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Posted: 15 years ago
appooooooo!!!:..
wow i love dit completely!!
Lovely ji ki adat hai na ji....
Dr Rahul ji ke sat flirt karneki ji...lol
phir Dr Muskaan ji ko bura laga ji....lol
par mainnu na ji bohot funny lagga ji!!...lol
very cute and funny!
cant wait 4 AA confessioon
continue soon
love yaaaaa
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Posted: 15 years ago
luved the part appyšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
the convo between rahul ji and lovely ji was so cuteešŸ˜†šŸ˜†
and how muski ji was getting all angry
it was funny when rahul told ammy tumse hi tho sikha haišŸ˜†šŸ˜†
the short flirting scene at the end was so cute and sweet😳
rahul dreaming when muski gave him a kiss😳
jst luv RM
cont soon and thanx for the pm
luv
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Posted: 15 years ago

PArt 29:
SPL update for AA lovers....


Two days later:

All were sitting in the canteen except Anje....

At- Armaan Rahul..Thansk so much...tum dono ka plan awesum kaam kar raha hai....

Ri- Exactly...Di Atul ko bahut miss kar rahi thi....

M- Ya..uss din usne mujhe bhi pucha Atul ko koi problem hai kya?? Woh itna ukdha ukhdaha kyun renhta hai???

R- That is awesumn.......Plan A successful........Ab plan B ko action me lene hai.....

At- Whats Plan B???

Ar(smiles)- Make her jealsous.....

At- JEalous??? KAise??

R- Pretend ki koi hai jisse tum bahut like karte ho ya woh tumhe like karti hai...&

At- Phir Anjali mujhse apni dil ki baat bol degi???

Ri- Par Di kyun bolegi/?? Atul bhi toh pehle bl sakta hai na???

Ar- Basket....Atul ne nearly 1000 Timea kaha hoga ab tak Bt Anje ne ek baar bhi nahi kaha toh Anje should confess first this time...ok???

Ri- Dekho Armaan tum meri Di ie baare kuch bhi nahi bolsa kte..

Ar- Really??? Tumahri di...

Ri- Kya??? Meri di kya???

R- Darwaze pe khadi hai...

AR were abt to turn...

R- Aree abhi turn karkr dekho amt u guys make things so obviols...

Ar- Atul all the best..plan yaad rakhna??? Give me five...

Atul smiled & boys hi5ed each other....

Anje saw Atul smile from the canten door...she felt very nice to see him smile...She had thought he ws upset ovre something & thats why he was not the jolly Atul as always.....she kept staring at him & was coming in their direction....she tripped & was abt to fall Bt Atul acught her by her arm...

Gang smiled

AA eye lock...

At- Tumhe lagi toh nahi ANjali???

An- Nahi..Thanks Atul....

At- My pleasure...

Rahul coughed...

Ar- ATul..aur bata na kya kah aChinki ne??

At- Chinki??

R- Areee Teri dost...well abhi tak toh dost hi hai na???(winks)

At- O meri dehradun wali frend??

Amy & Rahul were surprised even their Bholla Atul coukd cook up stories....

M- Usne bade gift shift bheje hai tere liye??(joining the game)

Ri- Pata hai Di..Chinki ne Atul ko letter bhi diya hai jisme likha tha ki--

Ar- Basket??? tumne wh letter padha??? Thats so bad....kissike personal letter asiinahi padhte...

M- U mean love letters????

At- SHut up Guys....(smiling)


Anje felt her eyes were starting to fill bt she blinked back her tears....

Ri- Di..tum bhi toh Atul ko kuch tips do na??

An- ridzi yeh Atul ka personal matter hai & we shuldnt interfer in it....

R- COme one Anje hum sab uske dost hai Rite???

Anjali looked at Atul.....

M- Rahul mujhe tujhse important baat karbi hai??

R- Kya??

M- Tu chal mere saath.......

She took him away...

She paged AR...

R- Kya kar rahi hai???

Ar came there too...

Ri- Kya hua???

M- Kya hum unn dono ko akele time spend karne anhi denge???

R- ya...tusi bade smart ho gaye ho??

M- SHut up....

AA:


An- Ek baat puchu???

Atul nodded...

An- Yeh Chinki aur tum kabse..I mean ki tumne usse propose kab kia??

At- Abhi tak nahi kia...

