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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Preet dear! As you've seen....IF is posing me problem to quote your comment....I tried number of times , but no success...So finally thought of replying like this....Please yaar ! Kaam chala lena ! I'm sorry !

It's okay if you are late dear ! No probs ! 😊


Thanks for liking the part yaar ! 😊


Aur mujhpe bilkul gussa mat ho ! Arey yaar ! Saari galati Raj ki hai ! khud bhi rota hai aur hamein bhi rulata hai ! 😉


I know u never expected that Raj will react this..but he was scared to lose Naina and was broken from the heart.


Main jaanti hoon Rahul ne ain waqt pe call kiya...par,Agar woh time pe phone nahi karta toh usse Rahul kaun bolta??😛 Aur woh kya karega yeh toh agle UD mein pata chalega !


And have some faith on me yaar...Me too dont want to separate RN ...😊
Okieeee boss ! Next Update mein sab theek hojayega ! hopefully ! 😆



Luv ya too,
mana
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mana..this is also a gud way for the replies....next time se me bhi yehi try karungi jab IF gadbad karega
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!! Thanks 😊

Raj is one possessive lover aur usne toh saara room hi tod diya!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 I know all of you are shocked...but....😛

Raj tut gaya hai and he cannot bear that Naina belonged to someone else!!!!! well...nor can we !

Naina is shocked to see all this and what she saw was unbelievable for her!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 Even she never expected this...like us😉

Raj is asking Naina to tell him ke yeh sab jhooth hai!!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Bechara Raj!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina ne jab Raj ko sach bataya toh he left her with a jerk!!!!! He didnt left her with a jerk, his hand just slipped away and since he was holding her tightly till then...she found herself being left suddenly.

Aalekh aur Huda Raj ko sambhal rahe hai and Raj fainted calling out to Naina not to leave him!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina wants to go to Raj and is crying hysterically as she cannot see him this way!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 Nor can we...😭

But Aalekh is stopping her saying that Raj needs to realise the truth!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 Aalekh is right, isn't it?

Ish Rahul ki bhi kya timing hai!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Hamesha galat time pe phone karta hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Rahul kitna khush ho kar keh raha hai that he is coming for 3 days!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Jab itna bechain hai aane ke liye toh isse aane dete hai phir Naina jaldi isse sab sach sach bata degi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 Ab iss poore RAHUL chapter ker baaremein main bass kahungi....NO COMMENTS...😆 😆

Accha huya that Naina cut the phone!!!!!!! Warna main ush Rahul ka gala kaat deti!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 Baapre....iska matlab Naina ne anjaane mein Rahul ki jaan bachayi! Kyunki ek Sumi uski jubaan kaat leti aur tum toh seedha gala !

Aalekh assured Naina ke Raj aur usse koi alag nahi kar sakta toh woh tension na le!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh is right ke Raj Naina ko ish haalat mein dekhega toh usse accha nahi lagega!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 We all know how much Raj cares for Naina...

Naina zidd kar rahi hai ke usse Raj ke paas jaana hai and Aalekh finally agrees!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh ne kaha ke Raj sahi bolta hai that Naina stubborn and impulsive which earned him a whack from Naina!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 he tryin to humour her..😃😃

Naina is trying to control her tears as she saw Raj sleeping!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

Shalini is consoling Naina that Raj will understand though she herself is shocked by Raj's reaction!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Huda Naina ko samjhata hai ke pyaar ke saath saath jealous aur insecurity bhi aa jaati hai!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 Dekha? Kitnaa samajhdaar hogaya hai hamara Huda !

In difficult times his only hope to stay alive, his courage to keep fighting has been Naina and her love!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

He has already suffered so much and now he is shattered emotionally!!!!!!

