Rahul-Muskaan/Atul-Anjali FF: Rishta IMP NOTE PG30

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sweet.melody

@sweet.melody

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Posted: 15 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life
SHILPU! Kitna horrible comment tha yaar! Hated it!

Batameez insaan! Meaningful comment dene mein tera kya jaata hai?

arey.. im sorry.. i was working on my ff.. so chota comment diya.. ek minute ruk.. i will make it longer! 😳

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MelodiousDreams

@MelodiousDreams

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Posted: 15 years ago

#182

Oye, Gabbar!

I'm short on time today, so a brief comment is what you'll have to live with...

Thanks for the lovely Atul-Anjali scenes in this part...I genuinely loved them! I know that is to be expected from me, but I still have to say it! Anjali is so sweet!

Atul and Kunal...Oh, the beginning was funny! It was awesome...Atul thinking of a convenient marriage for Kunal, LOL! But you did give me a heart attack when you mentioned Borna's boyfriend...I was like, "Boyfriend? What boyfriend?" Pankit's my bhaiyya, yaar! (It feels so weird...I guess I'm so much of a PaNaian that the only name that comes to mind when I think of Pankit is Sunaina...Haha, I'm hopeless, I know. Could Kunal have made a mistake about the boyfriend thing, by any chance?)

But all the same, thanks for mentioning me, Komz! Jhappis to you for that! Atul was so funny, trying to guess who Kunal is in love with...Not me, not Aditi...Khushi? *and the world comes to an end*

Gosh, I'm so curious about what happened to Muskaan in the first place...Atul and Anjali seemed so helpless in this part...They love Khushi, but Kunal isn't "allowed" to love her? Awwww, how awful.

Okay, I've got to mention how incredibly funny the children's ward scene was! LMAO, Muskaan is such a kid at heart! Poor Rahul, though...Becoming the bachha party's target must not have been fun...Poor guy!

And on an ending note: Poor Kunal! How terrible, I feel so bad for him...And Khushi has no idea about what Atul told Kunal earlier...Oh, I feel sooo bad for them both!

Okay, that was longer than I'd intended...Notice how I didn't gush over AA this time...Yeah, that's because I'm way too tired to gush over them and take the trouble to type it out right now...I'm sure you know me well enough by now...

Love you lots!

Veeru

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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

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Posted: 15 years ago

#183

Awesome part!!

Thanks for the PM..

Loved the emotion of AA about khushi!!!

Continue soon!!!

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sweet.melody

@sweet.melody

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Posted: 15 years ago

#184

Komal this update was really nice yaar.. I loved the whole Atul - Anjali interation.. it was sweet!

and Khushi.. it is always a pleasure to read about her.. and how she thinks about her mummy and pappaji!

And ofcourse RM part too cute!! Muskaan's smile and her laughter.. sach mai they can light up any room yaar..

I love the way Muskaan whistled 🤣 and then all kids attacked Rahul.. that was too funny!

and the mess caused in the chilrens ward because of Rahul incapbility to handle all those kids 😆

love reading these:

(dodges a flying teddy bear), (catches an empty food tray), (both duck seeing a pillow coming there way)

these were hilarious 🤣🤣

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#185

komzi di!!!
i love this ff sooo much! i love u for writing it n updting it!
omg i feel bad for kunal, poor him
i loved his scene w/ atul,
lol it was hilarious, atul trying to figure out kunal's pyaar
kabhi kabhi aditi dialogue cracked me up
sad atul said no
but i get AA, n i love them
they r too cute!❤️
n RM, they r awesome as always!
di ur such an awesome writer! u really bring ur writings to life
i really look forward to reading ur updts
anyways waiting for the nxt one now
continue soon

Edited by ~*mishu*~ - 15 years ago

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pari

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Posted: 15 years ago

#186

Hey komal u might not know me i am Pari

and love ur ff this part was awesome⭐️

can u please add me to ur PM list?

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lovebapu18

@lovebapu18

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Posted: 15 years ago

#187

WOW komz!! AWESOME part!!

thanks for the pm!!

continue soon...can't wait...

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Fatima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#188

arre yaar kya part tha!!! Mazaa agaya, i just wanted it to keep on going!! You just write sooo beautifully, it kind of puts me into a whole different world!! I already told u like a million times how much i love ur dialogues, they r always awesome!!! Loved that whole scene btw Atul and Kunal where he was thinking it was Borna or Aditi, loved how u added the Aditi song part it- very cute!!! Man i just love Atul!! At last Kunal told his parents, waiting for when he'll tell Khushi!! The RM flashback scene was great!! i could totally imagine it!! Love U loads for updating this!!!! Keep it up and update as soon as u get time!!! <3333

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Mansi bhatia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#189

Hey you updated finally!! Thank Youuu!!

this part was really nice though it made me even more curious about the whole situation..

Khushi seems like such a sweet girlll..aww..im really loving her..the way she asks Sid about love..:))

then the Atul..and Kunal convo..so sweet..where he guessed all the girls and started imagining his sons future😆 from Borna to Aditi..funny.

But then i was suprised that both AA refused him from even thinking about her..i kinda expected this i dunno why..but you better open up these secrets soon hun..😔 AA part was lovely..Angie was a darling in this chapter.

RM my jaan!!😍 haha..i loved it the way all things kept coming on Rahul and the way Muskaan handled everything..it was so cute n funny..typical RM. It was superbbbb!!!

Love yaaaa🤗 thanks for the PM.

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@spln

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Posted: 15 years ago

#190

aite!~ finally caught up with part 5 and 6 komz!
5 was HILARIOUS.. its closing to 4am for me and i had to stuff my mouth to not wake up the whole house!! :D the musical chor and aj kal to advance zamana was ABSOLUTELY INSANE *pat on your back* :D:D

and muski finally reacted!! i just knew it when khushi was telling her stuff! the paintings... AAWWWWWWWW u paint?!!! wow! i never knew that! it was pretty neat and ur just an amateur/hobbyist? :)

im not sure i like the reason atul and anjali have to not let kunal tell khushi of his love.,... i mean, it would do khushi good to know she has someone like him and they should know their son for how serious he can be, i think... but well, you must have something in mind!

over all, great trak, i enjoy the switch betwen generations tremendously!! tacos part 2 *rofl* :D:D

ps: borna, you must be on cloud 9 !! dating pankit issshhh!

cheers and hugs,
nj

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