Ishq Hua - {Part 12 Pg 35} - Nov 23rd - Page 11

Hey Shilpa great part...

shilpaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa darling i feel like hugging u heres my hug 🤗...i m enjoying reading this fanfic so much ....wow ur AMAZING yaar 👍🏼...jaldi continue karo...i cant wait to c how muski is gonna patao him ☺️

Thanks for all the PMs .....i m sorry for commenting late 😛.....but i seriously loved all the parts muaaaaaaaaah 😳😳....the story book wala part was ☺️☺️...oh yes keep including the pictures it adds to the imagination 😛
plz plz plz cont super fast

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

nice part! The break failed and bhoot scene... lol I loved that scene in Ishq! Amir-Juhi yaar! lol!

Muskaan loves him! and he loves Muskaan! HAIYE! SOOOOO CUTE! I hope she stops him! I don't want him ti leave! thanks for the PM!

komz

haha.. yes i love the movie ishq!! actually that was my inspiration to start this story.. hence the name😉

thanks!!

Originally posted by: ejaz_lover

awesomeeeee part shilpa.. mai yahaan Ishq dekh rhe thi.. me too komz.. i loveeee that scene!

Rahul : Amir Khan
Muskaan: Juhi Chawla
Ridihima: Kajol
Armaan: Ajay Devgan
Driver: Driver 😆

Wah yaar, nice part!
Waiting for the romantic part 😉
I wonder if she will kiss him like Juhi kissed Amir in Ishq? 😉
Update soon hun :)

- Mewi

haha... exactly correct mewi!! ... kiss.. hmm.. still thinking abt it!!😉

thanks!!

Originally posted by: nadz_J

Hey sorry havent yet commented on any parts after part one.... I'm starting to read part2-5 now so will try to leave my comments by tommorrow!

np take your time!!

Part 6

Rahul goes into his room, eyes brimming with tears… in anguish about what he lost…😭

A: (to himself) mujhe Muskaan se baat karni hogi, sirf wo hi ek hai jo Rahul ko rok sakti hai…

Armaan went over to Ridhimma and Muskaan's cottage..

Ridhimma opened the door in her nightgown..

Ri: (feeling shy😳) Armaan.. tum yahan?

A: (starts blabbering) Muskaan.. wo Rahul.. pyar.. roko… ro raha hai… chala jayega…

Ri: Armaan.. (shaking him) Armaan.. chill.. tum kya bol rahe ho.. kuch samaj..

A: Rahul kal subah jaane ki baatein kar raha hai.. aur usne yeh bhi bola.. ki wo wapas US chala jaayega..

Ri: (shocked😲) kya??

A: haan isi liye.. main yaha Muskaan se baat karne ke liye aya hoon..

Ri: Muskaan se.. Armaan.. aaj raat ke baad tumhe lagte hai ki Rahul Muskaan ki baat maan jayega?

A: haan bilkul.. he loves her Ridhimma.. he loves her a lot.. aur wo uske aankhon mein aansun nahi dekh sakta.. isiliye to wapas jaa raha hai..

Ri: sach.. Muskaan kitni lucky hai.. hopefully usse samaj mein aayegi.. ki agar Rahul wapas chala jaayega to woe k bohut kitmi cheez kho degi.. Muskaan apni room main hogi.. baat karte hai usse..

Armaan runs upto her room and knocks the door.. no response..

A: Muskaan..

No response.. Armaan opens the door and does inside to search for her.. no one is in the room..

A: Ridhimma.. Muskaan yaha nahi hai..

Ri: par.. kuch hi der pehle.. wo yahan thi.. itni der main kaha chali gayi..

A: chal usko dhoondh te hain..

Armaan and Ridhimma search all night for Muskaan.. but she is nowhere to be found.. soon it is daybreak.. Armaan and Ridhimma are about to go to the police to write up a report..

Next Morning bright and early

Muskaan gets ready and runs out to stop Rahul… she sees Armaan and Ridhimma…

M: Rahul kaha hai?

A: Tu kal raat..

M: (very impatient😡) Rahul kaha hai Armaan??

A: (a little frightened) wo.. wapas chala jaa raha hai..

Ri: Muskaan… please usse roko… hum dono ne koshish kar liya… sirf tum hi use rok sakti ho…

Muskaan runs off without listening to the whole sentence

When Muskaan reaches the bus stop she sees Rahul, and immediately runs upto him..

