Ek Mitha Ehsash, Part 4, 02/06 - Page 7

Thanks Manalee, Sasha, Nidhi, Pen for the comments.

No sapna, sab haqiquat, par scene achha to laga na…………..

aur manalee yaar jyada waqt nehi hua hai, total me yeah sare scenes 3 se 4 weeks ki hai, to Kranti ko itna waqt to chahiye hoga na Raj ko fir se apnane ke liye, and as pen said smooth & steady, and we all know what after, off course wins the race.

Sasha suspense to thoda jamana parega na, dekhte nehi TV pe har episode kaise khatam hote hai… Overnight awake , par I don't manage time everyday to write u know, so on weekends only can manage some quantity time though not regularly. But shall try to update asap dear.

Pen bedharak background music lagalo tum to mahir ho hi mix me…

Xtra - 3

Usi din raat ko…..

Bahar halki halki barish ho rahi thi. Raj apne table pe baitha kaam kar raha tha, Kranti kamre me aayi, bistar taiar karne lagi, barish aur tej ho gayi. Kranti khidki bandh karne ke liye gayi par bandh na karke khadi khadi bahar dekhne lagi. Bahar jamke barish hone lagi.

Raj thodi der baad dekha ke Kranti khidki ke pas khadi bahar dekh rahi hai. Woh uth kar thik Kranti ke piche aa kar khada ho gaya. Dono bilkul chup sirf barish aur bich bich me bijli karak ne ki awaj……..

Kranti ne ankho ke kone se Raj ko dekha, khidhki ke aur pas ja kar apna daya hath bahar kar diya. Barish ke tej bunde uski hatho me gir rahe the. Thodi der baad Raj ne bhi apna daya hath khidki se bahar nikala aur thik Kranti ke hatho ko niche rakha lekin woh Kranti ke hatho ko nehi chhu raha tha, aur Kranti ke bahat hi karib khada tha par use bina chhue. Raj ki sanse Kranti ke kandhe pe par rahe the. Kranti ne ahista se apna daya hath Raj ke hatho ke upar rakh diya, aab dono hath ek sath hai aur uspe barish ke bunde jaise ashirbaad ke tarah gir rahe hai. Kranti ne sayad itne sukun se kabhi pehle barish ko mehsus nehi ki hogi. Use apne aap pe yakeen nehi aa raha tha. Raj sirf is pal ko ji raha tha yeah uske liye bahat bari baat thi ki Kranti ne apne se uske hatho me apna hath saupa. Kuch der dono aise hi rahe, khamoshi se apne zindegi ka yeah hasin pal ji rahe the…

Fir Raj ne baye hath se khidki ke dusre taraf pakra to aab undono ke bich koi jaga nehi hai lekin fir bhi Raj ne kahi se bhi Kranti ko nehi pakra hai.

Raj ne halke se apna muh Kranti ke kandho ke upar rakhha…

R: Tum dopehar ke liye mujhse naraj to nehi ho?

Kranti ne ahista ahista gardan na me hilayi.

R: Tum subhe hamare anewale zindegi ka sapna dekh rahe thi na?

Kranti ne kuch nehi kaha, apni gardan piche karke Raj ke kandhe ke upar rakh di.

R: Maine subhe tum se ek sawal pucha tha tumne uska jabab nehi diya.

Kranti chup…

R: Keya main tumhe chhu sakta hu?

Kranti kuch kehne ja rahi thi tabhi usne gaur se kheyal kiya ke itne karib hote hue bhi sach me Raj ne use kahi se bhi nehi pakra hai.. woh sach me apni taraf se puri koshis kar raha hai…..

Kranti ne apna chehra baye taraf se upar kiya, dono ka chehra bahat hi pas hai, dono ek dusre ke ankho me dekh rahe hai. Raj ko hi pata hai ke kaise usne apne aap ko rokh rakhha hai.. Kranti ne apna chehra Raj ke aur kairb le aayi jaise ke woh Raj ka imtihaan lena chahti ho. Uski ankhe Raj ko pagal kar rahi hai, jyada der who aapne aap ko rokh nehi payega.

