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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Nice shot. A very different concept where Sujal n Kashish hate each other. But then I luved the turn of events.

Everything was so sweet. Specially the confession, where Sujal out of rage said dat he luvs her. And then Archie getting the shock of her lyf n finally the cute convo of SK. Too gud!!!!

It was really gud. And yes, Thnx 4 the PM.

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Nice shot. A very different concept where Sujal n Kashish hate each other. But then I luved the turn of events.

Everything was so sweet. Specially the confession, where Sujal out of rage said dat he luvs her. And then Archie getting the shock of her lyf n finally the cute convo of SK. Too gud!!!!

It was really gud. And yes, Thnx 4 the PM.

thanku so much i'am happy you liked the turn of events... pyaar hotha hii aise hai kabhi inkaar, kabhi takraar, kabhi ikraar aur kabhi beshumaar pyaar....😆😆😆

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Deepa

@spvd

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+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

surya dear very cute love story.................started with hatred and ended with love...............not ended but beginning of love.................

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Sufia

@.x.Shilky.x.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Heyy ...

gd updates n thnxxx 4 pming m....4 ur update!!1

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kashish

@goodkashish

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

hi suri...first i m sorry for late reply.😕😕😕..it was a very beautiful story as usual..👏👏👏..i really like the way sujal n kashish get married..😊😊😊.than become friends...😛😛😛.than they started to love each other..😳😳😳...and than finally they become husband n wife...👏..these little steps will help to make their relation strong..😃😃😃...and than every step is as important as any other.⭐️⭐️⭐️..i like the way they both stood up each other to fight archie..😆😆😆..bcoz its one good thing that they were sharing their feelings to each other without hiding it...😳😳😳....i love the way they confesion each other..😳..so it was a woderful story..👏.i just loved it so much..⭐️⭐️⭐️.ple write some more as u know how much i love Sujal n Kashish characters...😉..thanks

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Kashish

Edited by goodkashish - 16 years ago

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tanisha

@tanu.g

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

wowwww suri its beautifull i loved to read it ........its really really nice dear keep it up ..........n waiting 4 more short stories frm u coz i really njoyed to read it ........... n very well written outstanding .........

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

amazing one shot

i really likeed the way u developed SK'S relationship from being enemies to becoming life partners.i liked the scene were sujal says to archie that kashish's is his wife and he was actually happy to say that kashish was his wife.

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Edited by Iqbal Neha1 - 16 years ago