A New Day Has Come ... Part 12 ... Page 92 !!!! - Page 18

Originally posted by: trouble_maker

LOLZ...none of them have commented ??? 😲😆 Do take out ur danda, lazy, lazy MPLs

And yupiee me loving the MayUr in ur FF lolzz

Originally posted by: trouble_maker

Aww ok then everyone else as sideys...dun mind it, as long as there's alot of SaJan hehe

U have already written it??? So when r u posting it??? lol
Yup, it's a pleasant change from all the FFs...that's why me likes this =P

Originally posted by: MohitSanayaFan

Oh, u used one of my most fav songs in Part 3 - every breath u take by Police....i seriously love this song!! 😳😳

same here riya ... i really like it and i was actually suppose to use another song .. changed it last min coz dis one made more sense 😳

am glad i chose this one now

Ok, I loved the SaJan gig date. Benjy is introduced, yeah! And CJ is in the fan fic too!
I like how Samrat complimented Gunjan and she blushed and thought about how long she took to get dressed (first date jitters lol).
Gunjan enjoyed herself after what seems like a really long time, thx to Samrat and i like how Samrat couldn't stop looking at her eyes (and the song "i'll be watching U" in the background) my 2nd fav part in the FF 😊

it was perfect...the dialogues, the inner thoughts of the characters...it wasn't too romantic (which is a plus since they just met and its a first date) yet u could feel they are starting to like each other...

....well yeah i dont wanna drag it ... but i want them to start liking each other first

Now onto Mayank-Nupur....the situations were perfect for their chaarcters. Nupur the experimental n impulsive girl deciding to walk outside in the heat. it totally goes with her character. Mayank getting sick of pointless bankers meetings where nothing gets done! its seems so like mayank to get sick of meetings which r more like social events where people just drink and eat.
Then Mayank finding Nupur and giving her a lift. mayank is pleasantly surprised that she said yes....so i guess he's starting to like her company, as strange as she may be lol

u wait wat she makes him do next ... poor guy will b cursing his stars 😆

i guess their parathas lunch will be in the next part

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yesh ..... go eat.... enjoy 😉

great job w/this part Kanz 👏 i love the fact that u added every breath u date to Samrat-gunjan's first "date"...it made it seem so special...awwww riya am glad u liked it ..... coz i wanted everyone to ummmm to like it as much as i did 😳 ... there was something in the words which amde the sceen sooo special

why can't MJHT be more like ur fan fic??

riya this seriously is a compliment for me and like gunjan am totally flummoxed 😳

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

lovely fic dear
i juts loved
will be glad to know when sammy find out about gunjan's singing
and nupur finding mayank sadoo
hehe he is adorable main
and nupur too good for him
do continue dear
bye sumi

woohoo gr8 updates kanika..

i read all the three in one go....😆

Originally posted by: falak01

woohoo gr8 updates kanika..

i read all the three in one go....😆

enjoyed samrat-gunjan convo..and now mayank-nupz...

lovely updates..👏👏👏thanx 4 d pm....😃😃