M: Rahul, I'm sorry please mat jao..

Rahul ignores Muskaan and continues walking away..Muskaan catches Rahul's hand..

M: Rahul (tears in her eyes).. please mat jao..

Rahul gets really angry.. and pulls his hand out of hers..

Rahul: nahi Muskaan.. mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai.. kal raat jo sunaya tha who kaafi tha.. (walks off)

Muskaan not ready to give up..

M: nahi Rahul.. tumhe meri baat sunni padegi.. tum mujhe chod ke nahi jaa sakte.. .. main kya karoon..Idea!

Back to Armaan Ridhimma

Ri: (worried) Armaan who dono abhi tak wapas nahi aaye..

A: don't worry hun, tumhe Muskaan ko nahi dekha.. the way she ran off to find Rahul.. tumhe lagta hai kya ki wo Rahul ko jaane degi.. (smiles)😊

Ri: hopefull kuch bura na ho jaye..

A: ab tum rona band karo.. sab theek ho jayega..

Armaan wipes away Ridhimma's tears and places her loose hair behind her ear.. Ridhimma hugs Armaan..

A: Ridhimma..

Ri: hmm..

A: public main ek naujawaan ladke ka faida utha rahi ho.. dekhne wale ko ach nahi lage ga 😉

Ri: (blushing, let's go of him) .. uh.. wo.. main..☺️

A: (pulls Ridhimma back to him) maine kaha ki dekhne walo ko acha nahi lage ga.. par mujhe bohut acha lag raha hai..

Ri: (blushing even more) Armaaan.. chodo na!☺️

A: aaj raat.. mere saath dinner pe chalogi?

Ri: h.. haan..

Back to Muskaan

Muskaan goes up to a small girl..

M: hi beta.. please meri ek madad karogi? (smiling)

SG: madad karne se kya milega?

M: acha.. ye baat hai.. phir ye lo (takes out a big chocolate) ..

SG: thank you.. kya karna hai?

Muskaan points at Rahul and whispers something into the girl's ear..

SG: aapka unke saath kuch chakkar chal raha hai kya?

M: (shyly)😳 hmm.. aise hi kuch samajhlo.. (patting the girl's head)

The girl runs up to Rahul..

SG: Aap.. yahan kissi ke liye intezaar kar rahe hain?

R: haan.. aapko pata hai bus kab aayegi?

SG: aaj.. aaj.. bus yahan nahi aayegi..

R: kyun?

SG: um.. ab who sab mujhe pata nahi.. aaj bus un pahado main aayegi.. aap wahan jayiye..

R: theek hai.. thank you..

After Rahul leaves the girl winks at Muskaan and shows her a thumbs up sign..

Rahul is headed up the mountain.. it is a long climb.. finally when he reaches the spot the girl him to go to.. the place is a dirt road.. and that itself was very small.. definitely not enough place for a bus to pass through..

R: arey yaha ek bus kya.. ek auto bhi theek se nahi aa sakti..

Rahul sees a girl stading a little far away her back facing Rahul.. her head is covered.. so her cannot see her face.. he decides to go ask her for help.. the girl is Muskaan!

- Clarification: Rahul does not see Muskaan's face through the conversation.

R: excuse me.. madam.. suniye to..

No response from girl.. Rahul goes closer to her and taps her on her shoulder to get her attention..

M: hayye.. yeh apne kya kardiya..

R: (confused) huh.. kya hua.. main to sirf..

M: aapne mujhe chooliya.. main barbaad ho gayi..

R: ji? K.. kyun?

M: apne mujhe chua.. ab mujhse shaadi kaun karega..

R: (really worried now) ji.. aap pareshan mat hoyiye.. main sabko sach bata dunga..

M: waise.. aap kuware hai?😉

R: kya?? Kyun??😕

M: aap mujhse vivah nahi karenge to.. ye log meri halat bohut boori kar denge!

R: (freaked out by what this girl is saying) nahi.. main nahi kar sakta..

Rahul turned around and started walking off as fast as he could..

M: (comes after him) rukiye to.. aap apki hone wali biwi ka chehra nahi dekhenge?

Rahul sees that the gaun ki chori was Muskaan..

R: TUM?? Phirse mere piche kyun kar rahe ho?? (walks off)

Muskaan catches Rahul's bag..

