MayUr FF:- Together...Forever [Updt Chp 1-Pg 11] - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: prerna_agrawal

hey plzzzz add me too to ur pm list!! and update soon....

Sure prerna!😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

modern nups and serious Mayu ....is deadly combination ...i will love to read ur FF congrats on the thread .... add me in ur pm list 2😊

Thanks Sana dii...Yeh.. Nups is sort of Modern.😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Nishithini

hey kanika!!!!!!

I am really happy that you are writing this ff. I told you that I have read your first one shot 'one mistake' about 50 times. that was awesome. so I am sure that this ff will also be superb.
cant wait anymore. continue soon.
and DO PM ME.

Aww Nishii! Thanks a tonn.. I will!😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: xOxMwahxOx

hey please add me to ur pm list....update soon..i cnt wait

I have!😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ksdbstjodi

🤗Kanzzziii...🤗 Nikziiii!🤗
The intro rocked yaar..!!!👏..
Agar intro hi itna dhamakedaar hai, I wonder how would the FF be?😍
Cant wait for the first part..! Thank you Thank you!
BUT WAIT!...I am damn angry for you on one thing..!😡
How could u even say that..???😡😡..errrrrrrrrrrrrrrr😡😡😡..U said that you wont continue if you didnt get responce???😡
Are u crazyyy???🤪....Even if you wouldnt have got such a splendid responce whitin a day, I would have forced you to continue..lol..!☺️😆
DARE YOU RITE IT AGAIN!🤬..(I am giving an open-dhamki to you😆🤣)
Baappp ree!! Relax yaar.. I thought ki itne chote intro pe kaun comment karega😆 But i loved the response!😳
Wasie just lovelyyyy...waiting curiously for my next part!..👏👏⭐️
& also, update it next coz I need more inspiration to rite my new One-Shot..lol!😉 LOL..Sure suree!

Loads of love,
Niks😛

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dat was interesting yaar.........plzz continue soon...... waiting 4 it....... thanks 4 d pm yaar....... n ofcourse thanks 4 listening my prob yaar......... plzzz plzzz continue soon........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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~*Together...Forever*~
-Chapter 1-

NPOV
I closed my eyes & breathed hard on entering the college. This was going to be really bad. I was joining the college late and i knew nobody here, except ofcourse my sister & my cousins. But i couldnt ask my sister for support after all she was younger one & much much nervous than me. And my cousins, Uday & Dia.. Well, they didnt like us much. We had come from Ooty to continue with our studies and they looked at us as if we had come from some village or something. Huh. Dia was like 'Nupur, you wear jeans? i never thought so'..Wat does she think?

Well, Hello to everyone. Im Nupur.. Nupur Bhushan. I used to live in Ooty but shifted to Mumbai 2 days back. Im living with my cousins right now. My father is a small buisnessman in Ooty. I was glad we had shifted. I wasnt very Modern or something but i wanted a good career and Mumbai was the best place for that. My dream was to become a top Model or even better a Top Actress. I was very modern in my outlooks. But I didnt wear Mini Skirts or Short tops. But i wanted a good career i would do my best to get it. It wasnt like i would cross my limits but still. Im really Short-tempered and i can get irritated very very easily. Im quite confident usually. At present Im scared & Nervous. Its my first day at my college!😕

I bid good bye to my sister who was clad in a baby pink suit & looking at everyone nervously. Me & Gunjan didnt look like sisters. You could see that. I was wearing my Jeans & a White Kurti with a stole around my neck & my hair tied up neatly and she was wearing her pink suit. But We were really very close to each other. We just loved each other too much.😃

After that i started walking towards my lecture room which was supposed to be on the 1st corridor's end. I walked away nervously when my books fell down. I bent down to pick them up. I was always like that. I always ended up doing stupid things in hurry. Actually i ended up doing stupid things always not only in hurry. I saw a thin hand with a breaslet on which 'N' was written coming down and picking up some of my books. I looked up. She had her hair in a ponytail. She was wearing normal jeans top and looked nice & pretty. She gave the books in my hand & smiled at me. I smiled back.

She: New Student?
Me: Yeh..
She: I thought so. btw Im Nikita.
Me: Hi! Nice to meet you. Im Nupur.
Nikita: Which Year?
Me: 2nd.