An- Toh?? Do u know ki woh tumhe really like karti hai???

At- Haan lagta toh hai....

An- Umm..well...woh...chinki...is she beautiful???

At(smiles)- Haan...bahut....aur bahut smart bhi hai...thoda gussa karti hai par---

An- Mujhe late ho raha hai....I have to go....

Anje gets up & leaves..Atul follows her....Her duty was at Pathlab so she goes tehre...

An- Stop it Anje..agar uski koi gf hai toh kya hua??? U shouldnt be bothered sbt it ok??? Why the hell r u feeling so bad???

At- khudse baatein karna kabse sikha???

An(wiped her tears)- Atul just go away..main busy hu....

At- busy??? doing what????

An- Tum mujhe pareshaan kyun kar rahe ho??? Tum jao na apni Chinki ko letters likho....


At- Tum chinki ke naam se itna gussa kyun ho rahi ho???R u jealous???

An- Jealoys??? Plzz spare me...tum kuch bhi karo..its doesnt bothre me ok???

At- Ok...main tumhe kuch dikhana chahat hu...

An- What??

At- U wanna see Chinki's pic???

An- U have her PIC?????

Atul nodded & showed her the pic...Anje looked at it surprised....

An- Yeh toh meri pic hai...

At- Haan..kyunki koi Chinki hai hi nahi...Anjali kal bhi meri life me tum hi thi aur aaj bhi sirf tum ho....Tumahri jagah koi nahi le sakta ....Sachi....

Anjali eyes were full of tears..Atul said it with so simplicity....Nobody could ever Take her place in his life....

At- Anajali main...

An- Shut up Atul....THow can u speak so much when i ma around..?? Main hamesha baatein karti hu & U listen right?? Then let me speak....

Atul looked at her not knowing what to expect....


An- Atul..tum bahut stupid ho..u r the dumbest guy i have ever met....Bt u know what tum pehle ladke ho jiske liye main kuch special feel karti hu....Tum sabse alag ho...u r so inoocent & simple..thats what i like abt u....Mujeh aisa ladak chahiye tha jo mere attitude ko braek akre & he would dominate me & u could never do that So i thought u were not the one for me...Bt tum hamesha mujhe proirirty dete the...meri khushi sur mere demands wremore important for u than anything else.....u...made me feel very special...Tumahre liye main sabse imporatn hu & this is very spl for me....Tumhari baat mere dil ko chu jati hai Atul...I love u....

At- ANjali..plzz pinch me kya tum sach me?? I mean...

An(hugs him)- I love u stupid....

At- I love u too Anjali..

Hope u liked it..Do comment & criticze
Its the first ever time i tried to write sumthing completely on AA...sorry if its not worth......
Next part is the last part of this ff......
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awww amazing part appy ....i really wished we could see more of AA in DMG...they were such a cute couple ......awesum update šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great part!!!
Thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome confession,Apoorva!!
Awww...it was sooo sweet and simple...just like AA are!!
Wish they would have atleast ended their story in a decent fashion and not what they have done with it...*sighs*!!
Lovely update!!
Do continue soon and thanks alot for the PM!!
-surbhi😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
a really cute part......sad that AA confession never happend in DMG.....update soon
-prajna
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Posted: 15 years ago
Appy that was a very cute part, luved AA they r so cutee
finally atul got angali
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Posted: 15 years ago

PArt 29:

A week later:

RAhul was sitting in his cabin Muskaan came in....

M- Rahul...papaji ne tujhe phone kia tha???

R- Kisliye???

M- Duffer hai tu...Aree woh Mumbai aane wale the na??? Kya hua uska???

R- O ya...main toh bhool hi gaya tya....Muskaan actually last week itna busy tha ki mauka hi nahi mila mujhe....

M- I know..main bhi bahut busy thi last week bt maine aaj unhe ohone kia tha bt gharpe kisine phone nahi uthaya.....

R- Uncleji bahar gaye honge...thodi der baadme karna...

M- maine 3 baar kia hai subhe se...mujhe...pata nahi kyun kuch aach nahi lag raha....

R- Matlab???
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M-Mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki kuch bura honewala hai..i mean...PAPAJI THEEK HONGE NA????(SHAKY VOICE)

R- Aee Muskii jaana...dont worry...Uncleji bilkul theek honge...Aur main hoon na..tu tension matr le..sab theek hai...sachi....