Sab kuch khone ke baad Naina ko khone ka darr jayez hai!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

I love this possessiveness in Raj and want it to remain in his persona!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 Glad that you liked it dear ! 😃

Huda ne Naina ko bahut acche se samjhaya by getting her to imagine Raj engaged to someone else!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏
Naina's reply to it was perfect!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 Well, she can show it's demo too, if required 😉

Huda has completely understood Raj's emotions and is actually telling Naina that right now Raj needs her support and reassurance!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally Naina decided that she will tell everything to Rahul as she loved Raj and now cannot lose him at any cost!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
Naina sat near Raj and caressed his forehead and dozed off there clutching his hand firmly in hers!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
The best part was when Raj woke up to find Naina resting on his shoulder!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thanks a lot yaar !

Raj is now feeling bad and he stopped himself from caressing her face lest he should wake her!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Looks like our sweet, understanding and loving Raj is back!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 hmmm...he is ! 😊

Naina clutches his hand more tightly when he tried to free it and finally he dozed off his head tilted on rest on hers!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiiiiiii!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ Bass bass...kitna blush karogi? 😆


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: preet09

Mana..this is also a gud way for the replies....next time se me bhi yehi try karungi jab IF gadbad karega

Thanks for understanding Preet ! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi guys... Here's the next part ...

PART FIFTEEN:

Naina got up in the morning and found him still sleeping. A smile graced her face as she saw him sleeping peacefully, but soon she was reminded of those events and tears trickled down her eyes. She wiped them quickly as she needs something to be done. Today she will end this once and for all, she thought....as she cant see her Raj in pain. She stroked his hair affectionately and softly kissed his forehead. She quickly moved away as he stirred a bit. With a last longing glance at him, she left the infirmary, asking Huda to look after him.

She waited for Rahul at KMA gate'Raj was still sleeping as already he was exhausted due to his mission all these months and then yesterday's events...along with it the painkillers and tranquilizer Dr.Shalini gave him'

It was already over 20 min that she waited for Rahul'.

"Ab toh hadh ho gayi hai!!!!", she cried, " Jab main inse dur rehna chahti thi, tab hamesha mere aas paas rehte the aur aaj main milna chahti hoon, toh yeh mahatma darshan nahi de rahe hai! "

She wanted to solve the matter as early as possible, before Raj wake up.

Suddenly she saw a large boquet of carnation in front of her....it had a card with ' I love you' written on it'..

Rahul was hidden behind that boquet.

His face was glowing with happiness, he was very glad to be with her''..finally he had more time to spend with her.

There was a sparkle in his eyes.

Before Naina could say anything, Without wasting further time, he came forward and hugged her with full force but she didn't reciprocate'..

"I missed you Naina. " and he parted.

" Listen Rahul...."

"And I know, you missed me too", he added.

she could not say anything..

" Rahul...."

" Kya Rahul ??? Pehle bolo you missed me too.", then looking at her angry self, " Theek hai, Theek hai baad mein bol dena miss kar rahi thi. I will go and check on Huda and Aalekh. Mere PJ's ka intezar kar rahe honge ! "

" Offo ! Rahul I need to tell you something very important ! Listen to me !!"

" Ya...I know what you want to tell me!"

" What???" , she was shocked.

" Yeah....that you didnt missed me cause you didnt forget me even for a second ! ", he teased.

" Rahul Please !!!", she was frustrated.

That made him laugh.

All this while Raj was looking at them standing at the window of his room.

Huda's words were ringing in his ears....

When he got up, the first thing he asked for was Naina.

Half an hour earlier....

Raj stirred in sleep as he felt the absence of source of comfort...

He opened his eyes and indeed Naina was not near him. He thought, she might be around somewhere, may be talking to Shalini.

He was brought out of his thought with a cheerful good morning...

" Good Morning Sirjee !", Huda said while entering the room.

" Morning Huda !"

" Kya Sir, aapne toh kal hamein dara hi diya tha !"

" Aur nahi toh kya?", Shalini who has just entered infirmary supported Huda.

She did the check up, " Thank God ! you are fine now !"

" So...uh....can I leave from here?", he asked.

Shalini tried not to laugh. She very well knew how much he hated the hospitals.

" Yeah Sure. main toh abhi issi waqt aapko discharge kar rahi hoon. Just wait for a sec and I'll get you some medicines. Then you might go."

