THE LOST REFLECTION OF LOVE AK -AR part 4-pg8

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THE LOST REFLECTION OF LOVE

"Its time" the young lady of seventeen speaks to herself. Its time for changes to take place in my life, and I want it surely to be in a positive way. Don't know why my parents are sending me away from them, will they ever understand me what I feel, what I want to feel and the way I wanted things to be. Between the crowd ness of matters don't know when I lost the real me inside myself, I was seventeen still "immature" for my parents.

That is it, when Kripa Sharma the only daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Sharma is being sent away to live with her aunt and complete her studies, there she meets Riddhima who happens to be a great company to spend with and beside a great friend she is daughter of aunt Padma. It was her first day at her high school she wakes up and is happy for a new life or can say new change.

Ok guys here is the new concept will be updating the part one soon but before that you have to say about the storyline?there must have been several stories based on school life. This is yet another story based on four people Angad, Kripa, Armaan and Riddhima.

Angad: Stubborn nature has only 2 friends Armaan and Riddhima.

Kripa: Sweet and friendly apart from that very innocent.

Armaan: Total flirt freak, his best friends Angad and Riddhima.

Riddhima: Sexy and stylist but knows her limits well, Likes Armaan but never lets the feeling come out. As she things love is a loser's word!!! Best friend Angad and Armaan

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey, I like the concept. Please continue.All the best for the FF. Can you add me to your PM list?
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thnx...will surely do!!

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Hey, I like the concept. Please continue.All the best for the FF. Can you add me to your PM list?
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nice concept...
pplz pm me wenevr u update!!!
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hey a very attracting name of dis ff n intro is really nice
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nice concept.
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wow great Thank you for om please pm me when you conti...
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hey dear nice concept and intro loved it very much
can't wait till AK meet and AR to confess
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon
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hey amazing intro..continue soon..plzz PM me whnvr u update..
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LOST REFECTION OF LOVE----- PART 1

It was early morning, when I woke up I heard some sounds which were coming from downstairs which I probably guessed it. I came out of my room to see what was it, it was Riddhima and Aunty Padma. I kept staring at the sweet pair, how they cheered themselves and how cute their relation is and something really missed was Riddhimas dad. Suddenly Padma aunty caught me staring. "Kripa...Good morning beta" "Good morning aunty" I started climbing my steps downward, "Hey Kripa" Riddhima said with her sweet innocent smile."Hi Riddhima" "No Kripa ...you can call me ridz" "Oppz ok..Ridz" "Riddhima" Aunty gave her a stern look."Kripa beta why did you wakeup so early. I think you should have rest. you must be tired from yesterdays journey" "No aunty I am fine I had enough---" "Yes mamma Kripa Is fine and she will be coming with me to the school today" "No ridhimma..Kripa will be joining from tomorrow" "But mamma I already said my friends" "No Riddhima...Now I think you should leave" I kept smiling at them and loved the way their relation was. I was actually not ready for the school, because I had my stuffs to unpack beside I wasn't prepared, Ok you also need a preparation for going to school, I laughed at my own statement. Soon Riddhima left I was still standing over there. Padma aunty again broke my wandering thoughts "Riddhima beta…freshen up i will arrange breakfast for you besides you need to see the whole house" she winked at me giving me a farewell to have my own privacy. I climbed towards my room. I actually was so tired that I didn't have time to have a casual talk with anyone neither had a look at my room. It was made of wooden dcor, the floor was wooden having dark maroon carpet in the middle my bed was just near the window which gave a very good view of outside, it was face at west giving each view of nature. I soon realized that how cold it was in London, it chilled my hands I soon closed the window to avoid further chilling.. I felt the warmth in the room and was feeling like to sleep again as sleeping was one of my hobby beside painting and music. I came out of my room to search the washroom .I gave a look at the upstairs there were three doors it seemed one which was probably mine and other 2 door were unknown "Beta washroom is right there in the between.."Thanks aunty "I guess she had seen me puzzled thanks to aunty. She seemed really sweet. Then other door must be surely Riddhima I guessed. I soon freshened myself and dressed myself in jeans and full sleeve t-shirt which gave me warmth after such a cold bath. I was in my room my room was still warm…Padma aunty joined me having a tray full of breakfast "Hey Kripa here is your breakfast" "Aunty. you shouldn't have worried I would join there itself "Its ok beta…Common have it fast and yeah your mom called you I guess she even mailed you she was really worried…I think you should call her " She left , I was right she was a great person beside very sweet. I smiled and started dialing mom's number on ma i-phone which probably showed some network problem I kept my cell back. Had quick bites on the snack. Which was too much for me…I loved the coffee which gave me extra pleasure of warmth.

I was done with all things, the cupboard was empty, and it was small but was fine for me. There was also desk with a study lamp. The room was really simple yet pretty. Soon aunty made me introduced to the whole house, I was right the other room which was on the opposite corner of my room was Riddhima it was same as mine only the difference was she had posters of latest band…which gave me an idea about her craze for music. So we had something in common. The house was simple and was pretty and well developed compensating with aunt's affordable strength. It seemed that she was the only one who earned.

By now I was really bored, I tried all possibilities to cope up with ma boredom but nothing was really working out. Aunty joined me to help me out, she was really good, I could feel all figures in her besides being the mother she was a great friend I missed my mom. I went back to my room to try the call again…and yes I got it. Giving my all details about my health I kept the phone. I went near the window…and then I realized that actually the sun which was showing its half phase was actually setting making the sky turn darker…my eyes soon went towards the lights which were coming from a car it was BMW black color convertible. There I saw Riddhima , she was bidding byes to her friends…I could see a guy in black jacket making faces to her and laughing madly over some jokes which were going between them. But I couldn't see the driver.. the car soon faded along with that cracky laugh it was funny.

I went back downstairs to join them.riddhima was drinking water and aunty was of course on TV watching some serials. "Hey Kripa" Riddhima rushed towards me and hugged me "HI Ridz" "You should have come today we would have had fun" "Don't worry I will be joining you from tomorrow". She was a great company we kept on talking about our different likes and dislikes. And soon the time passed away when padma aunty shouted at her giving a motherly care to me as well. she went to her room and I to mine. The day was good not bad. But the very thought of tomorrow was really scaring me. Because the way Riddhima told me abt her campus was actually making me go crazy. I was nervous but I was cool because I love making new friends. I dozed off.

Another morning. this morning was of course different I soon got fresh and dressed up my self into jeans and blue top and of course a grey hoody sweater because today it was more cold than yesterday.Riddhima too dressed, her dressing styles was different from me though. Her was trendy but mine was normal. We left the house I was excited but nervous too.

Here is the first part hope it wasn't boring. Tomorrow will be surely the first meet of all friends with Kripa.do comment me and let me know how do u like it.

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