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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Aimee,
Sorry I couldn't comment for the part 54 as I was busy and now too It's going to be a short comment.
The part was awesome, I loved it.
Armaan and Ridhima nok-jok is fabulous, awesome, I so enjoyed it.
Armaan is really too much, he annoyed her a lot.
Their scene in guest room were amazing.
I hope to see some more sparkle of love.
I so want them to realize they actual love each other.
Please continue soon, I am really looking forward for the next part.

Luv u<333
Kashish
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007

heyyyyyyy aimee !!!!!!!!!!!... Hi Sunaina

that was a fabulous update...
AR bickering...awww...that was really cute..he leaves no stone unturned to tease her and make her fume with anger...their Billi and Chuha fight was nice...nicely written... Aww, thanks a lot dear. Even i enjoyed while writing it.
and minnie intervening and supporting riddhima...and then her irritation at armaan for being late... her vent out at ridzi and ridzi consoling minnie was all beautifully penned...minnie reflection of armaan's behaviour towards riddhima and her final conclusion to ask atul was penned really well... Minnie is a clever girl. She loves Armaan like rest of his family. But she is still his little sister, who love to be pampered by him.
and wow another AR meet...or rather bickering...it was again cute... armaan loves those display of expressions on her face, doesnt he?? you bet... and why should he leave a chance if he is getting one anyways.😆... ... loved his thoughts abt her...
armaan getting forgivness from minnie and the bro-sis bonding moment was chooo cute...reminded the moments of me and my bro... so sweet... you both must be sharing a real sweet bond
and minnie getting curious by the minute to armaan's behaviour and riddhima's reactions...awww...and armaan's concern towards riddhima...feelings brewing...thats nice... as i said, Minnie is a clever girl 😊
and whose that man???...hope he causes no trouble to armaan or the family... I wont divulge this right now
and u dedicated this part to me ....awww...thats soooo sweet of u... thanks a bunch... no need to say thanks dear. You have always been so supportive. While re-reading my story, i read many of your comments. They are very encouraging.
again a fantastic update !!..
and thanks sooo sooo much for the pm...glad ur health getting better... 😊
awaiting the next parts...
continue soooooooooooooon :D

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dipu

hey!!1

that was rocking part yaar...

thanx for pm this time dear....u know i lost last one...😭...but nevermind i catch up both today.. you didnt lost it dear. I never sent PMs to anyone earlier due to my bandages.

and both were tooo good,,,,wow atul is turning into detective,,,that was really very funny🤣yep they are 😃

and that chua,,billi was the best one....🤣......armaan is her chua yaar... he is more than that, A mousy CAMEL 🤣

loved it .....the way armaan was enjoying teasing her,,,,,and all..

specially when he realise that he loved whenever she called him "tum"....really good one... more is waiting ahead for him

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Posted: 15 years ago
di....!!kab karogi update??yahaan na...mein paagal ho rahi hun..lol...!!
plssssssssssssssssssss
luvya
crazy ashu😉
ps:living up 2 ma name..."CRaziness is in ma genes"...lol
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part

AR's interaction was amazingly potrayed i really liked the way armaan was teasing ridz it was really cute. Thankf for liking it friend 😊 Armaan and minni scenes were really nice i really like the way u described the bond between the to.Cant wait 2 no who the person is that is trying to gather info on armaan. i will update very soon...

Originally posted by: Debadrita Saha

the steps their relations are taking one by one is fantastic
armaan teasing riddhima was awesome...
thanks Debarita...
thanks 4 d pm
update soon
i will

love
debadrita

Edited by Wild.Aimee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: navtinder

Hey, i have been silent reader till now and finally decided to come out. It's a great ff, I love reading it. Please continue soon

Aww, that is so nice of you.
i am glad you commented here. Welcome to Mere Apne once again. And please coma back again with your comments and suggestions.

Originally posted by: aarora

hey um so sorry sweety..cudn't comment for long time.. hey no problem. had some problems.. hope its sorted now. anyways..loved the update..amazing as alwyas..lol AR were too good.. thanks, i am happy to know that you like it. finally minnie also suspicious about armaan's behavior..hope atleast one of them will realize their feelings for other soon.. well, there is more to come. Just wait and watch😉 continue soon..cant wait to read more..
thanks for PM..
love ya..