" Thanks !", he said relieved.

As she went to get medicines, Raj asked Huda,

" Ah...Huda...woh...uhh....Naina kaha hai?"

He smirked, " Naina ???"

" Haan...woh...yahi thi na? Toh...I mean...now that she's not here....I mean...where is she?"

Huda who had his back towards Raj as he was pouring water in a glass for Raj spoke unmindfully, " Arey Phoolan abhi aati hi hogi. Woh Rahul aa raha hai na aaj? Toh usse gate par hi receive karke..."

He stopped, because as soon as he turned, he found himself standing alone in the infirmary...Raj was gone.....

PRESENT :

He tried a lot but couldn't control tears falling from his eyes.....

His heart pleaded for Naina.....

Like he was asking her,

Why did you break my heart?
Why did we fall in love?
Why did you go away, away, away, away?

Dil mera churaaya kyoon
Jab yeh dil todna hi tha
Humse dil lagaaya kyoon
Humse munh modna hi tha

Why did you break my heart?
Why did we fall in love?
Why did you go away, away, away, away?



She looked towards window of Rajveer's room and saw him standing there .

"Raj, hosh mein aagaye! I will go to him.", she turned to leave.

" Arey Naina, kya hua ?? kaha ja rahi ho?", Rahul asked.

" I'll talk to you later...", she said without glancing at him and she rushed towards Raj's room leaving Rahul behind stunned at her action.

She reached his room in record speed and as she was about to knock the door,


"Darwaja, khula hai...."

To her surprise, Raj sounded absolutely normal ,unlike his behaviour yesterday.

She entered hoping that everything would be normal''and it was'.

"Raj, Woh... main" she hesitated, " Ab aap kaise ho?"

He smirked.

She wanted to tell him the circumstances she was in while getting engaged to Rahul , She wanted to tell him that she loved him and him only and she was only his. But before she could continue....

" Naina, actually I am sorry about what happened yesterday . I shouldn't have behaved in such way. I should have known ki meri kismat mein tum nahi ho", he forced a smile, " Tumhara pyaar nahi hai. "

Naina looked at him shocked, " Aap yeh kya keh rahe ho Raj??"

"Main bhi kitna bevakoof hoon?" , he laughed sadly, " Samajh hi nahi paya, ki mere zindagi mein pyaar aur khushiyon ki koi jagah hi nahi hai''.."

He was setting all the things in the place and was trying to be as normal as possible'.

While Naina started shedding tears'..unable to guess why he was saying that'.

"Naam kya hai uska??? Haan''Rahul !! Quite handsome , maan na padega tumhari choice ko ! "

" Raj, will you just shut up and please listen to me???" , she yelled, her voice breaking.

" Woh tumhe saari khushiyaan dega Naina. Jo main tumhe nahi de paaya'''..family, relatives, tumhe sab milega Naina. Jo khushi tumhe Rahul de, shayad koi aur nahi de sakta. " ,he spoke , though that thought stabbed him million times in his heart.

She was terribly hurt by his way of talking.

Was it so simple for him to shun her away like that ?

Doesnt he love her anymore??

She wanted to yell at him, shake him by his collar till he understands....but she was reminded that she needs to be patient, if she wants to solve this. It was a sensitive issue and needs to be solved with love and care.

"But main aapse pyaar karti hoon Raj...", she said coming towards him, " I love you."


"Pyaar'. Pyaar phirse ho jayega Naina."

Naina looked at him shocked and shattered....that was it.....

" Love happens only once, Raj ." , she said , " Parr....shayad aap iss baat ko nahi samjhoge. "

Raj looked up as her voice sounded emotionless. She was standing there with expressionless face....a sudden void appearing in her eyes.

" Ya shayad main hi samajh nahi paayi !", she smirked, " Mujhe yeh baat hamesha yaad rakhni chahiye thi, ki main jis kisise pyaar karti hoon, woh mujhse durr hojata hai....Pehle Naveen bhaiya aur ab....", she looked at him.