Muskaan hugd him....

R- Relax Muskii....main hu na...

After sometime.....

Rahul was on his rounds. A NURSE cones running...

N- Dr Rahul ek emergency...Jaldi chaliye...

R- Kya hua???
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N- Ek paitent aay hai...Woh raaste me behoosh hue the...aaspaas ke log unhe yahan laye hai...herat aatack case hai....

R- Tumne DR Shubankar ko inform kia???

N- Sir Dr Shubankr Dr Shahnk ke saath medical conference ke liye gaye hai....

R- Dr.Keerti???

N- Woh lonavala gayi hai....

R- o God...theek hai...chalo...

The paitent was kept in spl ward Rahulw ent to check him & was shocked,.....

R- Uncleji???????

N- Aap jaante hai inhe sir????

R- haan yeh Muskaan ke papaji ha....O God....Aap plzz Muskaan ko bulao...plzz unse unke papaji ke baare mae kuch mat kehna ..just tell her i have called her..plzzz

N- Yess Sir...

Rahul checked Muskaan's dad..he had severe heart ataack...OT was ready & Rahul was ready to operate..he felt a bit nervous...bt he was sure they wont afford to lose Muskaan;'s dad....Muskaan was very atached to her father & she was be completely broken if anytrhing happens to her dad.....he had to be strong & confident....& ofcousrse he could handle it...he had handled more severe cases than this....yess i am the best...Rahul closed his eyes....

Muskaan came..

M= Rahul..tune bulaya??

R- Muskaan, u trust me???

M- Haan ofcousre..par tu yeh kyun puch raha hai???

R- Muskaan....(he turned & Muskaan saw her dad lying uncoinusucs on the hospital bed)

M- R..Ra..Rahul...rahul..yeh??

R- Muskaan..unhe severe heart aattack hua hai...Raasyte me gir gaye the kuch logon unhe yahan leke aay hai....

M- Rahul..mere papaji theek ho jayenge na???(tears flowing)

R- Muskaan...severe heart ka matlab tu ek doctor hoke sanjti hai na???


M- Rahul..amin main kya karungi papaji ke bina????

R(keeps his hand on her shouldr)- Muskaan...MAin tere papaji pe operate karne wala hu..Tujhe mere kabiliyat pe bahrosa hai na???

M- Haan.....

R-Main puri koshsish karunga....i promise....

M- Rahul tu sab theek kar dega na???

Rahul smiled & nodded.....

R- Ab chal smile kar aur mujhe wish kar....

M(wiped her tears & smiled)- ALl the best rahul...i love u!!!! I trust u more than anything in this world....

Rahul smiled...

R- Love u too......

