Ishq Hua - {Part 12 Pg 35} - Nov 23rd - Page 8

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awesome part shilpa 🤗 🤗

These parts are hilarious

R: (whispers to Armaan) inti der haath pakadne ki kya zaroorat hai?

Armaan evil smile... and shakes Muskaan hand a little longer…

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Rahul was on top of Muskaan... at first Muskaan tried to push him off... but when she noticed the intensity with which he was looking at her... Muskaan ki bolti band ho gayi...

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Muskaan ki bolti band hogaye! 😆

Awesome update dear.. Loved it! :)..

Continue soon
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Originally posted by: Love_RM_MAYUR

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thank you very much!!

Originally posted by: ejaz_lover

awesome part shilpa 🤗 🤗

These parts are hilarious

R: (whispers to Armaan) inti der haath pakadne ki kya zaroorat hai?

Armaan evil smile... and shakes Muskaan hand a little longer'

🤣

Rahul was on top of Muskaan... at first Muskaan tried to push him off... but when she noticed the intensity with which he was looking at her... Muskaan ki bolti band ho gayi...

🤣

Muskaan ki bolti band hogaye! 😆

Awesome update dear.. Loved it! :)..

Continue soon
and thanks for the PM

haha.. mewi.. yes i really wanted to add the line somehow that muskaan ki bolti bad ho gayi 😆

thanks mewi!!

Part 5

The next moring' before breakfast' Armaan wakes up early and decides to go out onto the terrace and sees Ridhimma there'

A: good morning Ridhimma' tum bohut jaldi uth jaati ho'

R: haan.. tum bhi to uthe ho'

A: nahi yeh to sirf jet lag ka asar hai'

R: Armaan tum ne jo kal kaha' main uske baare main soch rahi thi'

A: (smiling) 😊 kya bola maine?

R: tumhe yaad nahi hai' (notices Armaan's smile)' Armaan tum bhi na! 😳

A: haan main bhi na' haan kya socha tumne?

R: Armaan jab maine tumhe pehli baar dekha' mall main' toh mujh me ek anjaani si ehsaas uthi thi' main nahi janti yeh kya hai' yeh dosti ho sakti hai, yeh khushi ho sakti hai, yeh py' (stops speaking)

A: (smiling) haan aage bolo Ridhimma'

R: Armaan' mujhe thoda waqt chahiye yeh sab sochne ke liye'

A: (comes closer to Ridhimma, and slowly touches her cheek) tumhe kitni time chahiye le lo' (mischievously) haan par kal agle hafte tak batado'

R: Armaan' (blushing)☺️' main chalu' nashta banana main auntu ki madad karni hai'

A: haan jao'

Muskaan, Ridhimma, Prerna, and Smriti make the breakfast'.

After breakfast'

P(R Dad): Satish ji kya bolte hai' Rahul aur Muskaan ki sagai karde?

Sa(M dad): mujhe to koi problem nahi, un dono ki Jodi bohut achi lagti hai'

Armaan is walking by'

A: kin dono ki jodi uncle?

Sa: arey beta Rahul aur Muskaan ki' jaake un dono ko yahan bulao'

Rahul and Muskaan arrive'

S(R mom): beta hum sab log tum dono ki sagai ki baat kar rahe the' tum dono ki rai jaan ne ke liye bulaaya'

R: maa' wo' mujhe nahi pata' aap Muskaan se puchiye'

P: arey wah beta ab se apni hone waali patni ki rai jaan na chata hai' acha' to phir chalo Muskaan betiyaan' tum hi batao'

M: ah' uncle ji mujhse kyun pooch rahe hai' mujhe nahi pata'

Pr(M mom): Pankaj ji mujhe lagta hai' ki in dono ke ek dusre ko ache se jaan na hoga' phir hi bata sakte hai'

Sa: Toh kisne roka' dono ek dusre ko jaan ne se?

Pr: nahi ji mera matlab hai ki hum sab yahan hai' yeh log akele kahin jaayenge to phir jaan sakte hai' hamare saamne shayad odd lag raha hai'

P: theek hai phir yeh dono ek trip pe jaayenge' tum dono kyun na Manali chale jao?

R: papa' wo Armaan aur Ridhimma bhi aa sakte hai kya hamare saath?

S: haan app sab jaayiye'.

They all pack for Manali and leave the next day'

In Manali

Muskaan is still thinking about getting back at Rahul for kissing her' so she makes Rahul and Armaan go in a car where the brakes are not working

(sorry for the stupid idea.. couldn't think of anything else' and I don't want to portray Muski as evil' she just doesn't think before she acts on a plan when she is mad)

Rahul and Armaan in the car the driver jumps pout after telling them that the brakes are not working' car is close to the edge of a cliff' car falls off' did our heroes survive?

