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Posted: 19 years ago
okay so this is thkripa reached her store.....

employee= ma'am aap se milne koi aye the

kripa=mujhse....koun? mere to koi Appointment nahin tha kisi ke saat.

employee= pata nahin ma'am a man aur ek ladki woh don bhai behen lagte the.

kripa= bhai....behan shayed pritvi aur mishti.

employee=mein jao

kripa= go

kripa sat down on her desk and got aut a piece of paper she started making the designes for rani's engagement she first made rani's and josh's designes it was 8pm bye the time she finished making thee two designes. kripa got a call.......

kripa= hello

the caller= tumhare bohot yaad ar rahen hai beta....

kripa= ma...aap

gayatri= kaise ho tum beta?

kripa= mein bilkol teek hoon ma aur aap ki tabiyat kaise hai bhaiya kaise hai?

gayatri= tu mmere tabiyat chor hum ar rahen hai

kripa= calcutta?

gayatri= haan beta

kripa=kab....mein...kahaan?

gayatri= tu karthik se baat kar.

karthik= kaise hai mere pyaari behen

kripa= bhaiya aap log kab ar rahen hai im so excited.

karthik=do ghante mein

kripa= kya

karthik= were landing at 10pm yum gari bhej dena

kripa= gari bhej dena......gari bhej dena kya matlab mein khod ayungi.

karthik=kya baat hai aaj tere mood bohot acha hai.

kripa= nahin toh

karthik= okay bye

kripa= bye bhaiya

kripa out the phone down and got the designes she made for ranis engagement And closed the store....

kripa= driver!

driver= ji madam

kripa= gari nikalo

driver= ji

kripa got in thecar

driver= ghar jana hai madam

kripa= nahin airport chalo

kripa was very excited about meeting her family when she reached the airport it was 9pm and went to the informaton counter.

kripa=can u please tell me if the flight from mumbai to calcutta is on time

the lady= yes madam mumbai to calcutta is on time.

kripa= thank you, mein kya karoon flight land hone mein to ek ghanta bakhi hai...resturant mein bhet ti hoon.

kripa sat in the resturant......

waitress= ma'am may i please have ur order

kripa= one coffee and a club sandwhich please (sorry i couldnt think of anything else)

waitress= thank tou ur order will be here in a while.

while kripa was waiting for her order she called rani.....

rani= hello

kripa= kaise ho jaan

rani= jaan.....kya baat hai itni kush kyon ho angad ke bare mein soch rahin thi.

kripa= ma aur bhaiya ar rahen hai

rani=wow aunt aur karthik bhaiya

kripa= mere bhaiya tere bhaiya kab se hogaye

rani= jabse tu mere behn hogaye

kripa==oh...acha to iska matlab hai ke pritvi mere bhai hai.....hai na anyways i have made ur desighnes kal ar kar dekh lena mein rakti hoon

rani= bye.

than kripa order came.

e next part
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Posted: 19 years ago
i mean feb gr8888888888 con soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
yaaar continue soon!! great job on the last one...i cant wait to read the next one!! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
tht was gr8 as always....plzzz continue!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
continue soon yarr plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz can't wait anymore
tangina r thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanks i will be posting the next parts of my fan-fics today
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Posted: 19 years ago
where is the next part😭 😭😭
Edited by simal01 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
sorry for the delay guys i was busy wilt work heres the next part.

next

kripas order came......

kripa= thanks you

waitress= ur welcome ma'am

kripa had her food by the time she finished it was 9.30 kripa waited by the sign that said arrivals finaly her mum and brother came she huged them.

kripa= ma aap kaise hai

gayatri= tujhe dekhne ke liye ankhe taras gaye thi

karthik= kripa kaise ho tum

karthik= mein tek hoon bhaiya chaliye ghar.

gayatri= ghar.....yeh kaun sa ghar tera ghar to mumbai mein hai

kripa= ma.....

gayatri= chalo

thjey went to kripas house and had a shower and all and sat at the dinner table.

gayatri= tune poocha nahin ke rani kaise hai

kripa= woh...actuall woh calcutta mein hai

gayatri=tujhse baat hue

kripa= haan

karthik= thats why i was thinking why are u not asking about them the first thing u normalt do is ask about them.

kripa= aap log betiye mein khana lagati hoon.

kripa put dinner on the table and they ate.

the next morning at nitins house......

angad= rani tumhe kya lagta hai kripa ne kya socha

rani= such kahoon muje lagta hai ke usne kuch socha hi nahin

angad= kya matlab? 😕

rani= kripa ne phone kiya tha kal raat usne bataya ke karthik bhaiya aur aunty are coming she said she will think about ur issue later.

angad= later...woh

rani= tumhi ne toh kahaan tha na ke u will wait for her all ur life

angad= woh to hai i will wait for her all my life but tell me will pritvi he couldnt wait for her for 2 hours i can never think he can wait for her all his life.

pritvi= haan angad tumne such kahaan mein kripa ke liye aap ne sare zindagi nahin intezar kar sakta.

mishti= angad i think u should stop worring about kripa and think about ur wife which is me.

sorry for for the boring part
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Posted: 19 years ago
great great great pls cont soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part 👏 👏 👏 but please bring a-k together it's been long time 😆

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