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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: meghaparti

Thanks for sharing its lovely dear!👏



Thanks for liking it di...😊


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

I read this update but I received thousnd watt jhatka from raj's reaction.iye raj ka reaction aur usska haal,mana jee pls pls usse aise halat mein nehi dekh sakti and upar se naina ka halat bhi,pls jaldi mila de undono ko....

sab kuch sahikar de....pls mana je.
Wiase tune beatufully describe kia raj ka haal and it's touch me.Feel the pain of raj and then naina and her reaction it's too good.
loved it.
continue soon dear.



Hi Rakhi !!
how r u dear?
he he he !😆 😆 😆 I know everybody is shocked with Raj's reaction... but all i did was trying to make him behave 'Normal' as a person deeply in love would behave...😆 😆
Aur tu toh jaanti hai na, usse jyaada din tak aise haal mein nahi rehna padega !! Bass thursday tak ! 😛
And yeah...Naina will be happy too. 😊
Thanks for liking the part dear.😊
And yeah...i'll be continuing soon....next part is on thursday! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago



Thanksssssssssssssssssssss !!!!!! 😃 😃 😃



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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome...superbbb....mindblowing....!!!

tujhe kya laga main yeh sabb kahungi...tu pagal ho gayi hai kya...??? guglu toh tujhe chabane k bare me vichaar kar rahi hai...par mera reaction kuch alag sa hai...jaise....

mera dil karta hai ki kyoun na main tujhe Hawra Bridge par le ja kar raat k 2:30 baje niche phenk dun...taki tujhe koi bachana wala bhi na ho...aur main tujhe blackmail karun...ki upar aana hai toh pahle RN k bich sab kuch thik karwa...!!! phir maine socha ki jabb is fic ko end hone me bass do hi uds baki hain toh main kyoun tujhe itni thand me pani me fenkun...hain na...???

chal is emotional aur beautiful ud ki baat karte hain...

Raj ka reaction mujhe achha laga...!!! kya hai na...main khud aisa soch rahi thi...pyar me possessive toh hona hi chahiye na...aur khaash kar k RN k love story me toh pakka hona chahiye...

par raj kitna ro raha tha...mera dil kar raha tha ki kaash tu mere samne hoti toh tera kya hota MANA...??? par phir socha ki nahi do hi epis baki hain toh sabb thik ho jayega...+vlly soch k tujhe chod diya...!!!

yeh rahul itna dumb kyoun hai...??? use samajh me kyoun nahi aata hai ki naina kisi aur se pyar karti hai...!!! hope ki naina raj ko jaldi samjha le...

is rahu-ketu...i mean ki is rahul ko pata nahi kabb sab kuch pata chalega...??? voh toh KMA aa raha hai na...tu batayegi ya main batayun...!!! chal us ka cell no de...main hi bata deti hun...tere se toh yeh kaam hoga nahi...!!!

aur naina k parents...bhagwan aise parents kisi ko na de...!!! matlab kitna blackmail karte hain yaar...??? hadh hai...unhe sirf apni padi hui hai...unhe nazar nahi aata un ki beti kitni dukhi hai...mujhe toh bade selfish lage dono...

tujhe peetne ka bada mann kar raha tha...par teri halat pe tarash kha kar main nahi peeti...ek aur baat bhi thi jiss ki wajah se tu bach gayi...!!! aur voh yeh ki tune naina aur raj k feelings ko baht achhe se likha hai...maine dil se har ek word ko feel kiya...

shalini aur alkeh baht pareshan hai...sachhe dost hai na...??? aur Huda kab se itna samajhdaar bann gaya...??? vaiseyeh achha bhi hai kyoun ki kitne achhe se us ne raj k conditon ko samjhaya...!!!

raat k 3 baje raj ka jagna aur infirmery ka pura scene par maine taliyaan bajayi...pata nahi kyoun raj k aise scenes mujhe achhe lagte hain...