Raj looked down.

" Kaisi paagal hoon na main? Bhool gayi thi....I can't escape my fate....My destiny, who has no happiness written in it."

And with that Naina ran away to her room'.

And he leaned towards the wall '..

Dil ko dhadakna tune sikhaaya
Dil ko tadapna tune sikhaaya


Aankhon mein aansu chhupe the kahin
Inko chhalakna tune sikhaaya

Seene mein basaaya kyoon
Dil se jab khelna hi tha


Humse dil lagaaya kyoon
Humse munh modna hi tha


Why did you break my heart?
Why did we fall in love?
Why did you go away, away, away, away?


"God is so unfair to me. Mere zindagi mein na dost ka pyaar tha, na Naina ka hai'..kyun hota hai mere saath aisa ??? Kyun chodna pada mujhe Naina ko? kyun Naveen? kyun ???"

Raj thought that Naina had agreed to the engagement, and now that when he returned, he was nothing but a hindrance in her new relation. He didnt want to impose himself on Naina. So he decided to get out of the way of Naina and her fiancee. ( Kiskisko PURANA Raj waapis chahiye tha?? 😛 😉 😆 😆 😆)



He looked at the sky and shouted, " Maine aisi kya galti ki hai, ki mujhe aisi saza mili??? "

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When Naina entered her room she found Huda and Aalekh standing there.

Huda with his head down and Aalekh fuming over him.

As soon as Huda saw Naina,

"Mujhe maaf karde phoolan. Subah sir ne poocha ki tu kaha hai toh mere muh se nikal gaya ki tu Rahul ko receive karne gayi hai...aur..."

"Abe saale parr tereko apna Saand jaisa muh kholne ko bola kisne? Apun apni style se samjha raha tha na sir ko..." , but naina wasnt responding to any of these.

"Kya yaar qaidi bola naa sorry.....Chal abhi chal...sirjee ko sab kuch sach sach batate hai..."

"KOI FAAYDA NAHI..", Naina spoke dryly , " Woh kuch sun na hi nahi chahte..." and she started crying silently.

" Naina???" , Aalekh asked her.

" Nahi sun na hai na unhe kuch? Theek hai.... Jaisa woh chahte hai, waisa hi hoga. I won't come in his way. Now that Rahul is here, I'll tell him everything now only and then..."

" And then???", Aalekh's eyes narrowed.

Naina smiled.

Aalekh didnt feel it good.....

Her smile was conveying something else.

" Naina tu kya karne ka soch rahi hai??", Aalekh asked concerned, " Bata..."

" Kuch bhi toh nahi.... Aur ab karneko bacha bhi kya hai? Raj has got all the proofs of Naveen bhaiya's innocence....He'll be proven innocent soon. Raj is safe too.... Zindagi ke saare maksad khatam ho gaye...."

Aalekh shivered at her reply.

" Naina???"

" Uhh...ahh...Main dekh kar aati hoon Rahul kaha hai...mujhe yeh sab jald se jald khatam karna hai." , and she hurried out.

Aalekh was worried as he got the meaning underlying in her words. He looked at Huda , who seemed to understand too and was looking shocked.

Huda and Aalekh knew that now they have to do something.

This time they won't let anything come between Naina and her happiness....

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Rahul came to know from Huda and Aalekh that Naina's mentor had came back escaping from death'''and he wanted to meet him eagerly'..

Aalekh and huda kept mum about Naina and Rajveer's relationship and didnt tell him directly but kept dropping him hints about how much Naina and Raj meant to each other so that he'll himself understand and won't make matters worse when Naina will break this news to him '..


They took Rahul to meet Rajveer but they came to know that Rajveer had left for some work related to Naveen's case.
By the evening everybody got the news that all culprits behind Naveen's death were arrested including lalaji'..

And Naina's happiness knew no bounds'she was way too happy that his brother got justice at last''..and it was because of Rajveer''.

On whom she was very much annoyed as he was not listening to her and was the cause of her pain now!

