ANKAHI...{LRL-RN}note n page 157 - Page 27

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Hi Priya dear Hiiiii Sur...

akhirkar comment likh dia mene...actually my maths paer went horribly nd aisa hone k baad pc pe baithna is risky so mene res likh k chod dia par ab, i cant wait anymore!!😆 math is my fav sub..he he he...😆 😆 😆

wow! dats probably d word dat suits best dis ud....it was soooo sweet and emotional and lovely and romantic! kya baat hai...ek hi line me itni tarifain...thanqqqq dear...😃

Finally humara intzaar khatam hua nd Raj Naina se mil hi gaya! kash lrl me bhi yahi hua hota...Par un gadho ne mere hero ko maar dala...iske liye hum kabhi unko maaf nhi karenge...lekin ab Priya k hote huye uski fic me to RN ko milna hi tha na! Arre Raj ko mara kahan tha...use toh gayab kar diya tha...taki audience raj k wapas aane ka intezaar karte hue us serial ko dekhen...par sabb ko un ki chaal ka pata chal gaya...aur kisi ne voh serial aage nahio dekha...fir unhe akhir serial band hi karna pada...aur rahi baat meri toh main toh RN ko mila kar hi rahungi...chahe us k liye mujhe DEVRAJ ko supari hi kyoun na deni padd jaye...😆

Naina ko apne dil ki sun ke Raj k liye rukna chahiye tha. Par Raj to nikla hero, jeep leke pahuch gaya uske paas... is ud k dialogues bhi bahut touching and sweet the, sply, d one in which Naina says"aap hai na mera khayal rakhne k liye"..choooo chweeettt😳 thanqqq...thanqqq...thanqqq... maine toh aise hi likh diya tha...par chalo tumhe achha laga...😳

Song sequence was also very gud...i simply loved it!d timing was great...it was very nice wen it started raining...ab barshat me scene toh vaise hi romantic ho hi jata hai...😳 isiliye mujhe jyada kuch karna pada hi nahi...tum sabb sab kuch apne aap hi samajh gaye...

raj ka naina ko manane k astyle mujhe bahut acha laga...i think ab usey ye baat realise ho gai hogi k naina k liye vo kitna imp hai.... voh toh hamesha se janta tha...par kabhi zahir nahi karta tha...

allover gr8 work

keep up d gud work thanqqqq Sur...😃 😃 😃

nd ud dis one a little more frequently ok...main try karungi...

love

sur

Originally posted by: tanushree.panda

wow very romantic ud tha. i really like it. finally raj naina ka milan hogaya, thanks for the ud.

Originally posted by: esha143

vvery nice,simple n beautiful update.😳😳😳 Thanqqqqqq Esha...😃 😃 😃

u r a very sweet writer.😉 galat-faihmi hai tumhari😆

i hope they wud just get together more now and along with their friends have a great time.😊 hmmmm....dekhte hain...mera khaali dimag kya kya karta hai...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

wishing luck for ur exams👍🏼............ Thanqqqq😃

and waiting really eagerly 4 ur next update,byeeeeeeeeeee

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hi Priya?. 😊 Hiiii Yogitha...😃

How r u ? f9...wat abt u dear...😃

Thank u soooooooooo much....... not only for keeping your word but for the fabulous part also 😃 kya karti...tumhare dhamikiyaan jo aane lagg gaye the...aur tumhe toh pata hi hai ki main tum se kitna darrti hun...😆

The part is fantastic 👏 👏 👏 👏???beautiful one 👏 👏 👏 👏..?ab main jitni bhi taarif karu is ud ke bare mein wo kam hi hoga?? ab itni tarif karne k baad kamm kaise ho sakta hai yaar...Thanqqqq so much...dear...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

..itni acchi update deti ho aur tumhari har fic ki har update ke baad note likthi ho ye khass nahi??tum na ek dam paagal ho??he ?he..he 😆 😆 😆 😆? dont mind ........just kidding ...arre mind karne k liye dimag ka hona jaruri hai... aur voh jagah toh kabb se khali pada hai...aur vaise bhi main pagal hun...yeh main janti hun...mere paas toh doc Mana ka certificate bhi hai...😆 😆 😆 😆!!! parr seriously...mujhe laga is me kuch kami hai...matlab main RN k bich kuch aisa karna chahti thi thi...jo thoda touchy ho aur thoda romantic...parrr