ok ab cont soon nahi kahungi...kyoun ki vaise bhi tu thrusday ko toh ud karegi hi...isiliye hum pratikhsha me hain...aap ud kijiye...agar ud is baar ki tarah hi dard denewala hua...toh peetne k liye taiyaar rahiye...ding...dong...
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Raj is very hurt to hear about Rahul. In all the difficult times his only hope to stay alive...his courage to keep fighting no matter had only been Naina and love. He has already suffered so much physically..now he is shattered emotionaly...a pain that he will not be able to suffer.
His reaction is competely understandable. The only way to get him out of this shock is Naina's love....and for this she will have to tell Rahul the truth.
It is good to see that Huda has completely understood Raj's emotions as is actually telling naina that right now Raj needs her support and reassurance.
When Raj wakes up...he is happy to see naina with him. It brings peace to his mind and heart.
Please continue with the next part soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

awesome...superbbb....mindblowing....!!! Thank you !!! 😃

tujhe kya laga main yeh sabb kahungi...tu pagal ho gayi hai kya...??? Kya??? 😲 ahmm....😕 Priya !!! 🤢
guglu toh tujhe chabane k bare me vichaar kar rahi hai...par mera reaction kuch alag sa hai...jaise.... Jaise ki??? 😕


mera dil karta hai ki kyoun na main tujhe Hawra Bridge par le ja kar raat k 2:30 baje niche phenk dun... Kya??? 😲 Nahiiiiii ! 🤢
taki tujhe koi bachana wala bhi na ho...aur main tujhe blackmail karun...ki upar aana hai toh pahle RN k bich sab kuch thik karwa...!!! Aisi galat faimi mein mat rehna ! 😛 Maine suna hai ki same birthday waalo ke beech mein strongggggg telepathy connection hota hai ! 😛 Toh meri bass awaaz lagane bhar ki der thi ki woh aajata mujhe bachane...😛 Kaun??? I don't think mujhe yeh batane ki jaroorat hai....tum kaafi samajhdaar ho ! 😛 Samajh hi gayi hogi ! kyon??? 😉
phir maine socha ki jabb is fic ko end hone me bass do hi uds baki hain toh main kyoun tujhe itni thand me pani me fenkun...hain na...??? Wowwwww !!!! Very understanding !!!! 😛 Thank you sooooooooooo much for your mercy, you Lioness !!! 😛

chal is emotional aur beautiful ud ki baat karte hain... Oh !! Toh aapko finally yaad aa hi gayi ! 😛

Raj ka reaction mujhe achha laga...!!! kya hai na...main khud aisa soch rahi thi...pyar me possessive toh hona hi chahiye na...aur khaash kar k RN k love story me toh pakka hona chahiye... Thanks a ton yaar ! 😃

par raj kitna ro raha tha...mera dil kar raha tha ki kaash tu mere samne hoti toh tera kya hota MANA...??? par phir socha ki nahi do hi epis baki hain toh sabb thik ho jayega...+vlly soch k tujhe chod diya...!!! Abey chup !!! do episodes...do episodes...do episodes !!! seedha seedha bol na ki tujhe mujhpar bharosa hai ki main jaldi sab theek kardungi, issliye tu chup hai ! 😛😉

yeh rahul itna dumb kyoun hai...??? use samajh me kyoun nahi aata hai ki naina kisi aur se pyar karti hai...!!! hope ki naina raj ko jaldi samjha le... Earth spherical kyoun hai? Sky blue kyoun hain? Roses red kyun hain? Water liquid kyoun hai? Leaves green kyoun hain? RAHUL ITNA DUMB KYOUN HAI??? 😡 Samajh gayi ki aur samjhau??? 😆 😆 😆
Aur haan.....Raj bahot jald samajh jayega...par kaise? yahi toh tumhe aage padhna hai ! 😉


is rahu-ketu...i mean ki is rahul ko pata nahi kabb sab kuch pata chalega...??? voh toh KMA aa raha hai na...tu batayegi ya main batayun...!!! chal us ka cell no de...main hi bata deti hun...tere se toh yeh kaam hoga nahi...!!! Arey nahi yaar ! Usse batane keliye hi toh KMA laa rahi hoon ! Ab main iss dumb head ke peeche toh apna dimaag khapane nahi waali, Naina ki baat yeh banda sunta hai nahi, tujhe main uska number dungi nahi ( Pata chala teri dhamkiyon se darr kar woh KMA aane se pehle hi bhaag jaaye 😲, phir meri fic ka kya hoga?? 😆), toh ab dekhte hai ki kaun usse woh sachchai batata hai ! 😉

