THE LOST REFLECTION OF LOVE AK -AR part 4-pg8 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
#41
thnx dear....will surely come to knw by next part :)

Originally posted by: teri_susan

Thanks for the PM.Great parts.Why did Angad behaved weiredly with her?Then he is all being nice to her.Is he attracted to her at first sight?Curious to know the reason behind his ignorance and his changed behaviour towards her.Why did the class stared at them when they entered together?So now Kripa will play the Mishti's character.Continue................

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Posted: 16 years ago
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thnxxx ....dear........i think u hve read the part 2 read part 3..u will get to knw..cheerz tcc

Originally posted by: sweet_mittal

hey dear awesome part so AK talk so cute

i wonder what kripa was dreaming about
can't wait till they both couple fall in love with each other
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey great fanfic...lol little red riding hood..haha...and hmm angad reminds me of edward from twilight....and many of the parts are like it...like the one in class and him changing his schedule...but its cutee....is it based on twilight though?? or is his character jus like that??
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
hey loved the update..continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey thnx dear.......well yes i got inspired by twilight but its different concept though... somethings which really got me impressed are here...lol....neway i love the character edward alot....and angad too😳

Originally posted by: Smileyface

hey great fanfic...lol little red riding hood..haha...and hmm angad reminds me of edward from twilight....and many of the parts are like it...like the one in class and him changing his schedule...but its cutee....is it based on twilight though?? or is his character jus like that??

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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 4

"Ya So Mishty and Prithvi will be suspended "And their roles will be played by Kripa, Angad will be the same…..As you know class we are taking part in Interschool Classic festival….our school will be representing the act V giving a short summary of the other 4 acts…I have listed down all the characters name list out side the notice boards you main check it out….for now the class is over….." Sudden glimpse of happiness poked my heart was it because I will be with angad, sometimes I felt I m changing. Angad saw me and smiled at me….some girls were staring at us don't knew the reason what was….Riddhima soon joined me outside…we were checking out the roles….me being eliza..angad as Higgins not bad….Riddhima was to play opposite to Armaan who is Colonel Pickering, and guess what Mishty and Prithvi were playing Clara and Freddy who were sister and brother in the play…that was quite funny I couldn't stop chuckling over such note…the classes were over I was left alone in the class Riddhima and armaan were already out sometimes I felt they were cute couples but Riddhima hatred towards the word love was a fact she always reminded me…so never thought them more then friends but whatever it is they looked so cute. Together. I was about to leave, where there were my books again…..this time I had to take it by my own…. I piled up all the books in to my arms trying my best to keep them properly I was just staring at the books which were oppositely piled against my face…."boom" I realized I have hit somebody…I moved my face bit rightword..there it was he…."hmm so you need help…." "Hmm yes" thank god I thought to myself..He carried all the books just like carrying some chits….."So you always carry this all books" he asked me in his husky voice…."Hmm not really I just bought this books according to my syllabus" we were having small talks when I realized all eyes were on us…I felt it weird. Common now its enough…why to stare at some one….just like watching some matinee show. We soon reached to wards the car…Armaan and Riddhima were waiting…..She saw me and smiled. Now I really had to ask about this staring mess…I thanked him and he left with Armaan. We were at house now…we go fresh and had some snacks.

I was staring at the window enjoying the politeness the nature had, suddenly the door cracked I looked it was Riddhima, she joined me and sat beside me..."So what between you and Angad" she winked, that's it "hmm seriously nothing. I have to ask lot about it..." "Ask what "she replied, "Hmm I donno people was staring…I mean I felt it weird…." "Hmm I understand …but why to care about people….actually Angad never likes to be with anybody…..he was never in relation. so when you both were roaming around and he was kinda companying you people felt it weird….and besides most of the girls die for him which he never even bothers….trust me he is a very good guy" "hmm I know but he was just helping…whatsup people. I mean once or twice were fine but..." "I understand Kripa…he needs a friend though…..he only has armaan and me. But he hardly speaks to me…" "Hmm Ok" "but" "ok Kripa I will have to go…" she left….don't know why but that day I saw something strange on Riddhima face.

Another morning I got up as usual and got fresh joined aunty and Riddhima she was as like yesterday I think she was trying to hide something from me, but I never let the thing to stress on her. We left for the school I did not see Him, he wasn't there was he absent or he isn't there…..i really wasn't getting what was really going but I knew I was missing his presence…his presence gave me some sort of happiness though….the day passed away it was lunch break I joined armaan and Riddhima who were fighting as usual…."hey armaan" "hey beautiful" I made a face and sat beside them " So how are you" "I am cool…hey hey guys do you know something….next week will be a dance fiesta" "oh kool so you guys going" I just noted what I just said right now. I could see Riddhima staring at some other places avoiding my words "Hey relax. me with this chipkali no way…Armaan malik ko koi aisi chahiyeh jo khaass ho" Riddhima looked at him "Hey guys I have to have a word with Mr. peter join you guys soon" "Ok ridz take care" she left I looked at armaan "hey armaan…why don't you ridz.." he looked at me "Hmm….I would love to take her…..i want to take her…but when she wants….common I starving to stay her my words …she never lets me…she hates men besides she hates to love…to feel love…" "So that means" I was surprised "Yes I LOVE HER MADLY" "wow. Then why don't you confess ""hmm you know how she is ""hmm listen armaan I haven't been with her. But she is really hurt….don't know the reason neither tried because she is a very strong one…and never opens up" "Hmm I know" but trust me she loves you too" "Hey hey Kripa now enough of jokes she doesn't love me ok" He looked some where else" Bet me she will be with you next week" "Hmm bet" "FINE" I got up and stopped my feet's on grounds " Hey where is you friend" "Angad" he suddenly looked at me "hmm Angad he is been to his city to meet his parents " "Oh ok" I saw the strange expression on his face too…the unknown reason was killing me what was it. Why people were so shocked hearing his name "Hmm ok Kripa I have to go now" he left. I kept staring at him…..asking the reason.

I was walking towards the garden….to report Mrs. Laurence; something was really shocking what I saw….my eyes couldn't believe….

Dear friends here is the 4rth part hope it did not bore you as …do leave your comments….

Luv ya...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dear awesome part
so armaan love ridz but wonder if ridz really love him or she is just denying and what was the reason
so kripa start missing angad hope angad is doing so too
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
hi, i went thru ur fic and its cute 😊.
update soon and if possible plz pm me 😊.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
hey
cute prt.
hope AR get together soon.
pm me wen u update.
continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
hey gr8 part......
wonder wassup wid angad n wat did kripa c....
can u plz pm me wenevr u update...
cont soon....

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