MayUr FF-BeeTe LamHe, PART-4 [pg-15] - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
Woww, another FF of urs
i will surely continue reading it if u updatešŸ˜›
doo contune soon, awesome start, cant wait for moree
ur writing is always excellent, do i need to say that? naaa
doo update soon and add mee to ur PM list
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: sonakshi

Woww, another FF of urs

i will surely continue reading it if u updatešŸ˜›
doo contune soon, awesome start, cant wait for moree
ur writing is always excellent, do i need to say that? naaa
doo update soon and add mee to ur PM list

awww..thanx so much sonakshi !!!
u made my day
muahhzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
ok i wait for the update how much time you take for the update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

ok i wait for the update how much time you take for the update

by evening yaar
character-sketch ke saath !!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
awesome šŸ‘. gr88888.šŸ‘šŸ¼. plezzzzzzzzzz update soon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
i loved the concept ruchi...
lovely part...šŸ‘
i m looking forward to this ff now...
i escpecially love the song u have chosen as the title..😃

update soon..

luv..aisha..

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Posted: 16 years ago
#37

this is according to there life 5 years ago

Sanjay Gupta : Proud father of Armaan and Nupur. he is a cool-headed person and is proud of his children. he often scolds Armaan for being careless but knows that his son is the best in world and will handle responsibilty very well.
Padma Gupta : Wife of Sanjay Gupta . she is awesome mom and best wife. she loves both her children to core of her heart but always remains worried for nupur who went for her higher studies to U.S. She is on top of world now as nupur is returning and Armaan is gonna get married to Riddhima soon
Armaan Gupta : Doctor in Sanjeevani. He has just completed his MD and joined sajeevani as cardiologist. He is a great son and brother. He loves nupur to core of his heart and cant see her in pain. He is a big flirt but now is in love with Riddhima , whom he is gonna maary soon
Nupur Gupta : Apple of Gupta family. she went to U.S. to complete her MBBS and evn completed her internship there. She is gonna return back home after 6years to attend her bro's wedding. She is extremely good at heart , loves to find happiness evn in gloomist of days ...her bubbly , chirpy nature makes her unique.
Riddhima Garg : Doctor in Sanjeevani , who fell in love for Armaan during her internship days. they are gonna get married soon and she is gonna be best wifeand daughter-in-law . She is sweet , kind-hearted and a lovely person to come across
Samrat Garg : Brother of Riddhima . He is doing internship in sanjeevani and is in love with his mate --Gunjan , but never dared to tell her. He is gonna become good friend of Nupur
Mayank Sharma : One of the hottest dude. he is going his internship in Sanjeevani . he is great friend of Armaan and his neighbour too . He is hot-headed person but never fails to make an impact with his smile.
He is good at heart but sometime is too stubborn to deal with
other characters :----
Shashank Garg : Riddhima's father and Head of Sanjeevani
Shilpa Sharma :--Mayank's mother
Gunjan Bhushan : love of Samrat's life
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

PART-2 [5 years ago]

