mayur ff {Destiny} pt9(last part)-pg 40

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430105

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Posted: 16 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: hgrhr
And reading a looong update is a treat yaar!!

aww thanks...i was wondeirng if u guys wud like the long update or not...but im really glad u liked reading it!

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amazingneira

@amazingneira

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Posted: 16 years ago

#132

finally they got a place to live!!!

but where did u stop the update... 😉 😉 😉

now will hve to wait till next week..... 😆 😆 😆

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430105

Hibernated

Posted: 16 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: aati1429
finally they got a place to live!!!

but where did u stop the update... 😉 😉 😉

now will hve to wait till next week..... 😆 😆 😆

ya finally they've got a place to live...
lol...dont worry....sabra ka fal meetha hota hai.!

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Mithila

@Mithila_22

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Posted: 16 years ago

#134

u r an awwesum writer yaar.

i can imagine each n every scene without efforts.
loved the way u turned it from emotional to romantic.

it was really an awwesum update.

mayank nupur both cried. that was very nice mayank controled his in front og nupur. n nupur also saw him crying but didn't show him.

so, it was a combination of emotional n romantic update. n it was really veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice.

but i have a question hoe did they reach in the cootage?

sajan scene was also nice.

good update dear.👏🤗

n ALL THE BEST for exams.

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Mithila

@Mithila_22

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Posted: 16 years ago

#135

n also i love to read long updates. ur updates are always long.

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430105

Hibernated

Posted: 16 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: taniyamiths
u r an awwesum writer yaar.
i can imagine each n every scene without efforts.
loved the way u turned it from emotional to romantic.

it was really an awwesum update.

mayank nupur both cried. that was very nice mayank controled his in front og nupur. n nupur also saw him crying but didn't show him.

so, it was a combination of emotional n romantic update. n it was really veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice.

but i have a question hoe did they reach in the cootage?

sajan scene was also nice.

good update dear.👏🤗

n ALL THE BEST for exams.

well.....thank u sooooo much....i'm so happy u liked it...yeah, i wanted to add an emotional touch to it as well....well, answering your question, Nupur will ask the same thing to mayank, and he will answer her then. So you'll get your answer in the next update. Well, i wanted to add a bit of Sajan romance as well, so thought of adding it. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for the exam wishes also. and as for long updates, well then i'll continue to keep them long then!

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Priyanka

@AMMY LUVS RIDZ

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Posted: 16 years ago

#137

awesome part yaar..........really loved it......par tune romantic scene ko hi rokh diya😆....chal theek hain.....update soon...pm me😳

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Mithila

@Mithila_22

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Posted: 16 years ago

#138

Originally posted by taniyamiths

u r an awwesum writer yaar.

i can imagine each n every scene without efforts.
loved the way u turned it from emotional to romantic.

it was really an awwesum update.

mayank nupur both cried. that was very nice mayank controled his in front og nupur. n nupur also saw him crying but didn't show him.

so, it was a combination of emotional n romantic update. n it was really veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice.

but i have a question hoe did they reach in the cootage?

sajan scene was also nice.

good update dear.👏🤗

n ALL THE BEST for exams.

ya sure dear always love to read long. ok so i ll have to wait for the next1 to know . but m so eager dear.

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430105

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Posted: 16 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ
awesome part yaar..........really loved it......par tune romantic scene ko hi rokh diya😆....chal theek hain.....update soon...pm me😳

aww sorry...lekin dont worry, next part will be really romantic.....yeh mera promise hai...main us part ko romantic scene se hi start karoongi..aur romantic scene se hi khatam karoongi.lol ...glad u liked it. sure ill pm u!