Mini:AR~Ought To Happen~Last Part 14 pg-74 |16/8| - Page 3

hey amezing.... 👏👏👏ur story is completely different from other so no worries....keep it up....love the intro and everything....just mindblowing...i love it...cant wait to read armaan in the story...so happy that now ridz is accepted by her whole family....😃poor girl used to risk her life for rahul...so that her parents wont yell at him...so sweet of her....😳she is s pari...😃😃😃love her and this ff...so continue ASAP....pm me whenever u update...👏👏once again amezing job......👏

Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.

hey amezing.... 👏👏👏ur story is completely different from other so no worries....keep it up....love the intro and everything....just mindblowing...i love it...cant wait to read armaan in the story...so happy that now ridz is accepted by her whole family....😃poor girl used to risk her life for rahul...so that her parents wont yell at him...so sweet of her....😳she is s pari...😃😃😃love her and this ff...so continue ASAP....pm me whenever u update...👏👏once again amezing job......👏

❤️MONA

Originally posted by: Spicy_girl01

thanks A TON...!! i m VEry great ful to u

u know i have lost Da hope to even write it.... its here from tomorw and no one bothered to reply...and it really hurted..!!

so u being sooo sweet... dats y i love u...

Maha

Hmmmm wat can i say???😆😆

I'm really speachless, and knowing me which i know u don't, i'm never out of words but your FF has got meout of words👏

Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.

i know how u feell...i also have my ff and when i update and no one come to reply it hurts as i put my energy and my time and then no one read it...well forget about me...u should have pmed me yes itself so i could have commented....so when are u plainng to update.....do continue soon as i m waiting know what is going in ur mind....love ya 2 for being my sweet choco...

❤️MONA

Originally posted by: Spicy_girl01

Aye aye Boss.!! will PM u ...NOw wards... and i really hav completed first part ... but really douting to put it here .... as in say i m scared... lol

Originally posted by: Angelic_Swancy

Hmmmm wat can i say???😆😆

I'm really speachless, and knowing me which i know u don't, i'm never out of words but your FF has got meout of words👏

Maha this Ff is a genious👏 and let me tell you its going to become big girl⭐️⭐️⭐️

Ok now let me tell you what i adored about your FF

i liked the way you showed it in a different way, making the Gupta's a very famous people, which might lead to the worst things happening ahead as every one knew about them and nothing can escape the eyes of the media 👏👏👏 I loved the way you showed that it was very beautifully done.

The relationship between rahul and ridhima

which wen i read at the start i hated rahul😡 seriously i felt like killing him then

but wen you showed how much rahul did care about her at the end, calling her his kiddo and loving here even more it was very lovely described sweetie 😃

I can't wait for the next part Maha di (Can i call you di?)

Well i hope we become friends😃😆 i talk alot hehe chooo chorry

Do continue soon

n remember to Pm me Mahi didi

Luv ya 🤗

swancy

Originally posted by: Angelic_Swancy

😆😆Maha di don't be scared

please post it

i'm dying to the read the next part lol

Just post it, don't worry about the others hehe

Ps: i hope u read my comment on page 3, i'm bery soryy for the late reply though

Originally posted by: Angelic_Swancy

😆😆Maha di don't be scared

please post it

i'm dying to the read the next part lol

Just post it, don't worry about the others hehe

Ps: i hope u read my comment on page 3, i'm bery soryy for the late reply though

Originally posted by: Spicy_girl01

Mahi ... thnkss... ALOT.. Swancy... Really... from da core of my heart....

and thanks for all dat bits u told me .....

and i love it when u talk... 😆 so come keep on talking

BUTT .... u r gona get A PM rite now and is serious ..!!😛

Maha