If it was meant to be-(Update 2/10/10pg107)

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#651

all the best for ur exam
we will wait for ur update

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Posted: 15 years ago

#652

Hey Neha,
I simply LOVE the way you describe MN in this FF. It's SO them!!
Some cuteness, some romance and loads of understanding 😳

Do add me to your PM list and update real soon 😃

Love,
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Posted: 15 years ago

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all the best neha.....hope u do well!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#654

hey that was a awesome update
loved every bit of it
thanks for pm
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SaJan-SaJan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#655

awesome ff.....

do cont soon n plzzzzzz add me in ur pm list.

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abb01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#656

Hey neha,

come soon from the break dear

And have a nice break

We can not forget you

Aruna

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#657

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jaldi karo.....

are u done with ur exams???

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Neha_S

@Neha_S

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#658

Thank you guys...I am here with a few parts for being late...as a concession!Hope it works!!
I love you guys for you patience and support!Enjoy

If it was meant to be

Chapter 20

Samrat's POV
This was happening!I mean it really was...I was getting engaged today and married in a week but there no nervousness or freaking out on my part.And the fact that I was not freaking out was freaking me out.

"You have lost it""diagnosed Dr.Benjamin Swami,shaking his head as we drove to Gunjan's house.

I rolled my eyes sighing inwardly.My best friend was majorly convinced that I was making the worst mistake of my life and there was no convincing him.

""Dont roll your eyes Samrat!You know its true...""

""I dont think so dude""I said.

""You are getting married in a week.You are done for-this is the end and you are smiling...what is wrong with you?""

""End of what Benji...""

He stared at me.
"End of your sanity,bachelorhood and the only bit of happiness in your life.You have become the sacrificial lamb-now all you can do is bleat.""he said dramatically.

I laughed out.
""I see this as a beginning-and nothing changes dude.I am the same old Samrat""

Benji sighed and muttered something that sounded suspiciously like ""lost it.""

I ignored his mutterings and turned my attention to the fast approaching house.It was a small cottage like house with a pretty little garden.I smiled as we approached it-it was simple but beautiful.Just like my Gunjan...It was so like her that I already adored it.

The assembly of cars stopped at the gate and the guests all got out.I opened the gate and waited till Mom had gathered everyone around.She placed me in the middle with Dad flanking my one side and she smiling tightly as she held my other arm.I smiled indulgently at her.

I could see that she was slightly hoping that her Samrat married someone who was nearer to our status but she adored Gunjan and she knew where my happiness lay.Watching me smile made her smile broader and when we reached Devika aunty,she embraced the latter with genuine warmth.

Nupur winked at me from the side while Devika Aunty did the arti..We all entered the house.Like I thought it was very simply but elegantly decorated.Not like the gawdy wedding I was used to but I liked it.

""Looking good Jiju""said a soft voice from my side.

I turned slightly to smile at my pretty smiling sister-in-law.
Winking at her I said impishly.
""Thank you saliji...By the way...You are looking way more beautiful than necessary.I guess half the guys here are losing their consciousness over you.""

To my surprise her smile dimmed and for a second I could see pain in her eyes.Then the moment passed and she laughed tinkling.
""Stop talking about me.I am dying to see your reaction when you see Gunjan.Maybe I should call the ambulance first...""

Immediately my eyes started searching for her.
""Nupur...can I..""

""Patience jeeju...Patience...all in good time""she said teasingly.

shook my head and suddenly remembered.
""Hey where is Diya?""

This time the smile vanished and replaced itself with a forced one.
""She is not here ...She had some plans..""

""Plans...""I repeated slowly.Somehow the knowledge that Candy was not here made me sad.I wanted her to be here..I had assumed she would be...

""Samrat.." a deep voice called.
turned and saw my father calling me.I excused myself and walked towards him.He stood next to a couple of people.When I reached them they both smiled.

""Samrat meet Mrs.Sharma...the owner of the Sharma real estate builders and her son Mayank..""

I shook hands with him with ""whats up dude?""He nodded with a small smile.

Diya unknown brother-the one who was so very different from us all.I saw him with curiosity ..he seemed restless and his eyes were wandering here and there.If I was honest with myself-he looked like someone cornered.

Mrs.Sharma was totally jovial.
""Congratulations beta...You are a really lucky guy.Gunjan is a gem and this come from someone who has known her since she was a baby.""

I smiled.Gunjan was amazing...beautiful and unique.No one knew that better than me.I wondered how long would it be since I would feast my eyes on her.It was taking too long and my heart wanted to soak in her sight.

Someone sighed from my side.Mayank was staring at the glass in his hand as if it was Priyanka Chopra...He seemed to be avoiding looking at someone.

Instinctively I knew what the deal was.
""Girl problem?""
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Mayank's POV

I could only stare at Samrat.Samrat was dressed in a pale green sherwani and was staring at me with an innocent expression.

How could tell him what the trouble was?How could I tell him that my eyes were only wanting to see Nupur...

It was hard,extremely so to control myself when I saw Nupur...I could see her hope as she looked at me and her disappointment when I moved away.But it was better this way-that we both hurt now rather than hurting all our lives.The sooner this thing ended the more quickly we could move on!

My mind knew that and accepted that but my eyes automatically turned onto her every few minutes as though she was a gaze magnet.

In blue sari she looked like a dream-The black border contrasting against her skin deliciously-her smile as she greeted the incoming guests-the slight nervousness that was inherent in Nupir-the soft slow words she formed-They were all pulling towards her and i wanted this to stop!

""Hello...earth to you!!""

I started and looked at my side.

Samrat raised his eyebrow.

""You okay dude.""

""I am fine thank you.""I replied slowly.

He smiled.
""So what is the problem?""

""There is no problem""I replied smoothly.

""Oh come on...who is she?""

""She?""

""The one you are thinking about and trying not to think about...?""

Damn!How did he know?

""I have no idea what you are talking about.""I said firmly.

He nudged my shoulder and laughed playfully.
""Just tell me her name...""

I rolled my eyes and stared forward.There was a sudden movement and I blurted out.
""Gunjan...""

""WHAT?""

It was a shout-one loud enough for people to turn and stare at us.

""Keep the volume low..""

He looked murderously angry.
""You are telling me my fiance is your girl...and you are asking me to calm down...""

I laughed at his possessiveness.
""Your fiance is not my girl.I am just saying Gunjan is coming down.""

I sighed in relief as Samrat completely turned away from me to stare intensely at Gunjan!

Edited by Neha_S - 15 years ago

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#659

hey first to comment...dear its long time u had written i shuld say thx to u...i was waiting in longer terms.....

very nice u had given beautiful part dear...i loved samy and mayu pov...

well waiting for ur next part...!

love u lots for upd..........!

continue soon next time...!
by the way i guess u had exams right...how had u done?

love

jeni

am very mmuch happy to read ur ff...!

Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago

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Neha_S

@Neha_S

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#660

Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur
hey first to comment...dear its long time u had written i shuld say thx to u...i was waiting in longer terms.....

very nice u had given beautiful part dear...i loved samy and mayu pov...

well waiting for ur next part...!

love u lots for upd..........!

continue soon next time...!
by the way i guess u had exams right...how had u done?

love

jeni

am very mmuch happy to read ur ff...!

Aww!!Jenny..I love yoyr emoticons...exams went well!!One could have been better but i dont dwell on that much..thanks for liking the part.

I will update soon with girls POV!

And thanks for waiting patiently all this while
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