mayur ff {Destiny} pt9(last part)-pg 40 - Page 34

Originally posted by: Inshira

loved da ending too gd plz write again soon

Thank you so much :)

Originally posted by: aati1429

hmm what a happy ending.. loved it.. finally mayur married...

Thanks a ton :)

Originally posted by: sweetgalFats

Hey Rach! Ths is the best endng u can give to ths FF! I really luvd every bit of it! Thanx for ur pms everytym! Nd I m surely gonna miss ths FF!

Awwiee...thank you so so so much. Now me getting really emotional about ending this FF. but then again,everything has to end at one point of time na... lol..too philosophical i know..😆

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

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sorry i know... but pakka promise i'll give a long comment

: )

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ahh and the last part is here... .... im sure this was one FF which was different from the rest.. and the way you wrote it even made it better..

the starting was great.. and cute.. it was adorable to see M care for Nupz, meaning how he was lke call her..

sad to see Gunji so sad about Nupz not being there but i knew you'd make her come back.. my fave bit was how u made sure M didn't come with her.. i loved how he went back to his house

: )

so sweet..

i loved the ending..the whole garden/hug/kiss... so sweet after both of them "sacrificed" their love for Mayanka n Nupur.. haha.. even if that didn't make sense.. lol

lovely FF Rach

thanks for the little appearence in it..

:D

xxxSoni

Yep, the last part is finally here. Aw thank you so much for that compliment Sonia. IT means a great deal to me, especially since its coming from a great writer herself. Yep, M cares a lot for Nupur. The same way as in the show. :)

Yeah, the Gunjan feeling Sad about Nups not being there was my fav. I mean, we hardly see her care for Nups in the show, so its a little weird, right? hehe.

Yeah, if Mayank would have gone with Nupur, there would be no story left. As in, the part would turn out to be real short and boring. And waise bhi, he wasn't ready as of yet. And he needed to meet his family too.

Yeah, the garden part was deffo my fav MN moment in the update. lol. i enjoyed writing it. Sacrificing their love for Mayank Nupur, lol. Yeah, in a way, that's exactly what they did, cause they were unaware of the others' true identity. Lol.

Aww, no probs about the special appearance. It was my small way of showing my gratitude for the support you guys gave me. Thanks so much once again.

Love,
Rach

ufffffffffffffffff man what an ending... ek dum jakkasssssss............ loved it to the core.. but please try to start a new ff...

hey loved the intro sounds damn interesting but u ended it??? sorry for being this late. LOLZ thanks for PM!

will edit this comment after reading the rest!

Originally posted by: hgrhr

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Hey Rachna...!

*sigh*

The last part of this awesome FF.....i was wishing end hi na ho..!! 😆😆

But the ending was as great as it was expected....hehe....

I was a bit surprised that 6 months had gone by and the two of them hadn't called home since then...!!

The mayur scene in the beginning was really sweet...!! They were living together...?? but where..? at Sumi's cottege only kya..? but wherever it was soo sweet how he made breakfast for her but Nupur was in the mood for romance this time...LOL

But wow...6 months and they didn't tell each other their real names..!! LOL....Neha and Arjun....now I'm thinking if you'd made her tell her name rati then all of us would have been supremly happy..!! ArTi and mayur ek saath...!! hehe...

The reunions were emotional....awww.....their families must be in shock to see them all of a sudden at the doorstep...!

But chalo they finally got to know that they were destined to be with each other...!! awwww.....what a huge shock it must have been to see each other in the garden...!!

And their moms saw the hugging and kissing..! By god....kya socha hoga...abhi abhi mile hain aur yeh sab...!! haila..!! 😆😆

Sajan and Mayur got married on the same day..!! awwwwww.....

And thank youu for the small cameo of mine..!! Actually we all girls end up irritating mayank a lot on his wedding night always na..!! hehe....

And like mayank even i ws expecting nupur to be all sharmili and blushing...!! But mayu's dialogue was so funny..."yeh kya yaar tum toh sharmati bhi nahi...."😆

oye hoye....well....they sleep together so he should have expected this na...!😉😆😆

Now i wish someone would write a one-shot when she's being all forward with him....mayu ka reaction dekhne wala hoga..!! haha....😆😆 *hint hint* hehe

okies...but i really am going to miss this FF a lot..! it was only 9 chapters but one of my favourites on Mayur...!!

Chalo...at least we still have your other 2 FFs to get mayur dose from..!! hehe,....

You write fabulously..!!

so please keep writing.....and keep it up....!!

love,

Nidhi

heyaa..!! wat a fantastic update..!! truly gr8..!! but the only sad thing is that this FF has ended.. but v knew tt it had 2 end someday...nd so it has...i used 2 wait for this FF's update badly..but now it has ended..m gonna miss this wonderful FF..!u r a gr8 writer..!!Keep it up..!!plz..write another MayUr FF..plzz..!!

OMG rachu!! thnx alot for the PM. Iam so late to comment. i was inactive. For the first time iam reading this brilliant FF that too the last part 😒.

awesome awesome awesome.......update yaar.......too good!!!!

wowow i love your all parts 9 last part is amazing