Raj ko abhi Kranti ke hontho ke siwa kuch dikhayi nehi de raha hai, woh bhi Kranti ke taraf jhukne laga tabhi Kranti aapna daya hath andar la ke usme jo thoda sa pani tha woh Raj ke chehre pe chidak di aur hasne lagi..

Raj pehle to chauk gaya fir turant hi aapne aap ko samhal liya, Kranti ko is tarah dil khol hasta dekh woh bhi hans para. Par uski nazre sidhi Kranti ke nazre ke taraf thi.

Kranti ne apni chunri se Raj ka chehra pocha aur kaha bahat raat ho gayi hai sone chalo. Usne fir khidki bandh kar di aur ja ke bistar pe lait gayi. Raj kuch der wohi khada apne man me soch raha tha ke barish to bahar ho rahi hai par asli pani to uski biwi ne fera uski iradoo par, Raj ko hasi aa gayi par kuch der pehle ka lamha uske liye yaadgar ho gaya tha. Ek baat to hai aajkal jab bhi aise jor ki barish hoti hai to uske liye koi na koi saugaat jarur lati hai.

K: Sona nehi hai keya.

Raj bhi ja kar bistar ke dusri taraf lait gaya…

Dono ke dil me halchal machi hui hai, pichle baate yaad aa rahi hogi.

Kuch der baad. Kranti Raj ke taraf pith kar ke soyi hai. Raj ne ahista se apna daya hath Kranti ke kandho ke pas hath pe rakhha aise jaise ke woh neend me hai, par un dono ko pata tha ke dono hi jage hue hai. Raj dekhna chahta tha ke Kranti uski taraf murti hai ke nehi, lekin Kranti waise hi sans jaise bandh karke soyi rahi. Tab Raj ko laga use Kranti ko aur bharosa dilana parega un dono ke riste ke upar. Usne aapna hath Kranti ke sar pe rakhha aur uske mathe ko sehlane laga. Kranti aab tak apne man me soch rahi thi ke use Raj se keya chahiye aur woh Raj ko keya woh pyaar de payegi jispe Raj ka pura haq hai, kuch der pehle khidki ke paas woh kyun Raj ko uksa rahi thi. Jab Raj ne uspe aapna hath rakhha uska bahat man ho raha tha ke murke Raj ke bahon me sama jae par na jane keya chees use rokh deti hai hamesha. Lekin aab Raj itne pyaar se uske mathe pe hath rakhha ke usse rukha nehi gaya woh Raj ke taraf muri par koi baat nehi aur ankh bhi nehi kholi, Raj jaise uska matha sehlate hue use bharosa dilana chahta tha, use apne sath ka yakeen dilana chahta tha, use aapne pyaar ka ehsash karana chahta tha.

Raj thoda aur karib gaya.

R: Kranti…

Raj ne Kranti ka ek hath pakra,

R: Kranti dekho to sahi. Mujhse tum apni dil ki baat kar sakti ho.

Kranti ne aapne dusre hath se bhi Raj ke hath ko pakar liya. Aab Raj ka ek hath Kranti ke sar pe hai aur dusra hath Kranti ke dono hatho ke muthi me kayed hai. Dono aise hi so gaye…….

Subha jab Kranti ki ankh kholi tab bhi woh Raj ke hath pakre hui thi, Raj neend me tha, thodi der waise hi rehne ke baad usne bahat ahista se aapna hath nikalna chaha par Raj ki bhi ankh khul gayi…

Kranti ne muskuraya aur jana cha rahi thi, Raj ne hath nehi chhoda aur dekhta raha.

R: Good morning.

Kranti ne haske uske taraf dekha.

R: You know kal raat main soch raha tha ke mere wakil hone ka koi faida nehi.

K: Aisa kyun keh rahe ho, Goro ka to bahat faida hai. (use laga ke yeah sun ke Raj gussa ho ke uska hath chhod dega par aisa nehi hua)

R: (use pata tha Kranti aisa hi kuch kehgi) Par main aapne aap se khus nehi ho, had ho gayi yaar ek sawal ke jabab ke liye main kitne din o se jaddo jahed kar raha hu, par koi hai ke use farak hi nehi parta.