aur naina k parents...bhagwan aise parents kisi ko na de...!!! matlab kitna blackmail karte hain yaar...??? hadh hai...unhe sirf apni padi hui hai...unhe nazar nahi aata un ki beti kitni dukhi hai...mujhe toh bade selfish lage dono... Ab uske parents kaha se aagaye yaar ! Iss UD mein toh unka mention bhi nahi hai....Haan !! samajh gayi !!! 😛 Kisi aur ka gussa unpar nikaal rahi hai na??? 😉 Koi baat nahi ! I can understand ! 😆 😆 😆 Parr yaar Kitni gaaliyan degi Uncle Aunty ko??? Apne Raj ke hone waale Saans Sasur hai yaar ! Kuch toh izzat kar unki ! 😛

tujhe peetne ka bada mann kar raha tha...par teri halat pe tarash kha kar main nahi peeti..... He he he !! Darr gayi??? 😛
ek aur baat bhi thi jiss ki wajah se tu bach gayi...!!! aur voh yeh ki tune naina aur raj k feelings ko baht achhe se likha hai...maine dil se har ek word ko feel kiya... Oh thank you jee! 😃

shalini aur alkeh baht pareshan hai...sachhe dost hai na...??? aur Huda kab se itna samajhdaar bann gaya...??? vaiseyeh achha bhi hai kyoun ki kitne achhe se us ne raj k conditon ko samjhaya...!!! Maine tujhe bataya na ki maine Huda ki counselling ki hai...aur kaafi achche psychiatrist ke paas lejane waali thi, parr woh meri counselling se hi sudhar gaya ! 😛 Aur woh bhi itna, ki logoki maansik stithiyon ko bhi samajhne lag gaya hai ! 😆 😆 😆
Aur apna Aalekh toh hai hi samajhdaar ! 😃 And Shalu is such a sweetheart ! 😊

raat k 3 baje raj ka jagna aur infirmery ka pura scene par maine taliyaan bajayi...pata nahi kyoun raj k aise scenes mujhe achhe lagte hain... Thanks again ! 😃

ok ab cont soon nahi kahungi...kyoun ki vaise bhi tu thrusday ko toh ud karegi hi...isiliye hum pratikhsha me hain...aap ud kijiye...agar ud is baar ki tarah hi dard denewala hua...toh peetne k liye taiyaar rahiye...ding...dong... Okieee boss ! Parr mujhe pata hai tum mujhe nahi peetogi ! Kyun ki tab tum jaldise apni fic ko UD karne ki firaaq mein rahogi, nahi toh hum tumhe peetenge ! 😆 😆 😆 😆

Hi Pri !!! 😃
I was pleasantly shocked to see your comment !
I could have understood if you didnt, as I know you were busy in something that I would love to enjoy ! 😉
Issliye I thought you'd comment later....
But sach kahoon...toh I was really expecting you to drop a line atleast 😉
And See I got a beautiful, long and SCARY comment 😆 😆 😆 😆 that I enjoyed replying a lot !!!
Thanks for commenting amidst your hustle and bustle yaar....😊
Luv,
mana 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Raj is very hurt to hear about Rahul. In all the difficult times his only hope to stay alive...his courage to keep fighting no matter had only been Naina and love. He has already suffered so much physically..now he is shattered emotionaly...a pain that he will not be able to suffer.
His reaction is competely understandable. You got it right. Raj has always been on the losing end in his life. Though he accomplished a lot in his life, but lost more precious things than that. And now he is scared to lose someone who gives meaning to his life.
The only way to get him out of this shock is Naina's love....and for this she will have to tell Rahul the truth. She will....dont worry ! 😊
It is good to see that Huda has completely understood Raj's emotions as is actually telling naina that right now Raj needs her support and reassurance. See...woh aise hi nahi kehta na .....that...DO NOT FEAR WHEN HUDA IS HERE !! He certainly has got some intelligent brain....it just that sahi jagah aur sahi tareeke se use nahi karta tha....AB MAIN KARWA RAHI HOON ! 😉
When Raj wakes up...he is happy to see naina with him. It brings peace to his mind and heart. Yeah...There's only one thing that could comfort him....NAINA. 😊
Please continue with the next part soon. Yup ! Next Part coming up on Thursday ! 😊

