the magical journey of SaJan ... part two, pg 7 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: sonali.19281




thats so sweet of u Mads...me, mimi and P3 will open a thread once mimi's exams are over..you can expext a lot of 🤣 ...will PM u the link once its out...



yieeee !!!! me will love that !!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: missing Vmars

riya dats such an AWESUM ideašŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
dats it .. i think da creatives need 2 hand over da SG track 2 us .... v all will do a much better job dan dem



LMAO .. kanz !!!! šŸ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43


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Checking it right away!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And yaa i'm glad i realized that it was the globe couple warna i would have sees this fic w/ AY narrating SaJan...waise not a bad ideašŸ˜‰ but still...globe couple symbolizes SaJan and connects with them...so its better to see them as globe couple only...Adam and Martha!šŸ˜‰šŸ˜³šŸ˜³ (Btw why did u keep Martha instead of Eve?? Am i missing out something here???)

Nowwwwwwwwwww going to my pmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm boxxxxxxxx!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: -YaRa-Forever-




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Checking it right away!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



LMAO !!! thats better ... šŸ¤—

Originally posted by: -YaRa-Forever-



And yaa i'm glad i realized that it was the globe couple warna i would have sees this fic w/ AY narrating SaJan...waise not a bad ideašŸ˜‰ but still...globe couple symbolizes SaJan and connects with them...so its better to see them as globe couple only...Adam and Martha!šŸ˜‰šŸ˜³šŸ˜³ (Btw why did u keep Martha instead of Eve?? Am i missing out something here???)

Nowwwwwwwwwww going to my pmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm boxxxxxxxx!!!!!!!!



@ red .. OMG nitzie that wud 've beeen freakin awesome !!! now why didnt I think of it before ?? 😳 why dont you start writing a fic like that ?? 😃😳

@ blue : oh I dunno !!! šŸ˜†šŸ˜† I guess I didnt coz adam-eve sound all too mushy mushy n cheesy to me .. matlab u kno, the perfect romantic couple mentioned in almos every alternate romantic tale ...I wanted to hav something different ... 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: saylithegreat

omg mads it awesome!!!!!

so loved it
its sumthing unique n diff
very beautifully witten
send me a pm whenever u update
lov ya



thanks soo much sayli ... 😳😳 love u too!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46

part two


"hmmm...so thats how they met eh?? Well, I must admit tho.. that Sam looked jus WOW !!!" she said, with a dreamy look on her face.

"uhh.. SAM??!!" he asked stressing on the last word a bit more than required.

"of course! If u can get all gung-ho abt gunjan, why cant I do so abt sam??" she demanded

"oh alright!!" he replied with a tired look at her.

"come on..dont u always keep on saying'"

"...uh do you want to listen to the story or not??" he said, cutting her through her sentence.

"of course!"

"then shut up and listen...!"

"hmphh!"

"ok... so here we go now.. from their first meeting that day ... to their first interaction in college ... oh wait!! I almost forgot .. the same time as the pool party .. there was this fleeting mention of an incident that happened at the pool.."

"what?"

"well apparently, there was some sort of trick played on her .. she had been blind-folded and she fell into the pool.."

"oh my god!"

"yeah ... but then, samrat saved her .."

"really??"

"yeah ... and I believe at that moment, there were loads of unsaid things between the two of them ... u know sometimes when u look at a person and believ that you are alive jus for him ??"

"hmmm...I can understand wat u mean .."

"well, not literally ... but then, she was alive because of him ... after all, she doesn't know how to swim!"

"oh...so he actually saved her life ..."

"yeah ... and, at this pool party there was a guy called bhavesh kumar .."

"bhavesh who ??"

"bhavesh kumar .. yeah " he added with a laugh as he saw her grinning. " n apparently he was a student at excel.."

"do such types actually exist in excel??"

"yeah...even I was surprised wen I read that !! so neway.. he came n talked to her .. jus trying to make her feel comfortable and all.. and gunjan took an instant liking to him !!"

"well ofcourse she will...he seems jus like her!!" she said giggling rudely.

He glared at her " ok..I'm not gonna continue!"

"ok ok..sorry honey.. I offended your dream girl .." she said sarcastically.

" it is NOT okay .. neways, so then ... this bhavesh guy ... came upto her and talked her .. and made her feel instantly at home .. "

"hmmm..."

" and then there was the first day of college ... gunjan was very scared .. yet again, bhavesh came to the rescue and made her feel totally comfortable .. infact, this bhavesh guy even warned her to stay away from Samrat because...." he stopped as he found her laughing loudly.

"now wat ..??" he asked annoyingly.

"sorry!! But scared .. of wat??"