R: Mera bag chodo!

M: jab tak maaf nahi karte tab tak nahi!

R: maine kaha mera bag chodo! (tugs hard at the bag… and the strap comes of)

M: haha.. dekha.. ab maaf kardo!

R: hmmph.. (pulls hard at the bad again and other strap comes of as well)

M: dekha.. ab jaldi jaldi maaf kardo na!

R: tum kya chahti ho Muskaan? Kyun mera picha kar rahi ho?

M: Rahul tum mujhe chod ke mat jao..

R: kyun.. mein teri baat kyun manoo..

M: main tumse pyar karti hoon Rahul..

R: kya? Haha.. tum.. aur pyaar wo bhi mujhse.. chod..

M: oye.. kya tujhe mazak lag raha hai?

R: aur nahi to kya.. (starts walking off)

Muskaan grabs Rahul's shirt collar him towards herself.. and gives him a long passionate kiss.. and let's go after what seemed like eternity..

People who are standing around them are whistling..

Rahul is really taken aback.. but smiling none-the-less..

R: (to Muskaan) yeh konsa tha jam jo tumne pila diya.. is sir phire ka saara system hila diya!

Muskaan smiles at Rahul, feeling awkward.. then blushes and runs off.. Rahul follows Muskaan and finally catches up with her..

R: Muskaan.. phirse kaho na..

M: kya?

R: ke tum mujse pyar karti ho, ke tumhe mujhse ishq hai!

M: nahi.. mujhe sharam aati

R: dekho tum nahi kahogi to meri jaan nikal jayegi..

M: (looks at Rahul) I .. love you..

R: I love you too! (gives Muskaan a hug)

Blue parts sang by Rahul, Pink by Muskaan, Green is actions, Red is both

R: Ishq hua, kaise hua

M: (thinks) Achha hua jaise hua

Na main jaanoon, na tu jaane

Kyoon ho gaye hum deewane

Arre re re re re - Rahul rubs his nose with Muskaan's

M: Ishq hua, kaise hua

R:Achha hua jaise hua

Jhuki jhuki nazarein hai
Ruki ruki saansein hai
Dhak dhak karta hai dil – Muskaan sings this part with full emotions..

Jaage jaage armaan hai
Soya soya yeh jahan hai
Chori chori aake mujhe mil - Rahul pulls Muskaan into his arms

M: Sun sun sun sun sun sun, sun zara

R: Gun gun gun gun gaati hai hawa

Oh, phaili hawaaon mein apni khabar - Rahul's kisses Muskaan's cheek..

R: Pyaar kiya hai to phir kya hai darr

M:Joshili baatein yun na kar

R:Pyaar hai to josh bhi hai

M:Hona hai kya, hosh bhi hai

Na main jaanoon, na tu jaane

Kyoon ho gaye hum deewane

Arre re re re re

R:Ishq hua, kaise hua

Achha hua jaise hua

Dheere dheere, haule haule
Haule haule, dheere dheere
Dil ko mili hai manzil - Rahul catches Muskaan around waist.. and slowly moves his hands up her body to her shoulder..

Bheegi bheegi raaton mein
Pyaari pyaari baaton mein
Khoya khoya rehta hai dil – Rahul kisses Muskaan passionately all over her neck..

M: Ruk ruk ruk ruk ruk ruk humsafar - Muskaan moves away blusing hard☺️

Jhuk jhuk jhuk jhuk jhukti hai nazar

R: Ek pal hamein tum bin chain kahan 😉

M: Dono dilon ki hai ek dastaa

R: Phir bhi hai kyoon yeh dooriya – Rahul walks up to Muskaan and catches her from behind around her waist and rests his head on her shoulder

M: Dekh mujhe, yun na sataa - turns around in Rahul's arms and faces him..

R:Hona hai kya, kisko pataa - 😉

Na main jaanoon, na tu jaane

Kyoon ho gaye hum deewane

Both: Ishq hua, kaise hua
Achha hua jaise hua

To Be Continued...

Please comment/criticize!

awesome part!!

Awesome part!!!

hello...i read your fanfiction..and i think its great..its such a nice and good idea..
keep writing more!:)
love sonam

wow...i loved the kiss scene,...it was amazing did not expect that to happen..whoa and i love it when she saya i love you to him..really great part once again!!!..do continue soon!!