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aarora

@aarora

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

hey congrats honey on 5th thread..

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Make-It-Pop

@Make-It-Pop

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Congrad for the new thread!

You totally deserve it...

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cute-kanwal

@cute-kanwal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

congo for the fifth thread.thank god u updated i thought u would never do that.it was quite a short one but was gr8.loved it.really liked the convo between anjy and ammy.so finally they became friends again.please update soon

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kshanikaa

@kshanikaa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

congrats for d fifth thread.
and update was very interesting and well written.
emotions were described beautifully.

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Sadia

@Shahlicious

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

heyy congratz on the fifth thread !! ..

amm soo gladd that u've updatedd !! ..

i ve been waitingg !! ... nn cantt waitt 44 da nxtt prtt!!! ...

thankooo xx

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prety_cool93

@prety_cool93

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

hey...congo 4 d 5th thread....!!!!!

d part was totally awesome....jst luved it....

plzzzzz update d next part soon...

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shere

@shere

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Heyy Kiran,

Congo on your 5th thread.

I am so proud of you.

I hope your exams were good and I always pray for you.

ok now abt the update........ I think that now awesome is a small word infront of your updates.

but I am still going to say it, awesome awesome and out of this world update kiran.

every bit of it just sunk into me and could really feel each and every word.

Please update soon.

good luck for everything and I will be waiting for your next update.

Thanks

Sherry

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Juhi Chanchalani

@lovejuhi91

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#28

CONGRATULATIONS GIRL..!!

A Fifth Thread! U do realise it's all because ov us huh? 😛

Seriously speaking, Ur amazing.

Ur writing rivals none..because they don't even come close to U..

Yeah I know I know..u'l be saying cumon there are better people..

agreed..But ur amazing none-the-less!

Finally, Thank You for continuing..

I Thought U'd gone and ditched us forever..But i guess u Love us as much as we Love u!!

Okay now about the part..

Well-written..U'v written better "longer" parts..Excellent for a 20-minute work though..

AR emotions..what can i say!

The way u express them, i would've thought u've gone thru this personally or sumthing..

I luved the last scene,where they don't speak a word, but understand everything dey wanna say!

It makes me wish for a guy like Armaan..!!! 😆

Luv ur FF a lot hun,

Jus keep writing, in any form, through any source,whatever it is,Uv got talent.

Impatientlyyyy waiting for the next part,

Lotsa Luv,

Juhi

P.S. Just wanted tu add..Green Blue Hues has me hooked..!! 😊

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#29

I had decided before reading the update that i wasn't going to comment....just cause :D ....but i had to....!!
Has anyone told you....you write like a professional...its truly a fiction..in terms of fantasy...that holds reality in the brim of its lapses yet....this invisible wall around it...which one almost never is able to cross...it has everything that you can believe to have seen (or simply know it happens) sometime in your life...yet not something personally....can imagine it to be so true that it leaves the chance of it being existent...making it impossible...
(that is not supposed to make sense, it doesnt to me at least!)

infact..the bit which you should know am referring to ...i've never experienced before...and to think of it....i want to...but only if i was born to be that little bit of a romanticist...(maybe someday...)

- congrats for this...and its very sweet of you to write up a part in response to the overwhelming emotions...:D