But one thing she was determined of was, Now only death would keep her away from him....either she lives with him or.....

Raj returned back and received a huge welcome for getting success in his work'.
Naina came and hugged him but he didn't reciprocate''

Rahul didn't miss the annoyance on her face.

Then she again tried to break the ice and thanked Raj and he just nodded'..

True , that she was angry with his behaviour but she couldn't help doing it'

That night Rahul asked for a walk'.and she yet again tried to tell him but she failed'..

He was so engrossed in telling him about his academy and family that he didnt let her speak.

She wanted to just shut him up and tell everything outright, but there was something that was stopping her from doing that . She scared of his reaction...what if he would do the same thing that Raj did''.

Naina considered Rahul as a good friend. He was the one who made her smile in adversities '..

' Why my life is always so complicated ??? Everytime I wish to walk one step ahead and life pushes me four steps back?" , she sighed.

Her thoughts were broken by him'.

"So Capt. Rajveer was your mentor'.I am very eager to meet him..can I??"

she nodded and took him to his room'..

When they reached his room , they saw him packing'.

"Kahi jaane ki tayaari ho rahi hai???"

Rajveer looked up at him and then Naina'.

"Main apna introduction khud hi de deta hoon''..I am Capt. Rahul Kapoor" , he held his hand for a shake.

"Capt.Rajveer Singh Shekhawat'..Nice to meet you." he replied.

"Toh aap kahi jaa rahe hai????" He asked him again.

"Haan'.Jaa raha hu yahase'.yahaki yaadein bhulake." , he looked at naina and Rahul noticed it.

" Actually, I'll very soon be moving to a new base."

" Kab ja rahe ho aap?"

" Not sure....but very soon."

Raj was about to leave next day. But he didnt want anyone to know....especially Naina.

Unable to see him going all over again she rushed to her room ,sobbing .

"Isse kya hua?" Rahul asked Raj'

"Ab fiance toh woh aapki hai''..you should know better." he told him grinning, hiding his grief.

"Haan, bahut mushqil hai isko jhelna'..bahut tang kiya hoga apko mentorship programmes par''"

"Haan thoda bahut." he smiled back'

"Chalo main nikalta hu''.Nice meeting you and all the best for the future."

He was about to go when he noticed a photo and he managed to get it from there .(afterall he is a captain too !😉 )

Next day Rahul went to shalini'

"Shalini , I want to know something about this.", he showed the photo.
She hesitated for a moment and said "Andar aaiye, captain"
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DONE !!!!
I guess now you can see future in positive light ! 😉 Waiting for your comments and Silent readers...please Press " LIKE" button...
Edited by Revolutionbreez - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hiiii Mana 😛
How r u?

dekho is baar mein bilkul late nahin hui comment karne ke liye

The update was superb 👏 👏 ⭐️

Raj's is so shattered, how can someone imagine his love with anyone? Dats y the news of Naina's engazement has done such a worse effect on Raj. 😭 😭 😭 😭

But y is saying all this to Naina, he must have listen to her. She was forced by her parents 😡 😡 😡 😡

Huda bhi na bas hamesha pagal hi rahega, kya zarurat thi Rahul ka naam lene ki..uff bhagwan jab akal bhant raha tha to yeh apni bhains ke saath gappe maar raha hoga.m sure for that 😆 😆 😆

ye Rahul ka bhi dimaag nahin hai jo usko Raj aur Naina ki aankhon me pyaar nahin dekh sakta, aur aalekh aur huda ne bhi kitne hint diya usse, kya yeh bhi us time pe huda ke saath tha aur usse apne PJ's suna raha hoga. 😆 😆 😆

Wow....Naveen has been proved innocent 😊 😊 😊 m so happy for this. Yeh Raj aur Naina assan cheezon ko complicate banane se kabhi nahin sudhrenge na, kitna asan hai yeh prob solve karna par nahin Raj aur Naina ko to ani kismat ko kosna hai na aur naina ab suicide karne ki to nahin soch rahi na. par soch bhi rahi ho to kya, tum aisa hone to nahin dogi na 😉 😉 😉

The lines r so gud.......those were suiting the scene so much, I was imaging all that 😍
😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 Just loved it.