K: Raat din idhar udhar ke baton me dhyan lagaye rakhhoge to aisa to hona hi hai, kaam pe bhi thoda dhyan diya karo. (dono ko nokjhok me maja aa raha tha)

R: Achhaaaa…. aisi baat hai keya?

K: Aur nehi to keya.

R: Tumhe to mere bare me bahat kuch pata hai.

K: Kyun na ho, aakhir pati ho…. (rukh gayi)

R: yeah to bahat achhi baat hai, aapne ek laute pati ke bare me itna to pata ho na hi chahiye.

K: Achha thik hai abhi mujhe niche jana hai.

R: Tum aajkal mujh se itna darti kyun ho?

K: Main aur tumse darti hu.. yeah khush faimi tumhe kaha se ho gayi.

R: To jab bhi hum koi baat karte hai to tum bhag ne ke firaq me kyun rehte ho.

(Aab Kranti aapne hi baaton me phans gayi, jab bhi aisa hota hai use Raj pe gussa aa jata hai)

K: Mujhe bahat kaam hota hai, tumhare tarah nehi dinbhar bus…

R: Achha to tumhe pata hota hai ke main keya sochta rehta hu. (Raj ke hontho pe ek shararat bhari muskan khili hui hai)

K: Bahat der ho rahi hai mujhe jana hai. (aapna hath khich rahi hai par Raj ne bahat jor se pakar rakhha hai)

R: Mere sawal ka jabab de do aur chali jao.

K: (uska gussa aur bar raha tha) Tumhara wada hamesha aisa hi hota hai. Hath chhodo.

R: Aab kaun si wada khilafi ki maine?

K: Kyun kal kaise sarifo ke tarah puch rahe the, keya main tumhe chhu sakta hu…

R: Hya to… tumne to hya na kuch bhi nehi kaha. Isi liye maine socha ke raat me sayad tumhe achha na lage to din me to kabhi kabhi main apni biwi ka hath pakar hi sakta hu..

Kranti aab sach me gusse se Raj ko dekh rahi hai. Raj ne man hi man socha aab chhod de Raj bahat majak ho gaya, kahi lene ke dene na par jaye aur madam fir se muh na fer le.

Raj ne Kranti ka hath chhod diya. Kranti ja rahi thi.

R: Lekin mujhe mere sawal ka jabab nehi mila……

Kranti chali gayi… Raj muskurake fir so gaya, woh soch raha tha ke agar yeah pehle wali Kranti hoti to na jane aab tak Raj ka keya haal hua hota…..

Thodi der baad se Raj ko tension hone laga, kyun ke aaj subhe ki chae Kranti ke jagah jagat kaka le ke aaye aur Kranti ek bar bhi kamre me nehi aayi subhe ki baad aur uske liye kapde bhi nehi nikala. Aaj woh breakfast ke liye jaldi niche gaya ke Kranti ko dekh kar uska mood ka andaza kar lega par Kranti woha bhi samne nehi aayi. Raj dar gaya ki itne din o se jo woh itni koshis kar raha tha sab kuch thik karne ke liye sab usne kahi aapne hatho se to barbad nehi kar diya. Aab woh to thoda majak kar raha tha, Kranti ko agar itni si baat samajh nehi aati to woh keya kar sakta hai.

Woh kamre me lauta to dekha uske kapde bahar nikal ke rakhhe hue hai. Usne jagat kaka se kaha Kranti ko bulane ke liye. Lekin Kranti ne kehelwa bheja ke woh abhi nehi aa sakti keya kaam hai jagat kaka ko batane ke liye. Raj ko bhi abhi gussa aa gaya Kranti par aur aapne aap pe bhi. Woh kaam pe chala gaya.

