MayUr FF-BeeTe LamHe, PART-4 [pg-15]

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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: falak01

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superb..mind blowing....fantabulous...👏

mere paas words nahi bache....

are yaar kya accident tha....muaaahhhhhh...and kya fight thi......muaaahhhh...i m sure ki main part aur bhi rocking hoga...😆😆

loved the armaan-dad-mom-nupz convo...aisa lag raha tha ki main bhi wahi kahin hoon....very very nice update....👏👏👏

thanx 4 d pm...

waiting anxiously 4 d next part....😉

thanx a lot falak !!!

😳😳

and tere smiley ..........love them

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: hazel94
kl thx cant w8 for myur scenes
btw thx for the pm

thanx a lot

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Posted: 16 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: mohseena
yaar itna acha likhtay ho aur phir u ppl write hope u liked it!!!.iznt that obvious !!!!>............im crazy abt mayur ffs!!!>and urz is no exception!!!!
keep it up
aisay hee juldee juldee update kurtee raho
lolz!!!( i sound like a budhii amma giving duaz )

lolzzz !!!!!

glad u liked it jii

muahhzzz

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: adi_gupta
first thx for the fast update ruchi love u for this part yaar
hats of to u accident to nups or mayu ko mila he dega

yaar very interresting curies to know what happen next

thanx yaar

glad u liked it

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Posted: 16 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: cuppycake990
good job ruchi...
kia baat hai....👏
keep it up..

do update soon...
thanx for the PM jaan..

luv..aisha....

love u aisha 😳

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Monica

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Posted: 16 years ago

#56

kya baat hai ruchi!!!

awesome!!....just loved it!!!

its great to see armaan & nupur bro-sis love!!

really like the characters sketch!!

ok cont when u want!!

see yaaa

love uuu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#57

thanx a tonn ...

glad u all liked the plot

nxt part coming today :)

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Swati

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Posted: 16 years ago

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FANTASTIC!!!!!! STUPENDOUS!!!!!! MINDBLOWING!!!!!!!!⭐️
do i need 2 say nythin more??????god bless yaar...
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Part--3

Nupur was sleeping peacefully in her room..when she left somethng thumpong going around...ahh..she never liked anyone to disturb her sleep !!!..the thumps were jst like someone banging hammer on her head !!...

nupur : ahh..yeh kya hai..[yawning badly]..

she pulled off the covers and looked at watch ...it was jst 5:00am

she went in the most lazy manner to the balcony..from where the sound was heading..

still rubbing her eyes and she went to balcony...

nupur : abhi dekhte hoon kaun hai yeh ....

as she looked out of balcony , she noticed that her neighbours have basket-ball court in there back-yard and someone was dribbling the ball there

she narrowed her eyes to get a better access....he was wearing boxer with black vest on..

nupur : yeh ladka...hmm....

she again looked carefully and shock came across nupur....

Nupur [screaming] : yeh toh woh mercedes waala hai...!!!!!!...chiiii

the guy who was bsy dribbling..heard someone scream....he turned back and he gasped

he saw nupur standing in her balcony..her hairs were coming on to her face , and her futile attempts to remove them..

Guy : yeh woh BMW waali hai...haan wohi hai

he smirked and went near the partiton wall of the two houses..

Guy : subah subah kyun chilla rahi hoo ??...inborn defect hai kya

nupur was shcoked !!

Nupur : tumhare shakal subah subah dekhle hai..agar defect nahin bhi hoga toh bhi ho jayege !waise tumse baat karna bekaar hai...aapna yeh stupid dribbling band karo abhi !!!!

Guy : mein tumhare baat kyun maanu ?aur waise bhi ..mein yeh band nahin karunga..mere marzi hai !!

Nupur : tum mere neend disturb kar rahe ho.....mujhe sona hhai

guy smiled at her, she was still a kid...but after that dhansu fight ...he was not gng to leave her easily

Guy : u are such a lazy poke !!..its already 5 am

Nupur : bol toh aise rahe ho jaise din ke dus baj gayi hoon...mujhe kuch nahin pata...stop this now !!

Guy : i wont

the arguemet continued like this..but the person sufered the most was Armaan who was sleeping in the room nxt to nupur's

Armaan : yeh kaun do stupid log hai...[ his hands reached to the alarm clock which he kept near the side table ...it was jst 5:15am...] ahh...sone do yaar !!

saying tthis ,he again pulled on the covers , but in vain..the screams were becoming louder and louder...and then only somethng stuck him !!

Armaan : yeh toh nupur hai !!!

he pulled off the covers and ran out of his room...mom-dad were out on walk and the screams were coming from nupur's room

as he entered , he saw nupur standing in balcony and screaming..but someone else was reciprocating her back

Armaan : noni kya kar rahe hai [he moved towards nupur ]

nupur turned around and saw armaan there

Nupur : bro dekho na..yeh stupid ladka !!..arggghhhh

armaan looked down and saw the guy , he has now made himself seated cmfortably on partition wall...Armaan waved a ''hii'' to him

Armaan : WASSUP !!!

nupur fumed at this....wassup ????..yahaan mere neend kharab ho gayi hai aur bhai pooch raha hai WASSUP ???

before the guy culd reply..nupur spoke

Nupur : kya WAASUP ??..isse bolo dribble karna band kare

Armaan : noni...kya hua ?

Nupur : mere neend disturb ho rahi hai..iss ladke ke-

Armaan : isska naam Mayank hai

Nupur : jo bhi ''ank'' ho ...

Mayank : oye...kabse boli jaa rahe ho...mera naam Mayank hai...koi ''ank'' nahin

Nupur : zaada saunk hai naam batane ka toh ek borad lekar ghooma karo ''MERA NAAM MAYANK HAI''

Mayank : shut-up !!..tum aapna naam dekho..''NONI'' huh

Nupur : mera naam Nupur hai..and dont dare call me ''noni''...

Mayank : kyun ??...noni par tumhara copy-right hai !!

Nupur : haan hai...toh..tumhe koi problem hai

Armaan : dekho..tum dono

Nupur : isse bolo chup kare

Mayank : tum isse bolo....tumhare behan pagal hai...

Nupur : how dare u say this...i am gonna kill u

Myank : waise ''nupsi'' naam kaisa rahega...see --''nupsi-pepsi''..''pepsi-nupsi'

Nupur : stop-it u moron

armaan was loking at them helplessly , they both were fighting like cats and dogs..

Armaan : thats it !!...bahut ho gaya tum dono ka !!..noni ..mom-dad aane waale hain..they are gonna go mad at u then and mayank..plz yaar..!!

nupur lowered her head and went towards her room and mayank nodded and went inside

Armaan : 'phew''...not bad armaan !!!

recap : riddhi coming to meet nupur and nupur's first meeting with shilpa

Edited by ruchimayur - 16 years ago

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shinella

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Posted: 16 years ago

#60

awesome
ruchi
sooooooo cute
reminds me of old mayur days
well update soooooooooooooooon

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