FF: l Jaane Dil Mein Kab Se Hai Tu l Chapter1page6 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Esha Jacob Black? You're going to have to fight me for him. *grins*
Oh no, no, no, we've been married for ever! though we could share half n half, but i get full taylor, lolz😆

As for the part, it was awesome. Very interesting. One thing though, could you colour different people's dialogues in different colours? Because I got a bit confused over whose dialogue was whose for some bits. Just a suggestion. The story is going off to a great start, just the formatting you may want to change a bit?

Thanks, oh, and i was thinking of colouring each people's diaologue in a different colour. Ill do it from next time!
Thankyou!

Sorry for the comment, you may not like the frankness, but it'd be easier on your readers? Because you've got a captivating style of writing.
No, dont be sorry, i like comments like this, helps me write better, in a way. Thanks a lot!

Love,
Radz
love
Esha Jacob Black
Esha Taylor Lautner

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

thats so cool

jst loved the intro !!!...too good

thanx for pm

Originally posted by: sweety4jaan

it was amazing dear! loved it! i must ur writing skill is really really good!

loved ur update! it was awesome!

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

amazing part yaar . nicely ritten . update next part sooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzz

Originally posted by: Lipsa_mjht

Hey esha
luved your story especially that convo beween sam n gunji
thnks for the pm

Originally posted by: _Monu_

HEY ESHA!!

WAS AMAZING PART!!

JUST LOVED IT!!

GREAT JOB U DID!!

CONT SOON PLS

TAKE UR TIME

SEE YAA

LOVE UUU

*hugs*

Originally posted by: srish.mayank

amazing!!!!!!! loved it!

Originally posted by: zumra03

It's really very good...continue soon....

Originally posted by: rresham

omg it's really good.... i could see the whole scene in my head!! loved it...pls update soon :)