2nv

Heyy Hun..
Hws U??
Comented In Ages..
Sorry Bout Dah Been Extremely Busy And I Neva Even Knew U Updated ... Thats ok dear
Anyways All The Parts I Read Wer Truely Fabtastic..Loool
Oooooo I Surely Loved Da All AR Part Dah Wz Jus Brilliant..N Da Way U Showed Da Feelings Of Protectiveness Ridhima Feels Whilst Armaans Around...Alsoo I Am So Waiting For Da Kaleerein Falling Scene Hoping Dey Fall On Ridz.... I am so happy that you liked it. Anyways Ur Amazingly Brilliant ..... Do Continue Soon..Bye Thanks for the comments

Originally posted by: sri_4

hey aimee...
sri here...though my exams are finished busy with some errands.. Wow, it means its a party time now. All the best for the results ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ. anyways back to u r two parts..
awesome as usual..
love all the AR-RI part..it was so romantic atlast they both are feeling for eachother..wow!! and then the minis marriage and how armaan always back of rids..oh so sweet...really u managed to handle all well nicely.... Aww, thanks for the appreciation dear.
and aarti liking rids,,,, She has always liked her.
waiting for next part and do PM me.. Sure i will
as for my part will try to update by this weekend thanks .. Ok, i will wait for that.
goodwishes...
have a great day.. Same to you ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
sri:-)

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