RM: Pyaar hai ya sazza...upd18/12pg48 LAST PART... - Page 13

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Posted: 16 years ago
yaar appu, whenever i think ki aaj please PM aajaye ki she updated, us s hi din i get a PM from u. Anticipation badhta mera after every part! You rock bachha! Such a cute part! loved it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
such a sweeeet update loved it..............
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Posted: 16 years ago
awsumm part do continue soon thxx for the PM 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
awww... ammy is gonna hate himself if he finds out rahul left cuz he thought he liked muski.. iknow its not his fault but im sure thats now how ammy will look at it.. and then the friendship stuff can be shown..lol im so good with ideas but when it has to writing, i suck.. anywayz enuff buot me... great part.. i wish muski finished her sentence..:( well continue soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks for the PM...
Loving this concept to the core...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awwwwwww this part was so cute ...i m soo happy to see rahul happy btw wat does "phitte muooh" mean?? i have heard it a lot but never understood wat it means 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks for the pm and amazing part. wow. its so weird b ecasue i was thinking about your story today and i was like wonder what will happen next? and you updated. i loved the update especially when muski says that in films best friends fall fir each and so will.....i loved that part. continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
lovely part thank u soo much for the pm and please continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome Part!!

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Update Soon!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 10:

RM had eaten their food.......Both were sitting on the couch.....

R- Main ek baat puchu???

M- Haan bol na....

R- Woh...main...tu ....woh....

M- Kya hua??? Bol na....

R- Armaan aur Ridzi ki shaadi kaise ho gayi??? I mean tu aur Armaan ek dusre ko pyaar...i mean.....

M- Nahi yaar..mujhe bhi aise hi laga tha bt Armaan toh hamesha se hi Ridzi se pyaar karta tha..main hi stupid thi....Pata hai jab tu London jaa raha tha na tab humara jhagda hua tha???

R- Haan woh kaise bhul sakta hu???

M- Maine na jane kya kya keh diya tha tujh bt main khud bahut pareshaan thi.....


Flashback:
Muskaan was very happy....

In canteen:

M(herself)- Aaj main Armaan ko apne dil ki baat bol dungi....Par kaise kahu main usko?? Main...Rahul ko puchti hu.......NAhi...woh toh busy hai...kal usko London jaana hai...yaar..main kisko puchu?? Mujhe direct Armaan se baat karni hogi....Ya....

Looks around......Goes near the nurse station......Lovely was sitting.....

M- Sister Lovely....

L- Ji Dr.Muskaanji....

M- Woh...Dr.Armaan ko dekha???

L- Haan ji Dr.Armaanji fire escape ki taraf gaye the ji....

M(smiles)- Fire esape.....Hmm..Thanks Lovelyji....

L- Welcome ji...koi khaas baat hai kya??

M- Aisa hi kuch samaj lo...

Lovely smiles.....

Muskaan goes to the fire escape.......

**Meanwhile**

Armaan on terrace.....

Ar- Aaj chahe jo ho jaye..main basket ko apne dil ki baat bolunga aur mujhe pata hai ki woh bhi mujhse pyaar kareti hai....Par woh confess karegi??? Kyun nahi karegi?? Main itna bhi bura nahi hu....in fact bahut aacha hu....Ya....

Armaan goes to General Ward.....Ridz is talking toa paitent.....

Ar- Dr.Ridhimma..mujhe aapse ek imp case ke baare me discuss karna hai...plzz???

Ridz looked at him all confused....

Ri- Case??

Ar- Plzz Dr.Ridhimaa..its urgent.....

Ri- Ok......Uncleji....main bhi aaji...aap yeh dawi lelo...ok??

AR came out of General Ward...

Ri- Armaan..yeh kaunse case ki baat kar rahe the???

Ar- Haan...ek patient hai....jisko dil ki problem hai.....

Ri- Heart problem?? Tumhe Rahul se baat karni chahiye..u know woh aaj kal chaya hua hai....(she said innocently)

Ar(slaps his forehead)- Rahul ko nahi samjhe ga...tum aao na....

Ri- Main???

Ar- Plzz jyada complicated nahi hai aur Rahul busy hai woh kal jaa raha hai na....

Ri- Ok....

Armaan brings Ridzi to fire escape.......

Ri- Yahan???

Ar- Kya hai na koi aur jagah itni happening hai hi nahi ki tumhe kuch bata saku.....

Ri- Matlab??

Ar- Woh ab choddo....Main apne paitent ke baare me keh raha tha....

Ri- Haan....kya problem hai usko....????

Ar- Usko ek aisi bimarii hui hai jiska koi ilaz nahi hai???

Ri- Cancer??? Bt u can treat it aur abhi toh tum keh rahe the ki heart problem hai.....

Ar- Aree yaar..tum meri puri baat nahi sunn sakti kya???

Ri- Ok...shoot....

Ar- Usko pyaar ho gaya hai......

