RM: Pyaar hai ya sazza...upd18/12pg48 LAST PART... - Page 34

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Posted: 15 years ago
great update!!
thanks for the pm!!
continue soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey appu!!
so cuteee updt!!
i love the way how armi and rahul handle the girls
and how atul is avoiding anji
cant wait 4 their confession!!
yyyyeeeeaaaahhhh!!!
continue when u can!!
see yaaa
love uuuu
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Posted: 15 years ago
M- Rahul....tujhe pata hai..ki tujhme itni khubiyaan hai ki puri raat kya puri zindagi bhi kampad jaaye......awww this line was soo cute
beautifully written!👏👏👏...just loved everything RM AR and loving the way your dealing with AA story ...really enjoyed this part

Edited by sweetsugar - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 27:

Next day:

Rahul joined Mumabi Sanjeeavni..all the staaf were very happy to have Rahul back....No one asked him where was he & how he returned after so long ??? They were just happy that Rahul was back....

Sister Lovely was EXTRA happy to see Dr.Rahulji

L- Dr.Rahulji....welcome backji...twanu pata nahi ji jab tussi nahi the na ji..tab Sanjeeavni me arunak hi nathi ji....Ab tussi aagaye hon aji..toh dekhan sab kinna sona lag raha hai ji...Maine aapko abhut miss kia Dr.rahulji....

R(looked at Muskaan who was fuming to see Lovely frliting wih HER rahul)- Lovelyji..maine aapko abut miss kia....

Lovely almost fainted heraing this...

L- Yeh ji aapke liye..(giving him the rose)

R- tahnk u so much Lovelyji.....

L- U rmost welcome Dr.Rahulji...

Muskaan was paitenty listening to this NONSENSE bt it was enuf.......

M- Siter Lovely..appko Dr.Shubankar bula rahe hai.....

Lovely goes away....

M(hold his collar)- Kya keh raha tha??? Maine aaapko abut miss kia Lovelyjiiiiii..Ek tapad marungio na saari akal theekane pe aaja yegi....

R(laughs)- Muskii..tu mujhe tapad maregi???

M- nahi...uss chudail ko....SAmjhti kya hai aapenaap ko....

R(smiles)- mukii jab na tu possesive hoke gussa karti hai na toh mujhe bahut aacha lagta hai....

M- Aacha??? Isliye chaudail ke saath flrit kar raha tha????

R- Muskaan.....u know what....i love u....

M(smiles)- Mujhe pata hai....

Ar- helloji..hum bhi yahan hai....Rahul tu kya karta hai?? KAhin bhi shuru ho jata hai....

R- kya karu yaar??? Tujhse hi toh sab sikah hai maine....Tu bhi ridzi ke saath..akbhi locker room..kabhi fire escape kabhi ....

Ar- Chal kaam waam karna hai ki yahin kahde hoke baatein akrni hai huh???

All laugh.....

In the evning:

Muskaan calls her papaji....

M- papaji??? Kasie ho tussi???

P- main changa hu puttarji..tussi batao??? Tu kaisi hai aur Rahul???

M-Main aur Rahul bilkul theek hai...Par papaji..aapki aawaz aisi kyun aa rahi hai???

P- Kuch nahi puttar..bas thodi tabiyeet kharab hai....Thoda thak gaya hu....

M(hyper)- Ki hoya papaji?? Tussi meri baat bilkul nahi sunte...Main kabse keh rahi hu ki Sanjeevani aake saree test kar vate hai but aap hai k meri baat sunte hi nahi...

P- Puttar itna pareshaan hone ki koi baat nahi hai..main gaya tha na apne family doctor doctor ke paas...

M- Kaun woh Mulhotra???papaji..usne paise dekar degree li hai..woh ek no ka gadhaa aur ullu ka patha hai aur....

R- Muskaan..Dr.Mulhotra is the gold medalist...

Muskaan looked at Rahul somewhat embarrased...

M- Haan jo bhi hai....Papaji..kya hua hai aapko??? Koi serious baat hai kya ???Aap plzz mujhe bata sakte hai..sachi....main bilkul tension nahi lungi...

P- Kuch nahi hua hai..bas thoda chest pain hai aur----

M(hyper)- Chest pain??????? Paapji...yeh itnisi baat nahi hai...koi serious baat ho sakti hai....aap kal ke kal Mumbai aaju..mujhe kuch nahi pata...

P-Muskaan puttar kaisi gala kar rahi hai????

Rahul took phone from Muskaan...

R- Uncleji..sasriyaakaal..Rahul bol raha hu....

P- Kaise ho puttar???

R- Main toh changa hu par twadi tabiyeet theek nahi hai..??

P- Aree puttar yeh Muskaan khamakha pareshaan ho rahi hai..aisi koi serious baat nahi hai....sachi....

R-Mujhe pata hai Uncleji tussi ek dum strong man ho....Par yeh aapki Musakann hai na thodi pagal hai..uski tasali ke liye aap saare test karva lo...warna yeh roj aapko phone karke pareshaan karegi...

Muskaan looks at Rahul in full khunass....Rahul smiles & winks at her....

P- Yeh baat toh tune ek dum sahi kahi....(laughs)Theek hai main twadde Sanjevani me aajaunga...Ab khush???

R- Ok Uncleji..tussi mainu bata do kab aa rahe ho..aminaapko pick karne aa jaunga..ok???

P- Haan..bilkul..apna khyaal rakhan aur meri Muskaan ka bhi...

R- Jee...

Rahul cuts the phone...

M- Papaji maan gaye????

R- Yesss

M- I dont belive this...maine itni baari bola toh bilkjul nahi sunna tune ek baar kya kaha phatak se maan gaye???

R- JAana..tere Rahul ka charm hi kuch aisa hai k koi mana nahi kar pata...

M- Woh toh hai...


R(leaning closer)- Really???

M(flrting)- Haan bilkul.....(smiles)

Before rahul could react..Muskaan's pager rang & she ahd to go....

R- Kissiko meri khushi bardaaast hi nahi hoti....

Muskaan gave a smaal peeek on his cheek & left..Rahul touched his cheek & smiled dreamily.......

Hope u like it....
I will post AA confession in the next part...The whole AA part.......pucca promise.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG loved Dr. RahulJi and MuskiJi and ArmiJi and LovelyJI😆😆😆

It was shooooo cute i totally loved it! lovely is sooo funny and muski ka possessiveness wow... Totally loved the whole part too much, me need to go to not a long comment but totally loved it, its sooo nice to see RM togetehr😃

Loved it:
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Update soooooooooooon! thanx alot for this one and ya now get out of the shock i did comment😆😆 and i did read it early this time😆😆😆

Luv u appy🤗
Nadz😳
Edited by nadz_J - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely update bachha! I hope muskaan's pappa ji is okay and it's nothing serious. Lagta hai ki ab toh Rahul baat kar lege uncle ji se. lol.

YAY! AA confession in the next part! I'm sooooooooooooooo happy! U rock sis! love you!



komzie di!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely update!!
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely part yaaar......RM r just soo cute..adn haaye lovely ji is backk..it was soo funny how muski was getting jealouss..lol...hope muski's dad is fyne..thank u for pm and conitnue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

👏Absolutely loved RM.......awwww soooo cute yaar😳....lovely part😛

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Posted: 15 years ago
haha the whole "JI" conversation was very cute ... and RM toh as usual were super cute ....lovely update ...thanks for the PM.
Edited by sweetsugar - 15 years ago

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