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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Thank you both for the great update

YuVi interaction is soo cute
Kinda wish Vrinda would tell Yug what happened between her and Sunny
Sunny definitley seems pychotic
Glad Yug punched Sunny
Wonder what Sunny is going to do next
Thanx for the PM

Thanks for the comment 😃
I know I am glad Yug punched him as well😆😆
You will have to wait and see until the next update😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: urmee

well,teji lent me his gun i didnt use it.......😛
Aww so sweet for not using the gun 😆😆 But can I say I am still upset😭 you thought of using it😛
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo late update...but ok, chalo thik hain....
omg......omg.....yuvi,tunnel,waterfall,rain,sea shore,wave..............soooooooooooooo many romantic things together........and it turn me in a romantic mood.loll
😆😆Well we do aim to please
i'm staring with the scene i didnt like...................VRINDA'S DREAM SCENE....................omg...............this psyco sunny is annoying me.i hate him.the dream scene was sooooooooooooooooo scary.i just read the part so swiftly (may be missed some lines..hehe).....btw,who was in mental asylum?sunny or vrinda?😕
No one yet, 😆😆 Sunny took her to a mental asylum, its alright nothing important I think 😕
then vrinda's tight hug..😳..i wish the hug could be more longer and yug would enjoy it....anyways as it's a yuvi hug ,i loved it.
i loved the fact how yug is caring vrinda and vrinda is depending on yug.😃
YES............ vrinda got it right...yug is the hero.mwa.
Hehehe well she has to get it right somewhere, heheheheh I don't think Sunny will be her Hero anytime soon😆😆
omg...the tunnel and the water fall.....i can't express how i was feeling...it was like my dreamland u know, sapno ki duniya. i also kinda believed like vrinda that yug may did summin with victoria..hahah and was angry.then yug made me laugh when he told about the twin.....loll.i was wishing some more sweet romance in the tunnel😉
i was mad at vrinda when she refused to tell about her past saying that she just met him....uff,just the real vrinda whome i hate.😡
Aww Urmee, lets put it this way she will do when the time is right, if she revealed it all now then you miss out of romantic YuVi
awwwwwwwww.....how much carefull yug is about vrinda.he didnt want vrinda to get wet....😳😳😳
ooooops again sunny.......hey,why he is telling he is ok now.is he realy ok?and i dont want vrinda to have any weakness for him.......
omg ............. omg..............omg.......which night sunny is talking about and what they did that night???😲nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo,pls dont make anything worse.
Wait and see😆😆
hahahahahahahahaa......yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy...yug punched sunny..................yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
PARTAY!!!
most of all i'm loving every single thing of yug....he is caring vrinda soooo much.he wiped her tears....took her to the sea shore to make happy..................i love yug always...
the sea scene was the best part of this update.......sana and niki,u both deserve million of hug 🤗from me for this scen.it was heaven.realy,i felt like heaven.i was day dreaming.the scene was like happening infront of my eyes.i could see two angel running and playing in the sea in rain......................if i describe my feelings,it will be too long...........what i can say is,the scene was awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwsome,mindblowing.it wasnt extra romantic but too much sweet which i loved.
Aww thanks you so much sweetie and a hug 🤗back!
is there anything left by me ???ummmmm,sunny ruined yug's father car....bloody hell...
😆😆
overall nice update,sooooooooooooo sweet update.i loved it.
great job............(m i buttering up tooo much???😉 hehe)....no,u guys realy did a very very very good job.⭐️
love u.mwa..............
Thanks for the comment!
Nice try with the buttering will update when we can! 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: premeer928

hey
that was awesome guys....loved it....👏👏👏 yug is so cute....so concerned for vrinda...😛 I feel so bad for vrinda...stupid sunny....😡 hope he leaves soon....continue soon...and thanks for the PM....😊


love
Afreen

Thanks for the comment Afreen 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ shehryeen and Aabrayy Thanks for the comment 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Binky

wow awesome update guys loved it but seriously that Sunny is giving me the creeps man he totally freaked me out man wish Vrinda would tell Yug everything that too soon before Sunny comes and messes everything up

Thanks😃 I know hope she does as well 😆😆
loved the YuVi beach scene and i love the way Yug cares for Vrinda its damn cute and that walking through a tunnel holding hands man i just loved that.
loved the update guys Sana and Niki gr8 job guys tnx for the wonderful update👏👏👏
Thanks for your sweet comment 😃
p.s Priyanka cant believe that you still love Sunny even after reading the update well i guess thats what you call true love right 😃

