RM: Pyaar hai ya sazza...upd18/12pg48 LAST PART... - Page 6

nice part!

thanks for the pm!

yeh rahul ko kya ho gaya... bahut saara udhar liya kya kissise..😆

great part yaaar, finally our hero is here now..thank u soo much for the pm and please continue soon

usko anpa rahul mil gaya but why r they hitting him:( continue soon!!

Amazing update...Finally the Rahul is shown...
But people hitting him...? WOW that was a nice cliff hanger...
I loved how Muski is such an innocent and bubbly girl in ur FF
Very cute characterization of Muskaan...Can't wait to know more about Rahul's present...

PART 4:

RAhul????
Nahi yeh munda Rahul nahi hosakta....Muskaan thought......

She went near the man & saw his face carefully.....RAHUL??? She looked at the ppl hitting him....

M-Hey u...plzz dont hit him..plzz usko kyun maar rahe ho...???plzz dont hithim stop it..plzz stop itt....

One of the man- Hey u....better stay out of this..ok????

M- Bt plzz tell me why r u hitting him plzz tell.....

R- Muskaan tu ja yahanse....

M- RAhul aise kaise tujhe iss tarah chod ke ???

One of the man- Hello....he is supposed to give us our money...

M-Kaise log ho yaar....paise nahi diye toh koi aise maarte hai kay??

One of the maan- Look u...we dont know what u r saying bt if we dont get ur money we will kill him....

M- How much money???

R- Muskaan tu-----

M- I asked how much money is to be given???

One of the man(laughs)- 500 pounds

M- What??

R- Muskaan tu ja yahanse........

Muskaan takes the money out of the purse & gives the ppl.....

M- Take this...& plzz go away,,,,,,,

The gang laughs ....one of them kicks Rahul who is fallen on the ground.......

M- Hey...tujhe tere paise mil gaye na toh bas phut le yahanse........

RM alone...........

M- Rahul tu theek roh hai na???

She looks at Rahul .....he had changed so much in 3yrs.....face was pale.....dark cirles..Hair not cleaned..not shaved.....

M- Rahul...chal uth..haii rabba kinni chot aayi hai....

R- Muskaan main theek hu...tu ja......

M- MAin jau??? Tujhe aisa chod ke???

R- Muskan...tu....

M- Chal ab uth...ghar chalte hai.....

Muskaan makes him get up ...takes his hand & keeps it on her shoulder.....

R- Ouch.....

M- haii rabba..sambhal ke RAhul.........

RAhul looked at Muskaan.......

She was so concerend 4 him.......

BAckground music:
Kabhi an sukun aaya...
kabhi na karrar aaya...
jab se hai tumpe mujhko pyaar aaya...........
pyaar aaya..........

RM see an Indian man hidng....

Man- Sorry madamji mujhe aapki help karne aana chahiye tha bt main daar gaya tha....

m- Koi gal nahi ji...aap bas mere liye ek taxi ka intezaam kar dene plzz...inhe ghar le jaan hai.....

Man- jee...aap chaiye mere saath.....aapke pati ko toh bahut chot aayi hai......

RM looked at the man- PATI??????

M- Jee....yeh mera dost hai..pati nahi....

man - Kyun mazaak kar rahi madamji...aap jis tarah unn gunde se bhidi thi aisa koi sirf apne premi ke liye hi karta hai......

Muskii blushes not knowing what 2 say...RAhul was looking at her blankly.......

MAn takes them to the near by taxi stand & RM sit in it....

M- Thank u praji..agra aap nahi hote toh....

AMn- koi gal nahi ji...paraye desh me ek hindustani hi hindustani ke kaam aat hai.........

Muskaan smiles at him........& waves him....

M- RAhul tu kahan rehta hai???

R- Muskaan tu ja yahanse....

M- Apni line change karRahul..kab se yehi sunna raha hai....

R- Muskaan.....

M- Aree taxiwale ko batana padega na hume khan jana jhai,,,,,,,,,

RAhul tells him where to go....he looks at Muskii.......Muskaan looks at him......

M- RAhul kahan chala gaya tha tu??? Mujhse itna naraaz ho gaya ki mujhe ek phone bhi nahi kia???

R- Nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai.....waise Armaan kaisa hai???

M(smiles)- Changa hai....

R- Tu London me akeli???

M- Hmm...yahan conference ke liye aayi thi..........

R- Cnference????

M- Doctors ki conference....... Tu nahi tha???? Kyun???Tu toh kinni saaari conference attend karta hoga hai na???

R- Conference??????? (fake smile)

TAxi stops......Muskii looks around...

M- Yahan kyun gadi roki isne???