Rahul nepic uthayi, I know yeh raj aur naina ki hi pic hogi aur ab wo shalini se sab pochega aur shalini ek achi bachi ki tarah usse sab sach sach bata degi aur phir sab theek ho hayega 😉 😉 Is baar emri umeedon par pani mat pherna, mujhe aur rona nahin hai, ab bas raj aur naina ko khush dekh kar khush hona hai.

Continue soon, ab zyada wait mat karwana
Luv Preet 🤗
Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi guys !!

Today is birthday of Suhana di...and so i'm taking this opportunity to wish her....
Happy Birthday Suhana di!
May god fulfill all your dreams, aspirations and wishes and bestow you with never ending happiness and best of health(Ah ! Doc u see! 😉 ) !
Thanks for being there in my journey of writing here on IF...
luv,
mana😊
here i'm with another Update of Luv happens only once !!!
I know.... Abhi bhi Raj aur Naina mein differences hai, they are complicating the matter rather than solving the situation, but that is what RN is all about !
You know what, I'm More excited to clear out their differences and get together....more than you guys!!
Par pata nahi...main likhti hi gayi aur yeh part itna lamba hogaya...aur hamare RN ka milan aur door!
Aur poora likhne ke baad kuch delete karne ka mann bhi nahi kiya !
So...I think...abhi bhi hamein karna hoga thoda aur INTEZAAAAARRRRR....
Edited by Revolutionbreez - 15 years ago
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So sry Mana...mujhe pata hai ke mai bahot late edit kar rahi hun but I m just not able to find time....!!!!! Last baar maaf kar de, next time se jaldi jaldi comment kar dungi...!!!

Anyways....

Jab ek cheez me gadbad ho toh gadbadiyon ki line lag jaati hai....aise hi hua na yahan pe...!!!

Waise yeh Rahul kitna irritate karta hai...???? Kuch bolne hi nahi deta...!!!!

The song was soooo sad...!!! Log agar kisi ko bolne ka mauka denge toh aise songs gaane ki naubat nahi aaegi...!!

Lekin yeh Raj ne toh hadh hi kar di...Naina se dur jaana chahta hai...!!!

Jab itna emotional atyachar hho raha tah..you had to write... ( Kiskisko PURANA Raj waapis chahiye tha?? 😛 😉 😆 😆 😆)....!!!

Tu kya hai yaar...pata nahi apne patients ko kaise treat karti hogi...??? Yeh aise ulti seedhi baatein karke unko hasake hi thik kar deti hogi...?????

Naina pagal hai kya...??? yeh kya soch rahi hai...???

So ab Shalini Rahul ko sab kuch bataegi..!!! Great...!!!
Edited by Dhara_s - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina woke up in the infirmary and smiled seeing Raj sleeping peacefully!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊How cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

She stroked his hair affectionately and softly kissed his forehead!!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

When Naina is waiting for Rahul, he is so late!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Jab Naina isse dur rehna toh hamesha uske paas rehta tha!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Aur aaj jab Naina usse milna chahti hai to solve the matter as early as possible then he is not coming!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Rahul is in his own world as usual and is not listening to anything that Naina is trying to tell him!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Raj ko wahan se jaana hai and Shalini is trying not to laugh as she knew how much he hated hospitals!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

If only Huda had kept his mouth closed then Raj would not have seen Rahul and Naina together!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

He is emotionally shattered and this breaks him even more and he couldn't stop tears from falling!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

But this time Raj maintains his composure and tries to act normal!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

The song is very nice!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved it how on seeing Raj awake Naina rushed towards Raj's room without glancing at Rahul!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is now acting aloof and his words are causing Naina a lot of pain!!!!!