I know it must be true love even I was thinking the same thing! 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
@Nida, Shabs and Mana
UNRESERVE!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar Yhu Listened To Meee Yhu Updated :d Thankk Yhuuu Yhu Did awesommmmeeeeeeeeeee Love- Iqra
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Posted: 15 years ago
ok first of all
massive tight hugs to the pair of you for writing another fantabulous update.
hand on heart i loved it.
personally i dont think anyone is as majnu over this FF as me.
and i will honestly try not to reserve again, i know how annoying it is to be on the other end waiting for it to get unreserved (but u know wot, u cant really say anything after the amount of time you guyes made us wait to read it !).
right...about the update......welll
while reading the whole thing, i had this strange feeling...well apart from all the other lovely emotions i was feeling that i will talk about in a bit.
actually, it made me feel like i was watching some kind of a romantic spy thriller.
i mean yug taking her thru that security passageway was just awsome. never in a million years would something like that come to my mind.
yug is totally like james bond and im LOVING IT ! well hes jnr 007
vrinda is the perfect bond gal and sunny the perfect villain.
the setting is great, flashy cars, and tech stuff, its awsome !
oh and then the flashback, very well written. and very FREAKY i must say, but glad to know a bit more about what happened.
the hug was awsome, and den her holding his hand..wah..wah..wah. love love love the yuvi moments, but i swear to God yug wrecks dem by acting all cocky about how gals want him.
it can be such a mood kill sometimes.
ok we know hes a ladies man, and everyone wants him, but plz, dont remind us ALL THE FRICKIN TIME !!!!
omg just as they are having a decent convo, and she isnt being all reserved with him, he brings up another gal.....i cud have strangled him den !
but im still extremely happy that yugs softer side is coming out. i go gaga reading how he feels protective over her.
by the way, well done for that punch. i loved yuggie there. what a hero. i was literally shouting goooooo yuggie. he shud have beat sunny into a pulp, a big ball of mash...but i guess the psyco is still around for a bit longer
seriously guys this update was awsome. i was happy and giddy and exited through out all of it. and by the end of it my face was red as the blood was rushing to my head.
i dont how ur gonna top this update, but so far all ur updates have been better than the last.
but i am extremely eager to read the next part, forgods sake if you can, plz make it longer....(you know as i was reading this, i kept looking at the side bar to see if there was still more left to read, i just didnt want it to finish)
im dying to see sunny get his head smashed by jnr 007. plz make it happen soon, im sick to death of psyco sunny scaring vrinda.....but then...on the other hand, the more he scares her, the more she goes running into yugs arms.....ok for now keep him....but he needs to die SOON ok !
and yuvi need to romance MOREEEEEEEEEEE (oh i feel light headed)
ok i know theres plenty more i wanted to say, but again really tired. and im not liying when i sed that i loved EVERY SINGLE LINE !
ive tried threats, ive tried being nice....honestly if you gals dont update soon now, ur gonna have a mutiny on ur hands.......GET ON WID IT !
p.s love you loads❤️❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: shab_rules


Wait is there a response! 😃
OMG its from Shabs 😲😲😲
Am I dreaming?😕

*Faints* 😆😆😆


ok first of all

massive tight hugs to the pair of you for writing another fantabulous update.

Aww Hugs back! 🤗
hand on heart i loved it.
personally i dont think anyone is as majnu over this FF as me.

😆
😆😆 Trust me I know 😛
😆
and i will honestly try not to reserve again, i know how annoying it is to be on the other end waiting for it to get unreserved (but u know wot, u cant really say anything after the amount of time you guyes made us wait to read it !).
Just in my defence I usually unreserve in a day maybe 3 days max but two weeks Shabs Two whole weeks later or its three weeks now! 😆
right...about the update......welll
while reading the whole thing, i had this strange feeling...well apart from all the other lovely emotions i was feeling that i will talk about in a bit.
actually, it made me feel like i was watching some kind of a romantic spy thriller.
i mean yug taking her thru that security passageway was just awsome. never in a million years would something like that come to my mind.
yug is totally like james bond and im LOVING IT ! well hes jnr 007
vrinda is the perfect bond gal and sunny the perfect villain.
the setting is great, flashy cars, and tech stuff, its awsome !

Double 007!!
😆😆😆 Oberio Yug Oberio!! 🤣
oh and then the flashback, very well written. and very FREAKY i must say, but glad to know a bit more about what happened.

😃
the hug was awsome, and den her holding his hand..wah..wah..wah. love love love the yuvi moments, but i swear to God yug wrecks dem by acting all cocky about how gals want him.
it can be such a mood kill sometimes.
ok we know hes a ladies man, and everyone wants him, but plz, dont remind us ALL THE FRICKIN TIME !!!!

omg just as they are having a decent convo, and she isnt being all reserved with him, he brings up another gal.....i cud have strangled him den !

Aww Sorry Shabs but these girls are a big part of his life! 😉
but im still extremely happy that yugs softer side is coming out. i go gaga reading how he feels protective over her.
by the way, well done for that punch. i loved yuggie there. what a hero. i was literally shouting goooooo yuggie. he shud have beat sunny into a pulp, a big ball of mash...but i guess the psyco is still around for a bit longer

Hehehehe relax the anger, without Sunny the psycho how are YuVi going to get close 😉
seriously guys this update was awsome. i was happy and giddy and exited through out all of it. and by the end of it my face was red as the blood was rushing to my head.

😆
😆😆 Aww, breathe Shabs breathe!


😆
i dont how ur gonna top this update, but so far all ur updates have been better than the last.

Stop adding pressure 😛
but i am extremely eager to read the next part, forgods sake if you can, plz make it longer....(you know as i was reading this, i kept looking at the side bar to see if there was still more left to read, i just didnt want it to finish)

How much longer do you want us to go, we might as well write up and abstract and then leave it with that! 😆😆😆
im dying to see sunny get his head smashed by jnr 007. plz make it happen soon, im sick to death of psyco sunny scaring vrinda.....but then...on the other hand, the more he scares her, the more she goes running into yugs arms.....ok for now keep him....but he needs to die SOON ok !

Shabs please respect Mana's feelings ok we can't kill the love of her life! 😛
and yuvi need to romance MOREEEEEEEEEEE (oh i feel light headed)
ok i know theres plenty more i wanted to say, but again really tired. and im not liying when i sed that i loved EVERY SINGLE LINE !
ive tried threats, ive tried being nice....honestly if you gals dont update soon now, ur gonna have a mutiny on ur hands.......GET ON WID IT !

A Mutiny 😆😆😆 now that I want to see! 😃
p.s love you loads❤️❤️

Love you too ❤️

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nikita_88

Thanks for the comment Alsha 😃
Hehe so many questions, I wish I could answer them but if I did then there would be no reason for you to read on but all will be revealed soon! 😆😆
@KMH 😆😆

thik hai ji .. reveal maat karo par update to karlo 😉

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