Woh teen ghante mere liye bahut mushkil the....Mujhe apne Rahul pe pura bahrosa tha par apni kismat pe nahi....JAb bhi meri zindagi me bahut khushiyaan aayi na tab kuch na kuch mujhse cheena gaya hai....Rahul ko paakar maine duniya ki saari khushiyaan paali par main papaji ko khona nahi chahti thi...mere papaji mere liye bahut important the....BAchpan me jab main kuch bhi bol nahi paati thi unhone meri har khwaish puri ki...duinyt aki saari khusjhiyaan unhone meri kadamo me daali thi...main bata nahi sakti ki mere papaji mere liye kya hai...unho ne kabhi bhi mujhe maa ki kami mehsus nahi hone di...Unn teen ghanto me papaji ke saath bitaya hua har pal mujhe yaad aara tha...har guzarte pal ke saath mera daar aur baad raha tha....i didnt know what to do....mere saaath mere dost the jo mujhe keh rahe the ki sab theek ho jayega bt main...
Teen ghante baad OT ka darwaza khula...Rahul came out looking tensed....I felt like my herat skipped abeat...
R- Muskaan...main...Uncleji...
M- Rahul plzzz bol na sab theek hai na????
Rahul smiled....
R- Uncleji is out danger....
I hugged him...I love u arhul..thank u.....
PApaji ka operation successful raha...PApaji aachanak se mUmabi aake hume surprise karna chahte the bt aate hi unhone hume SHock kar diya....
Kuch dino me papaji ki tabiyeet improve hone lagi....maine bahut baar PApaji ko mere aur Rahul ke baare me bata na chaha..bt mujhe daar lag raha tha...pata nahi papaji kaise react karenge??? I eman woh Rahul ko hamehsa se pasand karte the..bt drugs & all....In fact he was proud abt Rahul ki usne apne past se bahar nikar ek nayi shrurvat karne ki koshish ki...PApaji had said ki nayi shruvat phirse karna bahut muskhil hiota hai...Rahul did a good job..bt kya woh usse damaad ke roop me accept karenge??? Papaji ne maana kar diya toh???? MAin kya karungi????
Rahul ne papaji se baat ki....He smiled & said ki woh pehlese hi expect kar rahe the ek din hum jake unhe yeh baat batayenge.....he said main hamesha se chahata tha ki tu Rhaul ki dulhan bane bt tum sirf dost the...i didnt want to spoil ur realtionship so i never said anything.....
Rahul told him abt his past...Papji smiled & said a person is loser when he thinks he is lost....tune toh sab bhulkar apni zindagi ka control apne ahaton me phorse leliya ....
I felt sooo glad.....I was happiest girl on earth that day.....Phior kya tha meri aur Rahul ki shaadi bahut dhoon dhaam se hui thi......
Aaj humari shaadi ko 5 saal hue...Aur humare anniversarry pe Rahul ko Indian mediacl Association ke tarfse falicate kiya/.....Unho ne mere Rahul ko feliciate kia...i fe;t sooo goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood.....rahul kehta hai ki main uski Lucky chgarm hu,...jab se main uski life me wapis aayi hu sab aacha ho raha hai...Inn PAnch saalon me Rahulne saari kamyabiyaan phirse haasil kar li...Usne kabhi mudke apne beete hue kal ko nahi dekha.....
Mere Rahul ne chotisi speech bhi diijab usse honour kia tha...
He said-"Ppl always say Behind every successful man there is woman..jab maine pehle yeh sunta tha mujhe lagta tha ki mehenat khud kar rahe hai aur credit aone wife ko kyun dete hai???Bt aaj main bhi yehi kahunga..mere success ke piche meri patni ka haath hai..agar woh mere saaath ne hoti toh main yahan khada na hota..AAche waqt me har koi saath deta aur bure waqt me toh khudki parchai saath chod deti hai...jab meri zindahgi me aandhera aaya tab meri patni ne mera saath diya....Mujhe himmat di taaki main aage baddhu aur isliye main yahan tak aaya hu...Thank u Muskaan for always being there for me. I LOVE U!!! "
I had tears in my eyes...maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki itne saari logon ke saamne Rahul mujhe I LOVE U kahega...bt thats my Rahul....hamesha surpise kar deta....
Hum sab ki life bahut badal gayi.....Armaan-Ridzi apni khushi ke saath khush hai...
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Atul- Anje ki finaaly shaadi ho gayi hai & ANje is 2months pregant...

Sameer yaad hai...uski bhi recently shaadi hui Avni se....she is also an doctor....MAin aur Rahul gaye the Delhi uski shaadi me...Sameer-Avani saath me abhut cute lagte hai....usne bahut help ki hai meri......
(sorry guys..koi aur actor mujhe sja nahi so LNMDJ wala SAmeer ghusa diya..hope u dont mind)
Main aur Rahul apne judwaa bachon ke saath khush hai...MAine zindagi se jitan chaha zindagi ne mujhe usse kahin jayada diaya hai....KAbhi kabhi daar lagta hai ki inn khushiyaan ko kisiski nazar na lage....Rahul kehta hai ki jahan bahut pyaar hota hai whaan kabhi nazar nahi lagti....
Rahul jaisa life partner paake main duniya ki sabse lucky ladki hu....WOh haasta bhi hai rulaata bhi hai...gussa bhi hota hai...khud hi maanata bhi.....Rahul ki maa hameha kehti thi ki HAr ladki ko apne pati me dost dhundna chahiye par mujhe toh apne best freind me hi apna pati mil gaya......
Main MUSKAAN RAHUL GAREWAL aur yeh meri kahani.............................
THE END...........................

Edited by Love_RM_MAYUR - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Okay guys...this was my last part of this ff......
Pyaar hai ya Sazza...ends with his note.......
I am happy u guys liked it....& beared with me thru this journey......
U gave me wonderful coments...which meant a lot to me......
THANK U SO MUCH..........
Apoorva

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