The first part in the update is really beatifully written??naina ki uljan?..the fight between her mind n the heart?.its too good?.naina kitni dargayi jab salim khan ne usko jaldi chalne ko kaha aur phir wo baagke bahar aayi n she saw raj standing there n wo bina palk japkaye naina ko dekh raha tha ??..wow!!!!!!!!.???mujhe ye scene bahut acchi lagi??isse bhi jyada accha lagi jab raj ne naina ko hug kiya?..aur uska kehna main tumhare liye zinda hun ??.aaj main zinda hun toh us ki ek badi WAJAH sirf tum ho Naina...!!!"???the whole scene is really amazing one?u r an awesome writer yaar ...ab sirf thanqqqqq k alawa kuch nahi kahungi...😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj ne naina ko promise bhi kiya ke wo hamesha uske saath rahega ???its soooooo sweet???n by the way the song is perfect for the situation thanqqqq dear😃

Ab our cute sa gang will meet in srinagar?.?..alekh ,ali ,pooja ,huda ki entry hogayi??..waiting for yudi?.. Canteen scene is too funny?pooja ali ko dhakka mar kar alekh ko gale lagana??damn funny 😆 😆 😆 😆??aalekh ne bhi kya leg pulling ki sab ki??. sare frnz sath me honge toh thodi masti thoda mazak toh hoga hi...😛

once again i want to say the whole update is toooooooooo good .....n i simply loved it thanqqqq Yogitha...😃

All the best for your exams 👍🏼 arre is ki baht jarurat hai...thanx😃

I think ab ye kehne ki bilkul jarrorat nahi ........ waiting for the next part eagerly nahi...jarurat toh bilkul bhi nahi hai...😊

Originally posted by: danish1

fantastic............😊 thanqqqq Afreen...😃

naina ne finally apna gussa thuk diya.

aur rajveer as usual use manane mein kamyaab rahe.yupe...aur kabb tak gussa rahti😃

and all the friends circle in J&k.wowwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!

waiting for ur next update ..............its gonn abe fun with all of them back together😉 yupe...ab sabhi frnz sath hain toh thodi si masti bhi hogi...😃

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Priya, Hiiii Guglu....

Toh aakhir tune update kar hi diya. Fantastic update.👏 👏 👏 thanxxxxxx yaar....

Toh Naina apne dil aur dimag ke kashmakash me uljhi hui hai. Dil keh raha hai ki usse Raj ko ek mauka dena chahiye thea aur dimag keh raha hai nahi.😕 lyf me yahi toh do chizain hoti hain jo hamesha tensions dete hain...DIL n DIMAAG...uff

Aur isi kasmakash ke beech me Raj usse rokne aa gaya. 😊Salim khan ko bhejkar bulwaya to Naina to darr hi gayi ki kahin Raj ko kuch ho toh nahi gaya. Fir jab jeep ke paas dekha Raj ko to shuru ho gaya ruthne aur manane ka silsila. ab naina ruthi hai toh manayega Raj hi na...!!! kyoun ki ruthne ki wajah bhi vohi hai...

Mujhe Raj ke manane ka tarika bahut acha laga. 👏 👏 👏Na koi baat, na koi shabd, sidhe usne Naina ko apni bahon me bhar liya. Aur thodi der na nakur ke baad naina maan bhi gayi. Kaise na maanti jab hero itne pyaar se manaye to heroine ko toh maanna padta hi hai. kaise na maanti...mananewala Raj jo hai...😉

Aur mana ke saath gaana same ho gaya toh koi baat nahi. Veer- Zaara jab milte hain toh yahi gaana hota hai."The eternal meeting song."😊 😳 😳 😳 😊 veer-Zaara k kai songs baht khubsurat hain😃 😃 😃 😃...aur mana aur maine jaan bujh kar kiya tha...kya karen...hamara music composer bhaag gaya...ek hi song humain pakda kar...😆

Naina ka wo ek "Kyun" mere dil ko chu gaya. Aur Raj ka puchna ki mujh par vishwas hai was so lovely. Ab mila hi diya hai to confession bhi jaldi karwa do. kyaaaaaaaaaa....????nahiiiiiiiiii😆 😆 😆

Loved Ali-Pooja convo. Aur aise comment to sirf Aalekh hi maar sakta hai. Huda ki bhi achi band bajai Aalekh ne. Ab bas Yudi ki kami hai. Wo bhi aa jaye. next part me us ki entry ho jayegi😃

Waise Naaz aur Gunny ka kya hua??? next part me batati hun na...😃

Next update jaldi karna with some RN scenes. Warna tumhari pitaai ho jaayegi. hmmm...RN scenes...sochna padega...😛

Continue soon.