Edited by Wild.Aimee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Robin_M

hi aimee, firstly thanks so much for dedicating this part to your loyal readers including myself :) so sweet of u! Hey dont say Thank you. You deserve it. You have always been so encouraging. and i can say that i will stick by your side and be loyal to Mere Apne for as long as it goes...im in with u till the end :D this ff is also very close to my heart, so i always look forward to reading it, and even tho i get busy with studies and exams, i make sure i take the time out to read it! i just cant get enough :D That is sooo sweet of you. see, i said na, that you deserve it.😊

this part was exteremly fun! purely armaan ridhdima entertainment! i so very much enjoyed it! the way armaan irritates and teases riddhima is soo funny, and her reactions are very cute! i think their bickering is where the attraction lies... you are right. i personally enjoy writing them. For many its only bickering, but to me its their own way to get close to each other. Coz sometimes you argue with the person whom you love the most. its like the sparks fly when they fight like this! bingo 😃 in the office they cant do it so much, but outside office when he is no longer her boss...their true selves come out. correct, outside office, their minds arent occupied by their official responsibilities, so their innermost self is free to roam around. 😆 its just really great to see them so open, unhesitant, and informal with each other! its so natural...really wonderful how u bring these feelings out! well done! Thanks 😊
looks like armaan really enjoyed his sparring time with riddhima, he likes knowing that she is 'close' to him! and he was smiling a lot in this part :D wait or more 😉
hmm i wonder who this man was watching armaan?! first i thought it was atul, but the way he was watching him made it seem negative? not sure who it will end up being, but im quite excited for it! time will ontly tell who is he 😉
awesome part aimee, hope u continue soon :)

Edited by Wild.Aimee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: simi2

i cant tell you , how many time my happiness incresed the moment i saw you pm at the time i logged in