Muskaan's Room

It is night and Muskaan is sleeping, when suddenly as shrill scream wakes her up. She gets out of bed and goes out the room to check what happened, when she gets outside she notices that all the lights are off. She is really worried now about what will happen. The suddenly the car driver comes with blood stains all over his clothes'

M: Tumhe kya hua?

D: Madam ji, wo Rahul ji aur Armaan jib hoot bag aye'

The driver explains that Rahul and Armaan's ghost stabbed him for causing their death, and he tells Muskaan that they are now coming after her, saying this he falls down.

Muskaan is really freaked out, she runs into her room and locks the door' and is saying prayers to herself when suddenly she hears a voice, Rahul's voice:

R: Muskaan tumhe koi nahi bacha sakta hai humse' tune hame maut diya.. ab hum tumhe nahi chodenge'

Muskaan turns around to see Rahul, hi s face is white, and he has blood stains all over his body' and he is walking closer and closer to Muskaan'

M: nahii (filmy style and she covers her eyes)

Suddenly the room is filled with laughter' Muskaan slowly opens he eyes and sees Armaan, Ridhimma, the driver, and Rahul laughing at her' Rahul is removing something off his face, that made his face look white.

Muskaan slowly walks up to Rahul and slaps him hard across his cheek'

M: tum aise gandi harqat kar sakte ho maine kabhi tumse ye hummed nahi ki'

Rahul walks out of the room and Armaan follows

Ri: Muskaan yeh kya kiya tumne?

M: Ridhimma tum uski side le rahi ho?

Ri: haan Muskaan main uski side le rahi hoon' tumne unh eek bin brake ke gaadi main bithadiya tha, tum bohot lucky ho ke wo log bach gaye' tu aisi harqat kar sakti hai' par usne kuch kiya aur tumne use thappad maar diya' Muskaan yeh tumne theek nahi kiya

Ridhimma leaves

Muskaan is shocked by what she heard and sits down and starts crying

M: yeh maine kya kar diya? Main bilkul darr gayi thi jab maine suna ki Rahul mar gaya tha' mujhse wo baat bardaash nahi ho payi'. Bhagwaan ji yeh main kya kiya, kyun kiya' yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai' shayad yahi pyaar hai' jab Rahul mujhse door jaata hai toh mujhe dard hota hai' aur jab mere bilkul paas aa jata hai to bohut acha lagta hai' (wipes away her tears) main Rahul ko khona nahi chahti, main use kissi bhi keemat main use paaongi'

Meanwhile, Rahul and Armaan, after getting back to their room'

A: Rahul ' tu theek to hai na?

Rahil doesn't respond' he grabs suitcase and starts dumping his clothes into it'

A: Rahul, ye kya kar rahi hoo?

Armaan tries to take the clothes out of Rahul's bag'

R: nahi Armaan chodo mujhe' main jaa raha hoon' pehle jaake papa se baath karlunga phir main wapas America chala jaaonga

A: Rahul, kaisi baat kar raha hai' Rahul ' mupjhe pata hai ki Muskaan ne galat'

R: (cuts of Armaan) nahi Armaan' us ki baat mat karo' kissi ki bhi galati nahi hai' galati ki baat bhi nahi hai' (reaching the height of his anger) baat yeh hai ki main Muskaan se pyaar karta hoon'. Aur wo meri shakal bhi dekhna pasand nahi karti'

A: (shocked by the sudden confession but happy for Rahul) dekh Rahul' tujhe itni jaldi haar nahi maan ni chahiye' tu lage rahega to ek na ek din Muskaan ko tumse zaroor pyar ho jayega'.

R: nahi' main apne liye usse dard nahi de sakta' usse dard main nahi dekh sakta hoon main.

A: (realizing he cannot change Rahul's mind) theek hai phir' tumhari marzi' par abhi kaise jaaoge' kal subah tak ruko

R: theek hai' par sirf kal subah tak' subah hote hi main yaha se pehli bus pakad se chala jaaonga

To Be Continued...

sorry for no romantic parts... they will be there next time!

and hopefully I can do justice to them 😉

please do comment!! they mean a lot!

Precap:

Kya Muskaan rok paayegi apne pyar Rahul ko?

Kya Ridhimma Armaan se pyar karti hai?

Really nice part!!!

Great part!!!

Originally posted by: Namrata_12

Great part!!!

Do continue sooon :)

thanks Namrata!!

will do!

amazing part!!

Originally posted by: lovebapu18

amazing part!!

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do continue soon...can't wait!!

thanks rad!!!

will try my best not to have a long wait like this time 😆