Thanks a ton for commenting Nisha ! It was a pleasure replying to your comment ! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice update Mana👏 👏 👏

waise ek tarah se Raj ka reaction expected tha sirf issliye nahi ki woh Naina ke pyaar mein bilkul paagal ho chuka hai ya possessive hai Naina ko lekar.balki issliye ki pichle update ke baad humsab ke replies par tu ne yahi kaha tha 'Raj bhi ek insaan hai aur pyaar main hai toh usse bhi insecurity hogi na'....etc.etc......so,I was really expecting something of this sort from you.......or rather from Raj.

really tum ne Raj ke feelings ko,usske dard ko bohuth acche se describe kiya hai.Hats off.......👏.par Raj ke dard se toh hume bhi dard hoga na😭.nyways,Aalekh,Shalini aur Huda ne milke Naina aur Raj ko acche se sambhaala hai.great.that's like true friends.aur Huda ne Naina ko Raj ki condition ko sahi tarah se samjhaaya hai.good.

RN ke infirmary ke scenes bohuth acche the yaar.sahi main Raj ke har dard ka sirf ek hi dawaa hai.......Naina.😛

ab iss Rahul ka kya kare yaar.abhi toh gaya hai aur abhi waapas aa raha hai.ise itni chuttiyan deta koun hai yaar?khair ab aaraha hai toh iss baar usse sach pata chal jaaye toh accha hai.

that's a really lovely part dear...............can't wait for Thursday to come..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
😈 Ab bolo zara.....maar diya jaye ya maar maar ke chhor diya jaye???😡😡😡

How cud u do that to Raj???? U knw wat Mana.....Rajveer ko uss condition me sochna kitna painful tha main bata nahi sakti.....but I think u knw it all...he's always been the caml n composed Army Captain.....who's always been very understanding.....uska aise react karna bahut surprising tha.....but haan....Huda k kehne k pehle hi main samajh gayi thi....ki ab jab Raj k paas Naina k alawa kuch aur nahi hai tab usse kho dene ka darr kuch zyada hi hai.....so reaction sach me normal tha (mujhe kabhi Raj abnormal lagta hai kya??😳😳)

And I really liked the way Huda made Naina understand by letting her imagine Raj being engaged....and her reply was just soo correct!!

Ye Rahul bich me bole hi jaa raha tha.....agar Naina phn nahi cut karti to main iski zuban cut kar deti.....😡😡

Waise tumhe meri note wali baat samajhme aa hi gayi....😆😆....aur sach kahu to mujhe bhi samajh me aa gaya.....kyun tum log itna gussa hote ho jab main Ayaan ko kahin bhej deti hu....ya Nishant interfere karta hai.....I soooooo feel almost the same here.....with that Rahul around....and my poor baby....being so vulnerable!!😭😭

But yeah.....the ending was cute....where I cud again see the ever understanding n sweet Captain Rajveer!!😳😳

And u will be updating on Friday....hmm....w8ing for that....and as u r going to end this fic on Valentine's Day.....I knw its all going to be alright....it has to be ryt??😉😉

Chalo Bye.....see you on Friday. Take care.

Luv,
Sumi.😃
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez



Hi Rakhi !! Hi mana
how r u dear?
I'm fine and u dear?
he he he ! I know everybody is shocked with Raj's reaction... but all i did was trying to make him behave 'Normal' as a person deeply in love would behave...
ha mein samajh gayi,😊
Aur tu toh jaanti hai na, usse jyaada din tak aise haal mein nahi rehna padega !! Bass thursday tak !
ok, thrusday tak mein bhi wait karti hoon😊,
And yeah...Naina will be happy too.
ok mana jee
Thanks for liking the part dear.
welcome dear
And yeah...i'll be continuing soon....next part is on thursday! 😃
ok,mein intejar karungi.

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