RM: Pyaar hai ya sazza...upd18/12pg48 LAST PART... - Page 12

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Posted: 16 years ago
thnk god A-M are not married wohooooooooooooooooooo
very nice part ....
thnx for the PM


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Posted: 16 years ago
great part as usual..lol finallly rahul knows the truth...... can't wait to read more....

p.s. sorry for the late comment
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Posted: 16 years ago
luvly!!!!!
add me 2 ur PM list!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey sorry for being sooooo late always😭😭😭 but i read ur FF till part six then my network probs so couldnt comment:


Wow amazing meeting…. So rahul is a drunkard and drug addict… great twist… and muski was in love with armaan… even greater twist… so that's the reason rahul left and he thinks there married… gosh wonder whats the whole story why he thinks there married… I cant wait to read more… Please update sooooooooooooon!


I wrote the comments while i read but then couldnt post it will read part 7-8 today and comment tomorrow!


Thanks for Pms!


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nadz😳


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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 9:

India...

Armaan looks smiling at Ridz....

Ri- Muskaan ek number ki pagal hai....

A- I know...Kitna pyaar karti hai Rahul se......

Ri- Hmm...woh shayad khud yeh baat nahi jaanti....Mumbai se Goa transfer li sirf Rahul ke liye.....Ab woh usse drugs se azad kara degi......

A- Par Ridz aisa kya ho gaya ki Rahul ko drugs leni padi??? He was a strong guy....achanak se.....

Ri- Kya pata?? Lets hope ki woh jaldise theek ho jaye....

A- Ya.....

London
RM in the room......

Rahul was feeling very restless....he had not taken any drugs 4 two days.......

Muskaan notices it....

M- Rahul...kya hua???

R- Woh...main...

M(trying to change the topic)- Acha bata kya kahega???

R- Mujhe bhook nahi hai.....

M- Oye...iska bill na Sanjeevani dene wali hai toh main toh sabse mehengiwali dish mangaungi....

R(smiles)- Tu bilkul nahi badli.....pagal hai kya???

M- Le...tujhe aaj pata chala..kya RAhul tu bachpanse jaanta hai mujhe aur tujhse toh mere baare me sab pata hona chahiye...

R- Acha?? Aisa kaun kehta hai???

M- Aree har film me aisa hi hota hai..infact filmome toh dikhate hai ki do best friends ko ek dusre se pyaar ho jata hai so hume bhi-------(stops realising what she was abt to speak)

Rahul quickly looks at her......

M- Mera matlab hai ki......

R- Kya matlab hai???

M- Rahul....woh.....(looks everwhere except Rahul)Main reception phone kar deti hu..hume khana bhi toh kahana hai mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai.....Main abhi aayi....

Rahul nodded....
he smiled thinking of what just Muskaan said....Kya woh bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai??? Par kya main uske liye sahi hu??? Mere paas kuch nahi usse dene ke liye na paisa na izzat......main uske liye sahi nahi hu.....main sirf uska dost hu...thats it....


Muskan went to the other room which had phone....
Main kya backwas kar rahi thi andar...Rahul kya soch raha hoga...Muskaan tu pagal ho gayi hai..sach me,..Par maine aisa kyun kaha...kya main sahme aisa chahti hu??? Jab London me rahul ko aise dekha mujhe bahut bura laga...woh log usse maar rahe the....Aaj ajb Rahul ne smile kia mujhe aisa laga jaise puri duniya khush hai....Jab woh nahi tha tab bhi maine usko kitna miss kia.......

Muskaan was lost in her thoughts when Rahul came.....

R- tu order karnewali thi na??

No response.....

R(sat beside her)- Muskaan....kya hua???

M- Huh??? Kuch nahi.....

R- Tune order kia???

M- haan..main wahi karnewali thi....

After half an hour:

Food comes.....

RM eating in silence.....

M(feels uneasy by the silence)- Rahul....mujhse naraaz hai kya??

R- Nahi toh..kyun???

M- Woh...tu baat nahi kar raha toh....

R(smiles)- Baat toh hamesha tu hi karti hai kyun???

M- Tang khich raha hai na meri???

R- Main??? Nahi nahi mujhme itni himmat kahan???

M- O phiteey mooh........

R- haa..now i am relived....

M- Kyun???

R- Tere mooh se gaali sunne bina din nahi jaata....

M- Very funny.....Rahul...yeh bhi koi khaana hai???

R- Kyun?? Acha toh hai....

M- Londonvich rehke angrez ho gaya hai...isse khaana kehta hai...na tadka hai na mirchi kaisa phikaa khana hai.....

R- Right Mother India......

Muskaan smiles.....After 3 long years someone called her that...firstly she used to hate it bt then Rahul,..........Pata nahi har baat aake Rahul pe kyun ruk jati hai......

R- Ki hoya inna smile kyun kar rahi hai??

M- Bahut saalon baad yeh naam sunna isliye,....

Rahul was eating....suddenly he started coughing.....

M- haiyoo Rbaa..ki hoya??

She takes glaas of water & gives him.....pats his back.....

He looks at her.....her eyes were full of concern.....

BAckground music:
Kabhi an sukun aaya...
kabhi na karrar aaya...
jab se hai tumpe mujhko pyaar aaya...........
pyaar aaya....

M- Theek ho???

Rahul nodds...

M- Kya karte ho Rahul??? Ab chup chap khana khao...Kahte samy baat nahi karte...

R- Acha??? Abhi toh keh rahi thi---

M- Chup...khana khao....

Rahul smiles......

Hope u like it...sorry thoda chota part hai bt i will update the next part soon.........plzz comment...........
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey yaar i read all the parts i missed, i think it was two... I must say awesome yaar👏

You've got a really different story... so noow muski is taking him to japan😆 i mean goa😃 Thats good some RM goa moments😳😳 cant wait to see how the story goes since now rahul knows muski is single😉 ready to mingle😆😆😆 'koi mila nahi' tu nahi tha na rahul😳😳😳 i wish she said that but it would sound reli odd😊 Please update really soooooon😳 Im waiting😉

Luv
Nadz😳


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Posted: 16 years ago
YAyyyyyyy😃😃😃 I'm the first to comment on part nine😆😆😆 I'm soooo happy! after i added the reply for older parts i saw the update and read it... then your PM came😉

Lovely part yaar👏👏👏 awesome i loved it... the way muskaan almost told him, then realised and didnt understand herself... i loved how she was concerned and loved the song yaar, one of my favourite... it used to play on KYPH my all time fav couple Angad-kripa so i'm kinda in love with the song too... loved everybit yaar... continue soooooooon😛

Luv
Nadz😳

Edited by nadz_J - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow yaar lovely part loved it yaar mazedar part cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part!!
thanks for the pm!!
do continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Lovely part!!!
Thanks for the PM....

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