"oh u kno .. new city, new people .. and most importantly, talking to people, scared her to hell .. she was extremely reserved u see .."

"was??"

"yeah .. was... Samrat changed her for the better.."

"oooh..really?? thats so amazing !!"

"yeah it is ... but neways .. lets go from the beginning ... so, she went to college with a skeptical heart ... she had no idea how people wud talk to her ... whether they wud accept her or not .. and ofcourse she was ........"

"wrong!!"

"nope...sadly, she was right abt it ..."

"why??"

"coz the person who termed himself as Bhavesh ... was actually Samrat!!"

"WHAT??"

"yeah .."

"oh dear .. poor gunjan!!"

"yeah I kno ... her first day at college was jus as scary as she had imagined! And she was on the verge of tears .. she went and talked to di .. and realised that people have been pulling her di's legs as well ..."

"oh no!"

"yeah ... gunjan felt sad .. she felt depressed ... but more than anything, she felt .. why cant these people behave humanly with her?? is she so much of an alien .. that they cannot behave normally with her and her di ??"

"true.."

"di believed that u need to change urself in order to adjust to a new place ... she felt that u need to be like the person who lives ther .. u kno, like that saying goes .. wats it again??"

"In rome, behave as romans do!!" she exclaimed loudly

"exactly!!" he said

"hmm.. well, I wudnt say di is entirely wrong .. u need to adjust urself a bit in order to survive .. I mean, you hav come to their place ... u hav to adopt some ways and means .."

" but I also understand wat Gunjan must be feeling at that moment ... how is she gonna be able to survive there ?? I mean, why cant they jus accept her the way she is... why does she have to change her lifestyle ??"

"hmm.. and wat about samrat??" she asked curiously.

"well... she was absolutely miffed with him ... she swore she'd never even bother to cross his path again ... but ......."

"but wat..?"

"but as they say ... u can hardly decide who's gonna cross ur path n all... I mean, if u are meant to be in someone's life ... destiny makes sure that ur paths are crossed ..."

"wow..u are getting very philosophical.." she said, teasing him.

"oh well ... u dont believ me ??"

"naah.."

"wat can I say ... gunjan and samrat are extremely different people .. yet, they managed to cross their paths so many times ... and everytime unintentionally ... and its all thanks to those moments ... that u can call them as best friends today ..."

" really?? How ..."

"sweet-heart ... a story is entertaining.. only wen u narrate it in the right manner ... u will soon see how .."

" ok.. I think I can imagine these 'destiny's gestures' as u call them to be ......."


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3odT4FgJSec[/YOUTUBE]

"how are u so sure that samrat will be so concerned about how she is feeling?" he demanded of her.

"oh well..I can jus imagine him to be like that .. come on.. even though he irritated her to no end by being like bhavesh ... he still has the most beautiful heart ever .. didn't he save her when sh was about to die in the pool?? He may fool around with people .. but he will never fool around with their feelings ... he knows his limits .. and stays within them .." said she, with a smile.

" oh well, if u say so.. and then I guess that's the reason why gunjan's anger/ disappointment towards him started to fade away .. maybe she realised that he is not wat he appears to be ..."


Edited by mads - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
first 2 comment ... i sud think so šŸ˜‰
neways mads .... 2nd part again equally brilliant šŸ‘
2 things dat stood out for me ( 2 dialogues actually )
the first one " there were loads of unsaid things between the two of them ... u know sometimes when u look at a person and believ that you are alive jus for him ??"
oh my god mads i luved dis line .... shes alive jus for him 😳
n da 2nd one " u can hardly decide who's gonna cross ur path n all... I mean, if u are meant to be in someone's life ... destiny makes sure that ur paths are crossed "
ok dis one made me go all AWwwwwwwwww😳
n now cuming 2 the reason y am liking ur FF soooooooo much .... its coz v will get 2 re live all da beautfiful januable SG moments all over again 😳 .... really really liking da way u r describing dere moments
Edited by missing Vmars - 16 years ago
mads thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
^^ awww thanks kanzoo !!! šŸ¤—
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
OMG Mads. This is like THE most cutest way of narrating a story. Soooo unique. Where the hell did u come up with this idea!! lol .TOTALLY loved it.
And wow, we are reliving those SaJan moments again thru ur FF. Love the small clip u have at the end of the parts.
Also the flow of the story (the tid-bit talk between the couple) and the way u introduced the character. OUT OF THIS WORLD!!!! lol . Esp Nups and Uday (the wierd LMAO!!!)
Tooooo gooood yaar!!!! U've made a new fan =D
Can't wait to read the next part. Update soon

N add me to the PM list. Thnx =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
this is so cute!!!!!!
d best way to narrate sajan story ever
loved d second part too
keep updating
lov ya

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