mayur ff {Destiny} pt9(last part)-pg 40

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preksha07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#281

omg-100000.....mayur finally confessed.....the sajan kiss was superb....the mayur kiss was fantastic......the whole update was just amazing.........plzzz do cont. soon......and pm me asap.........

just loved it.......

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Preethi

@preethis

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Posted: 16 years ago

#282

wah wah wonderful part dear... waiting for next part....

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

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Posted: 16 years ago

#283

wow dear...just now read ur whole ff...superb...plz pm me whenever u up...no words to comment more...just dumbstruck yaar....really lovely..awesome...plz pm me...i never wanted to miss ur upd...from part 1-8 all were toooo gooood dear.....more over i read all parts within 1 day...now am eagerly waiting for u too upd...

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Fathima Fernandez

@sweetgalFats

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Posted: 16 years ago

#284

Hey Rach! Wat an update yar!!! Wen I wz readng nd wen they reachd Mumbai nd Nupz sobng, I wz feelng that nd wanted to cry!!! Nd then the confession wz too gud yar! Awesum part yar! Thanx for the pm!!!

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 16 years ago

#285

Sorry again yaar 4 replying so late i was a bit busy in work.
Good part 5 i just read.
I loved the chemistry developing b/w Noops n Mayu n the way u r writing is really beautiful. Mayu gave her support while she was missing her sis n so as Mayu is missing his family but he didn't say anything like usual.
He provided calm n peace to her n she slept peacefully in his embrace. Gunjan n Sammy's kiss scene was indeed hot n so sweet. Sammy turned her mood in another direction.
Sumi ji thought that they( Mayur) r in love n they have ran from their houses, partially right guess. Mayu was lost in Noops when he saw her in bath robe.
awesome yaar.

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 16 years ago

#286

Superb che yaar,
Absolutely superb no doubt about part 6 of the fic. Mayur kissed vow that was lovely. Mayu should not feel like cursing himself because Noops also kissed him back with passion.
Loved the way Noops dried Mayu's hair n he was feeling so good. Mayu n Noops has sorted out all missunderstandings b/w them g8. So finally Sammy n Gunjan r going 2 b marry soon, g8 news n i hope soon Noops will b back.
Noops did good by ordering Mayu 2 call on his house as well. Shilpa jee now told Diya finally that Mayu has ran away from there. Noops, Gunjs n Sammy's convo was so senti.

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Yoshita0411

@Yoshita0411

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Posted: 16 years ago

#287

awesome..!!!!
yeh FF hi kaafi acchi hai..!!!!
thnk god they confessed..!!!
hey...u 4gt 2 PM me..
plz is baar mat bhulna....

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Mithila

@Mithila_22

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Posted: 16 years ago

#288

awwesum....awwesum....awwesum..........

just loved the part.....

sajan were toooooooooo goooood n romantic....only in FF we could see sajan romantic...otherwise in the serial we can't see them like this.........they were really amazing...............n what to say abt mayur yaar............OMG.............the y confessed .....................ssoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful........just loved it.....waiting for the next1...😊

Edited by taniyamiths - 16 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#289

Good part 7 n indeed so romantic. 😃 😃 😃
Noops made Mayu talk to his home n this relaxed Dia n his mom. The scene where both of them slept with each other was really sweet. 😉 😉 😉 I was surprised how much Noops trusts Mayu 😃 😃 😃. Noops ko to uthne hi nahi de raha tha Mayu. So cute, n the way she was remembering all the moments she passed with Mayu made me senti too. Now they r going 2 b seprated soon that's y Noops n Mayu were unable to sleep the whole night. Noops realizes his touch too vow a nice start. 😳 😳 😳
Finally they have accepted that they r falling 4 each other. I was imagining myself that scene when Mayu was placing Noops kurtis strings, so hot. 😳 😳 😳

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#290

Reply for part 8:-

Superb yaar, the way u expressed their feelings for each other was just brilliant. 👏 👏 👏 At every moment the way they were feeling that they r going to miss each other 4ever was realy superb. 👏 👏 👏
Finally they had to confess their feelings n yes they did it. 😃 😃 😃
I am really so happy after reading this update. 😊 😊 😊
Update soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago