the magical journey of SaJan ... part two, pg 7

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hey guys ... here is my attempt at writing something different ... credit goes to the creatives for inspiring me to write abt them... coz they hav had such a wonderful journey together ... 👏

leme plz kno how it is ... if u like the first part, then only will I post a new part .. well, the journey is jus the same.. only it is retold in a different manner ... hope u all love it! 😳

THE MAGICAL JOURNEY OF SaJan ....


part one - page 1

part two - page 7

part one

"shut up!! you always say that to annoy me dont u.." said she, hitting him playfully on his shoulder and giggling softly. She was wearing a shining white dress and one arm was entangled in his as she stood proudly by him smiling at his face.

"really?? U think so..?? I dont think u are even worth that!! "

"huh??!!!" she turned her face away from him.

He was wearing a black tuxedo and white shirt.. and to her, he seemed to be the most handsome man...she tried not to be melted by his gorgeous smile.

"come on honey.. u know me!! I'm only joking...though yeah, she is definitely more beautiful than you! "

"u said that again! I'm not talking to u..."

And they continued their cute bickering throughout as they stood there by each other...

both of them in their own world.. enclosed in a beautiful glass globe ... waiting for an opportunity to dance on their favourite tune..

"she doesn't come often now...does she??" he said, searching through the part of room that was visible to him while being on the wooden table.

"why do u care??" asked she, suspiciously.

"oh come on!!" he said rolling his eyes. " I mean, I agree she is busy in the play n all.. but atleast let us dance once a while.. after all, even I'm dying to dance with my wife u know!" he said, winking at her.

She blushed furiously.

"oh well...u hav to admit though...that gunjan is angelically beautiful.."

"yeah.. that she is.." she said admitting finally.

"and soo gorgeous at heart.. and soo soft-spoken ... and '.."

"ahem ahem !!!"

"ok ok !!" he stopped, grinning at her.

"u remember who gifted us to her??" she asked, changing the subject.

"actually...I remember her coming to the store once.. "

"yeah... didnt she take back home adam and martha??"

"yeah well she did...and we haven't heard from them since...have we??"

"what do u think happened to them??" she asked, fear in her voice.

"oh well...the thing that happens to most of our kind...coz we arent treated with much care are we... mostly we are jus hanging in there...and then, covered with a layer of thick dust so that we are then unable to see the world beyond this one.." he said scanning the entire globe without any tone in his voice.

"hmm..isn't that sad?" she said, her voice brimming with tears.

"yeah well...wat can we do...thats the way our life is.." he said smiling sadly at her.

"yeah...but Gunjan doesn't let that happen to us..."

"that's coz she cares soo much abt us.."

"shut up!! She doesn't care much abt us.. she cares abt the person who gave us to her.." and she suddenly had a dreamy look on her face.

"u mean.. samrat??"

"yeah.. her best friend!"

"best friend.. yeah right !!! some friend he is.. doesn't even know wats goin on in his friend's heart!!"

"excuse me?? Do you even know wats goin on in her life??"

"yeah..I do! I sometimes take a sneak peak while she's writing her diary.." he said smiling and winking at her.

"oh..I should've known!! So...tell me!!"

"do u promise not to hit me if / wen I call her beautiful??"

"Yeah..now go on.."

"do u promise not to curse me..if / wen I call her an angel sent from heaven..??"

"yeah...go on!!" she said pressing her lips together and slightly irritated.

"do u promise not to shout at me if I say I find her very attractive??"

"YES!!" she said, yelling at him and he raised an eye-brow. She giggled softly.

"do u promise not to hate me.. if I tell u I'd like to marry her sometime in my life??"

"ye'WHAT???"

"jus kidding!!!" he said laughing at her reaction.

"u better be!!!" she said, giving him a stern look. "all right now..go on!!!" she said, looking like an innocent kid waiting to her grandma's night-time stories.
"ok then..here we go...lets start from the beginning.. wen samrat and gunjan met each other for the first time..."

" oh goody-goody!! I love such stories.." she said clapping merrily.

" all that I could make out from her diary is ... that they met for the first time at somebody's pool party... wait, I dont even remember her name..I think its someone called dia!! .. yeah, its dia.."

"and..??"

"and...she fell in the pool and died..."

"WHAT???!!!!"

"kidding!!!"

"cant u ever be serious??" she said giving him a disgusted look.

"ok ok..sorry!! so then... gunjan and di...."

"who or wat the hell...is di??"

"no idea!! She always mentions this word in her diary...but I think it might be the other person who shares the room wit her.. u kno, the cute bubbly lady who always brings a smile on gunjan's face?? No idea...wat her name is.."

"oh..I kno her name...I think its nupur.. coz I heard it from the weirdo who often comes barging into his room without permission.."

"ohh...ok! haan, so then..gunjan and di.. were at this pool party... and suddenly, a couple of guys came rushing towards them ... and they tried to misbehave with them .. in anger, gunjan pushed them away...she saw him crashing away in a distance.. and then, another guy came into picture ...

" oh.. and was this guy samrat??"

"yeah..."

"awww...was it love at first sight??"

"umm...nah, I dont think so.. Gunjan is too innocent to even think about such things.."

"hmm..yeah I kno.."

"so..how did it happen..??"

"umm...maybe.. like this........"


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DM12EmDNOO4[/YOUTUBE]

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anwaya thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aaaww.....................Madz, that so good yaar, new trick n all!

liked the lines u used!

so now we want next part!
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thanks anjie ... 😳 jus tried something different .. lolz!!
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I have no words yaar it is mind blowing👏👏
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww plzzzzzzzzzz pm me and do cont soon or i'll be in my death bed.
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mads, it's an extra ordinary ff
very good trail
i thought it was sajan in conversation in the begining, nxt confused state
till this line came, i hardly understood anything
"u remember who gifted us to her??" she asked, changing the subject.
i loved reading it frm start 2 end
i love pool scene very much
1st best scene of sajan
now waiting for 2nd part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow mads.. that was superb.. Loved reading it! Waiting for the next part!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ kavya : lolz !! but u finally did understand b/w who is the convo right ?? coz agar wohi nahi samajh mein aaya..then thers no use of writing this fic !!! 😳

@ anu : thanks dear .. its something diff...so I was skeptical abt writing it .. but gave it a shot neway!! 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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LOL mads

thank god i finally understood
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hey thanks mad nice story,new concept haan
willl u write sum more ,plss do write 👏⭐️

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