gupta villa
there was a great bustle in the villa. Padma was in kitchen preparing some mouth-watering dishes for nupur..who was coming today from U.S. after 6 years. Sanjay was getting more figity because Armaan was not responding to him
Sanjay : Armaan ....kahan ho tum?
hearing Sanjay scream , padma came from kitchen
Padma : kya hua? subah subah kyun bechare par chilla rahe ho?
Sanjay : tum armaan ke tarafdaari karna kab band karogii?
Padma : jab aap mere bete ko daantna band karenge..uski shaadi hone waali hai agle month, ab toh aap bas keejiye
Sanjay : aapne ladle ko bolo neeche aaye..pakka soo raha hoga
Padma : woh kaam kar raha hoga koi
Sanjay : haan..ladkiyon ke phone attend kar raha hoga
then only armaan comes downstairs , wearing cool white tee and denim.
Armaan : kya hua papa?
Sanjay : aaj nupur aa rahe hai...tumhe yaad bhi hai kuch?
Armaan : aapko lagta hai mein bhool jaunga ke nupsi aa rahi hai
Sanjay : agar tum bhoole nahin ho toh ussee lene kyun nahin gaye
Armaan [smiles] : kyunki nupsi ne kaha tha ke mein usse lene na aaun....woh aapne bhai ko jaldi nahin uthana chahti thi, u see
Padma : toh usse lene kaun gaya hai?
Armaan : dont worry ma ..meinne driver ko bhej diya hai
Sanjay : yeh dono bhai-behan ko samajhna mere bas ke baat nahin hai
he went from there and armaan gave his best possible smile to padma who was glaring at him
BANDRA
red mercedes was coming on a sky-rock speed , the rock-on music was playing to its pitch.....a dude wearing black tee and blue jeans was setting his spikes while driving. suddenly he saw BMW front of him stopped and he was driving at such a high speed that he couldnt control his car and it banged on to the car in front......*DISSSSSH*
the guy quickly got off his car and looked at the broken head-lights
Guy : hell....cant u see while driving?
as he was still aghast at the sight of his car , the driver came out of BMW
driver : yeh aapki galti hai
guy : wat u mean....mere galti..u damaged my car !!!!
a girl came out of BMW , rubbing her forehead as she banged her forehead with the front seat due to sudden clash. She was wearing blue tee with baggy jeans and her hairs were tied in a pony.
girl : why are u screaming at him..iit was ur fault [she said to guy]
guy : excuse me ....it was ur fault.ur driver applied brake suddenly , not me !!!
girl : aankhen hai ya button..red signal par break lagate hain...u better learn traffic-rules !!!
guy [fuming in anger] :how dare u speak to me like this
girl [glaring at him ] : kyun tum yahaan pe president ho ?
guy :nahin ..par tum jaise baandriya se baat karne mein interested nahin hoon
girl [ anger taking on her ] : tumne mujhe baandriya kaha? tum aapne aapko dekho..u donkey, ass-hole, junkbag...
suddenly they hear honks from other cars....they both move inside there respective cars giving each other cold-stares
GUPTA VILLA
Armaan is standing outside the villa to recieve nupsi...his kid sister
as soon as nupur sees armaan standing..she gets all excited and runns to her bro. they both give a big bro-sis hug
Armaan : nupsi..kaise hai yaar?
Nupur : awesome bro !!!
armaan looks at her , he could see happiness in her eyes ....
Armaan looks at the car, which was damaged from back
Armaan [tensed] : yeh kya hua? accident hua tha kya? tu bhi na aapni marzi karte hai..i told u that i shld come to pick u up....
nupur giggles looking at her bro
Nupur : bro ...chill yaar..koi pagal tha...its fine..mein teekh hoon
Armaan [naughtily] : mein teri baat nahin kar raha tha..mein BMW ke baare mein sooch raha tha
nupur looks at him with open mouth and rushes after him
Nupur : i'll kill u
they both reach the villa and stop fighting after looking at Padma and Sanjay , who were desperately waiting for there daughter to come.
nupur went and gave a big hugg to padma and then to sanjay,
padma had tears in her eyes
Nupur : papa dekho na maa ko...mein jaati hoon tab rooti hai, mein aati hoon tab bhi rooti hain
Padma: yeh...
before she could complete her sentence, Nupur interrupted
Nupur : yeh khushi ke aansoon hain
all four laughed , there whole day was spent talking to nupur , abt her health..that she is weak now...all mothers thnk alike...and her MBBS and other stuff
cuming up: mayank-nupur fighting..riddhima coming to meet nupur

hope u liked this part...plz comment and tell me if u liked it or not...be true plz....i will be glad
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
***EDITED***
superb..mind blowing....fantabulous...šŸ‘
mere paas words nahi bache....
are yaar kya accident tha....muaaahhhhhh...and kya fight thi......muaaahhhh...i m sure ki main part aur bhi rocking hoga...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
loved the armaan-dad-mom-nupz convo...aisa lag raha tha ki main bhi wahi kahin hoon....very very nice update....šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
thanx 4 d pm...
waiting anxiously 4 d next part....šŸ˜‰



Edited by falak01 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
kl thx cant w8 for myur scenes
btw thx for the pm

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