i was like wow i got to read a update and that too soo soon , kya baat hai yaar , that is too good , aww, i didnt know you missed it so much.
and i m also happy that you finally created a pm list , yes i got a pm from you , thanks a lot for that , yes finally...😃 no need to say thanks.
well as per part 55 , the part was the best , oh my filled with soo many ar moments i loved it soo much , thanks for praising it dear.
armaan kept all that boxess over riddhima back as she wassearching for the sandals , ops that billi was searching for her chuhaa 😆 that was the funniest one , below the bed lol's loved it soo much ,
waise bhi jab armaan packets leker upar jaa rahha tha , i kind of guessed it out earlier ki vo aise hi kuch gadbad karengaa, wo to hai. uska khana kaise hazam hoga agar wo gadbad nahi karega to 😆 but it was nice , vo kitnaa khush hoo gayya riddhima ko dekhkar hyeeeeee uskaa to din khill gayya usse dekhte hii , and phir as usuall , dono kaun jyada behas kar sakta hai , is baat ke ane world record ko creat karne mein lagg gayye , there sweet ,actually very irritating for each other fights were the best arey abhi to aur baaki hai. ye dono budhu itni jaldi thode hi sudhrenge 😃
hmm armaan loved irritatting her soo much , and that mousee camel is too much😆 , riddhima bhi kabhi haar nahi maanene waale i knew that , hmm sangat ka asar ho raha hai uspe bhi. Armaan ki sangat ka, i guess😉 loved the fight ,
oh hoo , armaan ye bhi observe karta hai ki jab riddhima usse fight karte hai to voo usse aap nahi tum kehte hai hailaa, itanaa achaa lagta hai usse riddhima ke muhh se apne liye tum sunnna , 😳 hyeeee how romantic thanks you so much, you are the only one who said its romantic.
aree yaar unke fight padne mein itanaa mazza aa rahha tha , ye minne beech mein kyon aa gayye , waise minne bhi kitna hairaan pareshaan hoo gayye ye sunkar ki armaan hi riddhima ka vo irritatting boss hai , jo usse itana pareshaan karta hai , Minnie is a smart girl. dekhen kya hota hai aage.
hmm minne armaan se gussa the , and riddhima ne bhi uskee side li , vo kehte hai naa behtee ganga mein haath dhona , vo hi kiya , minne ke chakkar mein apne irritatting boss ki thode frustrtion bahar nikaal dii 😆 , cool yaar haan, absolutely right. 😆
lovely yaar , ek baar fight rukke to doobaara shuru , second guest room mein ,
riddhma expression there of that " not again" , was nice ,and armaan ki too chadee ho gayye , phir se riddhima ko irritate karte kaa chance jo mill gayya usse , 😆
"Tumhara chuha phir se bhaag gaya tumhe chod ke?" 😆😆😆 that was the best i tell you i also loved it. i was imagining it to be said by KSG. i am sure it will sound very cute if he says this dialogue
"Kash pagalon ke sir pe seengh (horns) hote... to kitna asaan hota unhe pahchan na..." achaa, waise mere bhi sar per seengh nahi hai aia jaroore hotta hai kyaa may bee mainme abhi us category ki paagal nahi hue huu 😆 you are one of you own kind 😆 lol... anyways the part was great , each and everypart was like the best just the best
the end parra was like oh man , atul is followwing armaan and observing each and every action of him , hmm , interesting ,ab dekh maine guess kar liya hai that the pairs of eyes was of atul , ab mere guessing power itane bhi kharaab nahi hai , i think vo atul hi hogaa , hmm, Miss 007, dekhte hain kya hota hai 😃.
anyways jo bhi hoo , wanna read the story ahead , more fights , more no no actually thoda to romance bhi daalo , waiting for it yaar ,bahut hoo gayya jaldi jaldi romance add karro wanna read it ahead , dont worry, agle kuch episodes mein you will definitely get what you want. 😉
please try and update soon , please , like this one ,i m soo happy that you r givving such quick updates , per you said that you were earlier posting it on diwali , 😡 phir late kyon kiyaa hmm ,. arey yaar, mujhe laga thode aur log reply kar dein to zara pata chale ki koi kya sochta hai current track ke baare mein. chalo koi nahi , ab next part likhte hii post kardenna , apne pas store karke koi phayedaa nahi hamaare liye yahaa post kar denaa ok ,
i m happy that you r no more dependent on others for all this posting and all me too 😃
take care
lots of love
simi

Edited by Wild.Aimee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: srihari_phoenix

heyy aimee.....
amazing parts....
soo cute and wonderful....
thanks a lot for liking it
loved AR banter....
plzz continue sooooon,.....
waiting 4 the nxt part....
thnxx 4 the pms...
no problem

Originally posted by: flaming_saphire

hey.. amazing update.

luvd it.
luvd da banter between ar. i am glad you liked it...
well wonder who is keepin an eye on armaan. you will know later 😉
plz continue sooooooooooon.
n thnx 4 sending da pm.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sri_4

hey aimme..this is sri.... Hi Sri 😊
i havent read many fanfics over here...
i just came across this link a week back and started reading...
firstly the title attracted me "mere apne"wow!!!
i have read just the first 20 parts and i have to say that they are awesome..the flashback part was handled quite well with suspense... Thanks for the compliment friend
love the anjali-atul and muskaan-rahuls track..... they are the main among the supporting cast.
3 threads ..gosh!!!i think it will take a lotttttttttttttttttttttttttt of time for me to read...but once i read all..i will comment again... no problem. in fact i would love to read your view on the story.
its sure one of the best fanfics i have read,,it has every element from drama,suspense,romance,love,emotion all..... Aww, thanks a lot. my hard-work seems to be paying off 😊
great workk...i felt as if i was watching a movie....really.... you know, its a big thing for me that you feel like that.
u r narration is just so great....
anyways i will comment later again..actually bit busy with my studies .... i will wait to see your comments again.
just one word again,,"superb.........."
keep going...hope to catch the present track soon... once you catch up, and if you want me to send PMs to you in future, plese make a request here, and add me to your buddy list.
sri

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