Love

Guglu

Originally posted by: sania_58

wow

awsome update

superb

mindblowing

too good

loved the update

very well written

great going

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was wonderful
finally RN ke bich sab thik ho gaya
plz continue soon with some RN romance

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

Hi Priya..how r u dear?? hiiii Neelu...i m f9 wat abt u sweety...😃

WOWWW...awesome part...!!! thanqqqqqqqq😃
Raj stopped Naina ..!!! 😳 👏 ..i loved that part... Raj did an awesome job ... 👏 ... So finally NAina said only one word which covered all her questions n all her emotions which she buried in her heart the time she recognized HIM...!!! kabhi kabhi bina kuch kahe hi sabb kuch kaha jata hai...😃
U described this scene soo well Priya.. brilliant job..!!! 👏 Thanxxxxxxx dear...😃
Now nothing can stop Raj to fulfill his promise made by him to NAina.. 😳 hmmm...tumhe mujh par itna bharosha hai...kya...????😛
Pooja is soo funny.. 😆 Ali and Alekh r the same.. ali is still so shy..and Alekh..well.. 😉
Huda is also there...Alekh shuru ho gaya...huda ko aate hi pareshaan kar diya..madam..🤣
gr88..the old team is together once again..now only Yudi n Naina aa jaaye..!!! next part me dono aa jayenge...😃

but naina to busy hai..ehehehheheh... 😉now its in Priya's hands how long she will make Naina busy....hehehehe...😉 arre nahi...main naina ko yahan anjani jagah par bz thode hi na kar wayayungi...us k liye toh main spl scene likhungi...😉
awesome , mindblowing update..... 👏 thanqqq...thanq....thanq....Neelu😃 😃 😃
Waiting for the next part...

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Kitna sweet update tha na yaar, par kahan start hua aur kab khatam ho gaya pata hi nahi chala jara bhi. ab yeh toh tarif hi hui na yaar...thanqqqqqq😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Raj ne aakhir Naina ka peecha nahi choda aur mujhe vishwaas tha ki vo is baar is mauke ko apne haath se jaane nahi dega aur Naina ko apni baat suna k hi rahega. aur nahi toh kya...??? Raj apni baat puri tarah sunaye baigair Naina ko jane kaise de sakta tha...😉

Ye Naina bhi na jab naraj hoti hai to kisi ki bhi ek bhi baat nahi sunti. Salim se bhi acchi help le li Raj ne aur Naina bhi dar gayi thi ek baar jab Salim suddnely aise andar aa gaya tha. phir se Raj ko khone ka darr abhi bhi hai use...

Raj ne kaafi had tak apni baat is song se keh di thi. Naina bhi kitna bear karti apna dard bus us se nahi raha gaya aur vo Raj ki baahon me aa gayi. Song selection perfect tha yaar. thanqqq...😃

Raj ne na kehte hue bhi us ki aakhein bahut kuch keh gayi hain. Naina bhi samajh gayi hai aur mujhe lagta hai ki ab jaldi hi dono k beech k saare confusions clear ho jaayenge. Raj ne Naina ko barish se hatane ki koshish ki to Naina fir se vaise hi pyaari bacchi ban gayi jaise pehle thi Rajveer k saath. naina ka sara zidd raj k samne hi toh hota hai na...har baat par us ka sab se jyada haq raj par hota hai aur naraz bhi usi se hoti hai...aur gussa bhi...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Par sach me ye episode itna khoobsurat tha ki is ko mai theek se desribe bhi nahi kar sakti ki mujhe kitna jyada pasand aaya tha ye vaala part. 😳 😳 😳 matlab mujhe teri taraf se certificate mil hi gaya...akhirkaar....!!! thanqqqqq Vertika...😃 😃 😃

continue soon.