[PS: Okay! I have no idea about colleges. Im just making this up.. I know there shud be some course and all.. but oh well..leave it.]

Nikita: Oh Great! You are in my class only. Come with me. Wanna be friends?

She asked me fowarding her hand. Woww! I couldnt believe. I got such a nice girl as a friend and it was not even 10 minutes since i entered this college. Looks like i was going to enjoy this college.

Me: Oh yeh Sure.


I shaked hands with her. She smiled!
We started walking towards our class discussing about each other. Well, more about me. I told her that my Dad had a sudden transfer and we came here. I had a younger sister in 1st year. She told me about her twin brother who was studying the same course and was gonna be in our own class. She told me that He was the BESTEST student of the class. But i think she forgot to tell me his name. And i didnt ask. We were soon chatting like good friends.

We entered the classroom.

Someone: NIKKI... Listen to me yaar..
Nikita: Oh Nupur.. You wait, i'll come in a sec.

I nodded.

I went to look at the Notice board of the room. There were many notices. I started reading some of them. 10 minutes were still left for the class. I got so busy reading the schedules of the class the didnt realise that when it got to late.

I realised that our teacher was almost coming. I rushed back to my seat & realised that someone was already sitting there. And Nikita was no where. God! I looked over and saw a bench with two seats empty. I rushed back there. I sat there with my books. I looked up and saw Nikita giving me an apologetic smile & them pointing at a seat which was beside a guy.

She mouthed: Im sitting here today. I hope you dont mind?
I smiled. Then nodded.
She mouthed: Thanks yaar!

I looked again at my notes.

Voice: Excuse Me. Is that seat free?
I looked up into a pair of black eyes looking rather staring at me. I was almost lost in them when i heard a noise behind me bringing me out of my dreamworld. Uff what was i thinking. What did he ask btw? Oh haan.. Now i remember.
He: I asked that Can i sit here?
Me: Oh.. Of course.
He: Thanks. Vaise this is supposed to be my seat. Main yahin baithta hun hamesha. SO you better dont sit here. You look like a new student so its ok for today
.

He was like sooo.. AKDU!! This type of Attitude.. Uh This just makes me irritated.

Me: Excuse ME! This seat doesnt belong to you. And btw there is no other empty seat left in this classroom. So i suppose I HAVE to sit beside you.
He looked around and saw that no seat was empty

He: Anywayz, Whatever. Just dont disturb me!
Me: You....

I stopped because our teacher had entered the class. I looked up & started taking notes.
Once a while, i looked at that guy. He had a serious face and was making notes. Ahh! What an Attitude. His name should be Sadu.

Oh yes Sadu it is!

And Thus i named that guy Sadu, not realising that he was soon going to be the most important person in my life!

*~*~*~*

Precap: Mayank & Nupur indulge intp the world famous senseless nok-jhoks. Nupur is shocked to know that Nikita's twin brother is no one else but Mayank. Mayank tries to warn Nikita about being friends with a mad girl like Nupur.😆
New Entries: Karan, CJ, Samrat, Benji.

*~*~*~*

I dedicate this part to my Sweetest Friend Nikita aka Riddhima for being always their for me. I hope you like your role!😳
So Guys! First Part Done! And now, Im going to write the next part from Mayank's POV from the start when he meets Nupur. Okay?😉
You all May not like their characters much, until they fall in love & complete each others negativity.😳
DO give me feedback. I love reading your comments! And sorry for this short part.. 5 hour School then 3 hour coaching. Came to home at 6pm. Pheww. Will try & Update Tomorrow. Im free tomorrow. Schools Closed :D


Love,
Kanika😳

Edited by Kanika05 - 16 years ago
Kanika05 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: mayank-nupurfan

hey dat was interesting yaar.........plzz continue soon...... waiting 4 it....... thanks 4 d pm yaar....... n ofcourse thanks 4 listening my prob yaar......... plzzz plzzz continue soon........

Thanks!! Anytimee!😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
hi konika.
nice starting .
i m enjoying a lot
continue it.
add me on ur PM plz.
faria



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Posted: 16 years ago
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i liked da first part
v.Interestin
Buh plz update lon parts yaar
m greedy!!LOL

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