Kranti ne chupke se subhe naste ke samay Raj ko dekha tha, uski ankhe jo bekarar usko dhund rahi thi woh bhi dekha. Usne socha ke agar Raj majak kar sakta hai to woh kyun nehi, woh sirf Raj ko thoda darana chahti thi. Par baad me use laga ke kal itna achha waqt gujara un dono ne yeah majak kahi bhari na par jaye, Raj kahi bura na man jaye. Aab woh aapne aap se chidne lagi.

BBR r ne Raj aur Kranti dono ka utra hua chehra dekha tha aur khus hone lagi, man hi man soch liya ke jo bhi hua ho usko barhana hai, aag ko hawa deni hai bus. Par Kranti use kuch samajh nehi aati, uske man me keya chal raha hai yeah to jan nehi payi par itna samajh gayi ke uska shaq sahi hai, Kranti pareshan to hai aur woh bhi Raj ke wajah se.

Kranti ne soch liya ke Raj ke aate hi usse baat karegi. Raj ne socha ke sayad woh galat soch raha hai, Kranti sach me busy thi. Usne dopehar ko ghar pe phone lagaya, phone jagat kaka ne uthaya, jagat kaka Kranti ko bulane hi ja rahi thi ke BBR ne use rokh diya aur aa ke phone le li.

BBR: Hya ji devar ji kahiyee.

R: (bilkul bhi parjaiji se baat karne ke mood me nehi tha) Ji woh main..

BBR: Hya hya kahiye, devarani ji ko le kar fir kahi ghumne jana hai keya.

R: Ji waise baat nehi hai… Woh Kranti kaha hai.

BBR: Woh to aapne kamre me aram kar rahi hai, jab woh jagat kaka ko keh rahi thi ke aap ko batane ke liye ke woh kuch kam kar rahi hai aur phone pe nehi aa sakti to maine sun li aur usse kaha ke main hi bata deta hu devar ji ko..

R: Wo…. (Raj ko bahat bura laga woh bhi BBR se sun ke)

BBR: Kuch kehelwana hai to boliye na, main bata dungi..

R: Nehi woh aaj jara aate aate der ho sakti hai, aap keh dena.

Yeah keh kar usne phone patak diya, BBR man me soch rehi thi (jitna chahe der kijiye koi aap ke liye nazre bichaye thodi na baitha hai aur baithi bhi hogi to main thodi na baithi rehne dungi).

Sham ko Kranti beshabri se Raj ka intezaar kar rahi hai.........

Thanks Pen & Sasha for ur lovely comments, I m glad u people liked it, while writing I also adore the rain scene (but jyadatar patilog itne sensitive hote hai keya???? 😉 I doubt…😕), I want to share hw I thought of this rain scene, I was in a high speed bus around 8 in the morning and it was raining heavily outside, in the radio it was playing "kuch na kaho kuch bhi na kaho", then u can certainly understand the obvious reason why I thought of RK at that time & I wanted badly to keep my hand out in the rain 😳 but if I did so ……..driver & conductor would have throw me out to enjoy the rain completely….. 😆😆

So us time barish me hath na nikal pane ki bharash maine is me puri kar li. Ha ha .😊

Pen hope u will njoy ur festival with ur family, see u after the break…

Sasha I shall update asap…

Originally posted by: sasha722

Bonai, @but jyadatar patilog itne sensitive hote hai keya???? 😉 I doubt'
Areeeeeeeeee they r very sensitive & romantic

so fast reply,
Sensitive Patideb...... hummmmm.........
this topic, i think can be best discussed in WG, par yeah pehli bar support me comment sun rahi hu. mera to koyi hai nehi, to main keya bolu.... but aap sabki kheyalat janne me bahat maja ayega.

Inspiration by this song @ "kuch na kaho kuch bhi na kaho", as i grew up i like this song even more
its a very lovely number

i could feel the feelings R & K
so wel u hve describe it
u leave from ur home so early
ur work place is far from ur residence
yes its far my frnd, daily commuting 1st in train then bus total near about 2hrs affair and while returning it took more time, thats why i try to reach & leave office early, but 😡
in the morning bus going in high speed without much of traffic,.... i love that, anyways aur nehi pakaungi....................