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mithilalovesksg

@mithilalovesksg

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+ 7

Posted: 16 years ago

#51

hey deepu

great part dear dont ever tell u we dont like your part good one

continue soon waiting

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Sangya Shrestha (Prefer to go by Soniya or Soni)

@kajenlover4ever

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#52

hi guys... special hi to sanju di and deepu.. AWESOMMMMEEEE part guyss!!! Feel like singing "Chura liya Hain Tum Ne Jo Dil Ko..." hehe anywayss.. thnk u for sum awesome parts guys..

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Misha Rai

@DMG4EVER

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#53

I dnoo why ii havent come across this before .. but im glad ii have now .. Warda ii know that you are a fabulous writer anywayz so ii dont think ii need to repeat myself on that ...

jennykaran ur parts were ever so sweet ..

AND finally Depu!! MY OH MY SWEETY!! The lehnga was beaituful an dii can imagine Riddhima in it ..

*FAINTS*

Why does ARMAAN HAVE TO LUK SO GOOD!??!!

=] Misha

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Sangya Shrestha (Prefer to go by Soniya or Soni)

@kajenlover4ever

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#54

thnk you dmg4ever... sorry dont know ur name... my name is soni...

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Lavender21

@Lavender21

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#55

Hey awesome ff. Do continue soon!!!

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sanju

@Sanju_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: jennykaran
hi guys... special hi to sanju di and deepu.. AWESOMMMMEEEE part guyss!!! Feel like singing "Chura liya Hain Tum Ne Jo Dil Ko..." hehe anywayss.. thnk u for sum awesome parts guys..

thanks my dear for your special hi....i'm glad you liked it.

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Sangya Shrestha (Prefer to go by Soniya or Soni)

@kajenlover4ever

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: jennichait_kasu

thanks my dear for your special hi....i'm glad you liked it.

it was worth liking... it was amazing.

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warda

@wardahere

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: aarora

thank u so much sweetheart..glad u thinking to continue ur ff..ll definitely wait for updates from u now..n yeah luv ur style of writing..do PM me whenever u update..
luv ya..

Ur welcome babes...even iff ii wrie a new FF..
iss gonnna be for yhu..=)
since you woke my lost soul UP LMAOO..
buttt yah...
THANKYOU
awwwwwwwwwwwww..ii totaliiee love yhu for saying that LOL..!!!
ohh pshhttt i'll DEFINATLIIEE pm yhu..my story..
hey may be imma rite a new one...=)
LOL
yhu know how ii am hahahahha
takecare
wardA<3

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Sangya Shrestha (Prefer to go by Soniya or Soni)

@kajenlover4ever

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#59

plz someone cont... i m waiting impatiently..

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Sangya Shrestha (Prefer to go by Soniya or Soni)

@kajenlover4ever

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#60

since no one continued, i thought i would... here it goes...

Armaan finally enters his room only to find his wife sitting in the middle of their bed with a ghungat on her face...

This is their room and it is decorated with red and white roses.

Armaan looked at his newly-wed wife very lovingly. He went over and sat on the edge of the bed. He stared at her, still with her ghunghat over her face for long moments' then said: Riddhima, aaj bhi tum sharma rahi ho? (He slowly put up her ghunghat. He expected to see a beautiful girl, full with innocence, his own Riddhima. But' instead, he saw his new sali, Muskaan.)

Armaan: AHHHHH!!! (Jumps up from the bed) Tum.. tum.. yeha kya kar rahi ho?

Muskaan: Tumhe kya laga, JIJAJI (she takes the ghunghat fully out of her face) hum tumhe itne aasani se chod denge? Bilkul nahi!

Armaan: Lekin tumhe chahiye kya??

Anjali and Nikki pop out of the curtains and Anjali says: Humme kya chahiye hoga, Armaan?

Armaan: (sarcistically) Chi, chi, chi. Tum logo ko sharam nahi aati? Apne jijaji se paise lene main?

Nikki: Arre! Kahe ki sharam? Ab jaldi dedo nahin to baithe raho. Hum apni Riddhima tumhe nahin denge!

Armaan: Arre, lekin Riddhima hain kaha?

Anjali: Armaan, tum bohot baatein karte ho... jaldi se paise dedo! (holds out hand)

Armaan: (mumbling to himself) Pyaar main kya kya karna padhta hai. (places the money in Anjali's hand)

Anjali counts the money: Thoda kum hai lekin kaam chalega' Chalo, Nikki, dikha dete hain unko Riddhima!

The girls (Anjali and Nikki) split in the middle and out comes Riddhima. Armaan breathed a sigh of relief for two things:

1.) He finally got to see Riddhima. And'

2.) She wasn't wearing a ghunghat over her face.

Armaan started staring at her and admiring her beauty, while the sali's were giggling looking at Armaan stare at Riddhima.

plz.. comment/criticize..

Edited by jennykaran - 16 years ago

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