My Mayur FF..Updtd Chp 12 Pg 42

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Ananya

@ananya_s

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#21

oh wow!!!!!!!!!!!!......this part ws sooooo awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....nupsi is so caing

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manju

@swarnima123

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#22

very nice dear continue as soon as possible.waiting eagerly for the next part.

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

ohh wow...i'm kept smiling throughout reading it!!

awwww...they still love each other sooo much even after 2 years of marriage!

the way he was trying to manao her....complimenting her designing of the sherwani and being all romantic....!

and nupur....so very caring! i could just imagine it....it was lovely!!

but uffff...you ended at that moment!!

Another scene i want to mention was the mayank and gunjan one...it was so adorable!! i loved how you showed their relationship!!

great part! update soon!

thanks for the PM...

Edited by hgrhr - 16 years ago

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Risha

@rishi_chan

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Hey it was tooo good!! PM me when you write the next part :)

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Tarandeep Kaur {Taran}

@frndship_trust

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

hey yaar....it was so briliant...awesome....really gud...touchy...yaar i have no more words to describe it..i was imagining it while reading....damn yaar it was so sweet n cute...loved it cant wait for the next 1....plz pm me when u update next part....cant wait to read it...