Dhoka - A story;new link-pg147;pts 1-22 pg-148&149 - Page 111

Originally posted by: esha143

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

hi dear
Awesome update . too good.
shal is really good friend and understand raj well.
flashback scene of naveen and chitra jee are too good.loved it.
so naveen bhi chahatha iye naina ki shadi raj se ho, good,
Raj jaan ke bahut khush hua.
loved the scene between raj and naina.

update soon.

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hii shilpa...

how r u?

Awesome part yaar 👏 👏 👏 👏

hi.. thanks for your comments... long time no see... 😉😉😉
glad you liked the udate.. 😃

Huda to sameera ko dekhke clean bowled hogaya...loved poojas blabbering about the lemonade

So neelu is on jalao alekh mission..thats why she asked karan to be her date for the ball...Neelu ne bahut acchi planning ki..alekh ko kitna gussa aaya when karan asked neelu for a dance
yeh tho sirf shuruvat hai... 😉😉😉 Neelu will do anything to get Alekh out of his shell and confess... 😉😉

Raj n shalus scene is so nice....raj ka insecurities n shalini making raj realize his feelings n how she teased him ...every thing is so fabulous...Raj ne shal ko naina ki identity batadiya..i mean naina is navins daughter... shal remembering the convo between chitra jee naveen..u have written so beautifully 👏 👏 👏
thank you ji.... 😃😃

Raj n nain scene is so beautiful n lovely...Naina told raj what she found about Major Nair..raj is so impressed
of course he will be... kitni smart biwi mili hai usko.. 😆😆

SO naina is a criminal lawyer...waiting eagerly to know what rajs reaction is for that Raj will understand he has a lot more to know about her.. 😆😆

totally fabulous part

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

👏....awesome fic........ really ur style of writing....very engrossing....& way u have potrayed rajveer 👏 👏....loved the way RN relation progressing...... wud wait 4 the romance in air & their confession to each other..... by the way whose gonna confess first???? raj 😳 😳 or naina 😊 😊.....
so continue soon ....... 😃 😃

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Please continue soon

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Once again two g8 jhatkas in an update.
I am really impressed by your writing skills dear. I think Dhoka is one of the best fics i read here.👏 👏 👏
aww.. thanks a lot yaar... 🤗 I am glad you like Dhoka so much... 😃😃

Amazing yaar, firstly Raj accepted that he loves Naina n i think us ko sab se jyada jhatka tab mila hoga jab us ko pata chala hoga ki us ko chod kar k sab ko pata tha ki he loves Naina.
of course... after all love makes one blind and he was blind to his own feelings until now.. 😆😆

Shalu is the only person i think who can make her realize her feelings that he loves Naina and she is now successful in doing it. Otherwise god knows what had happened to this dumb head Raj.
he would have gone back into his shell thinking he is not worthy of Navin's daughter until someone whacked his head and made hin understand... 😆😆

But the biggest jhataka Raj gave to Shalu was by telling her the real identity of Naina that she is Naveen's daughter and now Rajveer knows what Naveen wanted too about these both.
He wanted to get them marry n i think it was destined to be happen in a different way. All was gonna happen that they are to be of each other anyhow.
thats written in their Destiny that Raj and Naina belong together.. 😉😉

Here Neelu is doing a g8 work by teasing his boyfriend in a different way.She made her date to Karan, Yudi's best friend and Yudi was also shocked when he came to know about this.
kya kya karti hai Neelu Alekh keliye.. 😆😆

Obviously Alekh will give him a deadly glare , he will be unhappy and that's the symbol of his likeness towards Neelu which he was trying to hide. I didn't know that any one can bribe like this for making her boy friend jealous.
that is Neelu.. 😉😉 she can do anything to get Alekh to confess about his true feelings... 😉😉

Naina was unhappy looking Shalu happy as she is misunderstanding whereas Raj is happy because he knows about his real feelings.
Loved the scene b/w them when he held her. I know Raj is there always to support her and now he can clearly understand his feelings for her and Naina is confused i think.
you got it right.. 😃

But the most dhamakedar jhatka was when she gave him finally i mean told Raj about Nair and after that she told that she is a qualified Criminal Lawyer. I wanna see Raj's facial expression.
try to update soon dear.

Originally posted by: rajeev fann

will u be updating now????????????plzzzzzzz do that dear...i m waiing 😭

Originally posted by: rajeev fann

thankyouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu😃