R- Yehi mera ghar hai........

M- Yhan????

Muskaan lokks around....the whole place is dirty yuck(just like the place where RAni & Saif shift when they get poor in TA RA Rum pum)

R- Muskaan...tu yehi taxi lekar jaa......Thank u.......

M- Jaa matlab????

she gets down & pays the taxi driver.....

R- Muskaan yeh taxi gayi toh tujhe taxi nahi milegi tu abhi aj...hum badme baat karenge....

M- Par rahul tera ghar hai an.......

R- Tera itni raat ko kissi paraye mard ke ghar pe hona sahi nahi hoga.......

M- RAhuL??????

R- Gud nite............

RAhul goes away...........

Muskaan looks at him going.........

M- PAraya???? Tu hi toh mera apna hai na RAhul...........

Muskaan comes in her hotel room....

Yeh Rahul ko kya ho gaya hai.....kinna change ho gaya hai...ajeeb lag raha tha jaise bimaar ho bt......NA jane woh log usse kyun itna maar rahe the...kitni gandi jagah me rehta hai Rahul..mujhe toh laga tha bada sa apartment ho ga London me......bade hospital me jo kaam karta hai...phir wadi gaadi hogi naukar chakar...ek dum king jaisa rehtahoga.....bt yeh toh...kya hua hai usko??? Aur kaisi ajjeb baat kar raha tha...RAhul ne kaha ki woh mere liye paraya hai??????? Woh hi toh ek mera apna hai...papaji ke bad agar maine kissi ko apna samaja toh woh Rahul hi hai aur Yeh ladka kehta hai ki woh paraya hai??????

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FLASHBACK:

During their internship days...........

Muskaan was given the children's ward...2day all the kids were happy smiling & ward boys were helping them to decorate the ward....Muskaan was surprised....

M- Oye bacha party.........kiss baat ki taiyari chal rahi hai??? Aur yeh sab kya hai???

Sagar- Didi...aapko nahi pata???

M- Kay???????

Neha- Aaj Mothers Day hai toh hum yahan yeh ward decorate kar rahe hai aur phir jab humari mummy aayegi toh unko surprise karenge.......

M- HAiyoo Rabaa...thats so sweeeeeeeeeet.......

Asmita- Didi..dekho na ...humne cards bhi baanye hai.....

M- Acha ...dekhu toh......

Muskaan saw all the handmard cards made by the kids 4 the mums.....they were really good.....those cards may not be looking amazing aur beautiful...bt it had love & affection of the kids 4 thier mums....

After some time.....

Sagar's mum comes.......SAgar hugs her....& gives her the card & his mother had tears in her eyes...so had Muskii........

Muskaan never celebrated mothers day....she never remembered how her mom looked...her mum died after giving birth to Muskan....there were some complications in her pregency...bt she knew the baaby was imp 4 Muskaan's dad......

Muskaan always missed having a mom...bt she could never tell this to her dad coz unhe bhi bura lagega.....Bt whenever she was sad or lonely Rahul was always there 4 her........

2day she saw everthing & smiled bt her heart ached 4 her mum & had tears in her eyes....she was moving backwards & while walking backwards she bumped into Rahul....

R- Oye.....dekhe ke....

Muskaan quickly wiped her tears bt not so quickly that Rahul couldnt see.....

M- Sorry....woh main...

R- Kya hua?? Tu roo kyun rahi hai.....

M- Nahi toh...main kahan??/

R- Muskaan tu aaj tak koi baat mujhse nahi chupa payi..main teri aankhe padh sakta hu...ok???

M(tears forcing to come out)- Aaj....woh..aaj ...mothers day hai...sab bache apni maa ke liye....main....

R(hugged her)- Aee pagli..maa nahi hai toh kay hua??? Main hu na..tera best friend....huh?? Muskaan tu zindagi kabhi apneaap ko akel;a mat samaj..main hamesha hu tere liye...iss paraye seher me tu akeli nahi hai koi apna hai jo tere aansu nahi dekh sakta....ok???

M- RAhul........

R- Haan main maa jaise parthe nahi bana sakta aur tujhe lori bhi nahi sunna sakta bt teri har mushkil me tera saath jarur nibha sakta hu.....

M(smiels)- Na jane tu na hota toh main kya karti???

R- Ya rite.....

Both laugh

End of flashback
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Hope u like it.........Do comment..........

that is so sad.. i wonder why he is living like taht.. why he lift india for that matter
loved the taxi guyz confusion my second fav part.. first was when she gets the gunde away from rahuL:D
continue soon

Hey Bachha!

wonderful part!!

really nice part but i felt soo bad for rahul....😔

aw felt so bad 4 rahul