Raj gave such a melodramatic speech to Naina!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Naina said she loves him but is shattered when Raj said pyaar phirse ho jayega!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Finally we have the dialogue of the story and Naina said love happens only once!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Poor Naina!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭She said ki woh jisse pyaar karti hai woh usse dur ho jaata hai and there is no happiness written in her destiny!!!!!!

Raj is thinking why is God so unfair to him aur uski zindagi mein na dost ka pyaar tha na Naina ka hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj is now assuming that he is coming between Naina and Rahul!!!!!!!

He didn't want to impose himself on Naina and so he decided to get out of the way of Naina and her fiance!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

O God!!!!! I definately do not want the old sacrificing Raj back!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Aalekh ne sahi kaha ke Huda ko apna saand jaisa muh kholne ko kisne bola tha!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Woh chup nahi reh sakta tha??😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

I am happy to know that Navin will be proven innocent soon as Raj has got all the proofs!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina now wants to tell everything to Rahul aur yeh sab jald se jald khatam karna chahti hai!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina keh rahi hai ke ab uski zindagi ke saare maksad khatam ho gaye hai!!!!

Naina is probably thinking of killing herself!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Yeh Raj aur Naina simple cheezon ko complicated banane se kabhi baaz nahi aayenge!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Yeh Rahul ke paas dimag naam ki cheez toh hai hi nahi!!!!!🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢

Na toh usse Raj aur Naina ki ankhon mein ek dusre ke liye pyaar nazar aata hai aur nahi Aalekh aur Huda ke hints samajh mein aa rahe hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Finally Navin has been proven innocent and all the culprits had been arrested including Lalaji!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina's happiness knew no bounds as her brother has got justice at last and it was because of Rajveer!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is determined that now only death would keep her away from Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj has completed the biggest mission of his life!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina hugged him but he didn't reciprocate and then she thanked him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Atleast this time Rahul noticed the annoyance on her face!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yeh Rahul ko bolne ki bimaari hai kya??😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Naina usse sab kuch batane ki koshish kar rahi thi but Rahul didn't let her speak!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Now Naina is scared of Rahul's reaction!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔How can Naina think that Rahul will react like Raj??😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina ko Raj jitna pyaar karta hai utna pyaar koi nahi kar sakta!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj yahan se jaa raha hai and he doesn't want Naina to know ke woh kal hi jaa raha hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Unable to see him going all over again, Naina rushed to her room sobbing!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Rahul finally noticed something and he managed to get Raj and Naina's photo!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Now he has gone to Shalini who is the best person to tell him the truth!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Waiting for things to clear up between Raj and Naina and for them to unite forever!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Awesome part Mana.....lekin tune phirse bahut ruladiya mujhe 😭 😭 😭 😭

The scene in the infirmary is so beautiful...bechari naina kitna time se us rahul ka wait kar rahi thi and why that rahul is so late...when no one is thinking about him that time he will definetly call to make every one feel his presence...now when naina want him to come soon to solve the matter as early as possible he is not coming.........jab aaya to naina ko bolne ka mauka tak nahin deraha hain...utna hi nahin he is insisting naina to say that she missed him
mujhe wo scene bahut accha laga how naina rushed towards rajs room without glancing rahul when she saw raj standing at his window
Raj kitna sad hain 😭 😭 😭...isiliye he was talking with naina like that....alekh ne sahi kaha huda ko ...saandh jaisa muh .kholne ki kya jarrorat 😡 😡 😡....poor naina she is so hurt....aur wo soch kya rahi hain???....kahin suscide karne ke bare main to nahin
ye rahul kaisa captain hain yaar....huda aur alekh ne itne hints diye phir bhi wo nahin samjha....idiot
Naveen innocent prove hogaya...n naina is so happy n she hugged raj ...lekin raj reciprocate nahin kiya n now raj academy chodhke jaaraha hain
rahul got the photo aur wo bilkul sahi insaan ke pass gaya to know some thing about the photo...chalo finally kuch to notice kiya....warna mujhe to doubt horaha tha ki ye sach main captain hain ya nahin
totally superb yaar ....u described really beautifully the pain n the feelings of raj n naina
Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago

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