(Ishq leta hai in background)

Ridzi quickly looked at him......

Ar- Aur ab usko din raat bas wahi ladki nazar aati hai ...uss ladki ne uske din ka chain raaton ki neend churali hai(he was walking in Ridzi direction & she was moving backwards..both lost in each others eyes....)

Ri(blushes)- Isme main kya kar sakti hu???

Ar- Tum hi toh sab kuch kar sakti ho.....

Ri- KAise??

Ar- Tumhe pata hai ki woh paitent kaun hai???

Ri(she knew everything bt...)- Nahi.....

Ar- woh main hu basket....aur woh ladki------

Ri- Aur woh ladki-----

Ar- Tum ho basket...i love u!!!!!

Ri- Armaan woh.....

Ar- Mujhe pata hai ki tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho bas ek baar keh do.....

Ri(blushing harder)- tumhe pata hai toh phir kya jarurat hai....

Ar- Maine kaha i love u toh u r supposed to say I love u 2.....

Ri- I love u 2........

AR hug.......

Muskaan standing in at the door of fire escape saw everthing.....her eyes were full of tears.......Armaan LOVED Ridzi........

The rose in her hand fell & she quickly ran to the terrace.......

M- Armaan Ridzi se pyaar karta hai aur mujhe laga ki woh mujhse......Shit..maine yeh socha bhi kasie ki armaan jaisa ladka mujh jaisi stupid laski ko pasand karega.....Ridzi hi uske liye perfect hai Uski aur Armaan ki jodi ek dum perfect hai bt maine-------(cries)

**Locker Room**

Rahul was looking thru some files.......

Udta hi phiru inn hawaon me kahin...
ya main jhum jao in ghantao me kahin...ek kar du aasma aur zameeeeeen..
kaho yaaron kya karu kya nahi....
Pehla nasha..pehla khumaar........


Armaan came singing this song dancing dreamily......

R(surpirsed)- Doctor chodke singer baneka irada hai kya???

Ar- Singer nahi shaayar.......

R- Kya???

Ar- Arz kiya hai...

R- Irshaad......

Ar- Unki nighahon ne hume dekha toh yu hua....
Unki nighahon ne hume dekha toh yu hua...
Unki nighahon ne hume dekha toh yu hua...

R- Aree aage bhi bol na....

Ar- Bhul gaya yaar...

R- Kya???

Ar- naya naya shayr baan hu na.....

R- Very funny...aur tujhe hua kya hai ek dum sathve aasmana me hai.....

Ar- Yaar Rahul tuhe kya bato?? MAine usko bol dia ki main usse bahut bahut bahut jyaad pyaar karta hu.....

R(felt bad)- Huh?? Kyun?? I mean wow...toh usne kya kaha???

Ar- Haiiiiiiii...woh bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai...yaar Rahul main bahut khussssh hu...woh bhi mujhe pyaar karti hai.....

R- Thats good..really.....

Armaan's pager rang.....he went......

Rahul sat on the bench.........

Muskaan aur Armaan ne apne pyaar kaizhaar kar diya....woh dono hi ek dusre ko pasand karte hai...Mujhe itna bura kyun lag raha hai..its okay..woh dost hai meri...uski khushi me meri khushi hai Armaan bahut aacha ladka hai...khush rahegi meri Muskii......Meri??
Rahul focus.................

Muskaan came looking sad.....

R- Hey Muskaan....

M- Hi....

R- Main bahut khush hu tere liye.....

M- Kyun??? Tum kyun khush ho mere liye???(rude)

R(taken aback)- Tera aur Armaan ka.....

M(angry)- yeh Armaan Armaan kya hai??? Har baar uska naam lena jaruri hai kya???

R- Kya hua Muskii??? Tum dono ka jhagda ho gaya kya???

M- Aisi koi baat nahi hai...

R- Dekh Muskii...jab hum kissise pyaar karte hai na tab chotii si chezzon me jhagda nahi karte....

M- Rahul plzz....mera dimaag pehle se hi ghuma hua hai tu mujhe aur irritate mat kar....

R- Muskii jab tak tu baat nahi karegi tan tak prob ka solution kaise milega??

M- Will u just shut up now????

R- Muskii???

M- Kabse pak pak pak kare jaa rahe ho??? Aur kis liye??? Kyun meri life itna interfere kar rahe ho??? MAin apni life khud handle kar sakti hu...Ok??? So plzz mere guardian angel baane ki jarurat nahi hai..i am fine.....

Rahul was completely taken aback...he was definately not expecting this.........

R- Muskii main toh sirf tere liye...

M- Enuf Rahul mujhe teri jarurat nahi hai.........ok plzz buzz off.............

Muskaan goes away angrily.....

R(tears forming)- Haan ab tujhe meri jarurat kahan?,..............

End of flashback

Hope u like it.....Sorry 4 late update ...actually i was busy with my b.arch admissions so.........plzzz do comment..........
Edited by Love_RM_MAYUR - 16 years ago

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